MBA作文讲座课堂应用版

MBA作文讲座幅：150/100字

达不到字数要求的，要酌情扣1-5布局：3-5段式

只写一段为0-4分，只写两段0-9分评分标准（5个模块评分，平均半分钟一份卷）结构、内容、语言：3段，长短句结合，一定难度的词汇和短语，少词汇语法错误卷面书写工整：心情一好分数就不会低篇幅一定要不长不短2分－条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。（即表达得一塌糊涂）5分－基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。（即表达得糊里糊涂）8分－基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。（即表达得勉勉强强）11分－切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。（即表达得清清楚楚）14分－切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。（即表达得漂漂亮亮）

例如：

1）有人认为机会是极少的

2）有人认为机会人人都有

3）我的看法

Sample1

Astotheopportunity,thereistwodifferentopinions:first,someonethinkopportunityislittleintheirlife.Secondly,someoneconsiderthatopportunityisexistingeverywhereeverybodyhassomekindsofchance.AccordingtomylifeexperimentandknowledgeIagreewiththesecondidea.Thereischanceforeveryoneinsomeunexpectedcase.Butifyouhasnopreparingforit,theopportunitywilllose.Thosewhohavemanypreparationandmuchknowledge,andsomegoodvirtue,mayIquiptheopportunityfirmly.Forexample,twomenareappealingforajobinacompany,andthereisonlyonevacantjobfortheonlyoneofthetwomen.How,thetwomanhasanopportunitytogetthejobbutthebosscertainlywouldacceptthegoodone.

SoIthinktheopportunityisexistingtoeveryone,butmoreopportunityisbelongstowhohasknowledge,experience,encourageandconfident.

该篇文章条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎，几乎没有正确的句子，得2分。

Sample2

Peoplehavedifferentviewsonopportunity.Somethinkthattherearefewopportunitiesforthemintheworld,whileothersholdthateverybodywillhavesomekindofchancesinhisorherlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iamfor/preferthelatter.Peoplewhoclaimthattheydon'thavegoodluckmaybethosewhoarenotabletotakechances.Maybetheyfailtorecognizeopportunitiesevenwhentheyareinfrontofthem.However,wisemencanseekopportunitiesratherthanwaitforchancestoappear.

……

Sowecanconcludethateverybodyhastheopportunitytosucceed,butitisuptohimselftotakeit.

该篇文章切题，思想表达清楚，文章结构合理，行文连贯，符合逻辑，属于14分档作文。

4．行文要求1）切题：统一，无不相关细节内容

2）条理清楚：连贯、和谐-注意衔接语的使用

3）简洁：句子要简练

4）准确：减少语法错误，符合英语的表达习惯，避免汉语式英语

…Inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcerned,…/AsIseeit,…thisisnotnecessarilyabadthing,because…Inthefirstplace…Forinstance…Inthesecondplace…Evenmoreimportantisthefactthat…/what’more/moreoverInconclusion…inabrief文章的内容不重要！重要的是框架（背）！习惯先看每段的首句+文章末句，再浏览全文挑错字和语法错误，所以要写成3段，每段首句为中心句，结尾再总结一下，这样老师只看3~4句话就可以给出分数了，节省时间自然分数就高了。中心句的写法模式性，一般背20句，不管出什么题都能从中挑出3~4句用上，各种题型背一些。??拼写不大确定的词一定不要写！判卷老师最强的能力就是找错字，而且这是他判断你写作能力的重要尺度！当你文章中出现了3个以上的拼写错误的时候，可以说你已经missionfail了。作文中出现一些闪光词汇和句型（比如成语chancesprefertoreadyones,allroadsleadtoRoma等，多被动句，插入语等，句式变化多样），对分数的提高有很大帮助的！建议背一些模块长句。如“重要”一词，用important太一般了，如果用vital,critical，essential，crucial就能使老师眼前一亮！moreandmore这个词是一定不要用，可以用Agrowingnumberofsth或Anincreasingnumberofsth，或说…isontherise。Attachimportanceto词汇和句式的转化很重要，你背的中心句一定要能体现这两点，如问题解决型文章末段首句可以这样写Animmediatestepmustbetakenbeforetheproblembecomestooserioustosolve.（必须在问题严重之前及时采取有效措施解决）Measures,whenitcomestothisproblem/asfarasthisissueisconcerned/asfarastheproblemgoes,aretobetakensoasto…,Ibelieve.(就这个问题而言，我认为应该采取措施改进以便。。。)正反观点对比可以说Weighingtheprosandconsofthesearguments,Iaminclinedtoagreewiththelatter/formerpointofview.(权衡正反两种观点，我倾向于后者／前者的看法)，这样就不用为字数发愁了！大作文的时间３０-35分钟，５分钟构思（确定模块，举例，论据等），２０分钟写，５分钟检查。内容切题，但不新颖不重要，不要为了想个好的例子浪费时间，第一是你未必想的出来，第二是你想出来了也写不出来，第三是你写出来了老师也不会看！所以要写最简单的例子。检查，这个时间千万不要数字数，主要是找拼写和语法的错误，主要是全篇文章时态一致、单复数、主谓一致！记住小的地方可以改，但决不要整句整句的改，缩短老师的评卷时间、使老师高兴是及格和打高分的首要条件！注意一些常用词，常用短语不要用错！！！Convenient,essential,obvious,characteristics/feature,environmentalprotection,prefer。。。to。。。,definitely,5．模块1.议论型模块(89words)谋篇布局

-将提示的第一句作为文章的第一句

-将提示的第三句作为第一段的最后一句

-将提示的第二句展开成文章的中心段落

-结论段归纳概括，提出建议Somepeoplebelieve(argue,hold，advocate，recognize,think)that观点1.Butotherpeopletakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlyadvocatethat观点2.Asforme/asfarasIamconcerned,Iagreetotheformer/latteridea.Thereareadozenofreasonsbehind/tosupportmybelief.Firstofall/inthefirstplace,论据1.Moreimportantly/inthesecondplace,论据2.Mostimportantofall/themoreimportantisfactthat,论据3.Lastbutnottheleast.Insummary,总结观点.Asacitizenoftheglobalvillage,Iamsupposedto表决心.或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat预测.例如：2002年1月MBA作文题FailureandSuccessSomebelievethatfailureandsuccessareaninevitablepartoftheirdailylifeandbothcontributetotheirfinalsuccess.Butotherstakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlyadvocatethatfailurewilldestroytheirconfidenceintheirworkandlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreetotheformer.Thereareadozenofreasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall,failureshouldnotberegardedastheendoftheworld.Onthecontrary,itcanteachusalotoflessonsandexperience,withwhichweavoidmakingmistakesagainandfinallysucceed.Second/Inthesecondplace,ifeverythingrunssmoothlyandwemakeachievementseffortlessly,wewillbecomearrogantandbeblindtopotentialproblems,whichmayleadtoourtotalfailure.Fromabove,wecanseeweshouldtakeaproperattitudetowardfailureandsuccess.对比选择型模版(56words)1.Thereisaheateddebateover____________________.Itiscommonlyacceptedthat____________________.Incontrast,othersclaimthat…____________________.2.Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggest__________________.Intheirview,____________________.However,othersthink____________________.Theyarguethat__________________.3.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideof…OnMarriageofCollegeStudents1.Thereisaheateddebateoverwhethercollegestudentsshouldgetmarriedornot.Itiscommonlyacceptedthattheyareentitledtogetmarried.Incontrast,asmallminorityofpeopleareagainstit.2.Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggestthatcollegestudentsarebothphysicallyandmentallymatureenoughtogetmarriedandthattheyknowwhattheyaredoing.Intheirview,ifcollegestudentsgetmarried,theywillbemoredisciplined,moremotivatedandmoreresponsible.However,othersthinktoday’scollegestudentsaremostlyfromonechild’sfamily.Asamatteroffact,theyareusuallyspoiltandnotpsychologicallypreparedforundertakingtheresponsibilityofafamily.Theyarguethatmarriagewilldistractthemfromstudyandplungethemintofinancialdilemma.3.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideoftheformer.IfIamluckyenoughtomeetmyMr.Right,Imaymarryhim.Thenwemayloveeachother,supporteachotherandencourageeachother.Oh,whatarosypictureitis!非对立观点题：只阐述好处或者坏处BenefitsofSportsandGamesWiththequickerpaceofourlifeandgreaterstressfromourwork,anincreasingnumberofmodernpeopleattachmuchimportancetosportsandgames./Anincreasingnumberofmodernpeople,withthequickerpaceofourlifeandgreaterstressfromourwork,attachmuchimportancetosportsandgames.Whyaretheybecomingsopopular?First,sportsandgamesdoalotofgoodtoourhealth.Theycanmakeusstrong,preventusfromgettingtoofat,andkeepushealthy.Theycanbeofgreatvaluetopeoplewhoworkwiththeirbrainsmostoftheday,forsportsandgamesgivepeoplevaluablepracticeinbuildingupastrongconstitution.What’smore,theymakeourlifericherandmorecolorful.“AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy”,justasthesayinggoes.Sopeopleofallagesenjoywatchingandtakingpartinvariouskindsofsports.Sportsandgamesarealsoveryusefulincharactertraining.Theydemandnotonlyphysicalskillandstrengthbutalsocourage,enthusiasm,disciplineandteamwork.Forboysandgirls,whatislearnedintheplaygroundoftenhasadeepeffect/impacton/influenceontheircharacter.Ifeachofthemlearnstoworkforhisteamandnotforhimselfonthefootballfield,hewilllaterfinditnaturaltoworkforthegoodofhiscountryinsteadofonlyforhisownbenefit.Withallthesebenefits,itisnowonderthatsportsandgamesseemtohavebecomeanessentialpartofourdailylife.2004年10月MBA考题ShouldCollegeStudentsLiveoutsidetheCampus?Thereisaheateddebateoverwhethercollegestudentsareentitledtorentaflatandliveoutsidethecampus.Itiscommonlyacceptedthattheyhaveeveryreasontomaketheirownchoiceaboutit.Incontrast,othersmaintainthattheyshouldliveinthedormitoryprovidedbytheircolleges.Thosewhoholdthefirstopinionsuggestthatcollegestudentsareoldenoughtomaketheirwisechoiceandtakecareofthemselves.Intheirview,collegestudents’livingoutsidethecampusbythemselveshasalotofadvantagessuchasfreedom,morespace,betterprivacy,greaterflexibilityinthetimetable,convenienceandexcellentlivingfacilities.However,othersthinkitdoesharmforcollegestudentstoliveoutsidethecampus.Ontheonehand,theyarguethatthesocietyiscomplicatedandthatthereexistsdangereverywhere.Ifsomethingterriblehappens,whowillberesponsible?Ontheotherhand,collegestudentswillbehardtodisciplineandmanage.Consideringoneafteranother,Istandonthesideoftheformer.WereIacollegestudent,Iwouldchoosetolivebymyself,forIvalueindependence,freedomandprivacymorethananythingelse.2009真题大作文Itiswell-knownthattextmessagehasbothadvantagesanddisadvantageseventhoughitplaysanincreasingcriticalroleinourdailylife.Somepeoplebelievethatitisablessingfortextmessageenrichesourlifeinalargedegree.Butotherstakeanoppositeside.Theyfirmlyadvocatethatitisahellbecausesometimesitbringslotsoftroublesandevendestroysourlife.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminclinedtoagreewiththeformerideaevenifithassomedisadvantages.Thereareadozenofreasonstosupportmybelief.Inthefirstplace,wecansendshortmessagestowishgoodlucktoourrelativesandfriends,whichbringusagreatdealofconvenience.What’smore,shortmessagecanhelpitsuserstoconnecttheoutsideworldeasily.Forinstance,somepeoplesubscribeweatherforecastornews,withwhichpeople’slifewillbegreatlycolorful.Lastbutnottheleast,textmessagecansavealargeamountofmoneyandtime,comparingwithphonecalls.Onthecontrary,theshortmessagewithtoomuchadsdisturbsourpeacefullife.However,thedisadvantagesoftextmessagecanbeignored.Insummary,thetextmessageownsprosandcons,butwecanuseitfreelyandavoiditsnegativeeffects.私人书信模版1DearJohn/SirsorMadams,IamdelightedtohearthatyouwillcometoGuangzhouforavisitsoon.Ican’twaittoseeyou.HereI’dliketogiveyouseveraltips./I’mherewritingforyoutothank/apologize/congulate/complainaboutfor….First/atfirst/atthebeginning/tobeginwith/inthefirstplace,Guangzhouisabigmetropolitancitywithalotofvehiclesandahugecrowdofpeopleandthetrafficisheavy,forwhichIhopeyouwillbeprepared.Second/inthesecondplace/what’smore/themoreimportantisthefactthat,peoplehereareaddictedtofoodsofdifferentflavors,esp.seafoodsandlivinganimals,eveninsects.Idoubtyou’lllikethem.Besides,theweatherhereischangeable,soyou’dbetterbringmoreclothesandmedicine.Withpeoplefromdifferentregionsandcountries,diverseculturesandexoticcustoms,youwilldefinitelyenjoyyourself.ThenImayserveasyourguide.Ifyouhaveanydoubts,don’thesitatetoinformmeplease.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou/earlyreply.SincerelyYours,Signature:LiMing2009书信作文DearSirorMadam,IamherewritingtoyoutoexpressmythanksforyourwarmreceptionwhileIwasinAmericaasamemberofaSino-Americanculturalexchangeprogram.……IhopeyouwillcometovisitChinainduecourse.Ifyouhaveanydoubts,don’thesitatetoinformmeplease.Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyou/earlyreply.SincerelyYours,Signature:LiMing图表作文模块Asisshowninthetable(orinthegraph/diagram),…dropped(ordecreased)by…/greatlyincreasedfrom…in1994to…in1996.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsfor…Ontheonehand,…Let’shaveanexampletoillustratethegreatincreasein…Ontheotherhand,…isduetothefactthat…Inaddition,…isresponsiblefor…Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow…AsfarasIamconcerned,…Nouns:arise/increase/fall/drop/decline//reachapeak/thelowestpointAdjectives:sharp/dramatic/considerable/slight/gradual//remainsteady/stayconstant2010真题大作文Asisshownfromthegivencolumn/pie/table/curvechartasabove,itisofdirectlinktomobilephonesubscriptionintheyearsstemming/rangingfrom2000to2008,whichiscomposedoftwosortsofcountries.Thefirstkindofnationthatcatchesourutmostattention,tostartwith,comestothedevelopednations.Thenumberofmobilephonesubscriptionintheyear2008wasequaltothatin2007,thatis,1billion,followedbytheyear2006(0.9billion),whilethatintheyear2000wasthesmallest,say,about0.6billion.Followingthat,we’llcontinuetothenextunit,inotherwords,thedevelopingcountries,whichobserved/saw/witnessedafasterrisingrateofsubscriptioninthesameperiod.Thefigure/dataoftheyear2008wasthebiggest,takingtheleadingposition(4billion),nexttowhichwastheyear2007,putitinanotherway,nearly3.3billion,withtheyear2000beingtheleastinnumberby0.4billion.Theabove-illustratedaspects,sofarinaword,indicatethatthegrowingproportionofmobilephonesubscriptioninthedevelopingcountrieswasmuchseniortothatofthedevelopedones.ItPaystoBeHonestRecently,weoftenhearcomplaintsaboutdishonesty.Whatamazesusmostisstudents'dishonestyinexams.Itistruethatcheatinganddishonestpracticesareineverywalkofourlives.Therearemanyreasonsexplainingthesedishonestbehaviors.Themainreasonisthatmostpeopleneglectthemoralvaluesinpursuitoftheirmaterialbenefits.Whatismore,welackeffectivelawsandregulationsofsupervision.Thirdly,mostdishonestpeoplecanescapethepunishment.Asaresult,theproblemofdishonestybecomesmoreandmoreserious.Consideringallthese,Istillwanttoarguethatitpaystobehonestinthelongrun.Foronething,honestyisatraditionalvirtueofourChinese.Foranother,evendishonestpeoplelikemakingfriendswithhonestpeople.Inconclusion,peopleseldomdenythatitpaystobehonest.ItPaystoBeHonestAsisknowntoall,weoftenhearcomplaintsaboutdishonesty.Peopleseemtogetaccustomedtomanydishonestbehaviors.Infact,therearedishonestpracticesineverywalkofourlives.Thereasonsofsocialdishonestylieinseveralaspects.Firstly,mostpeopleneglectmoralvaluesinpursuitoftheirmaterialbenefits.Secondly,unfaircompetitionsworsenthesituation.Thirdly,welackpowerfulandeffectivelawstocopewiththisproblem.Finally,manydishonestpeoplemayescapepunishmenteasily.Asamatteroffact,tobehonestwillbegoodforbothhonestpeopleandothers.Ontheonehand,behavingyourselfinanhonestwaycanwinrespectsfromothers.Ontheotherhand,beinghonestisanessentialsteptowardsourspiritualcivilization.Therefore,itpaystobehonestinthelongrun.HowtoSolvetheEnergyProblem

a.有人认为解决能源危机的方式是厉行节约

b.有人则认为开发新的能源是最好的办法

c.我的看法

Somepeopleholdthatthesolutiontoenergycrisisistosaveenergywhileothersclaimthatthebestapproachistodevelopnewsourcesofenergy.AsfarasIamconcerned,Ipreferthelatter.

Itisobviousthatevenifwecansavemuchenergy,wecanonlydelaytheenergycrisis,butcannotsolvetheproblemcompletely.Ontheotherhand,therearestilllimitlesssourcesofenergywaitingfortoexplore:suchasthesun,theseaandtheair.Forexample,wecanmakeuseofthesuntoproducesolarenergy.Sointhelongrun,wemustdevelopnewsourcesofenergyinsteadofmerelyconservingtheknown,limitedsupplies.

标题：HowtoAchieveSuccess

提纲：1）有人说成功主要靠运气；

2）有人则认为成功主要靠勤奋，与运气毫无关系;

3）我的观点

Somepeoplesaythekeytosuccessisgoodluck,whileothersclaimitishardwork.AsfarasIamconcerned,therearemanyfactorscontributingtosuccessandthethreefundamentalonesarediligence,devotionandperseverance.

Diligenceisthefirstkeyfactortosuccess.Diligencehelpsusremoveignorance,overcomedifficulties,andenlightenourminds.Itmakesafoolwise,andapoormanrich.Devotionisanotherfactortosuccess.Whateverwedo,wemustloveitanddoitwhole-heartedly.Onlywhenwesetourmindsonthejob,canwedoitwell.Furthermore,perseverance,orastrongwill,isthelastkeytosuccess.Withoutastrongwill,wearelikelytogiveupwhenwemeetsomedifficulties,letaloneperformwonderfuldeeds.

Toconclude,allgreatmenachievesuccessthroughdiligence,devotionandperseverance.Justasthefamoussayinggoes,"Nopains,nogains";"Wherethereisawill,thereisaway."

标题：CityLifeandSuburbanLife

提纲：1)最近几年越来越多的人迁往近郊居住

2）城市生活和近郊生活各有特点

3）比较起来，我喜欢的是……

Nowadaysbusiness,governmentandrecreationtendtobeconcentratedinthecentersofthecities.Althoughmostpeoplearereluctanttomovetotheoutskirtsofthecities,Ifeellikelivinginthesuburbs.

Itistruethatthecitycanprovidemuchconvenienceandentertainment,theveryreasonwhypeoplecan'tbeartopartwithcitylife.Butthecostfortheprivilegeoflivinginthecityisalsohigh.What'smore,thereismoregasandnoisepollutioninthecity,whichisfullofpetrolfumesandtoxicgases,tornbytheroarofbusesandtaxies,andthrongedceaselesslybygreatcrowds.Incontrast,livingnearthecountrysideonecanenjoythecleanatmosphere,theclosenesstonatureandthequiet,peacefulsurroundings---theessentialsofahealthylife.

Thenewsuburbanlifeisfastbecomingapredominantpatternoflivinginmostcities;andwiththeimprovementoftrafficandtheperfectionofservices,itwillprovetoholdgreatsuperiorityovercitylife.1.面试在求职过程中的作用2.取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……HowtoSucceedinaJobInterview?Nowadays,ajobinterviewisveryimportanttoboththeinterviewerandinterviewee.Toaninterviewer,hecantellsomethingaboutthejobtotheintervieweesuchassalary,workingconditionsandalsothedevelopmentprospectsofthecompany.Toaninterviewee,hecanmakeuseofthechancetoknowtheworkheisgoingtotakeup.Afterafullandfrankexchangeofinformation,anintervieweriseasytomakeajudgmentwhetherthejobisreallysuitablefortheinterviewee.Buthowcananintervieweesucceedinthejobinterview?Firstly,theintervieweehastopayattentiontohisappearance,forthefirstimpressionisalwayswhatwestartwith.Secondly,goodmannersareequallyimportant.Theintervieweehastobeneithertooproudnortootimid.Besides,heoughttobehonestabouthispersonalbackground.Finally,greatimportanceshouldbeattachedtohisabilityandskillsforthejobandhisacademicknowledge,whichhemustdemonstratetrulyandconfidently.Inaword,ajobinterviewisagoodchancefortheintervieweetoimpresstheinterviewerwithhismanners,knowledgeandskillsandobtainthejobopportunity.1．上大学的费用（tuitionandfees）可以通过多种途径解决;2．哪种途径适合于我（说明理由）。HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducationNowadays,tuitionandfeesforcollegearemuchhigherthaneverbefore.Howtofinanceourcollegeeducationhasbecomeabigconcern.Wecandealwithitinvariousways.Wecangetallofthemoneyfromourparentsorwecancompletelydependonourselves,doingapart-timejobonsummerorwintervacation.Inaddition,wecanapplytosomebankforstudents’loan.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iprefertocombinethefirsttwo.ItmeansmyparentssupportmetosomeextentandmeanwhileIdoapart-timejob-teachingchildrenEnglish1.有人认为读书要有选择；2.有人认为应当博览群书；3.我的看法。ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively?Somepeoplethinkreadingshouldbeselective.First,theythinkthatone’slifeissolimitedthatreadingextensivelyisoutofthequestion,sooneshouldonlyfocusonthebookscloselyconnectedwithhismajor.Second,surroundedbytheworldofknowledge,theybelievereadingwithoutselectingissimplyawasteoftime,energyandmoney.Finally,thosewhoarecriticalclaimthatnotallbooksareworthreading.However,therearemanypeoplewhopreferreadingextensively.Firstofall,theyfirmlybelievethatthemorebooksonereads,themoreknowledgeoneacquires.Anotherreasonforthosewholikereadingextensivelyisthattheworldischangingsorapidlythatonlybyreadingextensivelycanonekeepabreastofwhatisgoingoninotherpartsoftheworld.Inmyopinion,peopleshouldreadbothselectivelyandextensively.Ontheone?hand,weshouldreadselectivelyforspecialknowledge,whichneedsourconcentrationandcarefulstudy.Ontheotherhand,weshouldreadextensivelyfortheinformationorentertainment,whichleadstoacolorfullife.Therefore,Reading?shouldbe,accordingtomyownunderstanding,bothselectiveandextensive.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteacomposition?onthetopicDo“LuckyNumbers”ReallyBringGoodLuck?Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运；2.我认为数字和运气无关，…SampleCompositionDo“LuckyNumbers”ReallyBringGoodLuck?Nowadaysmanypeoplearecrazyaboutsome“LuckyNumbers”,suchasthenumberscontaining8sand6swhichsoundslikeChinese“Fa”and“LiuLiuDaShun”Theywouldliketopaytwiceormanytimesmoreoftheusualpricefora“Lucky”telephonenumber,oracarplatenumber.Theydosoonlybecausetheybelievethatthe“LuckyNumbers”canbringthemgoodluckandgreatfortune.Idon’tbelievethose“LuckyNumbers”canbringgoodluckorbigfortunetoanyperson.Thosepeople’sblindbeliefin“LuckyNumbers”isabsurdandsuperstitious.WehaveneverheardthatBillGates,therichestpersonintheworldnow,everdroveacarwithanumberof888or666.Myneighborhasgotasocalled?“Lucky”telephonenumberformanyyears,buthestillremainsaspoorasheusedtobenow.Therearesomanyexamplesshowingthat“LuckyNumbers”hasnothingtodowithone’sluckorfortune.Numbersareonlysymbolsindicatingthenamesofcertainthings.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteacomposition?onthetopicMyViewonFakeCommodities.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1．假冒伪劣商品的危害；2．怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。SampleCompositionMyViewonFakeCommoditiesFakecommoditiesaredisastrousforasociety.ThedisasterstheyhavebroughtaresomanythatIcanonlynameafewhere.First,thenormaleconomicorderisgreatlydestroyed.Commoditiesoffamousbrandsandhighqualitypileupinstoresunsoldwhilepoorgoodsareeverywhereinmarkets.Second,faircompetitionbetweenbusinessmenfallsvictimtofakecommodities.Goodcommoditiescannotbeatpooronesbecauseofthelatter’slowcostandlowprices.Tomakethingsworse,fakecommoditiesbringgreatlosstopeople.Forexample,weoftenhearthatfarmerstoilandsweatforayearwithoutharvestinganythingowingtofalseseedsorpoorfertilizer.Somepeopleevendiethankstothefakewine,orpoisonousfood.Theworstofall,thesocietyisseverelypollutedbythemaddesireformoney.Wemustputanendtofakecommoditiesbyallmeans.Firstofall,weshouldstrengthenourlaws.Lawsmustpunishanyonewhoproducesorsellsfakecommodities,besidescompensatingforallthelossescausedbythemaswell.Anotherthingweshoulddoistolaunchalongandwideant-fakecommoditycampaign.Everyoneshouldkeepaneyeonfakecommoditiesandrefusetobuyorusefakecommodities.Oncebeingcheated,thebuyershouldhavethecouragetoexposeandattackthelawbreaker.Inthisway,therewillbenomarketforfakecommodities.写作金句：该问题与价值观/环境污染有关，值得我们深思。Theissue/problemhassomethingtodowith/concerns/isrelatedto/dealswithpersonalvalues/environmentalpollution,whichdeserves/requires/needs/isworth/wants/waitsfor/awaitsourfurther/deeper/closer/strongeranalysis/discussion/insight/thought/illustration/considerationasnext/follows/below.简写版：Theissuedealswithourenvironmentalpollution,whichdeservesourcloserconsiderationasnext.环境问题对各行各业的人们产生了深远的影响，所以值得我们深思。Theinfluence/impact/effectexerted/imposed/posedbytheenvironmentalproblemstoallthepeopleisprofound/deep/serious,whichdeservesourfurtherdiscussion.其次，我们看这个想象的负面性/措施After/Followingthat,wewillmoveontothesideeffects/negativeimpactuponourlife/measurestobetaken.自从改革开放以来，中国发生了很大的变化。初级版：Sincereformandopenin