读后续写专练一 高三英语上学期一轮复习专项

续写专练一原文鉴赏Thereisafarmnotfarfromthecoastline.ItbelongstoamancalledTom.Tomcouldn'tdoeverythingbyhimselfonthefarm.Thus,heneededtohireonemantohelphimrunthefarm.However,nooneworkedonhisfarmforlong.Why？Becausetheworkwastootiring.Sincethefarmisnearthesea,thereareoftenstormsfromtheseathatstrikehisfarm.Whenastormcomes,Tomandthemanhehiredhavetogetupquicklyandtrytoreducethelossescausedbythestorm.Therefore,noonelikedworkingthere.Tomhadtolookforpeopletoworkforhimallthetime.Oneday,amancalledHenryreadtheposterthatTomhadputupandthencametohisfarm.“Sir,Icanworkforyou,”saidHenry.TomlookedatHenry.Thisyoungmanwasneitherstrongnortall.“Areyousure?”askedTom.“Yes,sir.Icandotheworkwell.Butyoumustpaymetwicewhatyoupaidothersbefore,”saidthatyoungman.Tomwassurprised.Hedidn'treallybelievesuchamancoulddotheworkwell.Butitwasreallyhardforhim

tofindsomeoneelsetoworkforhim.Atlast,hedecidedtogiveHenryatry.However,beforehiringhim,hesaid,“Canyoureallybeagoodhelper？Theworkonthefarmishardandtiring.Andthereareoftenstorms.”Henrysmiledandsaid,“Don’tworry.Icanbeagoodhelper.You'llsee.Andstormswon'tbeaproblem.Theywon'tevendisturboursleep.Wecansleepverywellevenonstormynights.”AndthenHenrystayedonthefarm.ToTom'sjoy,Henryworkedhardanddidhisworkwell.Itwasobviousthathehadn'tlied.However,onenight,therewasabigstorm.Tomwaswokenupbythestrongwind.Hewasworriedthatthestormwouldcausegreatlossesforhisfarm.Andhesawhishelpernowhere.Paragraph1TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.Paragraph2Tomthoughthehadhiredthewrongman.Why？此处注意衔接尝试概括本文的主旨大意这篇文章主要说的是主人公Tom在靠近海边的地方有一个农场。因为海边暴风雨比较多，当暴风雨来的时候，需要巨大的工作量。Tom雇佣的工人因为受不了繁重的劳动而辞职。后来，Henry来应聘，他提出双倍工资，但是，他很能干，是个好助手。一个风雨交加的晚上，Tom需要Henry一起去防护农场，但是看不到Henry的人影。段首指导语第一段Tom以为Henry在睡觉，第二段Tom认为自己雇佣错了人。思路分析（两段话分别该写什么内容？）Henry在哪儿？做了什么事情会让Tom觉得雇佣错了人？Tom接下来会怎么做？结局是怎样的？范文赏析Paragraph1

TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.Soanxious

washethat

heknockedatthedoorofHenry’sroomviolently.（描写Tom在暴风雨来临的时候，找不到帮手那种焦急的情绪。）ToTom’sastonishment,Henrywasstilllyinginhisbed.（令人意外的情况，与Tom的极其焦虑相比较，Henry好像没事一样。）ItwasextremelyevidentthatHenrydidn’trealizehowseriousthesituationwas.（Henry在这样严重的暴风雨天气还在坦然的睡觉，很明显他没有意识到情况有多么糟糕。）Filledwithrage,Tomshouted,“Getup!Thereisabigstorm.Wemustworkrightnow.”（看到这个场景，Tom更加愤怒）Calmandpeaceful,Henryresponded,“Sir,haveyouforgottenItoldyouthatstormswouldn’tdisturboursleep?Whynotjustgobacktosleep?”（然而，Henry却异常平静，无动于衷。）

Hearingthewords,awidedisappointmenttookholdofTom.(此情此景，留给Tom的只有失望。)Paragraph2Tomthoughthehadhiredthewrongman.Feeling

helpless,herushedouttoworkonhisown.（孤身作战，Tom感到很无力。）Nevertheless,nosoonerhadhegone

outsidethananunexpectedscene

cameintohissight,alltheroofscoveredandallhischicken,horsesandcowssettled.（然而，当他到室外正准备干活时，看到了意外的场景，一切都井然有序。）Tomwasseized

byastrongsenseofrelief,tearsstreamingdownhischeeks.（这种强烈的转折令他如释重负。）ItwasHenrythatdidalltheworkwellinadvance

beforethestormcame.（此时此刻他才明白，原来是Henry早在暴风雨来之前就把农场整理好了。）Herealizedhehadhiredthebestman.（结局皆大欢喜，Tom找到了最好的员工。）TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.Soanxious

washethat

heknockedatthedoorofHenry’sroomviolently.Tom以为Henry一定是正在睡觉。他是如此着急以至于他使劲地敲Henry的门。ToTom’sastonishment,

Henrywasstilllyinginhisbed.

ItwasextremelyevidentthatHenrydidn’trealizehowseriousthesituationwas.令Tom感到吃惊的是,Henry仍躺在床上。很明显,

Henry没有意识到情况多么严重。Filledwithrage,Tomshouted,“Getup!Thereisabigstorm.Wemustworkrightnow.”/reɪdʒ/n.盛怒Tom生气地喊道，起床！有大暴雨，我们必须立刻干活啦。Calmandpeaceful,

Henryresponded,“Sir,

haveyouforgottenItoldyouthatstormswouldn’tdisturboursleep?Whynotjustgobacktosleep?”Henry平静地回答，先生，你忘记我跟你说过的暴风雨不会影响我们的睡眠了吗？为什么不回去睡觉呢？Hearingthewords,

awidedisappointmenttookholdofTom.听到这些话，Tom感到很失望Tom以为Henry一定是正在睡觉。他是如此着急以至于他使劲地敲Henry的门。令Tom感到吃惊的是,Henry仍躺在床上。很明显,

Henry没有意识到情况多么严重。Tom生气地喊道，起床！有大暴雨，我们必须立刻干活啦。Henry平静地回答，先生，你忘记我跟你说过的暴风雨不会影响我们的睡眠了吗？为什么不回去睡觉呢？听到这些话，Tom感到很失望TomthoughtHenrymuststillbesleeping.SoanxiouswashethatheknockedatthedoorofHenry’sroomviolently.ToTom’sastonishment,Henrywasstilllyinginhisbed.ItwasextremelyevidentthatHenrydidn’trealizehowseriousthesituationwas.Filledwithrage,Tomshouted,“Getup!Thereisabigstorm.Wemustworkrightnow.”

Calmandpeaceful,Henryresponded,“Sir,haveyouforgottenItoldyouthatstormswouldn’tdisturboursleep?Whynotjustgobacktosleep?”

Hearingthewords,awidedisappointmenttookholdofTom.Tomthoughthehadhiredthewrongman.Feeling

helpless,herushedouttoworkonhisown.Tom认为他雇错了人。感到无助，他自己冲出去工作。Nevertheless,nosoonerhadhegone

outside

thananunexpectedscenecameintohissight,alltheroofscoveredandallhischicken,horsesandcowssettled.然而，他刚到户外就看到意外的场景，房顶都被遮盖好了，所有的鸡，马和牛都被安置妥当。Tomwasseizedbyastrongsenseofrelief,tearsstreamingdownhischeeks.Tom松了一口气，眼泪流下来ItwasHenrythatdidalltheworkwellinadvancebeforethestormcame.是Henry提前把所有的工作都做好了。Herealizedhehadhiredthebestman.他意识到他雇佣了最好的人。Tom认为他雇错了人。感到无助，他自己冲出去工作。然而，他刚到户外就看到意外的场景，房顶都被遮盖好了，所有的鸡，马和牛都被安置妥当。Tom松了一口气，眼泪流下来。是Henry提前把所有的工作都做好了。他意识到他雇佣了最好的人。Tomthoughthehadhiredthewrongman.Feeling

helpless,herushedouttoworkonhisown.Nevert