Unit4AGlimpseoftheFutureWriting课件高二下学期英语选择性

Unit

4

A

glimpse

of

the

futureWriting写作技法·情景演练续写科幻故事Ⅰ.技能指导1.写作指南：本单元的写作任务为续写科幻故事，属于读后续写。读后续写需要将阅读与写作紧密结合，同学们在做题时需要阅读一篇文章，然后为文章续写一个合理的结尾。这就要求同学们首先要读懂已有信息，不仅要读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络，了解故事的发展进程、前因后果和人物的情感变化等。科幻故事情节的发展多以时间、地点的转移为线索。续写故事时，要展开丰富的想象，适当构思情节，并把故事情节写得生动有趣，同时要合乎逻辑。此外，续写时，要注意续写内容和原文的衔接。读后续写的写作步骤：（1）仔细审题，了解文章大意，明确写作任务；（2）细读全文，确定文章线索，以便高效快捷地梳理故事情节；（3）精心谋篇，研读续写部分所给出的两段的段首文字，构思段落大意；（4）撰写初稿，运用恰当的人称、时态，并尽可能确保句子结构的多样性和语言的丰富性，但要注意整体语言风格需与前文保持一致，如对话的使用、动作和心理描写等；（5）润色升级，用亮点词汇代替一般词汇，用高级句式代替一般句式；（6）复查定稿，检查语法错误，誊写时，务必做到字迹工整清晰。2.常用表达：（1）To

find

out

what

it

was,

I

stepped

out

of

the

house

and

headed

into

the

dark.为了弄清楚那是什么，我走出屋子，走向黑暗。（2）It

was

then

that

I

realized

I

had

flown

into

space.就在那时，我意识到我飞进了太空。（3）They

spoke

to

me

in

a

language

that

I

couldn't

understand

at

all.他们用一种我完全听不懂的语言对我说话。（4）What

amazed

me

most

was

that...最令我惊讶的是……（5）He

couldn't

believe

his

eyes

when

he

saw

this

miracle.当他看到这个奇迹时，他简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。（6）When

James

came

out

and

spotted

the

box,

his

eyes

widened

in

surprise.当詹姆斯出来看到盒子时，他惊讶地瞪大了眼睛。Ⅱ.情景再现

“Acknowledged,

Detective.

This

is

my...”

He

hung

up

and

told

the

driverless

UNATS

Robotics

car

to

take

him

to

the

railway

station

as

fast

as

it

could,

angry

with

himself

and

with

Ada—whose

middle

name

was

Trouble,

after

all—for

making

him

deal

with

a

robot

before

he'd

had

his

breakfast.

The

name

had

been

his

ex-wife's

idea,something

she'd

insisted

on.

He

hadn't

thought

of

his

ex-wife

in

years.

Well,

months...weeks,

certainly.

She'd

been

a

brilliant

computer

scientist

at

the

UNATS

Robotics

School

at

the

University

of

Toronto.

Now

she

settled

in

Beijing,

where

her

own

research

lab

was

located,

providing

the

kinds

of

software

solutions

for

robot

applications.Hedesiredtowiretap（窃听）her,toreadheremailorlisteninonherphoneconversations.Hecouldhavedonethatwhentheywerestilltogether,butheneverhad.Ifhehad,hewouldhavefoundoutwhatshewasplanning.Hecouldhavetalkedheroutofit.“Andthenwhat,Artie”saidthenagging（唠叨的）voiceinhishead.Hecouldn'tstopherfromchasingherowndream—makingthesmartestrobotintheworld,especiallywiththeirlittledaughterinherbelly.“Shutup!”hetoldthenaggingvoice.注意：续写词数应为150左右。Inafewminutes,hewasatthefrontgateoftherailwaystation.___Thereshewas,standingbyateenagegirlwhohadthesameblueeyesashis.____【审题谋篇】主题科幻故事体裁记叙文人称以第三人称为主时态以一般过去时为主布局1.提取原文关键信息Para.

1-2

Artie

was

going

to

the

railway

station.➝angryPara.

3-5

He

hadn't

thought

of

his

ex-wife

for

weeks

and

wanted

to

know

something

about

her.➝regretfulPara.

6

He

couldn't

stop

his

ex-wife

from

chasing

her

dream.➝upset;

having

mixed

feelings2.分析原文中要解决的矛盾主人公对待前妻梦想的态度。布局3.读续写的段首句，思考续写思路（倒推法）根据第一段首句可知，主人公已到达火车站，

根据原文第三段中的Now

she

settled

in

Beijing,

where

her

own

research

lab

was

located可知，主人公去火车站是要坐火车去北京看望前妻，下一段已经见到了前妻，故第一段应写发生在火车上的故事。依据原文中主人公矛盾的心理，第一段可以围绕主人公的心理描写展开。根据第二段首句可知，第二段应写见面之后的事情。根据原文with

their

little

daughter

in

her

belly并结合第二段首句There

she

was,

standing

by

a

teenage

girl

who

had

the

same

blue

eyes

as

his.可推测这个女孩是主人公的女儿，接下来应主要描写主人公与前妻和女儿见面的场景。续表【词汇储备】1.

___________从……走出来step

out

of2.

_____________________说服某人做某事persuade

sb.

to

do

sth.3.

__________________让某人陷入困境get

sb.

into

trouble4.

______v.追逐，追求chase5.

_______（火车）进站停靠pull

in6.

________（开车）接（某人）pick

up【句型运用】1.

Ada为他打开了门。他急忙走出UNATS机器人车，去赶开往北京的高速列车。___________________________.

He

stepped

out

of

the

UNATS

Robotics

car

hurriedly

to

catch

the

high-speed

train

to

Beijing.Ada

opened

the

door

for

him2.

他的前妻就住在那里。______________________His

ex-wife

lived

there.3.

在旅途中，他不断考虑如何说服前妻放弃她的研究，不过这可能会让她陷入麻烦。During

the

journey,

__________________________________________________________________

but

this

could

get

her

into

trouble.

he

constantly

considered

how

to

persuade

his

ex-wife

to

quit

her

research4.

显然，这不是一项容易的任务，因为她追求她的梦想已经很久了。_____________________________________________________________________Clearly,

it

was

not

an

easy

task,

because

she

had

chased

her

dream

for

ages.5.

火车进站了。他开始寻找他的前妻，她答应过要来接他。The

train

pulled

in.

_________________________________________________________________.

He

began

to

look

for

his

ex-wife,

who

had

promised

to

pick

him

up6.

他立刻就意识到了那个女孩是他的女儿。____________________________________________________He

immediately

recognised

that

the

girl

was

his

daughter.7.

Artie慢慢地走向她们。有那么多话要说，他感到喉咙哽住了。Artie

walked

up

to

them

slowly.

__________________________,

he

felt

a

knot

in

his

throat.With

so

many

words

to

say8.

他看着女儿的眼睛说:“嗨，我可爱的女儿!”

他的声音有些颤抖。_________________________________

and

said,

“Hi,

my

lovely

girl!”

His

voice

was

trembling

slightly.He

looked

into

their

daughter's

eyes9.

爸爸，妈妈什么都告诉我了。你不用再担心我们了。昨天，她成功地制造出了最聪明的机器人。______________________________________________________________________________.

Yesterday,

she

made

the

smartest

robot

successfully.Daddy,

Mommy

has

told

me

everything.

You

don't

need

to

worry

about

us

anymore10.

Artie难以置信地转向前妻。她点了点头:“没有你们的支持，我永远无法实现我的梦想。”Artie

turned

to

his

ex-wife

in

disbelief.

She

nodded,

“_________________________________________________.”I

could

never

achieve

my

dream

without

your

support11.

Artie拥抱了她们两个人，心想:“永远不要阻止追梦者!”_________________________,

thinking

to

himself,“Never

stop

a

dream-chaser!”Artie

hugged

both

of

them【句式升级】1.

用非限制性定语从句合并句1和句2。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ada

opened

the

door

for

him.

He

stepped

out

of

the

UNATS

Robotics

car

hurriedly

to

catch

the

high-speed

train

to

Beijing,

where

his

ex-wife

lived.2.

用which引导的非限制性定语从句改写句3。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________During

the

journey,

he

constantly

considered

how

to

persuade

his

ex-wife

to

quit

her

research,

which

could

get

her

into

trouble.【连句成篇】

将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。

In

a

few

minutes,he

was

at

the

front

gate

of

the

railway

station._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Ada

opened

the

door

for

him.

He

stepped

out

of

the

UNATS

Robotics

car

hurriedly

to

catch

the

high-speed

train

to

Beijing,

where

his

ex-wife

lived.

During

the

journey,

he

constantly

considered

how

to

persuade

his

ex-wife

to

quit

her

research,

which

could

get

her

into

trouble.

Clearly,

it

was

not

an

easy

task,

because

she

had

chased

her

dream

for

ages.

The

train

pulled

in.

He

began

to

look

for

his

ex-wife,

who

had

promised

to

pick

him

up.

There

she

was,standing

by

a

teenage

girl

who

had

the

same

blue

eyes

as

his._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________