应用文类型8：求助信

求助信【试题探究】

假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教MissEvans写一封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:

1.剧情简介;

2.指导内容;

3.商定时间、地点。注意:写作词数应为80左右。Step

1:审题布局人称第一人称、第二人称时态一般现在时和现在完成时要点1.写邮件的目的2.说明求助事项Step

2:巧饰亮点要点1:我写邮件是想就我们改编自课本的一个剧本征求您的意见。①高级词汇:_____________________________________________adaptedfromourtextbook.②高级句式(利用定语从句升级):_________________________________________________________________________________I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplay

I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplaythatwehaveadaptedfromourtextbook.要点2:我们不确定情节是否完整,我们也想知道如何使用适当的语气来完美地说台词。①高级词汇和句式(宾语从句):_________________________________________.Wearealsowondering_____________________________________________.②高级句式(利用notonly...butalso合并两个句子):______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________③高级句式(利用倒装句升级):______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WeareuncertainwhethertheplotiscompletehowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectlyWearenotonlyuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.Notonlyareweuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.Step

3:衔接成篇DearMissEvans,

Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplaythatwehaveadaptedfromourtextbook.

Theplayisabouthowmoneyinfluencestheattitudeofpeopletreatingothers.However,notonlyareweuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.Hopefully,youwouldbesokindastogiveussomeguidance.

Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30a.m.tomorrowintheschooltheater.We’dappreciateitifyoucoulddousafavor.Yours,LiHua【句式储备】1.篇头——开篇表意,请求帮助①Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavortopickupmyuncleattheairport.我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙,到机场接我叔叔。②Wouldyouliketodomeafavortohavemydraftpolished?你愿意帮我润色草稿吗?2.篇中——详细描述,讲清困难①Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonmathslearning?面对上述问题,我渴望得到你的帮助。你能给我一些数学学习建议吗?②Now,Istruggle

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homework.现在,我在学习上很痛苦。我发现由于作业太多,我几乎没时间运动。3.结尾——盼回复,希望得到帮助①Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Iwouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我,我真的很感激。②Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldoffermesomenecessary/timelyhelp(give/lendmesomepractical/valuableadvice).如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助(给我一些实用的/有价值的建议)我会很感激。【拓展训练】

假定你是李华。最近你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“魅力中国”的演讲比赛,请给你的外教Cheslie写一封电子邮件,请她帮助润色你的演讲稿并给予你有关演讲技巧的指导。内容包括:

1.写信原因;

2.你的困惑;

3.请求帮助。注意:

1.写作词数应为80左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearCheslie,

Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearCheslie,

Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.I’llparticipateinanEnglishspeechcontestwiththetitle“CharmingChina”.I’vefinishedmyspeechdraft,butIfinditfarfromsatisfactory.

Firstly,I’mnotsureofsomeproperexpressionsinEnglishandnotawareofthemistakesingrammarandsentencestructures.Wouldyoupleasegothroughtheattachmenttothisemailandthenhelpmecorrectthemistakesandpolishthespeechdraft?Besides,Iamprettynervousaboutthespeech