新高考英语三轮冲刺重难点练习热点04 人物介绍之应用文写作押题（解析版）

热点04人物介绍之应用文写作押题

纵览高考命题思路，2023年全国甲卷应用文写作中考到人物介绍的话题，虽然新高考卷没有出现，但是人物介绍依然是写作的热点话题，人物介绍主要要写该人物是谁，主要贡献是什么，该人物的影响等，所以平常考生要多积累人物介绍的素材，才能在考试中游刃有余。（一）人物简介的写作步骤；(概,貌,育,平,估)1）概.age,sex,birth-place,background2）貌,.)appearance,character3）育,education4）平,bigeventsinhisorherlife(inorderoftime)5）估.evaluation(二)语法，句法高分技巧A.概况（尽量用同位语结构，分词)B．外貌,性格(巧用with做定语)C.教育经历(注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼)D．生平(尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章)E．评估（注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语，词组）典例分析典例分析（2023·浙江丽水·统考期末）假定你是李华，将参加学校举行的以“ThePersonIamEspeciallyMovedby”为主题的英文演讲比赛。请你写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1.人物介绍；2.感动原因；3.对你的影响。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Dearfellowstudents,It’smyprivilegetodeliveraspeechhere.Ofallthemostrespectablepeople,IamespeciallymovedbyZhongNanshan.This85-year-oldmanwithgrayhairworksreallyhard,forthepeople,forthemotherland,forhisresponsibility.HeisoneofChineseheroesvolunteeringmanytimestofightagainstpandemics.Thepictureofhimrestingonthehigh-speedrailseatmadeustouchedandtearful.SuchgreatcontributiondidhemakethathewasawardedtheMedaloftheRepublic.Hisdeedsandspiritdomakeagreatdifferencetome.Thankyou.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为即将参加学校举行的英文演讲比赛写一篇英文演讲稿，主题为“ThePersonIamEspeciallyMovedby”，内容包括：人物介绍；感动原因；对你的影响。【详解】1.词汇积累荣耀：privilege→honor发表演讲：deliveraspeech→makeaspeech祖国：motherland→homeland责任：responsibility→duty2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：This85-year-oldmanwithgrayhairworksreallyhard,forthepeople,forthemotherland,forhisresponsibility.拓展句：This85-year-oldmanwhosehairisgrayworksreallyhard,forthepeople,forthemotherland,forhisresponsibility.【点睛】[高分句型1]HeisoneofChineseheroesvolunteeringmanytimestofightagainstpandemics.(运用了非谓语动词做后置定语)[高分句型2]SuchgreatcontributiondidhemakethathewasawardedtheMedaloftheRepublic.

(运用了倒装句，即在“such…that+句子”句型中，such位于句首，该部分用部分倒装)（建议用时：10分钟/篇）1．（2023上·山东·高三校联考开学考试）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter对中国文学作品感兴趣，来信请你介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品，请你给他写一封e-mail，内容如下：1.介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品；2.说明你喜欢的理由。注意：1、词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dearpeter,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPeter,I’mgladtoknowthatyouareinterestedinChineseclassicworks.NowIamwritingtointroduceSushiandhisworkstoyou.SushilivedinSongDynastyinancientChina.Duringhislife,hecreatedmanyworks,includingpoemsandmanyessays.Ihavereadalotofhisworks,andonepoemcalledOdetoChibiismyfavorite,whichdescribedonebigwarbreakingoutontheYangtzeRiver.IadmireSushiforhisgreatcontributionstotheliteratureandhishighspiritwhenfacingchallenges.Iamsureyouwillalsolikehisworks.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Peter写封e-mail，介绍一位中国古代文学作家及其作品。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的：glad→delighted给……取名：call→name肯定的：sure→certain对……感兴趣：beinterestedin→showinterestin2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Duringhislife,hecreatedmanyworks,includingpoemsandmanyessays.拓展句：Duringhislife,hecreatedmanyworks,whichincludedpoemsandmanyessays.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’mgladtoknowthatyouareinterestedinChineseclassicworks.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Ihavereadalotofhisworks,andonepoemcalledOdetoChibiismyfavorite,whichdescribedonebigwarbreakingoutontheYangtzeRiver.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)2．（2023·浙江金华·统考模拟预测）下周，你将参与你校与英国友好学校举办的“我最喜爱的艺术家”线上交流活动。请你准备一篇英语发言稿。内容包括：1.介绍你最喜爱的艺术家及其代表作；2.说明理由。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearall,Itismypleasuretosharewithyoutodayaboutmyfavoriteartist,VincentvanGogh.VanGoghwasaDutchpost-impressionistpainter,bestknownforhisvividandexpressiveuseofcolor.Oneofhismostfamousworksis“StarryNight”,whichdepictsthenightskyoveravillageinFrance.Theswirlingstarsandboldbrushstrokesmakethepaintingcometolife,conveyingasenseofmovementandemotion.IadmirevanGoghbecauseofhisabilitytoconveyintenseemotionsthroughhisart.Hehadadifficultlife,strugglingwithmentalillnessandpoverty,buthefoundcomfortandmeaninginhispainting.Hisdedicationandpassionforartaretrulyinspiringtome.Thankyouforlistening.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校将与英国友好学校举办的“我最喜爱的艺术家”线上交流活动，要求考生准备一篇英语发言稿，介绍自己最喜爱的艺术家及其代表作，并说明理由。【详解】1.词汇积累乐事：pleasure→enjoyment/delight知名的：known→renowned/famous描绘：depict→portray因为：becauseof→dueto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：VanGoghwasaDutchpost-impressionistpainter,bestknownforhisvividandexpressiveuseofcolor.拓展句：VanGogh,whoisbestknownforhisvividandexpressiveuseofcolor,wasaDutchpost-impressionistpainter.【点睛】[高分句型1]Oneofhismostfamousworksis“StarryNight”,whichdepictsthenightskyoveravillageinFrance.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Theswirlingstarsandboldbrushstrokesmakethepaintingcometolife,conveyingasenseofmovementandemotion.(运用了现在分词作伴随状语)3．（2023上·湖北襄阳·高三校联考期中）假如你是红星中学校报记者李华，请你为中学生英语报社写一篇新闻报道，内容包括：人物王宗源，男，2001年10月24日出生于湖北襄阳事件杭州亚运会获得两枚跳水金牌。六岁前学习体操，游泳，后转跳水，2017年进国家跳水队。曾获2021年东京奥运会男子跳水冠军。个人感想……注意：1．写作字数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AmongtheoutstandingfiguresshiningattheHangzhouAsianGames,WangZongyuanisabsolutelyanimpressiveone,whodemonstratedhisexceptionalpowerandwon2divinggoldmedalsforChina.BornonOctober24th,2001,WangZongyuanspentmostofhischildhoodpracticinggymnasticsinhishometown,Xiangyang,hubeiprovince.Thenhewasdiscoveredasatalenteddiver.Afterjoininginthenationalswimmingteamin2017,WanggothisfirstworldchampioninTokyoOlympicsin2001,whichopenedhisremarkablejourneyintheswimmingworld.NotonlydoesWangZongyuandevotehisownpowertothedivingeventofChina,buthealsosetsagoodexampletotheyoungswimmersinChina.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给中学生英语报社写一篇新闻报道，报道杭州亚运会两枚跳水金牌获得者王宗源的事迹。【详解】1.词汇积累优秀的：outstanding→superb完全地：absolutely→completely表现，显露：demonstrate→show非凡的：remarkable→extraordinary2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：BornonOctober24th,2001,WangZongyuanspentmostofhischildhoodpracticinggymnasticsinhishometown,Xiangyang,hubeiprovince.拓展句：WangZongyuan,whowasbornonOctober24th,2001,spentmostofhischildhoodpracticinggymnasticsinhishometown,Xiangyang,hubeiprovince.【点睛】【高分句型1】AmongtheoutstandingfiguresshiningattheHangzhouAsianGames,WangZongyuanisabsolutelyanimpressiveone,whodemonstratedhisexceptionalpowerandwon2divinggoldmedalsforChina.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)【高分句型2】NotonlydoesWangZongyuandevotehisownpowertothedivingeventofChina,buthealsosetsagoodexampletotheyoungswimmersinChina.(运用了部分倒装句)4．（2023上·山东潍坊·高三统考阶段练习）假定你是李华，你班本周ClassReport的主题是AManofPerseverance。请你写一篇发言稿。内容包括：1.人物事迹简介；2.给你的启示。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Goodmorning,everyone.Today,I’dliketoshareastoryaboutamanofperseverance.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Goodmorning,everyone.Today,I’dliketoshareastoryaboutamanofperseverance.ThomasEdison,thegreatinventor,facednumerousfailuresbeforehisgroundbreakingsuccess.Hemadecountlessattemptstoinventtheelectriclightbulb,experiencingoverathousandfailures.However,insteadofgivingup,hefamouslysaid,“Ihavenotfailed.I’vejustfound10,000waysthatwon’twork.”Histenacityandrefusaltoacceptdefeatultimatelyledhimtosuccess,foreverchangingtheworld.Thisstoryteachesmeavaluablelessonaboutperseverance.Itremindsmethatfailureisnotareasontoquitbutanopportunitytolearnandgrow.Itisthroughpersistencethatwecanovercomeobstaclesandachieveourgoals.Inconclusion,letusrememberthewordsofThomasEdisonandembraceperseveranceinourownlives.Thanksforyourlistening.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生写一篇主题为AManofPerseverance的发言稿参加本周的课堂报告，需简要介绍人物事迹，并分享自己得到的启示。【详解】1.词汇积累无数的：numerous→countless,numberless,innumerable经历：experience→undergo,gothrough放弃：giveup→quit,abandon宝贵的：valuable→precious,treasurable战胜：overcome→conquer,surmount阻碍：obstacle→barrier,impediment实现：achieve→accomplish,obtain2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Histenacityandrefusaltoacceptdefeatultimatelyledhimtosuccess,foreverchangingtheworld.拓展句：Histenacityandrefusaltoacceptdefeatultimatelyledhimtosuccess,whichhasforeverchangedtheworld.【点睛】[高分句型1]Itremindsmethatfailureisnotareasontoquitbutanopportunitytolearnandgrow.(运用了连接词that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Itisthroughpersistencethatwecanovercomeobstaclesandachieveourgoals.(运用了Itis…that…强调句型)5．（2023下·湖北襄阳·高三襄阳市襄州区第一高级中学校考开学考试）进入新时代，我们的身边涌现出了许多青年榜样：如零零后消防员，零零后志愿者等。为了向青年榜样们学习，你校组织了主题为“WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility”的英语征文活动，请你投稿。内容包括：1.青年榜样的突出品质；2.他们对你的影响；3.呼吁年轻人向他们学习。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WeShouldShouldertheResponsibilityNowadays,manyyoungrolemodelshaveemergedinvariousfields:post-00sfirefighters,post-00svolunteers,etc.Theydemonstratetheirbraveryandambition,especially,theirsenseofresponsibility.Theymakemethinkaboutourresponsibility.Asastudent,studyisourpriorityandweshouldshouldertheresponsibilitytocompleteourstudiesseriouslyanddosolidwork.Onlyifweareequippedwithknowledgecanwebetterserveourcountry.Meanwhile,wehavetogrowupwithphysicalandmentalhealth,whichiswhatourbelovedparentsexpect.That’swhyweshouldnotshirkanyresponsibilityofloveandcare.Toconclude,Iappealtoalltheyoungpeopletolearnfromthemandshouldertheresponsibility.【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作，现要求考生写一篇“WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility”英语征文投稿。其内容包括：青年榜样的突出品质、他们对你的影响以及呼吁年轻人向他们学习。【详解】1.词汇积累很多：many→plentyof特别：especially→inparticular考虑：thinkabout→reflecton应该：should→besupposedto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Theymakemethinkaboutourresponsibility.复合句：Whattheydidmademethinkaboutourresponsibility.【点睛】【高分句型1】Onlyifweareequippedwithknowledgecanwebetterserveourcountry.（onlyif放在句首的倒装句）【高分句型2】That’swhyweshouldnotshirkanyresponsibilityofloveandcare.（why引导的表语从句）6．（2023·河北·校联考三模）假定你是李华，受校英文报约稿，请你写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文，刊登在校英文报People专栏，内容包括：1.该人物的生平；2.他的主要事迹；3.你的评价。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:YuanLongping,knownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”,isoneofChina’smostfamousscientists.YuanLongpingwasborninSeptember1930anddiedin2021,aged91.Hecultivatedtheworld’sfirsthigh-yieldinghybridrice,whichhashelpedfeednearlyone-fifthoftheworld’spopulation.AfterfightingChina’sfoodshortages,heturnedhisattentiontoamuchbiggerchallenge,solvingworldhunger.Sincethe1980s,Yuan’steamhasofferedtrainingcoursesindozensofcountriesinAfrica,theAmericasandAsia,providingahugefoodsourceinareaswithhighrisksoffamine.YuanLongping’slegacyisnotonlytheprogressofhybridrice-hiscuriosity,devotion,courage,perseverance,diligence,cooperationandselflessnesshaveleftanindeliblespiritualwealthtousall.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于受校英文报约稿这一情况，写一篇介绍某位名人的英语短文，刊登在校英文报People专栏。【详解】1.词汇积累培育：cultivated→breed提供：offer→provide巨大的：huge→enormous财富：wealth→treasure2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：YuanLongping,knownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”,isoneofChina’smostfamousscientists.拓展句：YuanLongping,whoisknownasthe“fatherofhybridrice”,isoneofChina’smostfamousscientists.【点睛】【高分句型1】Hecultivatedtheworld’sfirsthigh-yieldinghybridrice,whichhashelpedfeednearlyone-fifthoftheworld’spopulation.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Sincethe1980s,Yuan’steamhasofferedtrainingcoursesindozensofcountriesinAfrica,theAmericasandAsia,providingahugefoodsourceinareaswithhighrisksoffamine.（运用了现在分词作状语）7．（2023·湖南邵阳·统考二模）在2022年8月发生的重庆山火和2023年1月发生的泸定地震中涌现出了很多青年逆行者榜样人物：00后消防员，00后志愿者等。你校正在组织“WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility”英语征文活动，请你投稿。内容包括：1．青年榜样的突出品质；2．他们对你的影响；3．呼吁年轻人向他们学习。注意：1．词数80左右；2．参考词汇：00后：post-2000sgeneration／post-00s；3．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:WeShouldShouldertheResponsibilityRecentlymanyyoungrolemodelsemergedinthemountainfireinChongqingandtheLudingearthquake,inwhichpost-00sfirefighters,post-00svolunteersshowedtheirbraveryandambition,especially,theirsenseofresponsibility.Whattheydidmademethinkaboutourresponsibility.Asyoungpeople,wehavetoworkhardtoservethecountry.Asastudent,wehavearesponsibilitytocompleteourstudiesseriouslyandsteadfastly,enduringallkindsofhardship.Weshouldnotescapeanyresponsibilityofloveandcare.Inaword,allofusyoungpeopleshouldlearnfromthemandshoulderourresponsibility.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校组织的以“WeShouldShouldertheResponsibility”为题的英语征文活动投稿，内容包括青年榜样的品质、影响并呼吁学生向他们学习。【详解】1.词汇积累承担，肩负：shoulder→undertake完成：complete→finish忍受：endure→bear总之：inaword→inshort2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Asyoungpeople,wehavetoworkhardtoservethecountry.拓展句：Asyoungpeople,wehavetoworkhardtoservethecountry,whichcanshowourloveforourcountry.【点睛】【高分句型1】Whattheydidmademethinkaboutourresponsibility.(运用了what引导主语从句)【高分句型2】Asastudent,wehavearesponsibilitytocompleteourstudiesseriouslyandsteadfastly,enduringallkindsofhardship.(运用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)8．（2023上·安徽·高三校联考期末）假定你是李华，你们班本周将举行一次英文主题班会，介绍为人类做出突出贡献的人物。请你写一篇短文，内容包括：1.人物简介；2.做出的贡献；3.你的感想。注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TuYouyouTuYouyouisagreatChinesemedicalscientist.Determinedtohelpthosesufferingfrommalaria,TuYouyoudevotedmostofhertimetofindingthecure.Luckily,hereffortspaidoff.In2015,shewasawardedtheNobelPrizeinPhysiologyorMedicinefordiscoveringartemisinin,whichisthekeytothetreatmentofmalaria.Behindhersuccesswerenumerousfailuresandsetbacks,butneverdidshegiveup.Sogreatishercontributiontotheworldthatshehasbecomeanidolofmanypeople,includingme.Inspiredbyherstory,Idecidetostudyhardersoastorealizemydream.【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文，介绍一位为人类做出突出贡献的人物，包括人物简介及其所做贡献并分享自己的感想。【详解】1.词汇积累下定决心的：determined→resolved幸运地：luckily→fortunately努力：effort→endeavor无数的：numerous→countless实现：realize→achieve2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Determinedtohelpthosesufferingfrommalaria,TuYouyoudevotedmostofhertimetofindingthecure.拓展句：Asshewasdeterminedtohelpthosesufferingfrommalaria,TuYouyoudevotedmostofhertimetofindingthecure.【点睛】【高分句型1】In2015,shewasawardedtheNobelPrizeinPhysiologyorMedicinefordiscoveringartemisinin,whichisthekeytothetreatmentofmalaria.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Behindhersuccesswerenumerousfailuresandsetbacks,butneverdidshegiveup.（运用了介词短语置于句首的全部倒装及否定词位于句首的部分倒装）【高分句型3】Sogreatishercontribution