Unit6Writing写作课件牛津深圳版英语八年级下册

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PetsPeriod6Teachinggoals1.掌握议论文的体裁特点；2.掌握议论文的写作方法：提出观点、论证观点、总结观点；3.能够写出一篇与宠物话题有关的议论文。Lead-inWhichoneisthebestpetWhycutefaithfulcolourfulquietlovelyindependent...EmmaKeepingapetdogOpinionReasons1.cute2.learnresponsibility3.faithful&bringhappinessSupportingdetailsnicetoholdfeed,trainandplaywiththemwonderfultoseethemgrowuplearntocareforothersConclusionagoodideaArgumentation（议论文）Thestructureofanargumentation（议论文的结构）OpinionReason1Reason2Reason3SupportingdetailsSupportingdetails.........ConclusionSupportingdetailsPre-writingDaniel:Dogsmakethebestpets.Ithinkthatdogsmakethebestpets.Reasons:Dogsarelovely.Dogsarefaithfultotheirowners.Walkingadogcanhelptheownerstayhealthy.ReasonsOpinionSupportingdetails...ConclusionIsitconvincing（有说服力的）enoughTheoutlineofanargumentationDogsmakethebestpetsIthinkthatdogsmakethebestpets.Firstly,dogsarelovely.Ienjoyplayingwiththem.It’spleasanttoholdtheminourarms.Secondly,dogsarefaithful.TherewasonceafaithfuldoginJapan.Oneday,hisownerdiedsuddenlyofaheartattack.Thedogdidnotknowitandkeptonwaitingforhisownereverydayformanyyears,until

hedied.Thirdly,ifyoukeepapetdog,youneedtowalkiteveryday.Whenyouarewalkingyourdog,youaredoingexercise.Forthesereasons,Ibelievethatdogsmakethebestpets.Daniel'swritingFindoutthesupportingdetails.HowdidDanieldevelopsupportingdetails1.personalexperienceenjoy/love/befondof...It'sadj.(forsb.)todosth.2.astoryoranexampleTherewasoncea...3.anexplanation（解释说明）If...DogsmakethebestpetsIthinkthatdogsmakethebestpets.Firstly,dogsarelovely.Ienjoyplayingwiththem.It’spleasanttoholdtheminourarms.Secondly,dogsarefaithful.TherewasonceafaithfuldoginJapan.Oneday,hisownerdiedsuddenlyofaheartattack.Thedogdidnotknowitandkeptonwaitingforhisownereverydayformanyyears,untilhedied.Thirdly,ifyoukeepapetdog,youneedtowalkiteveryday.Whenyouarewalkingyourdog,youaredoingexercise.Forthesereasons,Ibelievethatdogsmakethebestpets.HowdidDanielmakehiswritingcoherent（连贯的）表达观点:

Ithinkthat...Ibelievethat...Inmyopinion,...分点论述：Firstly,...Secondly,.../What'smore,.../Besides,...Thirdly,.../Finally,...逻辑连词：因果：so,.../Forthesereasons,...并列:...and...转折:...but...Betty'sopinionBetty:Goldfishmakethebestpets.ReasonsWhile-writingcolourfulandbeautifulquietChoosingsupportingdetailsOpinionReasonsConclusionGoldfishmakethebestpets.1.Goldfisharecolourfulandbeautiful.2.Goldfisharequiet.Goldfisharethebestpets.a.Theydon'tbite,barkorscratch.b.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asaoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”c.Atankofgoldfishcanaddcolourtoyourroom.d.Yourneighbourswon'tcomplain.e.It'senjoyabletowatchtheircolourandmovement.f.Accordingtoastudy,goldfisharethefirstpetsforalmost80%ofchildren.c,ea,db.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”f.Accordingtoastudy,goldfisharethefirstpetsforalmost80%ofchildren.MoresupportingdetailsWhatreasonsdotheysupportMorereasonsWelearnhowtobepatientbykeepinggoldfish.It'spopularforchildrentokeepgoldfishaspets.Otherwaystodevelopsupportingdetailsasaying（commonsense）fact（number,...）Summary:HowcanwedevelopsupportingdetailsWecan1.Describepersonalexperience:

个人经历enjoy/love/befondof...It'sadj.(forsb.)todosth.2.Tellastoryorgiveanexample:

举例子Therewasoncea...3.Giveanexplanation：

解释说明If...,...4.Useasaying(commonsense):

名人名言5.Useafact:

事实Asanoldsayinggoes（俗话说）,...Accordingto（根据）...HelpBettycompleteherwritingIt'senjoyabletowatchtheircolourandmovement.Atankofgoldfishcanaddcolourtoyourroom.Goldfisharecolourfulandbeautiful.Goldfishmakethebestpets.Goldfisharequiet.Theydon'tbite,barkorscratch.Yourneighbourswon'tcomplain.Welearnhowtobepatientbykeepinggoldfish.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”Goldfisharethebestpets.Makeherwritingbetter-organizedandmorereadable.表达观点:

Ithinkthat...Ibelievethat...Inmyopinion,...IthinkthatgoldfishIbelievethatgoldfish分点论述：Firstly,...Secondly,.../What'smore,.../Besides,...Thirdly,.../Finally,...Firstly,goldfishSecondly,goldfishFinally,we逻辑连词：因果：so,.../Forthesereasons,...并列:...and...转折:...but.../though,andaSo,yourForthesereasons,Awell-organizedargumentation

Ithinkthatgoldfishmakethebestpets.Firstly,goldfisharecolourfulandbeautiful.It'senjoyabletowatchtheircolourandmovement,andatankofgoldfishcanaddcolourtoyourroom.Secondly,goldfisharequiet.Theydon'tbite,barkorscratch.So,yourneighbourswon'tcomplain.Finally,welearnhowtobepatientbykeepinggoldfish.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”Forthesereasons,Ibelievethatgoldfisharethebestpets.Haveastructure:anopinionreasonssupportingdetailsaconclusionDevelopsupportingdetails:personalexperienceastoryoranexampleanexplanationasaying(commonsense)afact(number)Uselinkingwords：表达观点分点论述逻辑连词假如你们班要举行一场题为“养宠物是否好”的辩论赛，你是正方辩手，请根据下面的内容提示表明你的观点并阐述你的理由。词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。【内容提示】1.可以跟宠物一起做运动；2.和宠物玩可以帮助我们放松自己；3.可以通过养宠物学会如何照顾他人；4.有宠物的陪伴，我们不会感觉孤独；5.根据一些研究显示，照顾宠物甚至有助于我们活得更久；6.你自己的观点。AssignmentStep1:激活词汇你能想起与短文有关的学过的词汇吗？试一下吧！1.和……一起玩2.带……去散步3.锻炼；做运动4.照顾5.根据……6.更为重要的是7.依我看playwith2.take...forwalks3.doexercise/sports4.takecareof/carefor/lookafter5.accordingto6.what’smore7.inmyopinionStep2:精彩结构1.learnhowtodosth意为“学习如何做某事”。【例】我们可以从这本书上学习如何折纸飞机。【译】我们可以通过养宠物学会如何照顾他人。

Wecanlearnhowtomakepaperplanesfromthisbook.Wecanlearnhowtotakecareofothersbykeepingpets.2.befaithfulto...意为“对……忠诚的”。【例】我的宠物猫对我很忠诚。Mypetcatisveryfaithfultome.【译】宠物会一直对我们忠诚。

Petsarealwaysfaithfultous.3.helpsb(to)dosth意为“帮助某人做某事”。【例】妈妈，让我来帮你打扫卫生吧。

Letmehelpyoudothecleaning,Mum.【译】照顾宠物甚至有助于我们活得更久。Caringforpetsevenhelpsuslivelonger.4.learn...from...意为“从……中学习……”。【例】你可以从看英文电影中学习英语。YoucanlearnEnglishfromwatchingEnglishmovies.【译】我们确实可以从养宠物中学到很多东西。Wecanreallylearnalotofthin