BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷18（共18题）

BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷18（共9套）（共18题）BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第1套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、•YouarethePurchasingManagerforalargecompany.Lastmonthyoudecidedtolookforanewsupplierforthestationeryandofficeequipmentthatyourcompanyuses.Youhavefoundanewsupplier,CompassOfficeGoodsLtd.•Writeamemotoyourcompany’sdepartmentheads:•explainingwhyyoulookedforanewsupplier.•sayingwhothenewsupplieris.•askingforfeedbackaboutthegoodsthattheysupply.•Write40—50words.标准答案：To:AllDepartmentHeadsFrom:PurchasingManagerDate:July20thSubject:AbouttheGoodsoftheNewSupplierAsthequalityofthestationeryandofficeequipmentprovidedbytheformersuppliercouldn’tmeetoursatisfaction,wehavechosenanewone—CompassOfriceGoodsLtd,whosesampleproductshavebeendistributedtoeachdepartment.Anyopinionsaboutthegoodsitsupplieswillbewelcome.Thankyou.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、YouarethesecretaryattheBirminghambranchofCADEHazards.Yourbosshasaskedyoutoorganizeaone-dayconference.YousentthismemototheConferenceOrganizer,andreceivedhermemoinreply.1.YourmemototheConferenceOrganizer.To:ConferenceOrganizer,CADEGroupHeadOffice,LondonFrom:Secretary,CADEHazards,BirminghamDate:23April,2004Re:ArrangementsforCADEHazardsone-dayConferencePleaseletmeknowifyoucanmakearrangementsbasedonthefollowing:Venue—PreferablyNattConferenceCentre,Itching,Hefts.Date—5June,2004Times—Registration08:30—09:00.Firstsession09:15.Lastsessionscheduledtoendat16:30Numberattending—Estimated40Roomrequirements—Mainconferencehallwithusualaudio-visualfacilities+4sideroomsforsmallgroupmeetings.Travel—ContactSid’sCabsfortransfersfromItchingstationtoConferenceCentreFood,etc—Arrangecoffeeandteamid-morningandmid-afternoon,buffetlunch(checkonarrangementsforvegetarians)Other—CheckifanyparticipantsrequireovernightaccommodationandarrangewithNatt(Companywillpayroomandbreakfastonly)2.ThisistheConferenceOrganizer’sreply.Nattavailableonly4Juneinthatweek.Changethedateofconferenceorfindadifferentvenue?Nattcandoconferencerooms,refreshments,lunch(incl.vegetarian).Needtoknowexactnumbersby30May.Fivedelegatesneedaccommodation.NoresidentialaccommodationatNatt,butlocalhotelhasvacancies(advancepaymentrequired).Travel:allparticipantscomingbycar,except5.TwotaxisarrangedwithSid’sCabs(whopays?).3.Youalsoreceivedthisnotefromyourboss.AsthismonthisthetenthanniversaryofthefoundingoftheCADEgroupofcompanies,weshouldarrangesomekindofadinnerintheeveningaftertheconference.Writeareportof100—120wordstotheHeadOfficeConferenceOrganizertellingherwhatyouhavefinallydecidedaboutthearrangementsfortheconference,includingtheeveningdinner.Usetheinformationinthedocumentsabove.标准答案：To:ConferenceOrganizerFrom:Secretary,CADEHazards,BirminghamDate:(datebefore30May,e.g.28May2004)Re:ArrangementsforCADEHazardsone-dayconferenceChangethedateoftheconferenceto4JuneandusetheNattConferenceCentre.TellNattthatweexpect38participants,includingmyselfandtheGroupChairman.Bookfivesingleroomsatthelocalhotelforthenightof4June.ContactJerryinAccountstoarrangeadvancepayment.Notethatguestswiltberesponsibleforextras,e.g.phonecalls,minibar.BooktwocarswithSid’sCabsfortransferoffiveparticipantsfromrailwaystationtoConferenceCentre.Theywillpaythecabdriver.IconfirmthattherewillbeatenthanniversarydinnerattheCentreontheeveningof4June.Makeabookingfor38people.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第2套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、YouaretheCustomerServiceManagerinalargecompany.Youhavebeeninformedthatamemberofyourstaffoftentreatedcustomersimpolitely.Writehimamemoabouttheproblem:sayinghowhebehavedinthepastdescribingthenegativeeffectonthecompanyaskingforatalkabouttheproblem.Write40-50words.MEMOTo:JackieWilsonFrom:CustomerServiceManagerSubject:BadBehaviour标准答案：To:JackieWilsonFrom:CustomerServiceManagerSubject:BadBehaviourMr.Wilson,Ihavebeeninformedthatyoutreatedcustomersimpolitely,andmoreandmorecustomershavemadecomplaints.Youshouldnoticesuchbadbehaviourwouldbringaboutnegativeeffectsonthecompany.Becauseofyourbadbehaviour,customerswillbelostandwewillsuffergreatlosses.Comeandseemetomorrowat2p.m.inmyoffice.Thankyou.知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、YouworkintheCustomerServicesDepartmentofaninductioncookercompany.Youhavebeenaskedtoprepareareportforyourdepartmentmanageraboutcustomers’complaints.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.标准答案：ReportonCustomerComplaintsINTRODUCTIONThisreportaimstopresentthereasonsforcustomercomplaintsaboutinductioncookersofourcompanyfromApriltoJunein2012.FINDINGSThenumberofcustomercomplaintswereceivedinAprilwas260.Thenitincreasedto370inMaybecauseoftheplugleakageofsomeproducts.InJune,thisnumberreducedbecauseoftherecallofthosedefectiveproducts.ThereasonsforcomplaintsfromApriltoJunewereanalysedasfollows:Firstly,thecompanyreceivedcomplaintsfordefectiveproducts.ThissituationbecamebetterinJune.Secondly,somestaffhaspoormaintenancetechniques:consideringit,ourcompanyhasplannedtotrainemployeesnextmonth.Finally,customerscomplainforbadmannersofCustomerHotlinestaff.Inordertosolvethisproblem,regularperformanceevaluationshouldbecarriedoutassoonaspossible.CONCLUSIONSAfteranalysingthereasonsfordifferentcustomercomplaints,manymeasureshavebeentakentoimprovecustomers’unsatisfaction.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第3套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、Youworkforacompanywhichproduceslaserprinters.Youarevisitinganothercompany,tobuysomecomputersoftwareforyourdepartment.Theyhaveexpressedaninterestinyourcompany’sprintersandyouwouldliketotaketwentybrochuresandthreesampleprinterswithyou.WriteashortnotetoMrJimAsana,thesalesmanager.Askingforhispermissiontotaketheseitems.Explainingwhyyouwantthem.Mentioningthetimeanddatewhenyouwanttocollectthem.Write40—50wordsonaseparatesheet.标准答案：To:Mr.JimAsanoMessage:MayIhaveyoupermissiontotaketwentybrochuresandthreesampleprinterswithmewhenvisitingsoft-cellwhohaveexpressedaninterestinourprinters?Iwillcometocollectthemat8amThursdaymorning.PleaseletmeknowyourideaatyourearliestconvenienceJack知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、Youareamanagerinthecustomerservicesdepartmentofalargestore.Yourlinemanagerhasaskedyoutowriteareportontheresultsofarecentcustomersurvey.Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.Write120-140words.标准答案：Thepurposeofthisreportistoshowtheresultsofourrecentcustomersurvey.Firstly70%ofourcustomerfoundourstaffunfriendly.Thisshouldbenolongerthecase,becausenewtrainingforthestaffwillstartnextmonth.Concerningourproductrange,wehavetoimproveourdiversification,because38%ofourcustomerfounditpoor.WeshouldaddsomenewproductslikeHi-Fiandelectronics.Regardingtheopeninghours,customerfounditverygood.Thereasonisthatwearenowopentill9pmeveryday.Concerningtheparkingweareprogressingquiterapidelywiththeconstructionofthenewparkingarea,sothiswouldbenolongeraproblem,andinthesametimethenewstorelayoutshouldbereadynextmonth.Inconclusion,weareontrackwithallourproject.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第4套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、Theelectroniccompanyyouworkforhasdecidedtorecruitsomeemployees,andthePersonnelDepartmentManagerhasaskedallthedepartmentmanagerstohandintheirtalentdemand.WriteanemailtothePersonnelDepartmentManager:sayinghowmanystaffyourdepartmentneedandwhydescribingwhatkindofpersonyouneedstatingwhenthestaffshouldcometowork.Write40-50words.To:PersonnelDepartmentManagerFrom:TheLineManagerDate:Subject:TalentDemand标准答案：To:PersonnelDepartmentManagerFrom:TheLineManagerDate:15th,MaySubject:TalentDemandWiththeexpandedproductionofnotepads,ourdepartmentwillneedtwoextraengineerswhoareprofessionalincomputerdesign,andatleasthavethreeyears’jobexperience.Theyareexpectedatworkattheendofthismonthsothattheycanjointhetrainingforalltheengineersthen.Regards,DavidSmith/LineManager知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、Yourecentlyattendedaone-monthtrainingcourseforshorthand.Youweredisappointedwiththecourseandyouhavedecidedtowritealetterofcomplainttothetrainingcompany.Readtheadvertisementbelow,whichgivesdetailsofthecourse.Youhavealreadymadesomehand-writtennotesontheadvertisement.Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourlettertoShirleyTayloratABCCertificationServices.Write120-140words.ABCCertificationServicesGoodforbusiness,goodforyou.Inaneraoffast-breakingonlinenews,shorthandremainsacoreskillfortoday’sjournalistandonethatmustnotbecompromised.Ifyouhaven’tgotshorthandyou’rejusttooslow.Ourcourseswillhelpyoudeveloptheabilitytotakeshorthandandreadbackanaccuratenote.ShirleyTaylorABCHouseSummerfieldRoadOxford0X84DN标准答案：DearMrs.Kelly,IamwritingtocomplainaboutatrainingcourseforshorthandwhichIattendedonMarch15.WhenIbookedthiscourse,Ichoseyourcompanyasitcamehighlyrecommendedandthecourseseemedtobeofahighstandard.Iwaspromisedanexperiencedtrainerbutunfortunatelyhewassickandthereplacementwasnotasgoodasexpected.Regardingtheinformationpacks,therewereonlyapileofloosephotocopies,whichwerenotthehigh-qualityinformationpacksasyoupromised.Theclasswassupposedtobeabout8people,butinminetherewereabout15.Finally,Ishouldmakeitclearthattheclassstartedonehourlate,andthelunchservedwasextremelycold.Iamsureyoucanunderstandmydisappointment.Iwouldthereforebegladifyoucouldinvestigatethismatterassoonaspossible.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,GraceSwift知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第5套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、•Yourcompany’sSalesDepartmenthasaskedyoutogiveatalknextFridayonyourmostrecentproject.•WriteanemailtoMrsJayintheSalesDepartment:•agreeingtogivethetalkandsuggestingatime•sayingwhatequipmentyouwillneed•requestinginformationabouttheparticipants.•Write40-50wordsonaseparatesheet.标准答案：To:AnnaJaySubject:TalkNextFridayIwouldliketogivethetalksuggestedbyyouandIthink9.30am,afterthebreak,wouldbetheperfecttime.Requiredequipment:-OverheadProjector-FlipchartwithPensPleasegivemesomeinformationaboutthepeopleparticipating.Renate知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、•YouworkforPJTLtd,amanufacturingcompany.Youneedmorestaffinyourdepartmentandyourlinemanagerhasaskedyoutowriteareportexplainingwhy.•Lookattheinformationbelow,onwhichyouhavealreadymadesomehandwrittennotes.•Then,usingallyourhandwrittennotes,writeyourreport.•Write120-140words.标准答案：Thepurposeofthisreportisthatweneedmorestaff.Indeedifwecomparethenumberofpeoplewhoworkinthisdepartmentbetween2001and2003,itonlyincreasedfromfivepeoplebuttheordersaretwicemorenumerous.Furthermore,oursalesdepartmenthasannouncedanimportantorderfromacompany.Itwillbeverydifficulttosatisfythisdemandifwedon’t’increaseourstaff.Sinceafewtime,theannualholidayisfiveweeksperyear.That’smeansthateverypersonwillmissitworkoneweekmoreperyearandduringthistimetheworkwon’tbedone.Finally,wereceivedamailfromacustomertoinformeusthathebecamehisordersixweekslate.However,ifwehadmorestafftheordershouldbeontime.Band3Allthecontentpointshavebeencoveredandthereportisappropriateintermsofregisterandformat.Thereisclearevidenceoforganisationandgooduseismadeofdiscoursemarkers.Thereareanumberoflanguageerrors,butthesearerelativelyminoranddonotimpedecommunicationofthemessage.SampleDReporton:MorestaffinourdepartmentDate:27.03.2004IntroductionThisreportaimstoexplainwhyourdepartmentneedsmorestaff.FindingsThelateststatisticcomparingthenumberofstaffinourdepartmentandtheaveragenumberofunitsorderedpointsoutthemainreasonformorestaff.Whilethenumberoforderedunitsgrowupfromonly200000to400000within2yearsthenumberofstaffgrewonlyby5people.TheStaffNewsletterofFebruary2004isaboutthebigneworderfromaninternationalcompany.Butbecauseoftheincreaseofannualholidayto5weeksperyeartherewillbenotenoughstaffforallthework.Anotherreasonformorestaffisthatwewillhavefewerdelays.ConclusionTherearemanyreasonswhichexplaintheimportanceofmorestaff.Itisespeciallyimportantforreducingthenumberofdelaysindeliveryandtooptimisetheworkflow.RecommendationsMorestaffdoesnotonlymeanmorecosts,italsomeanssatisfiedcustomers.Band4Allthecontentpointshavebeenaddressedwithreasonableattemptsatdevelopment,Thereportgenerallywellorganisedanditiscohesiveandconcise.Overall,thelanguageusedisaccurateandincludesagoodrangeofgrammarandvocabulary.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第6套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、YouareamanageratanauditorcalledGolding&Co.YourcompanyhasjustmergedwithacompetitortobecomeMasonGolding.Youhavebeenaskedtoinformstaffofthechangeofname.Writeamemoof:informingstaffofthenewnametellingthemwhentostartusingthenewnameaskingstafftouseonlythenewnameafterthattime.Write45-50words.标准答案：AsaresultofourmergerwithMason&Co.,thenameofourcompanywillbechangedintoMasonGolding.Pleasestarttousethenewnamefrom1March2006.Youareremindedthatonlythenewnamecanbeusedfromthenon.知识点解析：本文是商务便函的考查，是通知员工公司名字的改变，内容要求是通知员工公司的新名字，告知员工何时开始使用，要求员工开始之后要用新名字。语言组织要言简意赅，讲清楚要点即可。二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、Writetoanoldcustomerwithwhombusinesshasshownatendencytobecomeslack,anddrawhisattentiontoyournewproductswhichrepresentagreatimprovementonsomeofthemodelshehassoldsuccessfully.Stresstheimportanceofanearlyorderasotherbuyersareshowingtheirinterestinthesegoods.Writealetterwith120-140words.标准答案：DearSir,Threeyearsagowehadthepleasureofsupplyingyouwithanumberofswitchgears.Sincethenwehavereceivednoorderfromyou.Perhapsourpreviousproductsdidnotfityourrequirements.Nowwewishtoinformyouthatwehavejustintroducedourlatesthighvoltageswitchgearontothemarket.Ourresearchengineershavefinallycomeupwiththeanswertosomeofthoseproblemsyouhadwithhighvoltagecurrents.Thepresentproductisinsulatedwithaspecialresinwhichisastoughasmetal,crack-resistant,andveryeconomical,andhavepassedtestrunbyourengineers.Wearesurethatyourchiefengineerwillwanttoinspectmisgear,andseeitinoperation,andouragentsinBeijing,ABCEngineeringComponents,Ltd,willbehappytoarrangeademonstrationatanytime.Specificationsandaprice-listareenclosed,andweexpecttohaveyourfavorableresponse.Yourssincerely,xxx知识点解析：本文是对商务信函的考查，内容要求是给一位生意经营趋于下滑的老顾客写一封信以介绍新产品。内窬方面，主要有提请他关注你的新产品，新产品有了很大的改善，这新产品试售也很成功，强调早下订单的重要性因为其他顾客对此也很感兴趣。文章的格式要按章商务信函的格式完成，因信件的目的是双方建立商务往来，所以对新产品的介绍要详细，所提供的服务要周到，语言上要谦虚礼貌。BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第7套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、•Youhavereceivedafaxfromacustomerwhointhefaxcomplainedthathehadreceived100greenmotorbikesinsteadof50greenand50bluemotorbikes.Inordertosolvetheproblemandfindoutthefacts,writeanemailtoMr.RobertSimon,whoisinchargeofdeliveringgoodsfromwarehouse.Tellhimabouttheclaim.Mentionthedateofdelivery.Askfortheinvoiceinduplicate.标准答案：TO:RobertSimonSubject:BicycleComplaintDearRobert,Acustomercomplainedthathehadreceived100greenmotorbikesinsteadof50greenand50bluemotorbikes.HereceivedtheshipmentonMay11th.CouldyoupleasesendimmediatelymetheinvoiceunderContractNo.B56induplicate?Thankyou,Peter知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、•Yourcompanybasreceivedalotofcomplaintsaboutitstelephoneservice.Youlookedintotheproblemandmadethefollowingnotes:•Phonelefttoringtoolongbeforebeinganswered.•Callsansweredimpolitely,e.g.just"Hello".•Transferringcallsautomaticallytoacolleague—oftenthecolleaguedoesn’tknowaboutthetransfer,orhowlongitwillbefor.•Takingmessages—someemployeesnotwritingdetailedmessagesdown(date,time,caller’snameandnumber),•TheOfficeManagerhasaskedyoutowriteareporttoallstaffonrecommendedtelephoneprocedures.•Writethereportinabout120-140words,explaininghowstall’shouldusethephones.Usetheinformationinyournotesabove.•WriteonyourAnswerSheet.标准答案：Introduction:Thereportisaimedatprovidingpropertelephone-makingproceduresforourstaff.Findings:Asfarasweknow,tiletelephoneservicealwaysreflectstheimageofacompany,butrecentlywehavereceivedalotofcriticismofit.Obviously,ourtelephoneserviceisfarfrontsatisfactory.Suggestions:Afterthemostcommoncomplaintshavebeenlookedinto,thefollowingproceduresareputforwardandshouldbecompliedwithbyallourstaffmembers:?Answerthephoneassoonasitrings,ifthere’snothingurgentatyourhand.?Answerallcallscourteously:youshouldusesuchexpressionsas"HowcanIhelpyou?""WhatcanIdoforyou?"etc,insteadofmerelysaying"hello".Informyourcolleaguepromptlyifit’satransferringcall,esp.howlongitwillbefor,Developthehabitofnotingdowntheimportantinformationofeverycall,esp.date,time,andthecaller’snameandnumber.知识点解析：暂无解析BEC商务英语（中级）写作模拟试卷第8套一、小作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)1、—YouarethesecretaryofMr.FredJenkin,managingdirectorofthecompany,YouhavebeenasktomakesomechangedtoapreviousnoticeabouttheStaffAnnalDance.—Writeanoticetothestaff.—SayingthedateisSaturday28Maynot21May.—AnnouncingtheplaceisGrandHotelinManchesterinsteadofMetropoleinNewmarket.—Sayingthetimeisfrom8p.m.tillmidnight.—Write40-50wordsonaseparatesheet.标准答案：STAFFANNUALDANCEPleasenotethatsomechangeshavebeenmadetothedateandplaceoftheStaffAnnualDance.ItwillbeheldonSaturday28MayattheBallroomintheGrandHotelinManchesterinsteadof21MayattheMetropoleinNewmarket.TheDancewillbeginat8p,m.tillmidnight.Enjoyyourselfthen!FredJenkinsManagingDirector知识点解析：暂无解析二、大作文(本题共1题，每题1.0分，共1分。)2、YouareaclerkinLuckyTourismCompany.Youareresponsibleforarrangingtravelinglines.Oneday,youreceivedthedataasfollows:Readthefollowingtablewhichshowsthechangesinthewaypeoplespendtheirholidays.Thetabledividesthetourismbusinessintofourparts,tellingthedifferentpercentagesin2004andin2008,fromwhichyouwillnoticethetrendofcurrenttourismbusiness.Usetheinformationinthetabletowriteashortreportemphasizingchangesofthemainbusinessforyourcompany.Write120-140words.标准答案：Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthewaypeoplespendtheirholidays.In2004,12%oftouristschosetotravelabroadwhilein2008,20%ofthetravelersdecidetogoabroadforholidays.Bothin2004and2008peoplewouldliketogotoseaside,and38%and35%ofthetouristsmadethischoicerespectively.Thenumberofthetouristswhogocampinghasincreased27%.In2004,only8%ofthetravelersprefercampingwhilein2008moreandmorepeoplewouldliketogocamping.Accordingtothestatisticshere,fewerandfewerpeoplechoosetostayathome.In2004,42%ofpeoplestayathome.However,only10%ofpeoplechoosetostayathomein2008.