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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。JessicaandtheNecklaceJessicaandherlittlesisterAnnaslippedintotheirMum’sroom.“I’mjustgoingtotryonmejewelry,”saidJessica.Shetookanecklaceandtriedtoputitonherneck.“Oh,no,”saidAnna.“Mumdoesn’tlikeusplayingwithherstuff.”“OK,youarethelookout,”instructedJessica.“StandbythedoorandletmeknowifMumesupthestairs.”BeforeAnnareachedthedoor,Rocky,thefamily’sdog,chargedintotheroomandalmostknockedJessicadown.Thenecklacewentflying.IthadbarelyhitthefloorwhenRockybititandracedoff.“Rocky!Rocky!”yelledJessica.“Anna,helpmegetthenecklaceback.”ThegirlschasedRocky.“Stop!”theyyelled.Rockydasheddownthestairsandintothelivingroom.Hestoppedjustlongenoughforthegirlstogetclose,andthentookoffagain.“Stop!”yelledJessica.“Anna,yougotheotherway.We’llerhiminthediningroom.”JessicametAnnainthediningroom.Sureenough,Rockywastherewaitingforthem.Hewasdownlowonhisfrontlegswithhistailintheair,readytoplay.“Grabhim!”screamedJessica.JutasAnnawasabouttograbhim,Rockytookoffagain.“Stop,youareatroublemaker!”yelledJessicaassheracedafterhim.Thegirlsgotcloseagain,butRockyzoomeddownthebasement(地下室)stairs.Thegirlsracedafterhim.“Idon’tseehim.”saidAnna.Jessicascratchedherhead,“He’sgottobedownhere.”Justthen,Mumcalledtothegirls.“Jessica,what’sallthenoise?What’swrong?Iheardyoufromtheyard.”“Uh,oh,”whisperedJessica.“Uh…nothingiswrong,”sheshoutedback.Annadashedupstairs.JessicaheardhertellingMumeverything.“Thatisablabbermouth(多嘴的人).”Jessicamutteredunderherbreath.注意:1.
续写词数应为150左右;2.
请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。“Jessica!”saidMum.“Uphererightnow.”______________________________________________________________Jessicawentintothebasementwiththesnacks,MumandAnnafollowing.——————————————————————————————【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了杰西卡是一个好奇心旺盛的小孩,在某一天,她试图试戴妈妈的项链,不料家庭宠物狗Rocky介入,引发了一场在屋内各处的追逐游戏。杰西卡的想象力与行动力丰富,她与妹妹安娜试图夺回项链,但Rocky不断逃避,使得这场冒险充满曲折。最终,因为妈妈的呼唤,事情败露,安娜向妈妈坦白了一切,而杰西卡对此感到不满。在这篇短文中,有几处伏笔及其在续写中的回应:伏笔一:Jessica和Anna在妈妈房间玩妈妈的珠宝。回应:妈妈的声音从院子里传来,询问噪音的原因,这导致Jessica和Anna必须面对后果。伏笔二:Rocky突然冲进房间,几乎撞倒Jessica,导致项链飞出去。回应:在地下室找到Rocky时,他仍然咬着项链,这是项链最终被找到并确认无损的地方。伏笔三:Anna作为望风的人,提醒Jessica如果妈妈上楼。回应:Anna最终向妈妈坦白了一切,这显示了她作为望风的角色并没有阻止事情的真相被揭露。伏笔四:Jessica和Anna追逐Rocky,试图取回项链。回应:在地下室找到Rocky并取回项链,结束了他们的追逐。伏笔五:Jessica对Anna说“你是个多嘴的人”,表明她不希望Anna告诉妈妈发生的事情。回应:尽管Jessica不希望Anna多嘴,但Anna还是告诉了妈妈,这显示了Jessica需要为自己的行为负责。这些伏笔及其回应构成了故事的紧张和解决过程,展示了Jessica从逃避责任到最终接受教训和后果的转变。主旨升华句:Inthechaosofthemoment,avaluablelessononresponsibilityandhonestyemerged,shiningbrighterthananyjewel.在混乱的时刻中,关于责任和诚实的宝贵教训显现出来,比任何珠宝都要闪耀。TheplayfulchasewithRockybecameaprofoundjourneyofgrowth,teachingtheimportanceofrespectforothers'possessions.与Rocky的嬉戏追逐变成了一次深刻的成长之旅,教会了尊重他人财物的重要性。Throughthemisadventurewiththenecklace,Jessicadiscoveredthetruemeaningoftrustandtheweightitcarrieswithinafamily'sheart.通过这次项链的不幸事件,Jessica发现了信任的真正含义,以及它在家庭心中所承载的分量。Theincidentservedasamirror,reflectingnotjusttheactionsofthechildren,butalsotheneedforguidanceandunderstandinginthefaceofmistakes.这一事件像一面镜子,不仅反映了孩子们的行为,也反映了在面对错误时对指导和理解的需求。Asthedustsettledandthenecklacewasreclaimed,itwasn'tjustanobjectthatwasrestored,butalsothebondoftrustandrespectwithinthefamily.当尘埃落定,项链被找回时,不仅仅是一个物品得到了恢复,家庭中的信任和尊重的纽带也得到了加固。【详解】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容““杰西卡!”妈妈说。“现在就上来。””可知,第一段可描写杰西卡母女三人想办法从Rocky哪里拿回项链,最后杰西卡想到了办法。②由第二段首句内容“杰西卡拿着零食走进地下室,妈妈和安娜跟在后面。”知,第二段可描写杰西卡成功拿回项链,并向妈妈道歉。2.续写线索:妈妈呼唤——质问——一起想办法——想到办法——拿回项链——道歉——原谅。【参考答案】“Jessica!”saidMum.“Uphererightnow.”
Hurryingupstairs,Jessicacouldfeelherbloodrushingtoherface.Whileshewasstrugglingtofindanexcuse,Mum’svoicebrokein.“Whereishenow?”askedMum,witharmscrossed.NotdaringtolookintoMum’seyes,Jessicajustpointedtothebasementasareply.Thethreeremainedsilent,wonderinghowtogetthenecklaceback.Suddenly,anideaflashedacrossJessica’smind.Shewentstraighttothekitchencounterandtooksomesnacks.“Iknowwhattodo.Justewithme.”shesmiled.
Jessicawentintothebasementwiththesnacks,MumandAnnafollowing.
“Rocky,”calledJessica,“I’vegotatreatforyou.”Innotime,RockyappearedatJessica’sfeet,withhistailswingingupanddown.Justatthatmoment,Jessicagrabbedhiscollarandpulledthenecklacefromhismouth.HandingthenecklacetoMum,Jessicaapologized,“Sorry,Mum.Ishouldn’thavetouchedyourstuff.I’mthetroublemaker.”Jessicahungherhead,overwhelmedwithguilt,whileRockywaspushingMomsoftlytopethim.“Aslongasyouadmityourfault,”saidMumgently,pattinghergirlsandthelittle“troublemaker”.下水文1“Jessica!”saidMum.“Uphererightnow.”Feelingamixofdreadandresignation,Jessicaslowlyclimbedthestairs,herheartpoundinginherchest.Sheknewshehadtofacetheconsequencesofheractions.Assheenteredthelivingroom,shewasmetwithasternlookfromMum."Jessica,"Mumbegan,"it'simportanttorespectotherpeople'sbelongings.Youknowbetterthantoplaywithmyjewelrywithoutpermission."Jessicahungherhead,acknowledgingthetruthinhermother'swords."I'msorry,Mum,"shesaidsincerely."Ishouldhaveaskedfirst."Mumsoftenedherexpression,acceptingJessica'sapology,butmadeitclearthattherewouldbeconsequencesforheractions.Jessicawentintothebasementwiththesnacks,MumandAnnafollowing.ThesearchforRockyandthenecklaceresumed,butthistimewithamoresombermood.Thebasementwasdimlylitandcluttered,makingitaperfecthidingspotfortheplayfuldog.Afterathoroughsearch,theyfinallyfoundRocky,thenecklacestillinhismouth,tuckedawaybehindsomeoldboxes.Jessicacarefullytookthenecklacefromhim,relievedtoseeitwasunharmed.MumsuggestedtheyusethisincidentasalessoninresponsibilityandofferedtohelpJessicareturnthenecklacetoitsproperplace,emphasizingtheimportanceoftrustandhonestywithinthefamily.Theadventure,whichhadstartedasaplayfulmoment,endedwithavaluablelessonlearnedforJessicaandastrongerbondwithinthefamily.下水文2“Jessica!”saidMum.“Uphererightnow.”Jessica'sheartsank.Sheknewshehadtofacethemusic.Takingadeepbreath,shetrudgedupstairs,hermindracingwiththoughtsofhowtomakethingsright.Assheenteredtheroom,Mum'sgazewassternbutnotunkind."Jessica,"shesaid,"weneedtotalkaboutboundariesandrespectforotherpeople'sproperty."Jessicanodded,tear
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