写作能力提升练

写作能力提升练

Unit8Naturaldisasters请你根据下面的提示，以“Alandslide”为题，写一篇70词左右的短文。1.上周一早上，在连续下了两天大雨之后发生了山崩(landslide)。2.我和妈妈在家，爸爸下午回来。雨很大，他叫我和妈妈赶快带伞离开。3.就在那时，房子开始摇晃，我们非常害怕，迅速跑开了。4.第二天上午回家时，我们发现房子没有了，到处是碎玻璃和砖块，我们感到很悲伤。［思路构建］步骤构思列纲1介绍山崩的时间、地点及原因LastMondaymorning...2山崩发生时我们的反应veryafraid,leavequicklywithumbrellas步骤构思列纲3山崩给我家带来的后果nohouse,piecesofglass

andbricks4我们的感受Wefeltverysad.AlandslideLastMondaymorning,aftertwodays'heavyrain,alandslidehappened.Iwasathomewithmymother.Fathercouldn'tcomebackuntiltheafternoon.Itwasrainingheavily.Heaskedustoleavequicklywithumbrellas.Justthen,thehousestartedtoshake.Wewereveryafraidandranawayquickly.［精彩范文］Thefollowingmorning,wewentbackhome.Wefoundthattherewasnohouseatall.Therewereonlypiecesofglassandbrickseverywhere.Wefeltverysad.earthquake,flood,shake,fear,silent,nervous,calm,shout【单词】thousandsof,washaway,inalldirections,calmdown,breakdown,as...aspossible【短语】Anearthquake/Aflood/Asnowstormhit...Iwasdoing...when......becauseoftheheavyrain/snow...Wecouldonlyhear/see......keptfalling.Suddenly...【句型】...hadtowalkslowly/pulledoneselfthrough......wasreallyterrible.请根据以下提示，以“Aterribleflood”为题，写一篇80词左右的文章。包括以下要点：1.连续20天的暴雨导致了洪水；2.昨天晚上，洪水袭击了我们村，我们一家正在睡觉。醒来后发现到处是水；3.为了安全起见，我们把餐桌移出房子，坐在餐桌上；4.洪水冲走了很多房子，很多人流离失所；5.半小时后警察来了，救了我们一家和很多村民。AterriblefloodLastnight,aterriblefloodcausedbya20days’rainstormhitourvillage._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AterriblefloodLastnight,aterriblefloodcausedbya20days'rainstormhitourvillage.Weweresleepingwhenithappened.Waterwaseverywherewhenwewokeup.Forsafety,wemovedourdiningtableoutofourhouseandsatonit.Thefloodwashedawaymanyhouses.Manypeoplelosttheirhomes.Afterhalfanhour,thepolicemencame.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________