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Readingforwriting
--WritealetterofadviceWhat
do
you
usuallydowhenfacedwithadilemma/problem?1.Listentolightmusicandshutmyselfintheroomforawholeday.
2.Pourmyheartouttoagoodfriend.3.Turntomyparentsforhelp.4.Managetoseekaneffectivemethodallbymyself.5.Spendtimeinthegym.6.Gotoanadviserforteenagers(teacher/consultant)forhelp....Leadin10thSeptember2018Dearworriedfriends,Allthebest,
SusanLuoDateGreetingBodyCloseSignatureSusanLuo,anadviserforteenagers,hasreceivedaletteraskingforsomeadvice.Readherreplyanddiscussthequestions.Reading1.WhatisWorriedFriend’sproblem?2.WhatisMsLuo’sadvice?3.DoyouthinkMsLuo’sadviceisuseful?Whyorwhynot?Whatotherkindsofadvicewouldyougive?
WorriedFriend’sfriend,ChenLei,playscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.
Sherecommendshimtotalktohisfriendsabouthisbehaviourandencouragehimtotrynewhobbies.
Frommypointofview,heradviceisuseful,becauseit’salwaysgoodtotalktofriendsabouthis/herproblemsandofferadvice.Inaddition,spendingtimeonmeaningfulactivities,likehobbies,isaproperwaytoliveafulfillinglifeaswell.1.ReadfortheanswersA.Iknowwhattheproblemis.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.Thisismyadviceandreason(s).
D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.Findandmarkthepartsoftheletterthatmatchthefollowingparts.2.ReadfortheorganizationCircletheexpressionsMsLuousestomakesuggestionsintheletter.
3.Readforthelanguagefeatures
Usewhatyouhavelearnttowritealetterofadvicetooneoftheteenagersbelow.Writing1.Workingroups.Chooseoneoftheteenagersanddiscusshis/herproblem.Listpossiblesuggestionsandreasons.Suggestions:________________________________________________________Reasons:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
ToEric
Pre-writing:
Presentation①Trylisteningtoyourparents.②Invitethemoutforsomethingtoeat.①Maybetheyaren’tlisteningtoyoubecauseyoudon’tlistentothem.②Thiswillgiveyouachancetospeaktothemwithoutdistractions.Suggestions:__________________________________________________________Reasons:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ToXuTing
②Connectwithyourparentsonline.①Thiswillgiveyouchancetobearoundotherpeople,andhelpyourealizethatotherpeoplehaveproblems,too.②Aithoughtheyarefaraway,itdoesn’tmeanthatyoucan’ttalktothem.①Joinavolunteerclub.Pre-writing:
PresentationSuggestions:______________________________________________________________________________________________________Reasons:________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ToMinHo①Askamutualfriendtointroduceyoutoher.②Findchancestojoiningroupactivitieswheresheisagroupmember.①Yourfriendwillbeabletohelpyoubreaktheicewithherandprovideencouragementforyou.②Ifyouareinagroup,ittakesallthepressureoff,andyoucaninteractwithherinarelaxingenvironment.Pre-writing:
PresentationWritethedateandgreetthereader.Closeandsigntheletter.
Showthereaderthatyouknowwhattheproblemis.
Tellthereaderthatyouunderstandhowsheorhefeels.
Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkheorsheshoulddo.
Explainreasons.
Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.While-writing:Draftyourletteraccordingtotheoutlinebelow.
Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganizedinagoodorder?Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?Isthehandwritingeasytoread?Post-writing
Getyourdraftbackandreviseit.Exchangedrafts.Usethechecklisttogivebackonyourparter’sdraft.10September,2018DearXuTing,
Youwrotethatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.Itiscommonforteenagerstofeellonelywhentheyliveawayfromtheirparents.
Ithinkyoucantryjoiningavolunteergroupthathelpsotherpeople.Thiswillgiveyouachancetomeetandbearoundothers.Itwillalsohelpyourealizethatyouarenotaloneinhavingproblems,too.Helpingotherpeoplealsomakesusfeelbetter.Youcanalsoconnectwithyourparentsonline.Justbecauseyourparentsarefaraway,itdoesn’tmeanyoucan’ttalktothem.I’msurethatyou’llmakenewfriendsandgetachancetospeaktoyourparentsmoreoften.Thiswillhelpdriveawayyourloneliness.Bestwishes,
Version110September,2018DearXuTing,
I’msorrytohearthatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.Irecommendthatyoushouldtryjoiningavolunteergroupthathelpsotherpeople.Thiswill
giveyouachancetomeetandbearoundothers.Itwillalsohelpyourealizethatyouarenotaloneinhavingproblems,too.Besides,
Ithinkitisagoodwaytoconnectwithyourparentsonline.Itdoesn’tmeanyoucan’ttalktothemjustbecauseyourparentsarefaraway.I’msurethatyou’llmakenewfriendsandgetachancetospeaktoyourparentsmoreoften.Bestwishes,
Version2
建议信(Aletterofadvice)写作指导
建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告的一种文体。写信时要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由,提出的理由要合情合理,语气一定要委婉和缓。一、建议信基本结构和常用句式:1.开头(开门见山,表明写信目的):
I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Thanksfortrustingme.It’smypleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/advice.I’msorrytohearthatyou’rehavingtroubleincommunicatingwithothers.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Youaskedmeforadviceintheletteraboutandherearemysuggestions.Ithinkyoucanmakeitifyoufollowtheadvicebelow.2.正文(说明建议内容及理由):
①First(ly),whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis,youcanmakefriends.②Second(ly),youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway,youwillfeelbetter.③Third(ly),itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis,youwillcalmyourselfdown.④Lastbutnotleast,youshouldtalkwithherfirst.Ithinkyoushould...Irecommendthat...Whynot...?/Whydon’tyou...?Ithinkitwouldbeagoodideaifyou...?Ifyoudothis,/Bydoingthis,/Thatway,youcan/will...Onlyinthiswaycanyou...?3.结尾(表达希望):Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/ideasuseful/helpful.Ihopeyou’llsoonfeelbetterandcarryonasnormal.Ihopeyou’llmakeprogressin...
Ibelieveyoucantrytoovercomethesedifficultiesonlybyworkinghard.练习写作:
假如你是李华,最近收到了你的美国朋友John的来信。他在信中说,他刚进高中,不能适应新的环境,不知如何去结交新朋友,因而情绪低落。请根据以下内容给他写一封回信:1.向John表示问候和安慰;
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