六年级作文之my school六年级英语作文

myschool六年级英语作文

【篇一：小学六年级英语作文汇总】

小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

myenglishteacher

misstangismyenglishteacher,she'sverypretty,sheistall

andthin,shehastwobigeyesandasmallmouth,herhairis

long,shelikescatsverymuch,andshelikessingingand

dancing,too.herenglishisverygood,weoftenplaygamesin

englishclasses,sheisverykindtous.weallloveher.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作

者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介

绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。

小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词［组］,以免写出一

些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清

晰、规范等。

mydaysoftheweek

i'mastudentandiamingrade5.igetupatsixo'clockevery

day.ihavebreakfastathalfpastsix,andgotoschoolatseven

o'clock,ihaveclassesfrommondaytoSaturday,ihavean

englishclassonfridayandihaveapeclassontuesday.i

don'thavetogotoschoolonweekend,andilikegoing

swimmingonthatday.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自

己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调

了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。小朋友们写作文时要注意人称

及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟

悉的事情。

icanhelpdohousework

iamagirl,mynameisliling.i5minclassthree,gradefive,i'm

veryhelpfulathome,icanwatertheflowers,emptythetrash

andsweepthefloor,aftermeals,icanhelpmymotherdothe

dishes,onsunday,icanwashtheclothes,whataboutyou?

areyouhelpful,too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮

助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详

细，到位。

小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在

作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。

写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

myvillage

myvillageisverybeautiful,therearemanyhousesinthe

village,nearthevillage,thereisaforest,asmallriverisin

frontofthevillage,thewaterinitisveryclean,wecansee

somefishintheriver,neartheriver,youcanseeamountain,

someflowersandgrassareonthemountain,ilikemyvillage,

welcometomyvillage!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、

森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的

美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的

特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

小学英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

myweekend

therearetwodaysontheweekend,Saturdayandsunday.on

Saturday,ioftengotomydancingclassinthemorninganddo

myhomeworkintheafternoon,andioftenhelpmymotherdo

somecleaning,onsunday,ialwaysvisitmygrandparentsin

themorninganddosomereadingintheafternoon,afterdinner,

ioftenwatchtvwithmyparents,atthattime,wecantalkwith

eachotherandsaysomethinghappily,weoftenhaveagood

time.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙周末的活动，记叙了周六和周

日的上午和下午分别做了哪些活动及对活动的感受。即：周六上午:

舞蹈课一下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁一周日上午：看望祖父母一

下午：阅读一晚上：看电视，与父母交流一感受：高兴和愉快。我

们还可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写，先说明什

么时间在什么地方由什么人做了什么事，有什么感受。再按照活动

顺序把活动内容写清楚，最后抒发一下对这次活动或这个周末的感

想。

时态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写：a.一般过去时（主要描述

你上个周末是怎样度过的）；b.一般现在时（主要描述你经常怎样度

过周末）；c.一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）。这里我们来

表述平时是如何过周末的，所以采用一般现在时来写。

注意：活动的相关表达方法可采用旧知识，eg.（例）起床getup,

和新知识，eg.climbmountains去爬山中的un很容易错写成nu0

还要注意不要出现病句，eg."ioftenwatchtvwithmyparents.

不要写成“ioftenwithmyparentswatchtv词量上控制在50〜

80之间。

myseasons

wehavefourseasonsinayear,icandomanyinteresting

thingsineachseason,inspring,theweatheriscoolandwindy,

icanflykiteswhenit'swindy,andicangohikingwithmy

familywhenit'ssunnyandcool,ilikehiking,summerishotin

thenorthofchina,butit'snotlongtime,ioftengoswimming,

itcanmakemehealthyandstrong,icanalsowearmy

beautifuldresses,fallisaseasonwithharvest,andicaneat

deliciousfruitsinthisseason,icanwatchtheleavesfall,

wintercomes,it'softensnowyinwinterinmyhometown,

whenitsnows,everythingiswhite,wecanplaywithsnowand

makeasnowman,skateandski.andwinterismyfavourite

season,becauseofthespringfestival,iloveseasons,ilove

thenature.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、

冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季

节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感

受，最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以

先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季

节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如:

秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴

近实际。

时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”，是比较惯常的一些行为，所以

我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即：在什么

季节，天气如何，我们可以做什么。

注意：在写作内容上，不可以像以往的内容那么简单，因为有四个

季节，所以要写明季节，季节天气，季节性活动，活动的人，活动

的感受等，要求句子顺序要正确，在写作中还要注意关联词的使用,

如用了“因为”，就不能用“所以”，二者不可以同时出现。词量要控

制在80个词以内。

myfamily

therearefivepeopleinmyfamily,theyaremygrandma,

grandpa,dad,momandi.look!grandmaiswatchingtv.

grandpaisreadingabook,dadiswritingane-mail,momis

cookingdinner,iamdoingmyhomework,ilovemyfamily!

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员，以及此刻他们正在干什

么，表达了自己对家人的感情。

时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态，所以建议采用现在进

行时态。

句型：主语+be+动词的现在分词。

注意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态，注意在写句子时要保持时态

的完整性，即系动词和动词的ing缺一不可。

afieldtrip

itisaniceday.ourclasswillhaveafieldtriptoday,the

classmatesareveryexcited.

look!hereweare.there*realotofactivitiestodo.amyis

watchinginsects,peteriscollectingleaves,theywanttowrite

areport,mandyiscatchingbutterfliesinthewoods,timand

bobareplayingchess,someoftheclassmatesarehavinga

picnic,thereisalotofdeliciousfoodtoeat.oh,who'sthat

overthere?itsmisswhite,whatisshedoing?sheistaking

photos,wehadaverygoodtime,illneverforgetthisfieldtrip.

【要领点评】

写法：这篇习作是按照郊游时的画面来描述的，记叙了同学们分别

在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受。

时态：这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写。由于本单元

主要讲的是现在进行时，所以，这里我们采用现在进行时比较合适。

注意：活动的相关表述法采用新旧知识相结合去写。注意时态的转

换、描写感受时用一般现在时。

pep小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评

liying'shobby

liyinglikesenglishverymuch,sheworkshardatit.shereads

englisheverymorning,shelikesspeakingenglish.sheoften

listenstotheradio,shewatchestvonlyonSaturdayevening.

doesshelikedancing?no,shedoesn't,butshelikesdrawing

andsinging,herparentsloveher.andalltheteachersandher

friendslikeher,too.shesaysherhobbiesmakeherhappy.

【要领点评】

这一篇写爱好的文章，小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习，他没有具体

写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手，对刘莹的

各种爱好进行了粗线条地勾画.从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话，我

们会觉得这个形象很饱满。

小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时，可以从两个角度下手：一是具

体地描绘；二是和上面小朋友一样，粗线条地勾画，二者各有所长，

另处在行文中使用一些问句，使用一些转述的话，可以使作文更有

灵气，避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“doesshelikedancing?

no,shedoesn't.”和“shesaysherhobbiesmakeherhappy.''就

是十分不错的句子，使读者眼前为之一亮。

don'tbeagainstthetrafficrules

igotoschoolfrommondaytofriday.igotoschoolbybikeat

7:30inthemorningJmustcrosstwobusyroads.ifthetraffic

lightisredoryellow,iknowican'tcrosstheroad,soiwait.

ifthelightturnsgreen,iknowitmeans“go"，andtheniwalk

acrosstheroad.ialwaysrideontherightsideoftheroad.iam

neveragainstthetrafficrules.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，

而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路

上是怎么做的，很形象。

小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而

要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标

点符号等。

ilovemyfamily

hereisaphotoIfmyfamily,thesearefourpeopleinmyfamily,

theyaremyfather,mymother,mybrotherandi.

myfatherisadoctor,heworksinahospitalfaraway,hegoes

toworkbysubway,mymotherisateacher,sheworksina

schoolnearmyhome,shegoestoworkbybike,afterwork,

theylikereadingbooks,whoisthetallboy?heismybrother,

heisfiveyearsolderthanme.heisasinger,he'snowin

beijing.hegoestherebyplane.

ilovemyfamily.

【要领点评】

一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几

次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让

一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？

小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先

总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班

方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。

我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢？

howtogettothesciencemuseum

wearegoingtothesciencemuseumtomorrow,thereisanold

thingshowinthemuseum,doyouknowhowwecangettothe

sciencemuseum?

thesciencemuseumisnexttothepeople'spark,it'sisn'tfar

fromourschool,sowecangothereonfoot.walkstraightto

thewestfromourschool,nextturnleftatthepostofficeand

walkforabout5minutes,thenturnrightattrafficlights,you

canfindthepeople'sparkontheright.walkstraight,and

you,llseethesciencemuseum.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作文呢?

通过你的叙述，能让别人很容易找到博物馆，这应是最基本的要求。

小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢？首先他写了去博物馆的位置，最后

浓墨重彩，指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线，这条路线够清晰吧！

小朋友们在写这类作文的时候，总有些无从下手的感觉，不知从何

说起。其实介绍路线，无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点，还

有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚，你自己首先得清楚,

然后再通过自己的叙述，将路线清清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意

行文中一些关键的地方，如在哪儿转弯，向哪儿转，经过哪些重要

的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑等。这样，你就能说清，别人也能弄

明白。

let'shaveaniceday

itssundaytomorrow.i'mgoingtothebookstorewithmy

friendstomorrowmorning.wearegoingtolookforsomegood

books.wealllikereadingbooks.wearegoingtoeatourlunch

attherestaurant,ilikechicken,beefand

vegetables.afterlunch,wearegoingtothesummerpalaceby

bus.wearegoingtoplaynearthekunminglake,maybeweare

goingtorowaboatonthelake.wow,thatwillberelaxing,we

arecomingbackat5pm.

【要领点评】

怎样才称得上是“美好的一天”？有两点不能忘记，一是安排得充实,

二是安排得有意义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了，上午去书店看书

买书，中午在饭店吃饭，下午去颐和园玩耍、划船，丰富多彩！文

章以时间为线索，叙述清楚，文笔也很优美。

小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时，要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、

人物和活动等，使文章有血有肉。要看好是写过去发生的事情，还

是现在正在做的事情，或计划、打算要做的事情，以选择适当的句

型。如果是写将来的事情，那么就要注意在表述时多用

“begoingt。+动词原形”这种句型。还有一点也很重要，那就是故

事的线索要交代好，让读者在阅读时对整个过程一目了然。

pep小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评

myfriendandi

ihaveagoodfriendatschool,hisnameisjack,jackis12

yearsoldnow.i,m11.he'solderthanme.he's150cmtall.i,m

148cm.he'stallerandstronger,he's43kgandi5m41kg.he's

heavier,ourfavouritecoloursarewhiteandblue,welike

summerbest,webothlikesports,too.onSaturdays,we

【篇二：小学六年级英语pep作文】

我的学校(myschool)

myschoolisverybeautiful,itisinxx.itisnanyangno.15

primaryschool,ilikemyschoolverymuch.

thereisabigplaygroundinmyschool,wehavep.e.classon

theplaygroundandweoftenplaysportsonit,too.our

teachingbuildinghasfivefloors,myclassroomisonthefifth

floor,itisbigandclean,thecomputerroomsareonthethird

floor,thereisalibraryonthesecondfloor,therearemany

booksinthelibrary,ioftenreadbookshere,therearesome

musicroomsandartroomsintheteachingbuilding,too.the

teachersinmyschoolareverykind.thestudentsarevery

politeandsmart,iamhappyinmyschool.

下周(nextweek)

itsgoingtobespringfestivalnextweek.

nextmondayiamgoingtomycousinshouse,helivesina

village,iamgoingbyship,nextTuesdayiamgoingtohavea

picnic,nextWednesdayiamgoingtogoshoppinginxxxand

tohavek.f.c.nextthursdayiamgoingtoxxxxtoflykites,in

the

我喜爱的老师(myfavouriteteacher)

hello,mynameisxxxx.ihavemanygoodteachers,butmy

favouriteteacherismissli.sheisaverygoodteacher,sheis

veryyoung,butherenglishisverygood,sheteaches

usenglisheveryday.herclasshassomuchfun.shesings

songswithus,playsgameswith

us.wearesohappy.andwelearnenglishwell,ourenglish

areveryverygood,soilikeherverymuch,shelikesreading

booksandplayingsports,afterclass,misslioftenplays

sportswithus.weareveryhappy,weallloveherverymuch.

thisismyfavouriteteacher,sheisagoodteacher.ilikemy

englishteacherverymuch,whataboutyou?doyouhavea

goodteacher,too?

happyfamily

everyonehasafamily,ihaveafamily,too.inameit“happy

family"，becauseeveryoneinmyfamilyishappy.

comeandmeetmyfamily,please!mymotheriskind,ilove

her,andshelovesme,too.mymotherispretty,shelikes

beautifulclothes,icallher<4dressymum”,myfatherisaboss,

heistallandthin,hehasasmallhead,igivehimanickname

“smallheadfather”,iamfatandlovely,ihaveabighead,i

givemyselfanickname“bigheadgirl”,istudyhard,iama

goodstudent.

wearehappyeveryday!我的教室(myclassroom)

myclassroomisniceandbig.therearefortydesksandchairs

intheclassroom.

therearetwoblackboardsonthewalls,andtherearetwo

pictures,too.myclassroomhaselevenlightsandtwelvefans,

whatcolourarethefans?theyareblue,atthecorner,thereis

a

shelf,manybooksareon.theshelf,ilikethebooksverymuch,

thisismyclassroom,itisverynice,ilikemyclassroomvery

much.doyouhaveaniceclassroom,too?

母亲节是五月的第二个星期日。今年母亲节那天，我为母亲买了一

件毛衣和一束鲜花作为礼物，感谢母亲为我付出的辛苦。母亲收到

礼物后，非常高兴。mother7sdaycomesonthesecond

sundayinmayeachyear,onthatdaythisyear,iboughta

sweaterandsomeflowersformymothertothankherforher

hardworkforme.receivingmygift,mymotherwasveryhappy.

我最喜爱春天(ilovespringbest)

winterhasgone,springcomes,ilovespringbest,becauseits

verybeautiful,inspring,theweatherisalwayssunnyand

rainy,itsnotcoldandnothot,itswarmerandwarmer,the

flowersbegintoopenandthetreesbegintoturngreen,the

birdsaresinginginthesky,theyarehappy,theanimalswillgo

outtoplay,manypeopleliketogooutandenjoythesunshine,

ilikewearingmysweaterandjeans,iliketoflykites,plant

treesandseethebeautifulflowers,springiscolorful,ithinkits

awonderfulseason,whatsyourfavouriteseason?pleasetell

me.春游(springouting)

manystudentsaregoingspringouting,somestudentsare

boating,andsomestudentsarehavingapicnic,theothersare

playinggames,thereisagirlsittingonachairreadingabook,

theskyisblue,thetreesaregreen,theflowersarered.itsa

verybeautifulpark,theyhaveagoodtime!家庭是什么whatis

family?

“I”means“love”and“y"means“you”,soufamily”isthe

shortformofufatherandmother,iloveyou."don'tyouthink

so?fatherandmotherloveus,andwelovefatherand

mother.that'sahappyfamily.

mylovelyfather我可爱的爸爸

ihaveabusyfather.heworksinabigoffice.hehasabig

company.

heisbusyeveryday.hehasmanythingtodo.hehasno

timetogohomeforlunch.hegetshomeat7:00p.m.athome

hedoesthehousework,hecooksnicedishesformotherand

me.

onweekends,heoftengoestotheparkwith

me.sometimeshegoestoswimwithme,too.iliketostay

withmyfather.

heisagoodfather,heisalsoahappybusinessman.my

room

ihavemyownroom,itisbigandnice,thereisabed,adesk

andashelf,thedollisonthebed.thelampisonthedesk,the

booksareontheshelf,the

everybodyhashisownfamily,whatisfamily?idon5ttrashbin

isbehindthedoor,theclothesareinthethinkeveryonereally

knows,therearesixlettersinthecloset,thereisaair­

conditioneroverthecloset,look!word"familyithink"f”

means“father“，“a"therearemanypicturesonthewall,ilove

myroommeans“and”，“m"means“mother“，“i"means"i”，

verymuch.

myweekend

ihavehappyweekend.

soiloveweekends,mybirthday

yesterdaywasmarch20th.itwasmybirthday,ihadaparty,i

atetoomuch,mikebroughtacartonoficecream,jenny

broughtsomecandy,marybroughtalotofcookies,mymom

madeacake,mydadboughtatoycarforme.iwasveryhappy,

atthepartywesanganddanced,wehadagoodtime,my

favoriteanimal

myfavoriteanimalisrabbit,itsnameissweet,sweethaslong

ears,it'sverysmall,it'swhite,ithasashorttail,ithasred

eyes,itlikeseatingcarrots,itlikesjumping,itgoesjumping

threetimesaday.ilikeitverymuch,it'slovely,it'smybest

friend,iliketherabbit,myhobby

南阳市奥瑞教育小学英语作文范文

myhobbyiscollectingstamps（集邮）.therearemany

stampsinmyroom,ilikestampsverymuch,therearemany

thingsonthestamps,theyarecolorfulandbeautiful,after

schooliusuallygotothepostofficeandtherearemany

peoplethere,ilearnalotfromcollectingstamps,ilike

collectingstampsverymuch,ahappydayinspring

itsspring,it'ssunnyandcloudytoday,therearemanybig

treesinthepark.mr.black'sfamilyhaveapicnicinapark,

theybringmanyfoodthere,theybringfruit,drinkandbread,

mr.blackandmrs.blacktalkwitheachother,theytalkvery

happily,annreadsamagazine,tomlikesflyingakite,thekite

fliesverywell,theyarehungrynow.theywanttoeattheirfood,

theyareveryhappy.自我介绍

goodafternoon,teachers!today,imveryhappytointroduce

myselfhere,mynameis======.myenglishnameis=====.

im14.icomefromclass==grade==of======primaryschool.

imanactivegirl,ilikeplayingbasketball(=====).becausei

thinkitsveryinteresting,idliketoeatpotatoes(=====).

they'retasty,myfavouritecolourisgreen.

andilikemath(=====)best,it'sfun.onweekend,ilikereading

booksinmyroom,ihopeicanlearnenglishwell,becausei

thinkitveryimportant.

ihaveahappyfamily,therearemembersinmy

family-father,motherandme.myfatherisabutmy

motherisworkingin.ilovebothofthem.

mydreamistobeavet,becauseiwanttohelpthepoor

animalsinthefuture,thankyouforlistening!

myfamily我的家庭

hello,everyone!

mynameissteven.im10yearsold,todaymytopicismy

family.

ihaveahappyfamily.therearethreemembers:myfather,my

motherandme.myparentslovemeverymuch.mymotheris

Chineseteacher.sheisverytallandthin.herfacelookssmall

andhereresareverybeautiful.mymotherisverywarmand

friendlytoothers,butsheisverystrictwithme.

myfatherisaprofessionalaccountant.heworkshardevery

day.helikesplayingfootball.

我爱英语

iloveenglish.englishlanguageisnowusedeverywhereinthe

world,ithasbecomethemostcommonlanguageoninternet

andforinternationaltrade,learningenglishmakesme

confidentandbringsmegreatpleasure.

wheniwasseven,mymothersentmetoanenglishschool,i

playedgamesandsangenglishsongswithotherchildren

there,thenidiscoveredthebeautyofthelanguage,andbegan

mycolorfuldreamintheenglishworld.

【篇三：六年级小升初英语作文】

l.thisismyday

hi!imxx.thisismyday.iusuallygetupat7:00andthenieat

breakfastat7:20.afterbreakfastigotoschoolonfoot.ido

morningexercisesat8:20,ihavefourclassesfrom8:40to

11:55andtheneatluchat12:00..schoolisoverat4:20.iofen

playsportswithmyclassmatesafterschool.!gohomeat

16:55.ieatdinnerat7;00.thenigotobedat9:00.thisismy

day!whataboutyou?

2.myhobby

hi!imxx.ihavemanyhobbies,suchasridingabike,drawing

picturesandreadingbooksandsoon.butmyfavoritehobby

isreadingbooks,becausereadingbooksisgoodformy

study.therearelotsofinterestingthingsinthem,whafsyour

hobby?canyoutellme?

3.mybedroom

ihavealovelybedroom,thereisabedinmybedroom,there

isadesknearmybed.thereisapinkdollonmybed.isleep

withiteverynight,thereisabigwindowinmybedroom,the

yellowlampisonmydesk.everyevening,idomyhomework

underthelamp,ihaveabigshelfinmybedroom,thereare

manybooksontheshelf,ilikereadingverymuch,doyoulike

reading?youcanborrowthebooksfrommeifyoulike?my

bedroomissonice,ilikeit.

4.myschoolhi,boysandgirls.welcometomyschool.my

shoolisverybigandbeautiful.youcanseemanybeautiful

grassandflowresinthegarden,wecanplaysportsonthe

playground.thereisabiglibraryinourshool.inthelibrry,you

canreadmanyinterstingbooks.ilikeitverymuch,inmy

shool,therearemanyniceandstrictteacher,theyarevery

good