2025届高考英语热点精准复习读后续写精彩结尾

2025届高考英语热点精准复习

读后续写精彩结尾题型分析01高考英语读后续写类的考查形式在国内的其他部分省份由来已久，但对于刚进入新高考的考生而言却是一种新的题型。其实对于这类题型我们需要注意的问题是：1、写什么2、怎么写好的开端和结尾是一篇文章获取高分的关键。精彩收尾：画面定格这样的收尾引人入胜，给人无限想象空间，让人回味无穷。考生可以从人物动作的画面和具有特殊寓意的写景画面两个方面定格。1.人物动作的画面定格①Theystoodthereforamoment,sidebyside,waitingfortherushingholidaycurrentandfortheirplaceinit.Thenthedaughterglancedoverandmomentarilyregardedhermother.Andslowly,almostreluctantly,sheplacedherarmwithapparentlyunaccustomedaffectionaroundhermother'sshouldersandgentlyguidedherbackintothedeluge.她们并肩站在那里，等待着节日的浪潮，等待着她们在浪潮中的位置。然后女儿扫了一眼，立刻注视着她的母亲。慢慢地，几乎是不情愿地，带着明显不习惯的爱她把胳膊放在她母亲的肩膀上，轻轻地引导她回到洪水中。②Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora'shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.他的努力得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸针，就冲进前门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。③Thebutterflycleanedhertearsontheface,“No.”Godfeltabitrelievedandsaid,“Tomorrowyoucanbecomehumanagain.”Butsheshookherheadandsaid,“No,Iwanttobeabutterflyfortherestofmylife...”Thenthebutterflywouldstaytogetherwithherloverforever.Onthetopofthemountain,sheseemedtoenjoythesunriseandthesunsethappilywiththem.蝴蝶擦干了脸上的眼泪，说，“不。”上帝松了一口气，说。“明天你就可以变回人类了。”但她摇了摇头说，“不，我想做一辈子蝴蝶...”然后蝴蝶就会永远和她的爱人在一起。在山顶上，她似乎和他们一起快乐地享受着日出和日落2.特殊寓意的写景画面定格①Theskywasabillionpureeyesoflightandthegrassgreenunderfoot,itwasasifnightanddayhadbecomeonebeautifulmoment.Dawnhadcome.天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）②ThecrystalandceruleanwaterwasgentleasIwadedthroughit,thesunsetlikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。（美好日落时的画面）③Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringingforthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblacknessconsumedeverything.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。（描写夜空的画面）④Lookingup,IsawthesunshinebrighterthanIeverknewbefore.Isawatreeinthedistanceglistengentlyasitreflectedthesun'srays.Myconsciousnessebbedawaywiththeheat.ItookafewblinksbeforeIlandedwithathud.抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。（特殊寓意）⑤Kissedbytherainandglistening,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrisesfromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后清新的画面）⑥Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。（雨水来临的画面）⑦TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。（描写落叶的画面）精彩收尾：对话收尾以简单的对话形式结尾，适合记叙文续写，日常、简单又灵活。①Chestersaidhisfathertoldhimhehadtriedtosearchforhimandhisbrother,butbothbrothershadchangedtheirlastnames.”Hedoesremembermeandmyolderbrotherandhetoldmethathe'sbeenlookingforuseversincewelostcontact,”hesaid.ChestersaidhisbrotherhassinceflowntoColombiatobereunitedwithUrreaaswell.Whenaskedhowthereunionwithhisfatherwillchangehislife,Chestersaid,”Igotfamilyeverywhere,soitmightleadtomanymoretripsnow.”Chester说他父亲告诉他，他曾试图寻找他和他哥哥，但两兄弟都改了姓。他说：“他确实记得我和我哥哥，他告诉我，自从我们失去联系，他就一直在找我们，”Chester说他哥哥也飞去哥伦比亚和Urrea团聚了。当被问及与父亲的团聚会如何改变他的生活时，Chester说，“我的家人无处不在，所以现在可能会有更多的出行。”②WhatwasmostfascinatingaboutthereunionisthatShavialsomovesothers.Nina'sfamilyhadmovedtoabiggerapartment.”I'veheardamazingstoriesaboutdogs'loyalty,butIneverimaginedthissortofthingwouldeverhappentome.Evennow,Icanhardlybelievethisdogtraveledsuchalongdistancetofindus,”saidNina,”Iwouldnevergivethiskindoffriendawayagain.Inevergrowtiredofrepeatingthis—animalsarethemostdevotedandlovingcreatures.Theyneedourloveandcare.”这次重聚最吸引人的地方在于，Shavi也打动了其他人。Nina的家人搬到了一个更大的公寓。“我听说过狗狗忠心耿耿的故事，但我从没想过这种事会发生在我身上。即使是现在，我也很难相信这只狗走了这么远的路来找我们，“Nina说，“我再也不会放弃这祥的朋友了。我总是不厌其烦地重复这句话一一动物是最志诚和最可爱的生物。他们需要我们的爱和关心。”③…Theyhungallthethingsbacktothewall.JackaskedPaisley,“Areyoureallywillingtoleadatoughlifewithme？”Shepattedawaytheashesonhandsandlookedatthewallswithloadsofstuffonthemsatisfactorily,saying,”Yes!Forme，itisnotasufferingtolive.”他们把所有的东西都挂回墙上。杰克问佩斯利:“你真的愿意和我一起过难的生活吗?”她拍拍手上的骨灰，满意地看着墙上挂满东西的墙，说“是的！对我来说，活着不是一种痛苦。”精彩收尾：主题升华最后以升华主题结尾，起到总结全文的作用。从故事引出道理，由浅入深，这种写法更高级、更考验考生对短文的理解能力和概括能力。①Everyonehasonepersontheylookuptoasarolemodel.Tomethereisnoneotherthanmymom.Shehasbeauty,brains,andoneofthebestheartsIknow.Withoutherinmylife,IwouldhavenoideawhetherIcanbeafamousdancer.Someday,whenIamolderandhavechildrenofmyown,IhopeIcanbejustasgreataparentasmymom.（母爱的深远影响）每个人都有一个榜样。对我来说，不是别人，正是我妈妈。她很漂亮，很聪明，而且是我认识的最用心的人之一。如果没有她，我不知道我能不能成为一个著名的舞者。有一天，当我长大了，有了自己的孩子，我希望我能成为像我妈妈一样伟大的父（母）亲。②….Iamextremelyunhappyaboutit.Ithinkmoneydoesn'tequalhappiness.Andfreelifestylealsodoesn'tequalhappiness.Therealhappinessisthateveryoneloveseachother,anddoeseverythingusefulforoursociety.Mostofmyclassmatessupportme.Butsomeofthemthinkmoneyiseverything.Inmyopinion,moneycan'ttaketheplaceofeverything,suchasyourlife,yourtimeandyourhappiness.(表达自己的价值观）我对此非常不高兴。我觉得金钱不等于幸福。自由的生活方式也不等于幸福。真正的幸福是每个人都彼此相爱，为我们的社会做一切有益的事情。大多数同学都支持我。但有些人认为钱就是一切。在我看来，金钱不能代替一切，比如你的生活，你的时间和你的幸福。③“Tworeasonsaccountforthatyouwon,”theteacheranswered.”First,you'vealmostmasteredoneofthemostdifficultthrowsinallofjudo.Second,theonlyknowndefenseforthatmoveisforyouropponenttograbyourleftarm.Itisyourbiggestweaknessthatmakesyouwinthematch.Asaproverbsays,‘Everycoinhastwosides.'Makingfulluseofyourstrengthisyourachievement.Pleaserememberthatinnocasewillyougiveupespeciallyintrouble.Godisfairtoeveryone.”(借用名言警句来升华主题）“有两个原因可以解释为什么你赢了，”老师回答。“首先，你几乎掌握了柔道中最难的一个动作。其次，这个动作唯一已知的防御方法，就是让你的对手抓住你的左臂。这是你最大的弱点，让你赢得比赛。正如谚语所说，‘每枚硬币都有两面。'充分利用你的力量就是你的成就。请记住，在任何情况下，你都不要放弃，尤其是遇到麻烦的时候。上帝对每个人都是公平的。”精彩收尾：结尾留白这样的结尾引人入胜，给予读者很大的想象空间，更具有艺术性。①Whileshewrappedthem,ItookadeepbreathandaskedJoy,“Doyouhavedinnerplans?”IexplainedthatI'dliketowaitabitbeforeIwentbacktothehospital–gaveGraceandherhusbandsometimealonewithbaby.“Wouldyoubeinterestedinjoiningmeinabitetoeat?”Iasked.“I'dloveto,”shereplied,hereyessparklinglikediamonds.And,thiswasthebeginningoftheendtomymonthsofheartbreakfollowingBetsy'sdeath.（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间）当她把它们包起来的时候，我深吸了一口气，问Joy：“你晚餐有安排吗?”我解释说我想等一会儿再回医院——让Grace和她丈夫有时间单独和孩子在一起。“你有兴趣和我一起吃点东西吗?”我问。“我很乐意，”她回答，她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。而且，这是我在Betsy死后几个月心碎的结束的开始。②Thebeggarhesitatedforamoment,thenhedecidedtoopenit.Hedeclaredaloud,“Whocares?Hewantedmetohaveitanyway.Imightaswellenjoyitnow.”Withthat,heunwrappedthewhitetissuepaper,buttohissurprise,therewasnohardrockcandyinside.Instead,intohisfingersfellashinywhitepearlworththousandsofdollars.（出于意料的结局，给人惊喜和回味）乞丐犹豫了一会儿，然后决定打开它。他大声宣布:“谁在乎呢？不管怎样，他还是想让我拥有它。我还不如现在就享受呢。”说着，他打开了白色的纸巾，但令他惊讶的是，里面没有硬糖。相反，一颗价值数千美元的闪亮的白珍珠掉进了他的手指里。精彩收尾：首尾呼应首尾呼应的写法在语文写作中也经常使用，不仅能强调主题，引起共鸣，也能使文章结构更加紧密、严禁和自然。①开头：Ihadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,allbecauseofmymother---loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.结尾：Despitemom'sbeingabsent-mindedandforgetful,shewasstillakindandnicemom.②开头：Itwassummerandmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.结尾：NeverhadIhadsuchathrillingyetdangerousvacationbefore.ThespecialtriptotheWildWestwasdeeplyengravedinmymind.③开头：AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.结尾：Whatafunnyday.Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughingwheneverhelookedbackonthishilarious（搞笑的）experience.模拟练习02阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AndyandEricweretwofriendswhooftenplayedtogether.Oneday,ontheirwaybackhomefromschool,theyrodeslowly,talkingaboutthefishingtripthattheyhadplannedforthecomingsummervacation.Whileturningacorner,Andycriedout,“Afightnearthelake!Let’sgotowatch!”“No,”saidEric.“Let’sgohomeandnotgetinvolvedintheirquarrel.Stayawayfromit,orwemaygetintotrouble.What’smore,ourparentsarewaitingforusathomeandIdon’twantthemtoworryaboutme.”“Youareacoward(胆小鬼).”Andylaughedathim.Ericwasalittleannoyed,buthedidn’tsayanything,justridinghomedirectly.Thenextday,hewenttoschoolasusual.However,AndyhadtoldalltheclassthatEricwastootimidtodoanythingbrave.Sothewholeclasslaughedathimalot.Andfromthenon,theylookeddownonEric,unwillingtoplaywithhim.Ericwasverysadbuthedidn’tblameAndyforhisbeingrudetohim,becausehelearnedthattruecourageisshownmostinbearingmisunderstandingwhenitwasnotdeserved,andthatheoughttobeafraidofnothingbutdoingwrong.Therefore,heignoredtheirteasing,studyingevenharder.Whatwasdifferentwasthathehadtogohomealone.Severaldayslater,Andytogetherwithhisnewfriendswasridinghome.Theyweresoabsorbedintheirconversationthattheywereunawareofeverythingelsearoundthem.Suddenly,Andynoticedanunusualbuzzofnoise.Hecametoastopandlookedcuriouslyuptotheheavens.Whathesawshockedandterrifiedhim.Ahugeswarmofbeesfilledtheskylikeablackcloudandthenoisymassseemedtobeheadingangrilytowardsthem.“Bees!”someoneshouted.Theboyswerecaughtingreatpanic.AllofthemexceptAndyrodeasfastaspossibletoescape.Andywastooscaredtomove.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Andystoppedthere,withthebuzzlouderandlouder.Draggingthemselvesoutofthelake,theystruggleduptotheshore.话题：助人篇