Unit 1 Past and present -【同步写作课】2023-2024学年八年级英语下册单元写作深度指导（牛津译林版）（教师版）

第页Unit1Pastandpresent单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度家乡变化社会发展本单元写作要求同学们能用所学的词语和句型简单地介绍家乡发生的变化。介绍的内容主要为家乡过去的情况、现在的变化、感想和打算等。在具体的写作中，学生应做到以下几点：1.能用一般过去时描述家乡过去的情况；2.能用一般现在时和现在完成时描述现在的变化；3.能利用多种句式，丰富写作内容；【词汇积累】1．重要的important2．发生happen3．改善improve4．关系；联系relation5．从……中学到很多learnalotfrom6．饲养宠物

keeppets7．太阳能solarpower8．过去常常usedto9．代替insteadof10．变成turninto11．在很短的时间内inashorttime【句式积累】※开头句1.Manychangeshavetakenplacein…theseyears.这些年来，在……发生了很多变化。2.Inrecentyears,greatchangeshavetakenplacein….在最近的几年中，在……发生了很大变化。※中间句1.Tenyearsagoitwasaverypoorplace.十年前，它是一个贫穷的地方。2.Forexample,theenvironmenthaschangedforthebettersincethegovernmenttooksomeusefulmeasures.例如，自从政府采取了一些有效措施，环境发展地更好了。3.…hasdevelopedrapidlysincethen.自从那时起，……飞速发展。4.Butnowaftertheopen-gatepolicy,ourhometownisbecomingricherandricher.但是现在，开放政策以后，我们的家乡变得越来越富有。5.Manynewthingslikecomputers,newschoolsandnewbuildingsarebecomingmoreandmorecommon.许多像电脑、新的学校和新的建筑变得越来越普遍。6.Almostallthepeoplehaveownedmobilesorevenprivatecars.几乎所有人都有了手机甚至私家车。※结尾句1.I’mproudofour…andIhopeI’llbetheprideofour…inthefuture.我为我们的……而自豪，并且希望未来为我们的……而自豪。2.Asa…,Iamveryproud.AlsoIfeelexcitedforthestrengthof….做为一名……，我很自豪。我也为……的强大而振奋。3.Ifeelveryproudandexcitedtoseethechangesinmyhometown.Welcometomyhometownandexperienceitschangesonyourown!看到我的家乡的变化我感到很自豪而且振奋。欢迎来到我的故乡并亲自体验它的变化。【谚语积累】1.Peoplemisstheirhometownswhengrowingmature,birdsmisstheirnestswhengrowingold.人老思故乡，鸟老思巢穴。2.Tomakeyourhometownbeautiful,youneedtoplanttreesandflowers.要想家乡美，要种树和花。Thewaterinmyhometownisfairywater,andthesoilinmyhometownisgold.家乡的水是仙水，家乡的土是金子。3.Whetheryouarecloseornot,youarefromyourhometown.Whetheritisbeautifulornot,there’swaterinthecountryside.亲不亲，故乡人。美不美，乡中水。【万能写作模板】Inthepast,myhometownwas（过去的特点）,peopleliveda/anlife.Thehouseswereand.Pollutionwas,andtherewas.Theroadswereand,andpeoplewenttowork.Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Theenvironmenthasbecomemuchbetter.（开始介绍变化）Thereislessandlesspollution.Theroadsareand.Themountainshaveturned.Theriversareandtheskyis.Therearetrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Peoplelivealife.Theirhousesareand.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Everyyearthousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitourcity.I’msuremyhometownwillbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture.（表达感受）Ialsohopemorepeoplewillvisitmyhometown.（表达愿望）请你根据下面提示，结合你的成长经历，以“Changestomyhometown”为题，用英语写一篇90词左右的短文，介绍家乡的过去和现在变化。最后谈谈自己的感受。1.环境：

过去：房屋矮小破旧，道路狭窄……现在：搬进新公寓，街道宽阔整洁2.生活：

过去：听广播，看电视

现在：网上冲浪（surfontheInternet）……3.交通方式：过去：步行，骑自行车

现在：坐地铁或开车，火车站和飞机场投入使用多年（beinuse）4.交流方式：过去：写信保持联系

现在：……5.感受：……ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotoverthepastfewyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【审题思路】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示中需要补充的内容。第一步，根据提示内容从环境、生活、交通方式和交流方式四个方面描述家乡的变化；第二步，表达自己的看法和感受。【佳作欣赏】ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotoverthepastfewyears.Inthepast,peoplelivedinsmalloldhouses.Nowmostofthemhavemovedintonewflats.Yearsago,therewereonlynarrowanddirtyroadsinthesmalltown.Therewasrubbisheverywhere.Butnowthestreetsarewideandclean.PeopleusedtolistentotheradioorwatchTVintheirfreetime,butnowmostfamilieshavecomputersandtheInternet.PeoplearecrazyaboutsurfingontheInternetandtakingexercise.Inthepast,peopletravelledaroundonfootorbybicycle,butnowtheycangoaroundbycarorbyunderground.Therailwaystationandtheairporthavebeeninuseforyears.Peopleusedtokeepintouchbyletter,butnowweusemobilesorsendandreceiveemails.Ithinkmyhometownisbetterthanbefore.Nowpeopleareenjoyingacomfortablelife.一、阅读下列短文，根据短文内容，从每个方框内所给11个词汇中选择10个意义相符的词汇，必要时进行词形变化，填入空白处。all,

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anythingNowwecanseemoreandmoreelectricbikesinthestreet.Electricbikesareeasytoride.Theyrunfastandmake1pollution.Sotheybecomeverypopularinmanybig2inChina.Buttheelectricbikesalsocause3trafficaccidents.4Chinaplanstomakeanewrulefortheelectricbikeriders.If5electricbikeisheavierthan40kilosandcangofasterthan20kilometersanhour,itsridermustgetalicense(执照).Itmeansridershavetopassdrivingtestsbeforetheyride6electricbikesontheroad.Peoplehavedifferentideas7theplan.Somewelcometheplanbecausetheythinkitwillmakethestreetmuch8.Butsomearenothappywiththenewruleatall.Oneridersaid,“Idon’twanttogetalicenseor9.That’s10muchtrouble.”What’syouridea?Doyouagreewiththeplan?【答案】1．no2．cities3．more/many4．So5．an6．their7．about8．safer9．anything10．too二、完成句子1.自从2015年以来，我的家乡发生了巨大变化。________________________________________inmyhometownsince2015.2．我妈妈在这家超市工作了三年。Mymotherinthesupermarketthreeyearsago.3．现在，很多人通过微信来交流。Nowadays,manypeopleWeChat.4．现在很多沙漠已经变成了良田。Nowmanydesertshavegoodlands.5．这些工厂已经采取了一些行动来保护环境。Thefactory.6．现在网络使交流容易多了。TheInternetnow.7．自从上个月以来，我们一直通过电子邮件保持联系。Wesincelastmonth.8．MissGaohastaughtChineseintheschoolfor5years.(改为同义句)MissGaohastaughtChineseintheschool.9．JuliahasnoteverbeentotheWestLake.（改为同义句）JuliabeentotheWestLake.10．Alicealwayswenttotheparkinthemorninglastyear.（改为同义句）Alicegototheparkinthemorninglastyear.11．ShebegantoteachEnglishintheschoolin2005.（改为同义句）SheEnglishintheschool2005.12．IhavealreadyreceivedanofferfromHarvardUniversity.(改为否定句)IreceivedanofferfromHarvardUniversity.13．Hisfatherusedtosmokealot.（改为反意疑问句）Hisfatherusedtosmokealot,?14．Thegovernmenttookactiontoimprovethesituationlater.(改为一般疑问句)thegovernmentactiontoimprovethesituationlater?【答案】1．Greatchangeshavetakenplace2．hasworkedsince3．communicateby4．turnedinto5．havetakensomeactionstoprotecttheenvironment6．makescommunicationmucheasier7．havekeptintouch(witheachother)byemail/havestayedintouch(witheachother)byemail/havebeenintouch(witheachother)byemail8．since5/fiveyearsago9．hasnever10．usedto11．hastaughtsince12．haven’tyet13．didn’t/usedn’the14．Didtake1．请以“Myhometown”为题，写一篇关于家乡过去和现在变化的短文。要求：字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰，80词左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：文章标题以及写作要点已经给出，按照要求介绍家乡过去和现在的变化，并突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，说明家乡变化很大；第二步，从不同的角度说明家乡的变化，如人们的生活、学生的学习环境等方面进行说明，可列举具体的事例；第三步，书写结语。【满分作文】MyHometownOurhometownhaschangedalot.Tenyearsagoitwasaverypoorplace.Peopletherehadnothing:noTVorradio,noricetoeat,nofreshwatertodrink.Sometimestheywerestillhungry.Moststudentsatschoolwerestillusingverybaddesks.Butnowaftertheopen-gatepolicy,ourcountrysideisbecomingricherandricher.Manynewthingslikecomputers,newschoolsandnewbuildingsarebecomingmoreandmorecommon.Sopeoplearrivingherearesayingourhometownhaschangedalot.【亮点词汇】①richerandricher越来越富有②moreandmore越来越多【高分句型】①Sopeoplearrivingherearesayingourhometownhaschangedalot.（省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）2．假如你是李华，请根据下面表格内容提示，给你的笔友Mary写一封邮件，介绍一下你的家乡SunshineTown这些年来的变化。内容要点：过去现在环境狭窄肮脏的道路；到处堆放的垃圾两旁种有树木花草的宽广干净的街道；还有高楼和商店生活房子又旧又小；娱乐只有收音机和电视机房子是新的公寓套房；娱乐有手机、电脑和网络等交通步行或自行车出租车、小车、火车、飞机、地铁等感受……注意：1.内容必须包含表格中的所有信息；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得透露个人信息；4.词数80左右（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。DearMary,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Iamwritingtotellyouthechangesinmyhometown.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【思路解读】①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图。开篇点出写作主题；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍家乡发生了哪些变化；第三步，书写结语。表达自己对家乡变化的感受。【满分作文】DearMary,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Iamwritingtotellyouthechangesinmyhometown.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Inthepast,therewereonlynarrowdirtyroadswithrubbisheverywhere,butnowtherearewideandcleanstreetswithtrees.Andweusedtoliveinsmalloldhouses,butnowwehavenewflatsintallbuildings.Weusedtogooutonfootorbybikeandweseldomwentout.Butnowwecangooutbytaxi,bycar,byair,bytrainorbysubway,andwecangoabroadandtravelonline.Weusedtowriteletterstoeachother,butnowwecommunicatebymobilephones.Inoursparetime,weusedtolistentoradioorwatchTV,butnowwehavecomputersandtheInternet.Yours,LiHua【亮点词汇】①takeplace发生②goabroad出国③usedto过去常常【高分句型】Inoursparetime,weusedtolistentoradioorwatchTV,butnowwehavecomputersandtheInternet.（but引导的并列句）3．假设你们学校要开展一个以“家乡的过去与现在”为主题的英语有奖征文活动，请你以“Thechangesinmyhometown”为题，从道路、交通以及环境条件等三方面来描述你所居住的小镇发生的变化。写作要求：1.字迹工整、规范；2.字数：100词左右；3.语句通顺，无语法错误，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；4.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。Thechangesinmyhometown________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“现在时完成时”；③提示：本文主要介绍自己家乡的变化，适当增加细节。【写作步骤】第一步，引出话题；第二步，从道路、交通以及环境条件等三方面来描述你所居住的小镇发生的变化；第三步，介绍自己的感想。【满分作文】ThechangesinmyhometownSincetheReformandOpening-uppolicywascarriedout,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Nowtheroadsarewideandclean.People,whosehousesarelargeandbright,arelivingahappyandcomfortablelife.Almostallthe

peoplehaveownedmobilesorevenprivatecars.What’smore,ahigh-speedrailwaystationhasbeenbuiltinmyhometown,whichmakesitconvenientforpeopletotravelorvisitfriends.Mostimportantly,theenvironmenthasbecomemoreandmorebeautifulwithtrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Ifeelveryproudandexcitedtoseethechangesinmyhometown.Welcometomyhometownandexperienceitschangesonyourown!【亮点词汇】①takeplace发生②what’smore而且【高分句型】①SincetheReformandOpening-uppolicywascarriedout,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.(since引导的时间状语从句)②People,whosehousesarelargeandbright,arelivingahappyandcomfortablelife.(whose引导的定语从句)③What’smore,ahigh-speedrailwaystationhavebeenbuiltinmyhometown,whichmakesitconvenientforpeopletotravelorvisitfriends.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)4．某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示，以“TheChangesinMyHometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文。过去生活贫困，房屋小而破旧。污染严重，到处是垃圾。道路脏且狭窄，上班靠步行和自行车。现在住房宽敞明亮；污染减少，环境变得很漂亮。道路宽敞干净，许多人有自己的汽车上下班；每年有成千上万来自各地的游客来参观。将来希望……（两点）要求:

1.短文不少于100词。2.语句通顺，意思连贯，字迹工整。3.内容必须包括表格中的要点，需适当发挥。TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。【写作步骤】第一步，介绍家乡过去的情况，包括房屋，污染和道路等情况；第二步，介绍现在家乡的情况，包括住房，污染，道路，交通工具和游客情况；第三步，介绍将来的情况，表达自己对家乡的期望。【满分作文】TheChangesinMyHometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall,peoplelivedapoorlife.Thehouseswereoldandsmall.Pollutionwasserious,andtherewasrubbisheverywhere.Theroadsweredirtyandnarrow,andpeoplewenttoworkonfoot.Nowgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Theenvironmenthasbecomemuchbetter.Thereislessandlesspollution.Theroadsarewiderandcleaner.Themountainshaveturnedgreener.Theriversareclearerandtheskyisbluer.Therearetrees,flowersandgrasseverywhere.Peopleliveabetterlife.Theirhousesarelargeandbright.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Everyyearthousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitourcity.I’msuremyhometownwillbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture.Ialsohopemorepeoplewillvisitmyhometown.【亮点词汇】①lessandless越来越少的②thousandsof成千上万的【高分句型】①Theroadsarewiderandcleaner.（比较级并列）②I’msuremyhometownwillbecomebetterandbetterinthefuture.（宾语从句）5．假如你是李华，你的一个美国网友Bob想了解你家乡的变化，请根据下面的思维导图写一封英文电子邮件给他，并表达你的感受。注意事项：1、邮件内容根据思维导图自拟，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，符合题意。2、字数100词左右，邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总字数。DearBob,I’mgladtotellyouthegreatchangesinmyhometown.Manychangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownovertheyears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。【写作步骤】第一步，开头已给出，引出家乡的变化；第二步，从生活，环境以及交通等方面介绍家乡的变化。【满分作文】DearBob,I’mgladtotellyouthegreatchangesinmyhometown.Manychangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownovertheyears.

Inthepast,thehouseswereveryoldandthestreetswerenarrow.Butnowtherearealotofnewtallbuildings.Thestreetsareverywidesothatthetrafficislessheavy.Inthepast,thepollutionwasheavy.Theriversweredirtyandfullofrubbish.Butnowtheskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Inthepast,peoplehadnoentertainment,butnowpeoplecanlistentoradioorwatchTVaftersupper.TheycangetinformationthroughcomputersandInternet.Asfortransport,peopleusedtoworkonfootorbybicycle.Butnowtheycangosomewherebybusorunderground.

Iamgladtoseethesechanges.Yours,LiHua【亮点词汇】①takeplace发生②fullof充满③asfor至于④usedtodosth过去常常做某事【高分句型】①Butnowtherearealotofnewtallbuildings.（therebe句型）②Thestreetsareverywidesothatthetrafficislessheavy.（sothat引导结果状语从句）6．请你根据下面的提示，结合你的成长经历，以“Changestomyhometown”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。过去现在将来至少列举两例说明过去的情况。环境优美：空气新鲜；碧水蓝天：污染减少你对家乡未来的畅想（至少一句）。交通便利：各种交通方式：地铁已经beinuse（投入使用）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。【写作步骤】第一步，根据提示材料介绍家乡的变化；第二步，表达自己对家乡未来的畅想。【满分作文】ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotovertheyears.Inthepast,thereusedtobeoldhouses.Theriverwasverydirty.Wecouldhardlyseethebluesky.Butnow,therearemanytallbuildingsinmyhometown.Theairisfresh,theriveriscleanandthewaterisclear.Thereislesspollutionthanbefore.WhenIwasyoung,theroadswerenarrowandthetransportationconditionswerehard.Peoplewenttoworkonfootorbybike.Ittookalotoftime.Astimegoesby,thosehavechanged,too.Thesubwayhasbeeninuseformanyyears.Itisconvenientforpeopletogosomewhere.Iamgladtoseethesechanges.Ihopemyhometownwillbebetterandbetter.【亮点词汇】①usedtodosth过去常常做某事②beinuse投入使用③begladtodosth高兴做某事【高分句型】①Butnow,therearemanytallbuildingsinmyhometown.（therebe句型）②WhenIwasyoung,theroadswerenarrowandthetransportationconditionswerehard.（when引导时间状语从句）7．请以“Thechangesinmyhometown”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向你的网友描述家乡的变化及你的感受。内容包括以下要点：变化过去现在环境青山绿水，空气新鲜路多，楼多，人更多交通自行车或步行公交车、出租车或火车问题发展少绿化少注意：1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名：2.词数在80~100之间。Thechangesinmyhometown________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：本文时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主；③提示：注意时态的正确运用，描述过去用一般过去时，描述现在用一般现在时。要点已经给出，要具体阐述，并表达自己感受。【写作步骤】第一步，描述过去的家乡；第二步，描述家乡现在情况；第三步，结束语，描述自己的感受。【满分作文】ThechangesinmyhometownInthepast,myhometownwasverysmall.Thereweregreenhillsandclearwater.Theairwasverycleanandfresh.Thetrafficwasnotconvenient,solocalpeoplewenttothenearesttownonlybybikeoronfoot.Butpeoplecouldhardlychangetheirdailylives.Therewaslessdevelopmentinthepast.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Myhometownhasbecomemorebeautiful.Theremoreroads,buildingsandpeople.Peopleliveabetterlife.Theirhousesarelargeandbright.Peoplecangoanywherebybus,bytaxiorbytrain.Manypeoplehavetheirowncars.Everyyear,thousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitmyhometown.Buttherearefewerandfewertreesaroundnow.Ifwepaymoreattentiontotheenvironment,I’msuremyhometownwillbecomebetterandbetterinthenearfuture.【亮点词汇】①convenient便利的②hardly几乎不③theirowncars他们自己的的车【高分句型】Everyyear,thousandsofpeoplefromallovertheworldcometovisitmyhometown.（介词短语作后置定语）8．学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Greatchangesinmyhometown”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛。1.Whatwasyourhometownlikeinthepast?(environment,life,transport...)2.Whatisyourhometownlikenow?(environment,life,transport...)3.Whatdoyouthinkofthechanges?注意事项：(1)

词数：90词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；(2)

文中不能出现真实姓名、班级等信息；(3)

文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。Greatchangesinmyhometown

Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownovertheyears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，考生需要围绕主题提示补充和发挥；②时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏要点，同时注意不要偏题，需要围绕家乡的变化来展开，注意内容的完整和正确使用词汇和句型。【写作步骤】第一步，表明写作意图，引出后文的变化；第二步，阐述过去的样子，从环境，生活和交通几个方面阐述，也要表明现在的样子，突出其变化；第三步，结尾总结，并表明自己对变化的看法。【满分作文】Greatchangesinmyhometown

Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometownovertheyears.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutthechanges.

Inthepast,thelifeinmyhometownwassimplebutpoor.Peopleusuallywalkedorrodeabiketogoshopping.Ittookalotoftime.Andthereweren’tmanykindsofgoods.Buttheenvironmentwasgood.Thereweremoretreesonthehillsandthereweren’tanyrubbishoutside.

Butnow,thelifeinmyhometownistotallydifferent.Almosteveryfamilyhasacaranditisveryconvenienttogoshoppingbycar.Therearemanydifferentkindsofgoodsintheshoppingmallandpeoplehavemoreactivitiestodothanbefore,likegoingtothegym,playingboardgamesandsoon.Buttheenvironmentisnotasgoodasthatbefore.Peoplecutdowntreesandthrowrubbish.That’snotagoodchange.

Inmyopinion,ourlivesarebecomingbetterandbetter,butweshouldalwayspayattentiontotheenvironment.【亮点词汇】①betterandbetter越来越好②differentkindsof不同种类的③asgoodas和……一样好④inmyopinion在我看来【高分句型】①Itisveryconvenienttogoshoppingbycar.（it作形式主语）②Thereweremoretreesonthehillsandthereweren’tanyrubbishoutside.（therebe句型表示“存在”）9．学校网站英语栏目组织征文活动“GreatChangesinMyHometown”，请根据提示，写一篇短文投稿。GreatChangesinMyHometown1.Whatwasyourhometownlikeinthepast?2.Whatgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinyourhometown?3.Whatdoyouthinkofthegreatchanges?注意事项：(1)词数：120词左右；(2)文中不能出现真实姓名班级等信息；(3)文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。GreatChangesinMyHometownWiththedevelopmentoftechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthepastfewyears.Inthepast,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。【写作步骤】第一步，根据文章开头提示，介绍家乡过去的情况。第二步，介绍家乡现在的情况。第三步，发表对这些变化的看法。【满分作文】GreatChangesinMyHometownWiththedevelopmentoftechnology,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowninthepastfewyears.Inthepast,theroadsherewerenarrowandcrowded.Thehouseswereveryoldandsmall.Theairwasnotfreshenoughandsometimestherewasterriblesmell.Theriverwaspollutedbadlyandtherewasrubbishinit.Nowadays,theroadsbecomewideandclean.Itisreallyconvenientforpeopletogoout.Wecanchoosedifferentkindsofwaystogoanywhere.Lotsoftallbuildingshavebeenbuiltinthecity.Mostofusmovetobigandbeautifulhouses.Theskyisalwaysblueandtherearemanybirdssinginthetrees.Myhometownlookslikeabiggardenwithgreengrassandcolorfulflowers.Ithinkthesechangesmakeourlifemorecomfortable.Howgreattheyare!【亮点词汇】①differentkindsof不同种类的②looklike看起来像【高分句型】Itisreallyconvenientforpeopletogoout.(itisadj.forsb.todosth.句型)10．请你根据下面提示，结合你的成长经历，以“Changestomyhometown”为题，用英语写一篇90词左右的短文，介绍家乡的过去和现在变化。最后谈谈自己的感受。1.环境：

过去：房屋矮小破旧，道路狭窄……现在：搬进新公寓，街道宽阔整洁2.生活：

过去：听广播，看电视

现在：网上冲浪（surfontheInternet）……3.交通方式：过去：步行，骑自行车

现在：坐地铁或开车，火车站和飞机场投入使用多年（beinuse）4.交流方式：过去：写信保持联系

现在：……5.感受：……ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotoverthepastfewyears.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路解读】①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示中需要补充的内容。【写作步骤】第一步，根据提示内容从环境、生活、交通方式和交流方式四个方面描述家乡的变化；第二步，表达自己的看法和感受。【满分作文】ChangestomyhometownMyhometownhaschangedalotoverthepastfewyears.Inthepast,peoplelivedinsmalloldhouses.Nowmostofthemhavemovedintonewflats.Yearsago,therewereonlynarrowanddirtyroadsinthesmalltown.Therewasrubbisheverywhere.Butnowthestreetsarewideandclean.PeopleusedtolistentotheradioorwatchTVintheirfreetime,butnowmostfamilieshavecomputersandtheInternet.PeoplearecrazyaboutsurfingontheInternetandtakingexercise.Inthepast,peopletravelledaroundon