2024年高考英语模拟书信写作15篇（第六期）(新高考专用)

书信写作15篇（高考模拟真题）

1.（2024.浙江温州•三模）你校英文报就最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”（WhenEnglishMeetsTheArts）系列活

动开展征文，请你写一篇短文，分享其中让你印象深刻的一项活动，内容包括:

1.活动介绍2你的感想

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右2请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

WhenEnglishMeetsTheArts

【答案1WhenEnglishMeetsTheArts

Recently,ourschoolorganizedaseriesofactivitiestitled“WhenEnglishMeetsTheArts**.Amongthem,

theactivitythatleftadeepimpressiononmewastheEnglishdramaperformance.

Duringtheactivity,studentsfromdifferentgradescooperatedtoproduceandperformshortEnglishdramas.

Eachdramashowcasedauniquestorylineandcreativedialogue,providingaplatformforstudentstoshowcase

theirEnglishproficiencyandactingskills.Personally,Iwasdeeplyimpressedbythededicationandteamwork

displayedbythestudents.Despitethechallengesoflanguagelearningandstagefright,theydemonstrated

confidenceandenthusiasmonstage.Moreover,thedramasnotonlyentertainedtheaudiencebutalsoencouraged

languagelearninginafunandinteractiveway.

Overall,theEnglishdramaperformancewasamemorableandinspiringexperience,highlightingthe

synergybetweenlanguagelearningandartisticexpression.Itreinforcedtheimportanceofcreativeapproachesin

languageeducationandprovidedvaluableopportunitiesforstudentstoshineonstage.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇征文，分享学校英文报最近举办的“当英语遇上艺术”

系列活动中让你印象深刻的一项活动。

【详解】1.词汇积累

一系列：aseriesof—asuiteof

合作：cooperate一collaborate

展示：showcase一display

提供：provide一offer

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Eachdramashowcasedauniquestorylineandcreativedialogue,providingaplatformforstudentsto

showcasetheirEnglishproficiencyandactingskills.

拓展句：Eachdramashowcasedauniquestorylineandcreativedialogue,whichprovidedaplatformforstudents

toshowcasetheirEnglishproficiencyandactingskills.

【点睛】【高分句型11Amongthem,theactivitythatleftadeepimpressiononmewastheEnglishdrama

performance^运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]Overall,theEnglishdramaperformancewasamemorableandinspiringexperience,highlighting

thesynergybetweenlanguagelearningandartisticexpression.（运用了现在分词作状语）

2.（2024.辽宁大连.一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric得知你校学生于上个月参加了大连创新实践

学校（DalianInnovationPracticeHighSchool）组织的各种体验课程，请你给他写一封回信，分享你体验的

课程，内容如下：

1.课程内容；

2.你的感受。

DearEric,

I'msodelightedtohavereceivedyourletter.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearEric,

I'msodelightedtohavereceivedyourletter.YouaskedmeaboutourcoursesinDalianInnovationPractice

HighSchoolandthedetailedinformationisasfollows.

Asscheduled,theexperientialcourse,whichwasfreeofcharge,beganonMarch11th,2024,lastingone

weekandendingonMarch15th.Thereweresomanydifferentkindsofclassesforustochoosefrom.Itookpart

intheprogramofhousehold,whichincludedcookingandfirstaidknowledge,suchascreativeillustration,DIY

cakes,coconutballmaking,trauma（夕卜伤）treatmentandpracticingcardiopulmonaryresuscitationorCPRand

someotherprograms.Throughthiscourse,Irealizedthecharmofhousekeepingwork,whichhelpedmetoenrich

mylifeandimprovethetasteoflife.

Ifyouhaveanyproblemaboutthisproject,pleasedon*thesitatetocontactmeforfurtherinformation.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如考生是李华，你的英国笔友Eric得知你校学生于上个月参加了大

连创新实践学校（DalianInnovationPracticeHighSchool）组织的各种体验课程，请你给他写一封回信。

【详解】1.词汇积累

开始：takepartin-participatein

开始：begin-start

帮助：help-assist

选择：choose一select

2.句式拓展

同义句

原句：Throughthiscourse,Irealizedthecharmofhousekeepingwork,whichhelpedmetoenrichmylifeand

improvethetasteoflife.

拓展句：ItisthroughthiscoursethatIrealizedthecharmofhousekeepingwork,whichhelpedmetoenrichmy

lifeandimprovethetasteoflife.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Itookpartintheprogramofhousehold,whichincludedcookingandfirstaidknowledge,

suchascreativeillustration,DIYcakes,coconutballmaking,trauma（外伤）treatmentandpracticing

cardiopulmonaryresuscitationorCPRandsomeotherprograms.（运用了which弓|导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]Ifyouhaveanyproblemaboutthisproject,pleasedon'thesitatetocontactmeforfurtherin

formation.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）

3.（2024・湖北十堰•模拟预测）假如你是高三学生李华，你校外教John针对高三是否需要开设职业生涯规

划（careerplanning）课程展开讨论，请你写一封信表达你的观点。内容包括：1.你的观点2.你的理由3.你的

建议。

注意：1、词数80词左右；

2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearJohn,

I'mLiHua.

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearJohn,

IamaseniorthreestudentnamedLiHua.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsonthenecessityofoffering

careerplanningcoursesinseniorhighschools.

Firstly,Ibelievethatsuchcoursesarehighlyvaluable.Asweapproachgraduation,theideaofchoosinga

careerpathcanbeoverwhelming.Thesecoursesprovideanopportunitytoexplorevariousindustriesandjobroles,

helpingusmakeinformeddecisionsaboutourfuture.Secondly,careerplanningcoursesalsoteachvaluableskills

suchasresumewriting,interviewingskills,andjob-searchingstrategies.Theseskillsareessentialforsuccessin

theworkplace.Lastly,Isuggestthatsuchcoursesshouldbeintegratedintotheregularschoolcurriculum.We

couldhavededicatedteacherswhoareexpertsincareercounselinganddevelopment.Theseteacherscouldguide

usthroughtheprocessofexploringourinterests,skills,andvalues,andhelpusidentifysuitablecareerpaths.

Inconclusion,I'mfirmlyconvincedthatseniorhighschoolsshouldoffercareerplanningcourses.Thank

youforconsideringmyviews.

Yours,

L

iHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信表达关于“高三是否需要开设职业生涯规划课程”的

观点，说明理由，给出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

传达：express一convey

选择：choose一select

有价值的/宝贵的：valuable-precious

建议：suggest^-recommend

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Secondly,careerplanningcoursesalsoteachvaluableskillssuchasresumewriting,interviewingskills,and

job-searchingstrategies.Theseskillsareessentialforsuccessintheworkplace.

拓展句：Secondly,careerplanningcoursesalsoteachvaluableskillssuchasresumewriting,interviewingskills,

andjob-searchingstrategies,whichareessentialforsuccessintheworkplace.

【点睛】【高分句型11Asweapproachgraduation,theideaofchoosingacareerpathcanbeoverwhelming.（运

用了as引导的状语从句）

【高分句型2】Wecouldhavededicatedteacherswhoareexpertsincareercounselinganddevelopment.（运用

了who引导的限制性定语从句）

4.（2024・辽宁・模拟预测）假定你是李华。你在和笔友Peter的交流中得知，他因为数学成绩很不理想，决

定要放弃数学，你不同意他的计划。请你写一封邮件，内容包括：

1、你的意见和建议；2.你的理由。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearPeter,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearPeter,

Hearingthatyou'reconsideringgivingupmathsduetoyourrecentstruggleswithit,Iunderstandyour

frustration,butIdisagreewithyourdecision.

Mathsisafundamentalsubjectthatisvaluableinmanyaspectsoflife,fromproblem-solvingtocritical

thinking,whichwillbenefityouinthelongrun.Insteadofabandoningmathsaltogether,Isuggestyoushould

considerseekingextrahelp.Infact,allittakesisadifferentapproachorsomeadditionalguidancetoimprove.

Besides,perseveranceisthekeytoovercomingchallenges.

Ihopeyoucantakemyadviceintoconsideration.Tmconvincedyoucanmakeit.

Y

ours,

L

iHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Peter写信，他因为数学成绩很不理想，决定要放弃

数学，你不同意他的计划，给他写信提出一些建议和意见。

【详解】1.词汇积累

考虑：consider—takeintoaccount

方法：approachtmethod

此外：Besides—>What'smore

建议：advice—suggestion

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides,perseveranceisthekeytoovercomingchallenges.

拓展句：Besides,perseveranceisthekey,whichcanhelpyouovercomechallenges.

【点睛】【高分句型11Hearingthatyou'reconsideringgivingupmathsduetoyourrecentstruggleswithit,I

understandyourfrustration,butIdisagreewithyourdecision.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语，that

引导宾语从句。）

【高分句型2]Mathsisafundamentalsubjectthatisvaluableinmanyaspectsoflife,fromproblem-solvingto

criticalthinking,whichwillbenefityouinthelongrun.（运用了关系代词that引导的定语从句以及which引导

的非限制性定语从句。）

5.（2024.江苏.二模）假定你是某国际学校学生李华，因高三毕业即将退出校篮球队，请你在团队仪式上

用英文发表告别演说，内容包括：

1.回顾往昔；

2.表示感谢；

3.校篮球队。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Mydearteammates,

【答案】

Mydearteammates,

Ifindithardtosaygoodbye.Meanwhile,Ifeelincrediblyfortunatetohavespentthreeyearspractising

withyou,whichhastrulygivenmesomeofthebestmomentsofmylife.Thechampionshipweclaimedlast

semesterwillserveasaconstantreminderofoureverlastingfriendship.

Itseemsimpossibletoexpressmygratitudetoallofyou.Allofmycoachesandteammates,theinfluence

youhavemadeonmeisimmeasurable.Yourloveandcarewillcarrymethroughwhatthenextchapterhasin

storeforme.

Withyourpassionandcommitment,Ibelievethatourteamwillachievemorefeatsandhaveaprosperous

future.

【导语】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生因高三毕业即将退出校篮球队，写一篇演讲稿在团队仪式上发表告

别演说。

【详解】1.词汇积累

困难的：hard-difficult

同时：meanwhile—atthesametime

感激：gratitude一appreciation

影响：influence-impact

2.句式拓展

同义句替换

原句：Withyourpassionandcommitment,Ibelievethatourteamwillachievemorefeatsandhaveaprosperous

future.

拓展句：Withyourpassionandcommitment,Ifirmlybelievethatourteam,whichhasalreadyachievedsomuch,

willcontinuetoachieveevenmorefeatsandhaveaprosperousfuturefilledwithsuccessandaccomplishment.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Ifeelincrediblyfortunatetohavespentthreeyearspractisingwithyou,whichhastruly

givenmesomeofthebestmomentsofmylife.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]A11ofmycoachesandteammates,theinfluenceyouhavemadeonmeisimmeasurable^省略that的

定语从句）

6.（23-24高三上・福建・期末）学校英语俱乐部正在开展以Wayst。RelieveStress为题的讨论。请根据图表

中的调查结果写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.简述调查结果；2.评价并提出建议。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Boysandgirls,

【答案】【参考范文1】

Boysandgirls,

I'mhonoredtopresenttheresultofthesurveyaboutwaystorelievestress.80%oftherespondentssaid

theyfavoredwatchingvideostorelax,followedcloselybylisteningtomusic.Comparatively,onlyasmallnumber

ofstudentschoseexerciseortalkingtoothers.

Whilevideosandmusicarefun,spendingtoomuchtimeonthemcanmakeusrelytoomuchonour

phonesandignoremoreimportantthings.Thereareactuallybetteroptionsavailable.Forexample,doingexercise

ortalkingwithfriendsnotonlyrelievesstressbutalsobringsusclosertoeachother.

So,ifwearefeelingalotofstress,ifsagoodideatotrydifferentwaystorelax.Butmostimportantly,we

shouldfocusonthingsthathelpbothourbodyandmind.

Thankyouforlistening!

【参考范文2】

Boysandgirls,

I'mhonoredtopresenttheresultofthesurveyaboutwaystorelievestress.Surprisingly,approximately

fourfifthsoftherespondentsregardedwatchingvideosastheirpreferredwaytoeasestress,closelyfollowedby

listeningtomusic.Incontrast,onlyasmallpercentageofindividualschosesportsorchattingwithothersas

meansofreducingtheirpsychologicalburden/Incontrast,thenumberofstudentspreferringsportsorchatting

accountsfor30%and40%respectively.

Whilevideosandmusicofferamusementandfascination,excessiveindulgence（过分沉溺）canintensify

ourdependenceonsmartphones,thusdistractingourattentionfromourdailylives.Infact,alternativeapproaches,

suchassportsandsocialinteraction,canoffergreaterbenefits.Notonlydoesparticipatinginsportspromote

physicalwell-being,butinteractingwithourfriendsandparentscanalsoprovidecomfortaswell.

Therefore,Isuggestthatseniorthreestudentsadoptacombinationofstress-reliefmethods,prioritizing（优

先考虑）thosethatenhancebothourphysicalandmentalhealth.

Thankyouforlistening!

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据图表中的调查结果写一篇发言稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

荣幸的：honored—privileged

选择：choose^select

依赖：relyon—dependon

集中注意力于：focuson一concentrateon

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：I'mhonoredtopresenttheresultofthesurveyaboutwaystorelievestress.

拓展句：I'mhonoredtopresenttheresultofthesurveywhosethemeiswaystorelievestress.

【点睛】【高分句型1JWhilevideosandmusicarefun,spendingtoomuchtimeonthemcanmakeusrelytoo

muchonourphonesandignoremoreimportantthings.（运用了while弓|导的让步状语从句）

【高分句型2】Butmostimportantly,weshouldfocusonthingsthathelpbothourbodyandmind.（运用了that

引导定语从句）

7.（2024.河北邢台.二模）假定你是李华，你校英语社团将举行歌唱比赛。请写一封英文邮件，邀请交换

生John参赛，内容包括：

1.比赛的基本信息；

2.曲目要求及其他注意事项；

3.发出邀请。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。

【答案】DearJohn,

Ihopeyouareenjoyingyourexchangetimehere.Iamwritingtoextendawarminvitationtoyouto

participateintheSingingContesttobeorganizedbyourEnglishclubnextTuesdayinourschoolarthall.

Thecontestrequireseachparticipanttoperformasong,eithersolosorduets.Thechosensongshouldhave

meaningfullyricsandamelodypleasanttotheear.Additionally,youareexpectedtoattendarehearsaltoensurea

smoothcontest.

Welookforwardtoyourparticipationandhopetoseeyouatthecontestsoon.

Bestregards,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给John写一封邀请信，邀请他参加歌唱比赛，告知比赛的基

本信息、曲目要求及其他注意事项。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参力口：participatein一takepartin

比赛：contest—competition

此外：additionally-inaddition

确保：ensure—guarantee

2.句式拓展

简单句改为复合句

原句：IamwritingtoextendawarminvitationtoyoutoparticipateintheSingingContesttobeorganizedbyour

EnglishclubnextTuesdayinourschoolarthall.

拓展句：IamwritingtoextendawarminvitationtoyoutoparticipateintheSingingContestwhichwillbe

organizedbyourEnglishclubnextTuesdayinourschoolarthall.

【点睛】【高分句型1]IamwritingtoextendawarminvitationtoyoutoparticipateintheSingingContesttobe

organizedbyourEnglishclubnextTuesdayinourschoolarthall.(使用了不定式作目的状语、后置定语)

【高分句型2】Additionally,youareexpectedtoattendarehearsaltoensureasmoothcontest.(使用了不定式作

主语补足语、目的状语)

8.(2024・湖南长沙•一模)你在某英语学习网站上看到一个话题为"MyPlan(s)foraMeaningfulSummer

Vacation”的帖子，请你写一篇英语短文跟帖，内容包括：

1.你的暑假安排；

2.说明你的理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

MyPlan(s)foraMeaningfulSummerVacation

【答案】范文

MyPlan(s)foraMeaningfulSummerVacation

Asahighschoolsenior,Ithinkthissummervacationisspecial.Fveplanneditfocusingonpersonalgrowth

andexploration.

Ihavedecidedtoworkpart-timeatabookstore.Thisexperiencewillnotonlyhelpmedevelopasenseof

responsibilitybutallowmetosaveupfbralanguagecourse.BeingsurroundedbybooksisanaddedbonusasI'm

abooklover.Additionally,I'mdeterminedtolearnArabic.Understandinganotherlanguageopensdoorsto

differentculturesandperspectives,whichIfindincrediblyvaluable.

I'msurethiscombinationofworkandlearningwillmakeforabothproductiveandmeaningfulsummer.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以"MyPlan⑸foraMeaningfulSummerVacation”为题写一篇

英语短文跟帖。

【详解】1.词汇积累

决定：decideto一makeupone'smind

集中：focuson—concentrateon

此外：additionally一besides

宝贵的：valuable一precious

2.句式拓展

合并简单句

原句：Ihavedecidedtoworkpart-timeatabookstore.Thisexperiencewillnotonlyhelpmedevelopasenseof

responsibilitybutallowmetosaveupforalanguagecourse.

拓展句：Ihavedecidedtoworkpart-timeatabookstore,whichwillnotonlyhelpmedevelopasenseof

responsibilitybutallowmetosaveupforalanguagecourse.

【点睛】[高分句型1]BeingsurroundedbybooksisanaddedbonusasI'mabooklover.（运用了as引导原因状

语从句）

[高分句型2]Understandinganotherlanguageopensdoorstodifferentculturesandperspectives,whichIfind

incrediblyvaluable.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）

9.（23-24高三上.广西柳州.阶段练习）假定你是校英语俱乐部负责人李华，为缓解同学们的学习压力，俱

乐部拟于下周五下午举行户外游戏活动。请你代表俱乐部写一则通知，内容包括：

1.活动时间、地点；

2.活动形式；

3.希望大家积极参加。

注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Notice

Dearfellowschoolmates,

TheEnglishClub

【答案】Notice

Dearfellowschoolmates,

Inordertorelievestudents*studypressure,theclubplanstoholdoutdoorgames.Asscheduled,weareto

gatherontheplaygroundinourschoolat13:30nextFridayafternoon.Theactivitywillbeginat14:00ontime.

Theactivitiesaremainlyintheformofvariousgames,whosepurposeistorelaxeverystudent.Moreover,don't

forgettowearuniforms.Pleasedoarriveontime.Wearelookingforwardtoyourparticipation.

TheEnglish

Club

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是校英语俱乐部负责人李华，为缓解同学们的学习压力，俱

乐部拟于下周五下午举行户外游戏活动。请你代表俱乐部写一则通知。

【详解】1.词汇积累

压力：pressure—'Stress

止匕夕卜：moreover一what，smore

高度评价：thinkhighlyoJsinghighpraisefor

开始：begin一start

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Theactivitywillbeginat14:00ontime.

拓展句：Itisat14:00ontimethattheactivitywillbegin.

【点睛】【高分句型11Theactivitiesaremainlyintheformofvariousgames,whosepurposeistorelaxevery

student.（运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]Inordertorelievestudents*studypressure,theclubplanstoholdoutdoorgames.（运用了不定式

作目的状语）

10.（2024•江西九江•二模）学校学生会为6月6日全国爱眼日（NationalEyeCaringDay）征集倡议书，以

“照顾好眼睛，避免近视”为题，根据图表中的调查结果对同学发出倡议。内容要点：

近视率力学生近视率初中生近视率高中生近视率

1.简述青少年近视现状；

2.提出护眼建议；

3.发出倡议。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

TakeCareofourEyesandAvoidMyopia

Dearfellowstudents,

Wearelivinginaneraofrapidtechnologicaldevelopment,whereelectronicproductshavebecomean

indispensablepartofourdailylives.

TheStudents5Union

【答案1TakeCareofourEyesandAvoidMyopia

Dearfellowstudents,

Wearelivinginaneraofrapidtechnologicaldevelopment,whenelectronicproductshavebecomean

indispensablepartofourdailylives.However,alongwiththiscomesasharpriseofmyopiarateamongteenagers

from14.5%of6-year-oldstoover80%ofhighschoolstudents,whichisbecomingaworryingphenomenon.

WithNationalEyeCaringDayapproaching,ourschoolcallsoneveryonetopayattentiontoeyehealth.

Firstly,developeyecaringhabitssuchaslookingintothedistanceevery20-30minutestorestoureyesand

maintaineyeexercises.Secondly,participateactivelyinoutdooractivitiestokeepoureyesawayfromelectronic

products.Mostimportantly,ensuresufficientsleepandavoidstayinguplate.

Forthehealthofoureyes,lefstakeactionnow!

TheStudents9Union

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生以“照顾好眼睛，避免近视”为题，根据图表中的调查结果

对同学发出倡议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

然而：however•一nevertheless

令人担忧的：worrying-alarming

来临：approach一drawnear

参力口：participatein一takepartin

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：WithNationalEyeCaringDayapproaching,ourschoolcallsoneveryonetopayattentiontoeyehealth.

拓展句：AsNationalEyeCaringDayisapproaching,ourschoolcallsoneveryonetopayattentiontoeyehealth.

【点睛】【高分句型1]However,alongwiththiscomesasharpriseofmyopiarateamongteenagersfrom14.5%

of6-year-oldstoover80%ofhighschoolstudents,whichisbecomingaworryingphenomenon.（运用了which弓|

导定语从句）

【高分句型2】WithNationalEyeCaringDayapproaching,ourschoolcallsoneveryonetopayattentiontoeye

health.（运用了with复合结构）

11.（2024.安徽滁州.二模）值母亲节、父亲节来临之际，为弘扬中华传统美德——孝道，中学生英语报社

以“ThePowerofParentalRoleModels”为题，面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇短文投稿，感谢父母“以身为范、

助我成长”。内容要点包括：

1.个人经历；

2.你的感想。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ThePowerofParentalRoleModels

【答案】ThePowerofParentalRoleModels

Asasayinggoes,"'Actionsspeaklouderthanwords."Inourgrowingstage,parentsplayaleadingrole

betterthroughtheirbehaviors,whichwasconfirmedbymypersonalexperience.

Myfatherusedtoblamemefornotconcentratingonmystudywhilehimselfplayingwithhiscellphone

besideme!Itdidnothelpatalluntilonedayhebeganreadingandstudyinghardwithmetogether.

Evidently,parents5actionsaremorepowerfulonourgrowththanoralrequirementsdo.AndIreally

appreciatewhatmyfatherdid.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。值母亲节、父亲节来临之际，为弘扬中华传统美德——孝道，中学生

英语报社以"ThePowerofParentalRoleModels”为题，面向中学生征稿。要求考生写一篇短文投稿，感谢父

母“以身为范、助我成长

【详解】1.词汇积累

证实：confirm一verify

集中于：concentrateon一focuson

明显地：evidently^obviously

真地：really一truly

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Evidently,parents5actionsaremorepowerfulonourgrowththanoralrequirementsdo.

拓展句：Evidently,parents5actionsaremorepowerfulonourgrowththanoralrequirementsdo,whichisgreatly

truetolife.

【点睛】【高分句型l]Inourgrowingstage,parentsplayaleadingrolebetterthroughtheirbehaviors,whichwas

confirmedbymypersonalexperience.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

【高分句型2]Itdidnothelpatalluntilonedayhebeganreadingandstudyinghardwithmetogether.（运用了

until引导时间状语从句）

12.（2024.河北张家口.模拟预测）假定你是李华，为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节，你校英语报设置了

“科技节献策”栏目。请你以“MyProposalfortheScienceandTechnologyFestival”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容

包括：

1.你的献策；

2.献策理由。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

MyProposalfortheScienceandTechnology

Festival_________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】MyProposalfortheScienceandTechnologyFestival

Asagreatfanofscienceandtechnology,Iamexcitedaboutthefestivalapproachingnextmonth.Atthe

festival,Iexpecttoattendlecturesfromoneortwoscientistsfromtopuniversities.Ibelievethestudentswillget

inspirationsfromtheirbrilliantinsightsintofieldslikeAIandbiologicalengineering.Besides,Ibelieveitwillbe

agreatideatoholdanexhibitionofthestudents9projectsandaspeechcontest,whichcangivethestudents

opportunitiestosharetheirpointsofviewonthedevelopmentandsocialvalueofscienceandtechnology.

Iamanticipatingthismeaningfulfestivalandwillbedelightedtobepartofit.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节，学校英语报设置了“科技节献策”

栏目。要求考生以"MyProposalfortheScienceandTechnologyFestival”为题写一篇短文投稿。

【详解】1.词汇积累

激动的：excited-thrilled

接近：approach一drawnear

期望：expect一anticipate

获得：get-gain

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Atthefestival,Iexpecttoattendlecturesfromoneortwoscientistsfromtopuniversities.

拓展句：Atthefestival,whatIexpectistoattendlecturesfromoneortwoscientistsfromtopuniversities.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Besides,Ibelieveitwillbeagreatideatoholdanexhibitionofthestudents*projectsand

aspeechcontest,whichcangivethestudentsopportunitiestosharetheirpointsofviewonthedevelopmentand

socialvalueofscienceandtechnology.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和省略that的宾语从句）

【高分句型2]IbelievethestudentswillgetinspirationsfromtheirbrilliantinsightsintofieldslikeAland

biologicalengineering.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）

13.（2024.辽宁.三模）如今随着生活、学习和工作节奏的加快，很多人容易出现疲劳的状态。请你结合自

己的实际情况，谈谈你应对疲劳的方法。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

HowtoDealwithTiredness

【答案】HowtoDealwithTiredness

Everyonewillexperiencetirednessintheirdailylife.Itisabadfeeling,whichwillaffectusinvariousways.It

canleadtoalackofmotivationandpassion,andevencauseustofeeldepressed.Actually,thereareeffective

waystohelpyoudealwithit.First,whennoticingyouareexperiencingtiredness,findtimetogetagoodnight's

sleep.Youcanalsotakeexercisethatwillreducetiredness.Sometimessimplywalkingaroundyourneighborhood

canbegoodforyou.Inaddition,whenfeelingyourtirednessiscontrollingyou,ifsimportanttoseeadoctorfor

professionalhelp.Inconclusion,dealingwithtirednessisnotsodifficultifyoutreatitincorrectways.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，如今随着生活、学习和工作节奏的加快，很多人容易出现疲劳的状态。

请你结合自己的实际情况，谈谈考生应对疲劳的方法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

影响：affect—influence

各种各样的：various-allkindsof

苦难的：difficult—lough

另夕卜：inaddition一what'smore

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Actually,thereareeffectivewaystohelpyoudealwithit.

拓展句：Actually,thereareeffectivewayswhichcanhelpyoudealwithit.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Itisabadfeeling,whichwillaffectusinvariousways.（运用了which引导的非限制性定

语从句）

[高分句型2]Youcanalsotakeexercisethatwillreducetiredness.（运用了that引导的定语从句）

14.（2024.山西.二模）假定你是李华，你校国际交流中心成立了京剧俱乐部。请你给交换生Jack写一封邮

件，内容包括：

1.发出邀请；

2.参加俱乐部的好处。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【答案】DearJack,

I'mthrilledt