Unit5写作课件沪教牛津版（2024）七年级英语上册

Unit5WritingWhatwouldatriptotheMoonbelike?Haveyoueverdreamedofatripto

space?审题01列大纲02检查04遣词造句03dcba开头引入主题，介绍太空旅行的背景或原因中间详细描述太空旅行的过程，包括出发、在太空中的经历看到的景色、进行的活动结尾总结太空旅行的感受和收获对未来太空探索的展望你可能用得上的单词spaceship

（宇宙飞船）

astronaut

（宇航员）spacestation

（空间站）

zerogravity

（零重力）launch

（发射）orbit

（轨道）galaxy

（星系）asteroid

（小行星）翻译：这是我梦想中的旅行基础表达句式升级Thisismydreamtrip.Thisiswhatmydreamtriplookslike.looklike看起来像...，与...相似翻译：我们要在睡袋里睡觉基础表达句式升级Wewillsleepinthesleepingbag.Thereismuchlessgravity,sowewillhavetotieoursleepingbagstothewallwhenwesleep..扩句小技巧：加原因＋时间翻译：我将欣赏一下外面的景色基础表达句式升级Iwillenjoytheviewoutside.Whenwearriveatthespacestation,IwillfirstlookoutofthewindowsandenjoytheviewoftheEarth.扩句小技巧：加时间+详细的动作翻译：我希望将来有朝一日能在太空旅游基础表达句式升级Ihopetotravelintospacesomeday.Ireallylookforwardtotravellingintospacesomeday-itwillbeanamazingexperience.扩句小技巧：短语升级+总结Ihopelcantravelintospacewithmyfamilyoneday.Thisiswhatmydreamtriplookslike.First,myfamilyandIwillflyoutintospaceonaspaceship.Whenweintoorbit,wewillvisitaspacestation.

Itwilltakeusaboutsixhourstogetthere.Thingsareverydifferentinspace.Thereismuchlessgravity,sowewillhavetotieoursleepingbagstothewallwhenwesleep.Wewillalsohavetowashourhandsandbrushourteethinadifferentway.Whenwearriveatthespacestation,IwillfirstlookoutofthewindowsandenjoytheviewoftheEarth.Afterthat,Iwouldliketodosomeexperiments.

Ireallywanttostudyhowplantsgrowinspace.Next,I'mgoingtoputonaspacesuitandgoonaspacewalk.Ireallylookforwardtotravellingintospacesomeday-itwillbeanamazingexperience!与话题相关的范文

Inthefuture,spacetourismwillbecomeapopularchoiceformanypeople.IbelievethatonedayIwillalsohavetheopportunitytotakeaspacetrip.

Iwillboardahigh-techspaceshipandwearaspecialspacesuit.Whenthespaceshiptakesoff,Iwillfeelthepowerfulpush.Onceinspace,Iwillfloatfreelyandlookatthebeautifulearthandthevastuniverse.

Iwillexplorethemysteriesofspaceandexperiencetheamazingzero-gravityenvironment.Thistripwillbeanunforgettableadventureforme.高分亮点句型积累记重点啦！becomeapopularchoice变得受欢迎havetheopportunitytodosth有计划做某事explorethemysteriesofspace探索太空奥秘experiencetheamazingzero-gravityenvironment.

体验神奇的零重力环境anunforgettableadventure一场难忘的探险之旅Let’swrite!假设你叫李华，请根据所学的知识，写一篇关于月球之旅的短文，提出一些好的旅行建议。要求：1.80个词左右;2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。

ThereissomeadviceforustotraveltotheMoon.

Firstly,wemusttakeoxygentankswithus.BecausethereisnoairontheMoon.Secondly,wemustprepareaspacesuitandapairofsunglassestoprotectourskin.Thirdly,weneedtobringSpaceFoodsothatwecaneatmoreeasily.BecausethegravityoftheMoonisnotasstrongastheEarth's,thefoodwillfloataway.Finally,we'dbetterpreparearopetotieustothespaceship.ItcanstopusflyingofftheMoon'ssurfaceandintospace.

Ifwefollowtheadviceabove,wewillhaveawonderfultriptotheMoon

inthefuture.参考范文

高分亮点句型积累记重点啦！ThereissomeadviceforustotraveltotheMoon我们有一些去月球旅游的建议asstrongas和...一样强We’dbetterdosth.我们最好做某事floataway飘走

Ifwefollowtheadviceabove,wewillhaveawonderfultriptotheMoon

inthefuture如果我们采纳上面的建议，我们将会有一次美妙的月球之旅。与话题相关的范文Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Iaminterestedinspace.Mydreamistotravelintospace.IamsogladbecauseIwilltravelintospacebyspaceshipnextweek.

Firstofall,Iwillsetuptogointospaceat8:30nextMondaymorning,andIwillhavetowearaheavyspacesuit.WhenIgettothespace,IwilltakeawalkontheMoonandtakeasmanyphotosasIcan.What’smore,IwillwatchafilmaboutspaceintheSpaceCinema.Intheend,IwillcomebacktotheEarthat5:00p.m.nextFriday.Ithinkitwillbeanexcitingexperience.高分亮点句型积累记重点啦！aminterestedin对...感兴趣，可以替换likeMydreamistodosth我的梦想是做...firstofall首先=tobeginwith/firstandforemostwhat’smore其次=inaddition/additionally/besidesintheend最后=atlast/finally/lastbutnotleast高难度范文！

Haveyoueverdreamedoftravelingtospace?Well,IhadtheopportunitytotakeatriptospacelastmonthanditwasanexperienceIwillneverforget.

Whenthedayofthetriparrived,Iwasbothexcitedandnervous.Iputonmyspacesuitandboardedthespaceship.Theforceofthetakeoffpushedmebackintomyseatandsoon,wewereleavingtheearth'satmosphere.Onceinspace,Ilookedoutofthewindowandwasstunnedbythebeautyofitall.Theearthwasamagnificentsightfromspace.Itwasablueandwhitespherewith

cloudsandthecontinentsandoceansclearlyvisible.Icouldalsoseethemoon,whichlookedsoclosethatIfeltlikeIcouldreachoutandtouchit.Wespentseveraldaysinspace,conductingexperimentsandobservingtheuniverse.Wesawasteroidspassingbyanddistantgalaxiesshininginthedistance.Thetriptospacewasnotonlyanadventurebutalsoalearningexperience.Whenitwastimetoreturntoearth,Ifeltabitsadtoleavethismagicalplace.ButIknowthatthistriphasinspiredmetoworkharderandstrivetomakemorecontributionstospaceexplorationinthefuture.高分亮点句型积累记重点啦！itwasanexperienceIwillneverforget.这是我永远不会忘记的体验Iwasstunnedbythebeautyofitall.

我被这一切的美所震撼了amagnificentsight壮丽的景色Thetriptospacewasnotonlyanadventurebutalsoalearningexperience.太空之旅不仅是一次冒险，也是一次学习的经历makemorecontributionsto...对...做更多贡献.高难度范文！

Lastsummervacation,Ihadanamazingtriptospace.Earlyinthemorning,Igotonthespaceshipwithotherastronauts.Asthespaceshipliftedoff,Ifeltastrongforcepushingmebackintomyseat.Theviewoutsidethewindowwasbreathtaking.Theearthlookedlikeablueandgreenmarble,andthethinlayerofatmospheresurroundeditlikeaveil.Aswemovedfurtherintospace,Isawcountlessstarsshiningbrightlyinthedarkness.Theywerelikediamonds.Wepassedbythemoon.Duringthetrip,weconduc