应用文类型5：告知信

告知信【试题探究】

假定你是晨光中学高三学生李华,你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris写一封信,介绍相关情况,内容包括:

1.成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾等);

2.对活动的感受;

3对自己未来的展望。注意:

1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇:成人礼thecoming-of-ageceremonyStep

1:审题布局人称第一人称为主,第二人称为辅时态一般现在时,一般过去时要点1.介绍成人礼活动内容2.成人礼活动感受Step

2:巧饰亮点要点1:这次的成人礼仪式深深地打动了我们,并且我们从中意识到了责任感始终伴随着我们的成长过程。一般表达:Wearealldeeplymovedbytheceremonyandwerealizethatthesenseofresponsibilityalwaysaccompaniestheprocessofourgrowthfromit.句式升级(定语从句)Wearealldeeplymovedbytheceremony,________________________________________________________________________________________.fromwhichwerealizethatthesenseofresponsibilityalwaysaccompaniestheprocessofourgrowth要点2:我明白了成长的意义。一般表达:________________________________________.句式升级(倒装句)这就是我对成长的理解。________________________________________IhaveunderstoodthemeaningofgrowingupSuchismyunderstandingaboutgrowingup.Step

3:衔接成篇DearChris,

I’msogladtohearfromyou.Inyourlastletter,youshowedgreatinterestinthecoming-of-ageceremonyheldinourschool.Thefollowingisabriefintroductiontotheceremony.

TheceremonywasscheduledonJune8,duringwhichwereviewedthepastevents.Wearealldeeplymovedbytheceremony,fromwhichwerealizethatthesenseofresponsibilityalwaysaccompaniestheprocessofourgrowth.Wearedeterminedtofollowtheexamplesofourexcellentschoolmatesandmakeourselvesusefultothewholesociety.Suchismyunderstandingaboutgrowingup.Whataboutyours?

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【句式储备】1.篇头——开篇表意,说明目的、原因等①Delightedtolearnthatanimportantvolleyballgamewillbelaunchedinourschoolstadium,I’mwritingtoextendmyexcitementandinformyouofsomerelevantinformation.很高兴得知一场重要的排球比赛将在我们学校的体育场举行,我写信是为了表达我的兴奋,并告诉你一些相关的信息。②I’mmorethandelightedtotellyouthataninternationalculturalfestivalistobeheldinmycity.我非常高兴地告知你们国际文化节将在我市举行。2.篇中——详细介绍,告知具体信息①Firstandforemost,thecompetitiontobeheldwillbeginat2p.m.andlastforroughly3hours.首先,比赛将于下午两点开始,持续大约3个小时。②ThenyouwillbetakentotheTeaRoom,whereyoucantastesomefamousChineseteaandwatchperformancesofteaart.有人将你带至茶室,品尝中国名茶、观看茶艺表演。3.结尾——作总结,盼回复①Ihighlyexpecttheexperiencetoberewarding,perfectlymixinglearningandfun.我非常希望这段经历是有益的,将学习和乐趣完美地结合在一起。②Itwouldbeniceifyoucouldprovideabitmoreinformationonthearrangementsofthemeeting.你要能提供更多有关此次会议安排的信息,那将再好不过了。【拓展训练】

假定你是李华,你因故不能参加下周二的音乐会,想把票转赠给你的留学生朋友John。请你给他写一封邮件告知相关情况,内容包括:

1.你不能参加音乐会的理由;

2.音乐会的基本情况;

3.如何获取门票。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DearJohn,

How’severythinggoing?I’vegotthechancetoenjoyaconcert.However,it’saregretthatIhavetogotomeetanhonoredforeignfriendthen.Thus,you’rethefirstpersonIwanttopresenttheticket.

TheconcertwillbeheldinthecityCulturalPlazaat7p.m.nextFriday,lastingtwohours.Somefamousmusiciansfromhomeandabroadwillbeinvitedtoshowtheir