2017中考一模（议论文）【学生版】

第页2019静安一模Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Tobearesponsiblestudent!”（请以“做一个有担当的学生!”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）

（注意：中文不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Situation：新时代的学生都需要有责任意识，无论是在自己家中、在学校或者是在社会上都需要有担当。请你谈谈你的认识，并举例说明你的理解。案例分析：TobearesponsiblestudentInthemodernage,everyonehasasenseofresponsibility.AlthoughIamastudent,Istillshouldberesponsibleforalotofthings.Ithinkthemostmajorthingisourfamilies.MyparentsarethepeoplewhichIcareandlove.Theygivemeawarmhomeandmanyotherconditions.It’snodoubtthatIshouldresponsibleforthem.Forexample,Icanhelpmymomwithhousework,Istudyharderatschool.WhenIgetagoodmark,theywillproudofmeandhaveabigsmileontheirface.Ifnot,theywillbeverydisappointed.Tobearesponsiblestudent,Ishouldnotonlymakemyselfsuccessfulbutalsomakethefamilymoreunitedandmorepeaceful.范文点评：TobearesponsiblestudentCanyouberesponsibleforyourself?Asenseofresponsibilityisvaluable

foragoodstudent.Inmyopinion,first,beingaresponsiblestudentshouldberesponsibleforourselves.Inlaterlife,nomatterwhatdifficultiesweface,weshouldnevergiveup.Then,weshouldberesponsibleforourfamilyandfriends.Itisourdutytoloveourfamilyandfriends.Weshouldkeepourloyaltyandcommitmentinmind,Atlast,weshouldberesponsibleforthesocial.Toberesponsibleforoursocialismeaningtomakecontributionstoit.Showourunselfishdevotiontothecommunity,smileandhelpothers.语言进阶：非谓语做主语beingaresponsiblestudentshouldberesponsibleforourselves动名词做主语，可以表示经常性，习惯性的动作,也可以表示具体的动作比如：paintingishishobby.动名词做主语还可以指经验比如：Drivingintherushhouristiring.It可以在句首做形式主语，动名词短语在后面做真正的主语在下面的句型中，it是形式主语，v-ing形式作真正的主语。

Itisnouse/good/point+doing例如：It’snousearguingwithhim.动名词做主语，谓语动词用单数词典例句：Being

deaf

and

dumb

makes

communication

very

difficult.

装聋作哑使谈话变得非常困难Talking

mends

no

holes．空谈无济于事。练习：-What

do

you

think

made

Lisaangry？-___

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she

lost B.Lost C.Losing D.Belost

翻译巩固：丢了新的自行车使玛丽觉得非常沮丧_______________________________________________________________________________在这里空等是浪费时间，不如早点回家吧。_______________________________________________________________________________抽烟对身体有害，你最好相信医生的话早点戒掉。_______________________________________________________________________________nomatter+疑问词的让步壮语从句nomatter+what等引导的让步状语从句。Nomatter后面接关系代词或关系副词引导状语从句在句中作让步状语。Nomatterwhat(who/whenetc.)...分别表示“无论何事”、“无论何人”、“无论何时”等，这个从句可以置主句之前，也可以置主句之后。

词典例句：Nomatterwhatyoudo,youmustbeverycareful.不管做什么事，你都必须非常细心。Nomatterwhichyouchoose,youwillbesatisfied.不论你选择哪一个，你都会满意的。翻译巩固：不管你如何努力，你都不会成功的。_______________________________________________________________________________无论发生什么，我会一直在你身边_______________________________________________________________________________无论如何，我都不会和他们那种人成为一丘之貉_______________________________________________________________________________keepsb/sthinmind.Keep(sb/sth)inmind记住，铭记用来替换remember例句：When

you

keep

this

in

mind

you

realize

thatall

you

can

control

in

a

dangeroussituation

isyourself.

记住这一点你就能意识到，在危险的情况下你能控制的是你自己Keepinmind

thatyouhavetobehomeby11o'clock.记住，你必须在11点前回家翻译巩固：记住你告诉我的话并不容易。______________________________________________________________________________假如时间能在此刻停留，我会把你放在我心中。______________________________________________________________________________只要你时刻注意方法，每种方案都能成功实现网站布局。______________________________________________________________________________二次修改：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2019长宁一模Writeatleast60wordswiththetitle“Myopiniononhomework”.（以“我对作业的看法”为题写一篇不少于60字的短文。标点符号不占格。）你每天都要完成学科作业，请你谈谈你对作业的看法及建议。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）案例分析：此处添加学生案例范文范文点评：MyopiniononhomeworkDifferentpeopleholddifferentopinionsonhomework.Frommypointofview,homeworkistohelpstudentsreviewwhattheyhavelearnedinclassesaswellasdevelopthehabitofworkingouttheproblemsindependently.Doinghomeworkindifferentwaysmayhavedifferentresults.Somestudentsdotheirhomeworkactivelybyusingeffectivelearningtoolswhileothersmaychoosetodoitwiththehelpoftutorsorevenjustcopyothers.However,thegoalofhomeworkistoteachstudentshowtoplanassignments,organizematerialsandmanagetimeeffectively.Therefore,theimportanceofhomeworkcanneverbetoomuchstressedduringourstudylife.其他观点词组：1)helpusgetreadyfortheexams2)improveourvariousabilitiessuchastheabilityofidentityingpiorities,calculation,3)problem-solvingandsoon.4)ensureenoughstudytime5)worksasatoolofselftestingtoknowhowmuchyouhaveunderstoodatclasses语言进阶1.aswellas aswellas是英语中常用的连接词，使用时常常会出现错误，将其用法作以下简要归纳和说明。练习：Thetournamentisopentoamateursprofessionals. A.that B.aswellas C.which D.thisShetakesprivatepupilsteachinginschool. A.aswellas B.what C.which D.this翻译巩固：护理工作既是职业又是救死扶伤的责任._______________________________________________________________________________这会对于你,接下来要学到的,和明天要做的东西起一个引导作用。_______________________________________________________________________________听听这些描述：,针对那些已经沉浸于《尤利西斯》的人,和那些还在犹豫不决的人。_______________________________________________________________________________2.holddifferentopinionson各抒己见，表达不同意某个观点或者持有不同观点的时候可以使用的固定搭配Differentpeoplehasdifferentopinions.这个句子是不合时宜的，不要使用。词典例句：Differentscholarsholddifferentopinionstowardstherighttoknowthetruth. 学者们对知情权的认知不尽一致。Therearesomepeoplewhoholddifferentopinionsontheenvironmentprotection. 人们对于环境保护的看法不太一样翻译练习：我在这件事上持有不同的观点_______________________________________________________________________________家长对孩子的教育有不同看法_______________________________________________________________________________对是否取消学生回家作业老师们意见分歧_______________________________________________________________________________3.canneverbetoomuchstressed再强调也不为过cannever/nottoo再……也不为过，通常用于强调某一内容，加强语气。从语法上来说，不很难理。实际上，这是一个双重否定句。毫无疑问，never是一个否定用词，从语法和意义上都是如此。too从意义上来说是一个否定用词。所以,实际上这是一个双重否定句。

词典例句Youcanneverbetoocarefulwhiledriving. 你开车时越小心越好.Indeed,youcanneverbetooconcentratedwhenyouareworkingonaminiature. 事实上，当你工作的时候，你在怎么集中精神也不为过。翻译巩固我怎么感谢你也不过分。______________________________________________________________________________我们做实验时越仔细越好。______________________________________________________________________________人民在历史上所起的作用,无论怎样评价都不会过高.______________________________________________________________________________二次修改：__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2019黄浦一模In60to120words,writeaboutthetopic“Itisimportantto…”(以“…很重要”为题，写一篇60到120个词的短文，标点符号不占格)作为一名中学生，你的生活一定很忙碌。目前你觉得什么对你来说很重要？请你结合自己的经历谈谈你的想法，并说明理由。案例分析：It’simportanttosavetrees. Treesareourbestfriends.Wecan’tlivewithoutthem.Theyprovidefoodandsheltersforhumanandanimals.Theyproduceoxygenforusandmakeourcitymorebeautifulandlessnoisy.Treesaresoimportantforus,butwedon’ttakecareofthem.Peoplecutdownsomanytreeseveryyearthattreesbecomefewerandfewer.So,wemustsavethem.Weshouldplantmoretreesandtakecareofthem.Weshouldcutfewertreesandwastelesswood.Inaword,treesareourbestfriendsandveryimportantforus.Ifwedon’tsavethem,wewilldieafterallthetreescutdown.范文点评：Itisimportanttokeepabalancebetweenstudyandplay.Frommypointofview,keepingabalancebetweenstudyandplaydoesmakeadifferencetous.Itisknowntoallthatstudyisimportant,butnowandthen,Ifindithardtosparesomefreetimetorelaxmyself.What’smore,continuousexaminationsstressmealot,whichputsgreatpressureonmymind.Lastbutnotleast,thereisasayinggoesthat‘AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy’.Onlybykeepingabalancebetweenstudyandplaycanwehaveanoveralldevelopment.写作素材论点一ItisimportanttostudyEnglish.论据素材①Withtheglobalizationofthewholeworld,Englishplaysamoreandmoreimportantroleasaninternationallanguageinourdailylife.论据素材②EnglishisaveryusefultooltohelpusgetaccesstothelatestnewsandresearchpapersbecausemostofthemarewritteninEnglish.论点二Itisimportanttoprotectourenvironment.论据素材①Studentscan’tenjoytheirschoollifeunlesstheskyisblueandthewaterisclean.论据素材②Ifwedon’tstarttoprotecttheenvironmentnow,itwillbecomeworseandworse.Weneedtocreateabetterenvironmentforthenextgeneration.语言进阶形式宾语itIfindit+adj.+tofind

it+adj.这里的adj作为宾语it的宾语补足语，补充修饰宾语。词典例句：Ifindithardtoblow-drymyhair

我发现我的头发很难吹干。Willyouchangeplaceswithme?Ifindittoohotinthesun.

你能不能和我调换一下位置？我觉得呆在太阳下面太热。 翻译巩固：1、我觉得很难判断自己的工作如何。_______________________________________________________________________________2、他不是个能与他人沟通的人，所以我感觉和他交流起来很困难。_______________________________________________________________________________3、我发现，手边有几本词典大有好处，这样可以比较它们的选词用字。_______________________________________________________________________________形式主语itItisknowntoallthat…众所周知……It+be+

分词（known）+从句，该句型表示“众所周知”，或“大家都知道”。这样的分词还有有said（据说），reported（据报道），believed（人们相信），known（众所周知），decided（已决定），proved（已证实），thought（认为）,expected（期待）,annouced（宣布）等。词典例句：It

is

known

to

all

that

Shanghai

has

a

modern

and

fashionable

atmosphere.众所周知，上海拥有时尚和现代化的氛围。It

is

known

to

all

that

man

can't

live

without

air

or

water.众所周知，人离开空气或水就不能生存。翻译巩固：1.大家都知道锻炼有益于身体健康。_______________________________________________________________________________2.手机在我们日常生活中变得越来越必要，这已经是一个共识。_________________________________________________