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专题09书面表达(热点话题满分范文)15篇学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________一、书面表达1.(2022上·江苏南京·九年级统考期末)请根据你校校刊YOUTH中YOURIDEA栏目的征稿内容,用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。Asweallknow,artplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Sothisweek,wewanttoknowyourideasaboutthetopic“Myfavouriteartform”.•Whattypesofartformsdoyouknow?•Whichisyourfavouriteartform?Doyouhaveanystoriesaboutit?•Whatdoyouthinkofthisartform?Wearesureyouhavealottosay.Wearelookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.注意:1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;3.词数80左右,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。MyfavouriteartformArtisanimportantpartofourlife.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyfavouriteartformArtisanimportantpartofourlife.Aroundus,therearemanyartforms,suchassinging,papercutting,dancingandsoon.Ofallthethingsthatmakemehappy,Ilikesingingbest.Manyofmyfriendspraisemewhentheyhearmesinging.However,IoncedidnotlikesingingbecauseIfeltnervouswhensingingorspeakinginfrontofmanypeople.IbecameinterestedinsingingwhenIwastenyearsold.Oneday,myfriendsandIwerecelebratingmytenthbirthday.Myfriendswantedmetosingasongforthem.Ihadneversunginfrontofmanypeopleandwasnotbraveenoughtosing.Butallmyfriendsencouragedme.Ifinallysangasongandallmyfriendscheeredmeformysinging.TheysaidthatIhadarealgiftforsinging.Sincethen,Ihavebeencrazyaboutsingingsongs.IoftensingwhenIfeelrelaxed.SometimesIalsosingformyfamily.IenjoymyselfintheworldofsongseverytimeIsing.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:一般现在时以及一般过去时;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。[写作步骤]第一步,点明自己知道的艺术形式;第二步,细节介绍自己最爱的艺术形式;第三步,介绍你对这个艺术形式的想法。[亮点词汇]①braveenough足够勇敢②cheerfor欢呼[高分句型]①Manyofmyfriendspraisemewhentheyhearmesinging.(when引导的时间状语从句)②TheysaidthatIhadarealgiftforsinging.(宾语从句)2.(2022上·江苏南京·九年级统考期末)Inordertoimprovethewayofassigninghomeworkandmeanwhileattractstudents’learninginterest,betterconsolidatestudents’learning,amiddleschoolmadeasurveyabout“Students’FavouriteKindsofEnglishHomework”.Theresultisshowninthepiechartbelow.Ifyouwereastudentatthisschool,pleasefirstanalyzethepiechart,thenchooseyourfavouritekindofEnglishhomeworkandatlastexplainthereasonswithyourownexperience.要求:1.词数不少于80词,首句已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不能出现真实的人名、校名;3.参考词汇仅供参考。Amiddleschooldidasurveyamongover1,000studentsabouttheirfavouritekindsofEnglishhomework.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Amiddleschooldidasurveyaboutstudents’favouritekindsofEnglishhomework.Herearetheresults.42%ofthestudentslikelisteningandspeakinghomeworkbest,and29%enjoyreadingandwriting.Thepercentageofthestudentswholikethehandsonprojectis22%and7%chooseotherkindsofhomework.Asforme,IlikethehandsonprojectbestbecauseitconnectswhatI’velearntwithreallifeinaninterestingway.Threeweeksago,wewereaskedtomakeanEnglishposterabouttheDragonBoatFestival.ThenIcollectedalotofinformationabouttheDragonBoatFestival.Finally,Inotonlypletedthetaskperfectly,butalsogotadeeperunderstandingofourrichandcolorfulculture.Inmyopinion,thisisahandsonproject,whichhasstimulatedmyinterestinEnglishandenrichedmyexperience.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇议论文;②时态:本文时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;③提示:注意分析饼状图使用一般现在时,然后用自己的经历解释原因。[写作步骤]第一步,分析饼状图关于学生最爱的英语作业;第二步,介绍自己最爱的方式,并解释原因。[亮点词汇]①asforsb就某人而言②connect...with...把……和……联系起来③notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……[高分句型]①Herearetheresults.(倒装句)②Asforme,IlikethehandsonprojectbestbecauseitconnectswhatI’velearntwithreallifeinaninterestingway.(because引导状语从句;what引导宾语从句)3.(2022上·江苏南通·九年级统考期末)临近期末,学校将在学习小组内开展年终自评和组评活动,假如你是Starlight小组的组长,请根据下面表格中的提示,用英语写一篇短文,对你的组员李华进行评价。注意:1.词数100词左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数:2.句子结构紧凑,要点齐全,内容合理,篇章结构连贯:3.表达中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。LiHuaisamemberofmyteamcalledstarlight.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文LiHuaisamemberofmyteamcalledstarlight.Everyoneinourgrouplikeshimverymuchbecauseheissmartandhonest.It’salsogenerousofhimtosharethingswithus.Heoftenhelpsuswhenweareintrouble.LiHuaisstrictwithhimselfinhislessons.Helistenscarefullyinclassandgoesoverthelessonsintimeafterschool.Heissohardworkingthathehasdevotedmostoftimetostudyinghislessons.Asaresult,hehasmadegreatprogress.Inhisfreetime,helikesreadingbooks,especiallydetectivestories.Hethinkshecangetagreatdealofknowledgethroughreading.Itcannotonlyopenhismindbutalsomakehimcleverandhappy.Besidesthat,heenjoysclassicalmusicbecauseithelpshimrelaxafteraday’shardwork.HealsoenjoyswatchingTVprogrammesaboutsportsbecausehethinkstheyareveryexciting.Heisgoodatorganizingactivities.Lastweek,hesucceededinholdingacharityshowinourschoolhall.Allofusareproudofhim.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是篇材料作文;②时态:本文时态为“一般现在时”为主;③提示:本文要点已给出,注意要点衔接自然。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍个性特征;第二步,介绍学习情况;第三步,介绍兴趣爱好;第四步,介绍能力。[亮点词汇]①goesover复习②Asaresult因此③Besides除此之外[高分句型]①Heissohardworkingthathehasdevotedmostoftimetostudyinghislessons.(结果状语从句)②Besidesthat,heenjoysclassicalmusicbecauseithelpshimrelaxafteraday’shardwork.(原因状语从句)4.(2022上·江苏南京·九年级统考期末)假如你是阳光中学的李华,你校英文报开展了一项关于青少年喜欢的艺术形式的调查请你根据以下内容,用英文写封回信。Wearecarryingoutasurveyonwhattypeofartformisthemostpopularamongteenagersinourschool.Pleasewritetotellus:•Yourfavoriteartform•Youropinionsaboutthisartform•Yourstoryaboutthisartform•Yourfavoriteartistandthereasonwhyyoulikeher/him注意:1.80词左右,语句流畅通顺;2.结合表格内容,并作适当发挥;3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名。DearSir/Madam,Iwouldliketointroducemyfavoritekindofartform.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeeveryonecanenjoytheartworld.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearSir/Madam,Iwouldliketointroducemyfavoritekindofartform.IlikeEnglishfilmsbestbecauseIcanlearnalotfromthem.Firstofall,IcanlearnlotsofEnglishwordsandidioms.WatchingEnglishfilmscanalsohelpmeimprovemylisteningability.Also,Icanknowsomefamousactorsandactressesfromthefilms,andmyfavoriteartistisDannyBoyle,whohasalreadydirectedmanyexcellentmovies.IstartedtowatchEnglishfilmswithmyparentsatthecinemawhenIwasnine.Ifellinlovewithit.Besides,Icanenjoytheplacesofinterestindifferentpartsoftheworldandseedifferentkindsofdeliciousfood.Ihopeeveryonecanenjoytheartworld.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,确定“最喜欢的艺术形式”的主题;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“个人观点、故事、最喜欢的艺术家”等方面进行介绍;第三步,书写结语,总结全文。[亮点词汇]①learnfrom从……中学到②helpsb.dosth.帮助某人做某事③fallinlovewith爱上[高分句型]①Also,Icanknowsomefamousactorsandactressesfromthefilms,andmyfavoriteartistisDannyBoyle,whohasalreadydirectedmanyexcellentmovies.(who引导的非限制性定语从句)②IstartedtowatchEnglishfilmswithmyparentsatthecinemawhenIwasnine.(when引导的时间状语从句)5.(2022上·江苏苏州·九年级星海实验中学校考期末)我们在变化中成长,成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光,我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动,请分享你初中三年中的成长故事,具体讲述其中一个变化。要点如下:1)Whatisthechange?2)Howdidithappen?3)Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?要求:1)必须含有所有要点,并适当拓展;2)不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息;3)词数90左右。Wegrowupinchange.Growthmakesourlifefullofmeaning.Lookingbackonthethreeyearsofjuniorhighschool,Ihaveexperiencedmanychangesinmystudy,thoughts,personality,lifeandsoon.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Wegrowupinchange.Growthmakesourlifefullofmeaning.Lookingbackonthethreeyearsofjuniorhighschool,Ihaveexperiencedmanychangesinmystudy,thoughts,personality,lifeandsoon.ThebiggestpersonalchangeI’veevermadeisthatIhavefalleninlovewithreading.WhenIwasachild,Ididn’tenjoybooksatall.Later,mymotheralwaysreadstoriesformeandboughtmebooks.Gradually,Ibegantolovereading.Whilereading,Ifeelliketalkingwithawiseman.Readingisalsoafantasticwaytoenjoymyfreetime.NowIhaverealizedtheimportanceofreadingbooks.Ihavegotusedtoreadingeveryday.Booksaremyfriends.Andtheywillbenefitmealot.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;②时态:一般现在时和一般过去时;③提示:写作提示已给出,考生应注意结合具体语境运用正确的时态,不要漏写从变化中收获的益处,适当拓展,使上下文连贯。[写作步骤]第一步,由于短文开头已给出,故接下来说明自己发生的变化;第二步,具体阐述自己的变化是如何发生的;第三步,说明自己从变化中获得的益处。[亮点词汇]①fallinlovewith...爱上……②gradually渐渐地③feellike感觉像④theimportanceof...……的重要性⑤getusedtodoingsth.习惯于做某事⑥benefit使受益[高分句型]①ThebiggestpersonalchangeI’veevermadeisthatIhavefalleninlovewithreading.(定语从句,表语从句)②WhenIwasachild,Ididn’tenjoybooksatall.(when引导的时间状语从句)③Readingisalsoafantasticwaytoenjoymyfreetime.(动名词作主语)6.(2022上·江苏宿迁·九年级统考期末)中考在即,为缓解压力,九(1)班的同学开展了以“Differentwaystogetrelaxed”为题的讨论,请根据所给提示写一篇文章,并谈谈你缓解压力的方式及理由。要求:1.文章中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称:2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;3.词数100左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数)。DifferentwaystogetrelaxedTheentranceexamising.Grade9studentsarefacingmuchstressintheirdailylivesandtheyaretryingdifferentwaystorelaxthemselves._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:DifferentwaystogetrelaxedTheentranceexamising.Grade9studentsarefacingmuchstressintheirdailylivesandtheyaretryingdifferentwaystorelaxthemselves.Somestudentsthinkthattravellingisagoodwaytorelaxthemselves.Duringtheirtrips,theygettoknowmorefriendsandenjoythebeautyofnatureatthesametime.Moreover,travellingcanhelpusknowmoreabouttheworld.Someotherstudentsthinkit’sbettertoreadbookstogetrelaxed.Readingbookscanhelpthemopentheireyesandincreasetheirknowledge.Theycanknowthingsaroundtheworldwithoutgoingout.Asthesayinggoes,“Readingmakesafullman.”Forme,thebestwaytorelaxmyselfistolistentomusic.Musiccanmakemehappyandrelaxed.What’smore,IcanlistentoitwheneverandwhereverIwant.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍一部分学生认为旅行是放松的好办法;第二步,介绍另一部分学生认为阅读是放松的好办法;第三步,最后表达自己的观点。[亮点词汇]①gettoknow开始了解②helpsbdosth帮助某人做某事③what’smore而且[高分句型]①Somestudentsthinkthattravellingisagoodwaytorelaxthemselves.(that引导宾语从句)②Readingbookscanhelpthemopentheireyesandincreasetheirknowledge.(动名词短语作主语)7.(2022上·江苏宿迁·九年级统考期末)“青春须早为,岂能长少年。”又是一年岁末时,阳光中学开展了“阳光少年”评选活动。假设你是班长李华,请你根据提示的内容,以“ASunshineTeenager”为题用英语写一篇短文推荐你班Johnson参加评选。自身特点15岁,九年级,中等身材,擅长运动,……(自拟一点)发现优点勤奋好学,敢于挑战;合理规划,平衡学玩;……(自拟一点)凸显亮点开学初参加竞赛节目,获得一个大奖。上个月主演一部电影,获得“才艺之星”(TheStarofTalent)注意:1.短文须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2.不得出现真实姓名,校名等;省略号处作适当发挥;3.90词左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。ASunshineTeenagerDearheadmaster,I’mwritingtoremendJohnsonasaSunshineTeenager.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,IthinkJohnsonisanexcellentstudenttobeaSunshineTeenager.Ihopeyoucanagreewithme.Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】例文ASunshineTeenagerDearheadmaster,I’mwritingtoremendJohnsonasaSunshineTeenager.Heis15yearsoldandastudentofGrade9.Heisasportyboyofmediumheight.Inhisfreetime,readingishisfavouritebecausehethinksreadingcanopenupawholenewworldtohim.Hehasmanygoodqualities.Heissohardworkingthathealwaysgetshighmarksinexams.Andwhenhemeetswithdifficulties,heiswillingtotakeonchallenges.What’smore,hecannotonlyplanhistimecarefullybutalsoachieveabalancebetweenhisschoolworkandhobbies.Heisalsoaconfidentboy.Hebelieveshecandoalmostanythingifhenevergivesup.Healsohasmanytalents.Atthebeginningofthisterm,hetookpartinagameshow,answeredallthequestionscorrectlyandwonabigprize.Lastmonth,heplayedaleadroleinafilmandwonTheStarofTalentforhisrole.Inaword,IthinkJohnsonisanexcellentstudenttobeaSunshineTeenager.Ihopeyoucanagreewithme.
Yourssincerely,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“Johnson的个人情况,爱好,优点,所获奖项等”,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我写信推荐约翰逊成为阳光少年。”来引出重点介绍的内容;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“Johnson的个人情况,兴趣爱好,优点,才能”重点介绍Johnson的具体情况;第三步,书写结语。表达“我希望你能同意我的看法。”[亮点词汇]①notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……②giveup放弃[高分句型]①Inhisfreetime,readingishisfavouritebecausehethinksreadingcanopenupawholenewworldtohim.(because引导的原因状语从句)②Andwhenhemeetswithdifficulties,heiswillingtotakeonchallenges.(when引导的时间状语从句)8.(2022上·江苏扬州·九年级统考期末)假设你是王磊,你所在的阳光小区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动,请根据所给图表的内容,给社区中心写一封英文推荐信,向他们推荐你的家庭。注意事项:1.词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。Iwouldliketoremendmyfamilyfor“ModelFamily”inourneighbourhoodthisyear._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopewecangettheaward.Iamlookingforwardtoyouranswer.Yoursfaithfully,WangLei【答案】Onepossibleversion:Iwouldliketoremendmyfamilyfor“ModelFamily”inourneighbourhoodthisyear.Inmyfamily,werespecteachotherandeveryoneenjoysequalrights.Weoftenmunicatewithourfamilymemberstoencourageandsupporteachother.Inmyneighbourhood,wegetalongwellwithourneighbours.Whensomeonehasproblems,wearealwaysreadytohelp.Peopleherearelikeabigfamily.Itisimportantforustoliveagreenlife.Wehaveabalanceddiettokeephealthy.Besides,weusuallyridebikesorwalkinsteadofdrivingcars.Wetryourbesttoprotecttheenvironment.What’smore,myfamilymemberslikedoingvolunteerwork.Weoftentakeanactivepartincharityworktohelppeopleinneed.Ihopewecangettheaward.Iamlookingforwardtoyouranswer.Yoursfaithfully,WangLei【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,引出“模范家庭”的评选活动的话题;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“家庭、邻里关系以及绿色生活”等方面进行介绍;第三步,书写结语,表达期待。[亮点词汇]①eachother互相②getalongwellwith与……相处③keephealthy保持健康[高分句型]①Weoftenmunicatewithourfamilymemberstoencourageandsupporteachother.(todo不定式作目的状语)②Itisimportantforustoliveagreenlife.(it作形式主语)9.(2022上·江苏南京·九年级统考期末)EnglishforTeens正在举行以“Mydreamjob”为题的征文活动。请根据杂志网站上的征文启事,用英语写一篇文章参加征文活动。WriteaboutwhatyouthinkTile:MydreamjobTherearemanydifferentkindsofjobs.Youwillhaveajobinthefuture.Whatisyourdramjob?Pleaseshareyourideaswithus.Yourarticleshouldinclude:>thepersonwhohasinfluencedyourchoice>yourqualitiesforthejob>thewaytoachieveyourdreamTheclosingdate:10February2023Formoreinformation,pleasevisit://englishforteens..Yourarticleshouldbesenttomorewritings@163..注意:1.内容涵盖所有要点,全文连贯通顺。2.词数80左右(已给出的文章开头不计入总词数)。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。MydreamjobMydreamjobisto_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:Mydreamjob
Mydreamjobistobeadoctor.IwanttobeadoctorlikeZhongNanshanandLiLanjuanwhenIgrowup.Inmyopinion,doctorsarethepeoplewhocanhelpmillionsofpatientsoutofdiseasesandpains.SoIwanttobeoneofthem.I’msuremydreamwilletrueoneday.Tomakeitetrue,Imuststudyharder.OnlyinthiswaycanIgotoagoodmedicalcollegeandachievemydream.Oneday,IbelieveIcanbeaheroinpeople’sheart.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,引出“我梦想的工作”的话题;第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从自己的目标以及梦想的工作进行介绍;第三步,书写结语,总结全文。[亮点词汇]①growup长大②millionsof数百万③etrue实现[高分句型]①OnlyinthiswaycanIgotoagoodmedicalcollegeandachievemydream.(only引导的倒装句)10.(2022上·江苏盐城·九年级统考期末)英国哲学家培根说:“读书足以怡情、足以博彩、足以长才。”为了提升中学生的阅读素养,某校开展了一次英语课外阅读(extracurricularreading)的问卷调查。请你根据所给提示,用英语写一篇短文,陈述英语阅读的意义,并针对调查中反映的主要问题提出你的建议。KeypointsContentsFeedback(反馈)datathecausesofinadequate(不够的)readingThemeaningsofreading*increaseone’sknowledge*improveone’sability*buildupone’sconfidence*...注意:1.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入词数;2.文中须包括所有要点,每个要点可适当发挥,使文章连贯、通顺;3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。TogowithEnglishextracurricularreading,ourschoolhasdoneasurvey._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:TogowithEnglishextracurricularreading,ourschoolhasdoneasurvey.Wefoundthat68%ofthestudentsdon’tspendenoughtimereadingafterclasseachday,while24%don’thaveenoghreadingmaterials,and8%don’tkonwhowtoread.Thisisnotsatisfying.Asweallknow,readingmakesafullman.Readingnotonlyincreasesourknowledge,improveourabilitytosolveproblems,butalsohelpsusbuildconfidenceandmakesourlifecolourful.I’dliketogiveapieceofadviceaboutreadingactivities.Ourschoolshouldasksomefamouswriterstogiveuslectureseachterm.Ourteachersaresupportedtocutdownthehomeworksothatstudentscanhavemoretimetoread.【详解】[总体分析]题材:本文是一篇材料作文;时态:时态为“一般现在时”;提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步,表明写作意图,借用“学校做了一次关于英语课外阅读的调查”来引出重点介绍的内容;第二步,具体阐述写作内容;第三步,提出建议。[亮点词汇]①Asweallknow众所周知②notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……③apieceof一条[高分句型]①Readingnotonlyincreasesourknowledge,improveourabilitytosolveproblems,butalsohelpsusbuildconfidenceandmakesourlifecolourful.(notonly...butalso句型)②Ourteachersaresupportedtocutdownthehomeworksothatstudentscanhavemoretimetoread.(sothat引导的结果状语从句)11.(2022上·江苏无锡·九年级统考期末)时光飞逝,初中生活已接近尾声。回顾初中生涯,你一定经历了成长的烦恼,也成就了更好的自己。假设《中学生英文报》正在举办以“成长”为主题的征文活动,请根据以下四方格图,以“GrowingPainsandGains”为题写篇短文投稿。Whatproblemdidyouhave?GrowingPainsandGainsWho/Whateitherencouragedorhelpedyou?(friends/teachers/heroes/music/films/books…)Howdidyousolveit?Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?注意事项:1.短文须根据四方格图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;2.词数在100个左右,短文的开头已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;3.短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息:4.短文必须写指定的位置上。GrowingPainsandGains_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文GrowingPainsandGainsHowtimeflies!Myjuniorschoollifeisingtoanend.Lookingback,Ihadnotonlypainsbutalsogains.IfacedthebiggestproblemwhenIenteredGradeNine.Ialwayshatedrunning,butIhadnochoicebecauseofthesportsexam.AlthoughIpractisedhardeveryday,Icouldn’trunfastenoughtopasstheexam.Ijustwantedtogiveup.Atthatmoment,thestoryaboutSpudWebbencouragedme.Throughhardwork,SpudWebbbecametheshortestplayerintheNBA.Hisstorygavemecouragetosolveallkindofproblems.Now,I’mnotafraidof800meterrunninganymore.Ihavelearnedthatnothingisimpossibleifwedon’tgiveupeasily.【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料文;②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;③提示:文章应该包括表格中提到的四个方面的要点,注意不要遗漏,可以适当补充;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。[写作步骤]第一步,介绍成长之路,既有痛苦,也有收获;第二步,叙述过去的经历:发生了什么问题、受到谁的鼓励、如何解决问题、从中获得了什么;第三步,表达现在的状况以及感受。[亮点词汇]①lookback回顾过去②notonly…butalso…不但……而且……③giveup放弃④etoanend结束[高分句型]①AlthoughIpractisedhardeveryday,Icouldn’trunfastenoughtopasstheexam.(Although引导让步状语从句)②Ihavelearnedthatnothingisimpossibleifwedon’tgiveupeasily.(宾语从句、if引导条件状语从句)12.(2022上·江苏苏州·九年级统考期末)在你的生活中,一定会有榜样影响着你。他们或许是科学家、抗疫英雄,或许是你身边的亲人、老师、朋友……某英文网站正在开展以“MyRoleModel(我的榜样)”为话题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的榜样是谁,描述你的榜样所做的哪件或哪些事影响了你,以及你从他/她身上学到了什么。注意:1)词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2)内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺,可适当发挥;3)请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。MyRoleModelEveryonehasarolemodel.Myrolemodelis_______.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyRoleModelEveryonehasarolemodel.MyrolemodelismyfriendTom.Heisverykindandcaring.Atschool,hestudiessohardthatheoftengetsgoodscoresinexams.However,Idon’tdowellinstudying,sohenotonlyhelpsmewitheverysubjectbutalsotellsmehowtostudyinordertocatchupwithothers.WithTom’shelp,ImakegreatprogressandIthankhimverymuch.IthinkIamluckytohavesuchagoodfriend.Fromnowon,Iwilldomybesttostudybetterandbetter.AndIhopeIwilllearnfromTomtohelpothersintroubleandshowtheactofkindnesstoothers.【详解】[总
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