2024年新高考英语总复习 英语作文中词汇的升级(上海专用解析版)

考点15英偌作文中词汇的升级

课前热身练

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（2023春上海复旦附中校考）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelow.

假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，学校学生会近日打算策划一次促进学生心理健康的活动，并向全校同学

征集活动方案。请向学生会投稿，给出你的活动创意和如此设计的原因。

注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。

【答案】DearSir/Madam,

IamgladtohearthattheStudentUnionisplanninganactivitytopromotestudents5mentalhealthrecently.

Iamwritingtomakesomesuggestionsofmyown.

Wecanorganizealectureonmentalhealthcounseling.Wecaninvitementalhealtheducationexpertsto

givethemelecturestohelpstudentslearntoexpressthemselvesinanappropriateway,enhancetheirsenseof

gratitude,andunderstandhowtocommunicate.Ithinkthatinthisway,wewillfaceotherswithoptimism,

humorandpositiveattitude,improveinterpersonalcommunicationabilityandestablishapositiveand

harmonious“sunshineattitude”.Besides,wecanconducton-sitepsychologicalcounselingactivities.Provide

on-siteanswerstostudents'psychologicalproblemsandconfusionencounteredindailylifethroughface命ce

consultation.

Ihopemysuggestionswillbehelpfultoyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生向学生会投稿，提出你对促进学生心理健康的活动的创

意并介绍原因。

【详解】1.词汇积累

高兴的：glad—>happy

建议：suggestion一advice

此夕卜：besides一what飞more

有帮助的：helpfid-usefill

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Besides,wecanconducton-sitepsychologicalcounselingactivities.

拓展句：Besides,wecanconducton-sitepsychologicalcounselingactivities,whichcanhelpstudentssolve

existingproblems.

【点睛】【高分句型1]IamgladtohearthattheStudentUnionisplanninganactivitytopromotestudents5

mentalhealthrecently.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

【高分句型2】Ithinkthatinthisway,wewillfaceotherswithoptimism,humorandpositiveattitude,improve

interpersonalcommunicationabilityandestablishapositiveandharmonious"sunshineattitude”.（运用了that

引导的宾语从句）

核心考点梳理

（一）使用万能奉词

万能单词不用并不影响句子，但用上确能给句子增添一点色彩。故每篇文章都可以用一两个，可放句

首或be动词、助动词、情态动词之后，实义动词之前。

词义万能单词例句

毫无疑问undoubtedly；unquestionablyUndoubtedly/Apparently/Undeniably/surely,

显然地obviously；apparentlyextracurricularactivities（apparently）playasignificant

roleinmyphysicalandmentaldevelopment.

不可否认undeniably

一定surely/definitely

（二）使用高级词汇

高级词汇指的是一些实词要用高中词汇书上的词汇或拓展少量四级词汇，而尽量少用初中词汇。故学

生要背熟考纲词汇书，并学会运用，而不是简单的只是认识。此类很多，下面举一些常用的例子：

普通词汇高级词汇例句

grade/score/academicperformancePlayingonlinegamesissuretodrainstudentsoftheirtimeand

markenergy,thusexertinganegativeeffectontheiracademic

performance.

abilitycapacity/capabilityThird,wecanputourmentalcapacityintofullplaybyapplying

whatwe'velearnedtopractice.

enoughadequate/sufficientAlso,ifsnoteworthythatcellphonesonlyserveasameansof

communicationandyouroldcellphonecanalreadyprovideyou

withsufficientfunctions.

likehaveanaffectionforShewasheldindeepaffectionbyallherstudents.

choicealternative/optionAsanalternative,readingbooksorplayingmusicalinstruments

arebeneficialincultivatingstudents9character.

properappropriateToeasetheproblemeffectively,Isuggestthatofficialappealsfor

theawarenessofsavingfoodshouldbemadeatoncetoshift

people'sinappropriateattitudetowardsspendingmoneyand

wastingfood.

governmenttheauthoritiesEffortsfromtheauthoritiesconcernedandthepublicare

concerneddesperatelyneededtostopsuchatrend.

gooddistinguished/brilliant/Bominafamilywheremyfathertakesupthecourseofscientific

outstanding/incredible/research,Idreamedofbeingadistinguishedchemistinmy

spectacular/marvelouschildhood.

pressureburdenNeverhaveagenerationfacedsuchaheavierlearningburden

thanthechildrennowadays.

Toomuchemphasisonstudymayleadtoaheavyburdenon

students,denyingthemchancetoenjoystudying.

variouscomprehensive/Hehasfounditessentialtobearmedwithcomprehensiveskills

extensive/integratedandinsightssothathecanprevailoverotheropponentswhen

huntingforjobs.

necessaryindispensableExtracurricularactivitiesplayanindispensableroleinmy

physicalandmentaldevelopment.

importantvital/significant/Intheprocessofone'sgrowth,family'seducationplaysacritical

criticalrole.

resultconsequenceIt'shightimethatwepaidenoughattentiontothoseproblemsand

thesevereconsequencestheycauseshouldneverbeignored.

greatconsiderable/immenseThankstothedeepfriendship,myshipoflifegotover

enormous/tremendousconsiderabledifficultiesandwentonandon.

Nowadaysstudentsbeartremendouspressurefromnotonlytheir

schoolsandteachersbutalsotheirparents.

veryextraordinarilyAsaSeniorThreestudent,IhavesomewayswhichIfind

extraordinarilyusefultosharewithmypeers.

solvetackle/resolveNotonlycanself-confidencemotivateonetostudyfurtherbut

alsoitenablesonetokeeptryingtoresolvedifficultproblems.

givegrantIhopethecoursecangrantmeanopportunitytoobtainmore

knowledgeofplants,whichwillhelpmefulfillmywishto

explorethesecretsofnature.

developcultivate/fosterSportsenhanceallaspectsofaperson'sphysiologicalwell-being,

andcanalsocultivateaperson'ssenseofteamworkandhis

courageaswell

showdemonstrateSowelldidZhuGuangqiandemonstratetheamazinginitiative

inthepursuitofknowledgethateveryoneofusyoungpeople

shouldfollowhim.

majordominant/primary/Whydoeseducationknownoedges?Firstandforemost,

principaleveryoneisbomwithaburningdesiretohaveaccessto

education,whichIbelieveisthemostdominantinternalreason.

Asaseniorinhighschool,theprimaryfocusshouldbeyour

studies.

realizefulfilfulfilyourambition/potential实现抱负废挥潜力

fulfilanobligation/apromise履行义务辞言

sinceregenuineWiththegenuineencouragementfromparents,childrenwill

growintoconfidentandhealthyadults.

thanksappreciation/gratitudeOnthisspecialdayforteachers,Iwanttoshowmygratitudeto

youfromthebottomofmyheart.

ensureguaranteeSleepshouldbeguaranteedforseniorthreestudents,foritnot

onlykeepsushealthybutalsoenablesustobemoreenergetic

whenstudying.

person/individualThevalueofreadingliesnotonlyinenrichingoneindividual's

personalknowledgebutalsoininspiringthemindsoftheyouthtoshare

theirinnermostfeelings.

communicateinteractWhat'smore,thefeedbackcolumnenablesthestudentsto

interactwiththeeditors,whichmaystimulatetheirinterestand

addtotheirsenseofparticipationinthepaper.

encouragemotivate/inspire/Notonlycanself-confidencemotivateonetostudyfurtherbut

stimulatealsoitenablesonetokeeptryingtosolvedifficultproblems.

hopeprospect/expectation/Frommyperspective,parents5excessivedeedsandprospects

anticipationmayserveasanobstacletothegrowthandoveralldevelopment

ofkids.

don'twanttoreluctant/unwillingReluctantaswearetosayfarewell,rilstilltrymyutmostto

makeitunforgettable.

changereverseAsfarasTmconcerned,allpartiesofthesocietyshalldotheir

partstoreversethesituation.

（三）使用词组

写作能用词组的地方一定要用词组，词组的灵活使用是高分作文的必备条件，所以要多积累和仿写。

普通词汇高级词组例句

mosta/themajorityofTheconceptthatChinesestudentsarelackingin

creativityhasbeenacceptedbythemajorityof

people.

thetheauthoritiesconcernedEffortsfromtheauthoritiesconcernedandthepublic

governmentaredesperatelyneededtostopsuchatrend.

reflectionfoodforthought引人深思的事Laughingattheiruselesseffortsatfirstsight,the

pictureisboundtobringussomefoodfbrthoughtas

werelateittoourownexperience.

replaceasubstituteforIbelievethattochoosethesectionofprofession

planningasasubstitutefbrtheentertainmentsection

willundoubtedlymakeourpapermorewelcome

pursuerelentlesspursuitofknowledgeInhistory,thewaysofeducationebbandflowwiththe

knowledgetimes,butman'srelentlesspursuitofknowledge

remainsthesame,thusmakingeducationapermanent

priorityofalltimes.

inmyopinionfrommypointofview；Frommyperspective,parents9excessivedeedsand

frommyperspectiveprospectsmayserveasanobstacletothegrowthand

overalldevelopmentofkids.

asfbrintermsofIcouldn'thelpmissingmylittlewarmbedathome

asfarassthisconcernedwhilethedormwasabsolutelyfarfromsatisfactoryin

whenitcomestotermsofcomfortandconvenience.

withregardto

isserveasOurschoolEnglishnewspaperservesasaplatform

serveasabarrier/anobstacletoforusstudentstoexchangethoughtsaswellas

serveasaplatform/milestone/improveEnglish.

steppingstone

begood/badhave/leave/imposeasignificant/Playingonlinegamesissuretodrainstudentsoftheir

forpositive/profound/fard-eaching/timeandenergy,thusexertinganegativeimpact

favourable/negative/adverse/on/servingasanobstacletotheiracademic

unfavourableimpactonperformance.

hinderthedevelopmentof

importantlay/put/placegreatemphasisonMoreover,thecoursetakestheformoftour,whichI

attachgreatimportancetobelievecangetmeclosertothereallifeandculturein

playavitalrole/partinBritain,andIregardbroadeningmyhorizonsasmy

giveprioritytofirstpriority,makingthisapproachmoreappealingto

regardsthassb'sfirstpriorityme.

theimportanceofsthcanneverbe

emphasizedmore/ignored

explainaccountforTherearethreereasonsaccountingformyoption.

thankappreciatedoing；Ireallyappreciatehavinggroupactivitiesinclassto

9

extendmysinceregratitudeto；arousestudentsinterestinlearning.

beobligedtosbforsth

havetobeobligedtoGoodmarksastopstudentsmayhave,they'reobliged

toimprovetheiremotionalquality.

getbeavailabletoObv沁usly,ofalltheactivitiesavailabletothe

haveaccesstostudents,themostpopularhobbyisdoingsports,

whichaccountsfor53percent.

consideroaccount/considerationInconclusion,Ihopethatyouwouldgiveasecond

thoughttoyourdecisionandtakemyadviceinto

consideration.

causetrigger；resultin；giveriseto；Avoidunnecessarywastesandtrytorecycle,andthen

contributetosmallbitsofeffortscanresultinahugepositive

change.

trytodosparenoefforttodoIcouldn'thelpthinkingthatitwasmylastArtFestival

endeavourtodoandthatIshouldsparenoefforttoaddabrilliant

makeeveryefforttodotouchtoit.

helpcontributetoFirstandforemost,everyoneshouldbeencouragedto

addabrillianttouchtospeakoutaloud,whichwillcontributetohisfuture

extendahelpinghandstudyandlifetoalargeextent.

usemakegood/fulluseof；Ontheotherhand,thestudentsoughttotake

takeadvantageofadvantageofthisopportunitytowalkaroundor

stretchtheirbodytorescuethemselvesfromthe

intensityofstudybyrelievingtiredness,whichmay

potentiallyimprovetheefficiencyandbenefittheir

healthbothphysicallyandmentally.

influencemakeadifferenceInaword,thewaytheten^ninuteafter-classtimeis

spentleavesmuchtobedesired.Bothteachersand

studentsshouldmanagetochangealittletomakea

difference.

can'tdodeprivesbofBydoingwhatthestudentsaresupposedtodo,the

failtodoparentshavejustdeprivedtheirchildrenofthechance

failuretodotobeindependentandgaintheskilloforganizingtheir

ownlives,whichwillactuallyharmtheirfuturelater

on.

Tobeginwith,onaccountofthesimpleandboring

design,schooluniformsalwaysfailtotriggerthe

interestofstudents.

sbshouldn'tundernocircunstances/bynoOurenvironmentisbeingseriouslyendangeredbythe

meansshouldsboveruseofplasticbagsandbynomeansshouldwe

turnablindeyetothissadphenomenon.

bebusydoingbeoccupiedinWiththeincreasingnumberofcompetitorsandthe

beburiedin/buryoneselfinhigherexpectationfromtheirparents,studentshaveno

choicebuttoburythemselvesincountlesstextbooks

andreferencebooks.

lovebehookedon/beindulgedin/beWhafsmore,studentswhoareindulgedinthevirtue

addictedtoworldtendtobelazyandbereluctanttogobackto

workandstudy.

prepareforpavethewayforOnlybyfulfillingmyinterestcanIlayasolid

layasolidfoundationforfoundationformyfuturedevelopment.

knowgetapicture/anideaofWithhishorizonbroadenedinsocialpractice,a

studentcanacquireknowledgemoreeasilyand

thoroughlyandhecangetanideaofthepractical

valueoftheknowledge,especiallywhenheapplies

whathehaslearnedtosocialpractice.Withoutsocial

practice,whatastudenthaslearnedjustservesasa

gunwithoutbullets.

satisfysbliveuptoone'sexpectationFailuretoliveuptoparents5expectationsand

addictiontothevirtualworldcontributetomental

unhealthy.

reflectionfoodforthought引人深思的事Laughingattheiruselesseffortsatfirstsight,the

pictureisboundtobringussomefoodforthoughtas

werelateittoourownexperience.

replaceasubstituteforIbelievethattochoosethesectionofprofession

planningasasubstitutefortheentertainmentsection

willundoubtedlymakeourpapermorewelcome

sbbelievesbhaveeveryreasontobelieveThusIhaveeveryreasontobelievethatthenew

thatcolumncandefinitelyexertafar^eachinginfluenceon

sbholdafirmbeliefthatusstudentsinourprime,whoaremeanwhileataloss

sbisfullyconvincedthatfacingourfuture.

limitputaninevitablelimitationonThecommunitylibrary'sinnatedeficiencyinthearray

maywellputaninevitablelimitationonthedisplay

ofthepreciousexhibits.

communicateenhancefacetofacesocializationThesolutiontothisproblemcanbemanifold.First,

polishupone'ssocializingskillsyoucanenhancefacetofacesocializationandget

involvedinmoderatephysicalexercisetorelieve

stress.

betterhaveanapparentadvantageoverFirstofall,electronicdictionarieshaveatime-saving

outweighadvantageovertraditionalones.

besuperiorto

focusonconcentrateonPeoplecanchoosetogototheneighborhoodlibraries

concentrationonwhenevertheylikeandthetimetheyspendisfarless,

thusleadingtotheirsatisfactionandconcentrationon

themasterpieces.

stayupbumthemidnightoilFirst,studentsdevotetoomuchtimetosmartphones

andcomputers,whichdirectlyhurtstheireyesaswell

asdrainsuptheirlimitedtime,causingthemtobum

themidnightoil.

remaintobeleave/remainmuchtobedesiredInanutshell,inspiteofthefactthatthesettingupof

improvedtheOptionalCourseofShanghaiDialectremains

muchtobedesired,itwillsurelyprovidethetreasure

withprotection.

stressedimposehugepressureonWecaneasilycomparethemantosomeparents,who

beburdenedwithimposehugepressureontheirchildrenonadaily

basistoforcethemtodowhattheyarenotabletodo.

（四）名词前加形容词

学会在名词前面加高级形容词，下面列举一些常用的形容词。

高级形容词可修饰名词

unbearable/untolerable/unendurablestress/pressure/burden

splendid/magnificent/spectacularscenery/views/landscape

constant/genuineencouragement/support/contribution

enormous/tremendous/immense/remarkable/extraordinaryachievement/endurance/perseverance

excessiveburden/attention/deeds

appealing/beneficial/reasonable/sensibleoption/approach

apparent/obviousadvantage

appropriate/inspiring/optimistic/positiveattitude

brilliant/bright/promisingfuture

adequate/sufficient/plentiful/precioustime/resource

dominant/primary/principalcause/factor/focus/reason

comprehensive/extensive/integrated/overall/alHoundskill/development/understanding

independentlife/thinking/space

permanentdamage

physical/mental/psychologicalhealth/pressure/burden/problem

当堂知识检测

1.学校英文报正在开展以“Protectingoureyestoenjoyabrightworld”为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结

果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：

1.学生近视率状况描述；

2.简单评论；

3.你的建议。

1.词数80左右；

2.短文题目和首句已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Protectingoureyestoenjoyabrightworld

Thehealthofchildren'svisionisfacingagrowingthreat.

Protectingoureyestoenjoyabrightworld

Thehealthofchildren'svisionisfacingagrowingthreat.Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsare

nearsighted.Therateis35.6percentforprimaryschoolstudents,71.1percentforjuniorhighschoolpupilsand

80.5percentforseniorhighschoolstudents.

Theageforthebeginningofshortsightednessisgettingyounger.Meanwhile,thereistherapidprogressionof

shortsightednessduringthemiddleschool.

Totacklethegrowingproblem,schoolsshouldreducetheacademicburdenofstudentsandincreasethetime

ofoutdooractivities.What'smore,weshouldattachimportancetoourvisualhealthandcontrolthetimespenton

electronicdevices.

【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生以“Protectingoureyestoenjoyabrightworld”为题，根据图

表调查结果写一篇短文，简述学生近视率状况，给与评论并提出建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累

解决：tackle一handle/copewith/solve

减少：reduce^decrease/cutdown

重视：attachimportanceto—>takesthseriously/makeaccountof

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsarenearsighted.

拓展句：Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsarenearsighted,whichshouldarouseourattention.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Datashowsthat14.3percentofpre-schoolkidsarenearsighted.（运用了that引导宾语

从句）

【高分句型2]What'smore,weshouldattachimportancetoourvisualhealthandcontrolthetimespenton

electronicdevices.（运用了"spentonelectronicdevices”过去分词作后置定语，修饰名词"thetime"）

2.你校在学生中开展调查，想了解学生对艺术鉴赏ArtAppreciation这门课程是否感兴趣。请写一篇短文，

给你校英文网站投稿，内容包括：

1.描述图表（chart）;

2.试分析产生该结果的原因；

3.你的看法。

AsurveyonArtAppreciation

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

AsurveyonArtAppreciation

Accordingtothechart,moststudentsareveryinterestedinArtAppreciationandthepercentageis67.24per

centofthestudentsfairlylikeit,whileonly9percentdislikeit.

Thereareavarietyofreasonsfortheresult.Forinstance,themulti-mediaapproachtoteachinghasmadeArt

Appreciationclassesinteresting,andstudentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.

Whafsmore,studentsarenowencouragedtolearnit.

Inmyopinion,theresultofthesurveyisagoodbeginning.Sinceartappreciationhasplayedavitalrolein

ourlife,theimportanceofartappreciationcanneverbeover-emphasized.

这门课程是

否感兴趣，内容包括：描述图表、分析产生该结果的原因及你的看法。

【详解】1.词汇积累

各种各样的：avarietyoJvarious

此夕卜：what'smore一besides

结果：result一consequence

重要：importance—*significance

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Forinstance,themultidnediaapproachtoteachinghasmadeArtAppreciationclassesinteresting,and

studentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.

拓展句：Forinstance,whathasmadeArtAppreciationclassesinterestingisthemulti^nediaapproachtoteaching,

andstudentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.

【点睛】【高分句型11Forinstance,themulti-mediaapproachtoteachinghasmadeArtAppreciationclasses

interesting,andstudentscannotonlylearnfromtextbooksbutalsolearnfrommovies.（运用了notonly...but

also…连接的并列句）

【高分句型2]Sinceartappreciationhasplayedavitalroleinourlife,theimportanceofartappreciationcan

neverbeover-emphasize