2024届高考英语二轮复习：写作 练习三（含答案）

Exercise1

I.应用文写作（满分15分）

假如你是李华，你校的英国外教Tom最近做了一场关于提高英语听力的讲座。请

你用英文给他回封电子邮件，内容包括：

L表达感谢并简述你的收获；

2.说明你在练习听力中的困惑并寻求帮助。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

DearTom,

Allthebest!

Yours,

LiHua

II.读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写词数应为150左右。

ItwasaSaturdayinJune.Outofa16-year-old'searlysummerboredom,Ihadsetupa

tentinourruralyardandintendedtosleepinit,butIstayedinthehousetofinishwatchinga

movie.Itwasalmostmidnightandmyparentshadbeenasleepupstairsforhourswhen

someoneknockedatthefrontdoor.Itneveroccurredtometoanswerit.

Tomysurprise,itwasagirlaboutmyagewithabloodycutonherfbrehead/aHi.I'm

Maria.Whafswrongwithyou?”Iaskedherwithconcern.Awkwardandembarrassed,she

replied/TmJane.Shehesitatedandthenaskedmecarefully,"MayIstayhereforthe

night?rilbeofftomorrowmorning.99Seeingheruneasiness,Icomfortedher,"Takeiteasy,

Jane.Staywithmetonight.^^Iinvitedherintothehouse.

Lookingaround,Janeappearedtohavecalmeddown.“Letmetreatyourinjuryfirst/91

saidandsheagreed.

Icleanedandbandaged（包扎）herinjuredforeheadandthengavehersomebreadand

bacontoeat.atWanttosleepinmytent?"Iaskedherandshenodded.Havingleftherinthe

bathroom,Iwenttolookforanothersleepingbag.WhenIreturned,Janewasseatedonthe

sofaandsadnesscloudedherface.

Walkingacrossthedarkyard,IaccompaniedJaneintothetent.Welaydownsideby

side.Seizedbycuriosityandconcern,Iconstantlyturnedover,wonderingwhathad

happenedtoherandhowshecamehere.Janeseemedtohavesensedthatandstartedtospeak.

Jane'sfatherdiedofcanceryearsbefore.Hermotherdidoddcleaningjobstoraiseher.

MoneywastightbuthermothertriedtodowhatshecouldtosatisfyJane.Severalweeks

before,Janeaccidentallysawafancywhitedressinthestorewindow,whichshefellinlove

withatfirstsight.Sheexcitedlytoldhermotheraboutthat,whopromisedtobuyitasher

birthdaygift.Fromthenon,Janewaslookingforwardtoit.

Janefs16thbirthdaycamebuthermotherdidn"tgethomeuntiltheevening.

Havingtoldherstory,Janesaidsheregrettedbeinginconsideratetohermother.

Exercise1

I.应用文写作（满分15分）

假定你是李华，你的好友Tom想了解你校下周六将要进行的劳动课。请你给他写

一封电子邮件，内容如下：

L介绍劳动课的内容；

2.邀请他参加；

3.提醒相关事项。

注意：

1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

II.读后续写（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写词数应为150左右。

TheRightThing

Mymotherworkedasahousekeeperandshewasoftengivenusedtoysaswellasmany

othergoodiesbyherclients.MyeldersisterandIalwayslovedsharingtherecycledbooks

andboardgamesbroughthomebymybelovedmom,whichweconsideredgreatgiftslife

presentedus.

Thelong-awaitedChristmasfinallyapproached.OneDecemberday,anoldmodeltoy

cararrivedintheloadofgoods.Itwasaslongasmyforearmandtookbothhandstolift.My

sisterdidn'twantit,soitwasallmine.Iimmediatelysetdowntowipingitcleanand

polishingittoabrightcandy-applered.Itturnedtobeathingofbeauty,andIbecame

oveqoyedatpossessingit.Myeldersisterwasamazedatthenewly-polished,refreshingtoy

car,withahintofregretandenvyinhereyes.

Aswasplanned,ourrelativesfromFrancecametovisitusthatChristmas.Itwasatime

whenthefamilybondgotstrengthened.IsharedtheprizedtoycarwithAlex,myyoung

Frenchcousin.Eyesgluedtoit,hefellinlovewiththewonderful,shinyredautomobilethe

instanthesawit.Itwasararemomenttoseehimfeelingsorelievedandhappy.He'dbeen

unluckysofarinlife,sufferingsevere,life-threateningillnessesasachild,leavinghim

mentallyandphysicallystuckandthefamilystarvedofcash.Ofcourse,suchlovelytoyslike

mydearmodelcarwereunreachabledreamsforhim.

SeeingAlex'sconsumingthrillbroughtbytheredcar,Iwasseizedbyimmensejoyas

welLButcontrarytoAlex'sexcitement,avoiceinsidemeconstantlyreminded,"Watchout!

He'dkeepitforhimself”,whichgotmefaintlyworried.Ifollowedmycousinforfearof

something.

MymotheralsonoticedAlex'sfondnessforthecar.Approachingme,sheaskedgently

inalowvoice,"WouldyouliketogiveittoAlex?"

GivingorkeepinglIstruggledwithmyself._______________________________________

Inthemomentofparting.mymodelcarwentwithAlex.

参考答案

I.DearTom,

Thankyouverymuchindeedforyourwonderfullectureonhowtoimprovelistening.

I'velearntreallyalotfromit.Ihaveovercomethelisteningbarrier.BesidesIcangetthe

mainideaoftheconversation.

However,Iamstillpuzzledbysomedifficultiesinlistening.Forexample,Ifindithard

tofollowthespeedofthespeakerandIalsofeelithardtocontinuelisteningwhenmeeting

withnewwordsandthetopicsIamnotfamiliarwith.WhatcanIdo?Wouldyoupleasegive

mesomeadvice?Iwouldbereallygratefulifyoucouldhelpmeout.

Thankyouverymuchagain.Yourearliestreplywouldbeappreciated.

Allthebest!

Yours,

LiHua

II.Janefsl6thbirthdaycamebuthermotherdidn"tgethomeuntiltheevening.Thirstyforthe

dress,Janegotextremelydisappointedwhenseeinghermotherbackempty-handed.She

stormedoffbeforehermothercouldstopher.Janewalkedangrilyandaimlesslyonlytofind

herselfinanunknownplacehourslater.Worsestill,shefelldowninthedark,hurtingher

forehead.Painfulandhungry,shecametorealisesheshouldn'thavebeensowillful,but

therewasnobodyaroundshecouldturntoforhelp.Soshehadtomoveonuntilshesawthe

lightfromourhouse.

Havingtoldherstory.JanesaidsheregrettedbeinginconsideratetohermotherXkept

comfortingheruntilwefellasleep.WhenDadawokeusandwastoldthewholestorythe

nextmorning,hesaidtoJaneseriously,"It'sdangeroustorunawayfromhome.Yourmother

mustbeanxiousaboutyoursafety.I'lldriveyouhomeimmediately.^^Afteranhour'sride,

wereachedJane'shome,infrontofwhichstoodaworriedwoman.Janerushedoverand

huggedhertightly,sayingtearfully/'Sorry,Mum.99Witnessingthis,DadandIbreathedasigh

ofrelief.

I.DearTom,

I'mdelightedtotellyoualabourclassisscheduledat8:00nextSaturdaymorninginour

school.

Thelabourclassaimstoimprovestudents9skillsinlife,whichhasmanyinteresting

activities,includingplantingtreesorflowers,raisingchicksandhelpingdosomecleaning.

Therefore,Iwouldverymuchliketoinviteyoutojoinus.Ifyoudo,pleasetakesome

necessaryworkingtools,suchasbroomsandgloves.Besides,don'tforgettoarriveatour

schoolontime.

Lookingforwardtoyourcoming!

Yours,

LiHua

II.Givingorkeeping?Istruggledwithmyself.Givingit?HardlycouldIimaginelife

withoutthemodelcar!Afterall,itwasmymostprecioustreasure,whichIhadbeenproudof.

Myheartkeptachinga