高一下学期英语读后续写入门

ContinuationWriting读后续写分值1.读后续写解题的“七三四法则”1)七个“不”

:一不增加_______,二不增加_______情节,三不用过多________,四不用_______结局,五不在文末设置________,六不偏离_________,七不违背__________.2)三个原则:

__________原则：内容要_________、__________,语言表达要__________。

_________原则：故事内容一定要_________，弘扬_________________。如迷路了但最终一定___________；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终____________；吵架了但最后一定_____________；犯错了，最后一定________________；贼逃了，最后一定是____________，等等

__________原则:凡是故事都应有__________，其中人物会____________，但______________。3)四个步骤:

_______全文，_______脉络;_______首句，_______框架;_______细节，________续写;________润色，________誊写。

人物旁支对话负能量悬念主题逻辑常理原文一致正能量曲折性通读理清细读构思增加展开修改整洁正能量前后衔接上下连贯风格一致社会主义核心价值观回到了家成功了言归于好改过自新,重新做人绳之以法跌宕起伏最终能解决遇到困难或问题“5321”模式下的读后续写思维“5321”Method5Reads-Readfor______________________,plot,emotionalchange,conflict,theme3Principalsaction-responseconflict-solutionnegative-positive2Givensentences1Goodending研读文章意识-细节+大意情节推进意识:结局反推情节意识show,don’ttell意识衔接意识主题意识maincharaters阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Onceuponatimetherewasarichmanwholivedinabeautifulcastlenearavillage.Helovedthepeopleinthevillageandtriedtohelpthem.Heplantedbeautifultreesneartheirhousesandmadepicnicsforthechildreninthevillage.EveryChristmas,hegavethemChristmastreesandsomepresents.Butthepeoplewerenotonlyunhappybecausetheywerenotrichliketheirfriendinthecastlebutalsodislikeddoinghardthings.

Forthis,therichmanwasveryworriedandoftenthought,“Nothinggoodcancometoavillagewhosepeopleonlycomplainandexpectotherstosolvetheirproblems.”Oneday,hegotanidea.

Onthatdaythismangotupveryearlyinthemorningandplacedalargestoneintheroadthatledpasttheirhomeandhidabagofgoldcoinsunderthestone.Thenhehidhimselfbehindabigtreeandwaitedtoseewhatwouldhappen.

Thefirstpersondowntheroadwasamilkmanwithhiscart.Hecrashedintothestoneandfelltotheground,spillingthemilkeverywhere.“Whatfoolputthisstonehere?”Heshouted.Hepickedhimselfupandangrilywalkedarounditandwentonhisway.

Afterawhile,agroupofwomencamealong,eachbalancingapotofwateronherhead.Onewomantrippedoverthestoneandherwaterpotwentcrashingtotheground.Shepickedherselfupandlimpedawayintears.Neithershenorherfriendsthoughtaboutmovingthestoneoutoftheroad.

Therichmanwatchedalldayasmanypeoplecomplainedaboutthestone,buthefoundnobodymakinganattempttomoveit.Onthatmoment,herealizedthathowunwillingpeopleweretodohardthings.Hewasindespair.“Istherenooneinthisvillagewhofeelsanyresponsibilitytokeeptheirneighborsformharm?”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1:

Atlastjustatnightfall,therichmansawayoungboycomingalong.____________________________Paragraph2:

Justthen,therichmansteppedoutfrombehindthetree.________________________________________________________“5321”模式5Reads-ReadforMaincharacters,plot,emotionalchange,conflict,theme（1）Maincharacters:

Therichman；Themilkman；A

groupof

women；Ayoungboy

Carefulreading:Characters’analyzing（人物分析）CharacterPersonality/characteristic(特点)Behavior/action（行为）（动作)Feeling/state（情感）/（状态）Therichman

Themilkman

A

groupof

women

Ayoungboy

kind,helpful,responsiblegotanidea,placed,hid,watchedworried,indespair(disappointed)......indifferentcrashed,fell,shouted,picked...up,wentawayangryindifferentcame,balanced,trippedover,picked...up,limpedawayintears,upsetkind,carefulhardworking,responsible...pushed,pulled,lifted,makeallefforts...tired,surprised,happy...(2)plot文章主要情节

Para.1：

_________________________________________

Para.2-3：

_________________________________________

para.4-5：

___________________________________________

para.6：

___________________________________________续写第一段开头：____________________________________

续写第二段开头：_____________________________________

一位富人乐于帮助村里的人，但村里的人还是不开心，因为他们不富有，也不能吃苦。

路过的送奶工和一群女人经过石头，都在抱怨，却没有人愿意移开石头。

村里人只知道抱怨，为此这位富人很担心，于是想出了一个主意：在路上放了块大石头，并在石头下面藏

一袋金币,想测试一下会发生什么.

夜幕降临的时候，富人看见一位年轻男孩走了过来。

就在这时，富人从树后走了出来。

富人很失望，意识到大家是如此的没有责任感。Clueanalyzing（线索分析）(1)“Butthepeoplewerenotonlyunhappybecausetheywerenotrichliketheirfriendinthecastlebutalsodislikedhardthings”.Q：WASthereanypersoninthevillagewhowasnotafraidtodohardthings?(2)“……hidabagofgoldcoinsunderthestone.”Q：Willthegoldcoinsappearinyourcontinuationwriting?（3）“Forthis,therichmanwasveryworriedandoftenthought,“Nothinggoodcancometoavillagewhosepeopleonlycomplainandexpectotherstosolvetheirproblems.”Oneday,hegotanidea.”

Q：Didtherichman’sideawork?Didhesolvetheproblem?

(4)“Atlastjustatnightfall,therichmansawayoungboycomingalong.”

Q：Whodoyouthinkwastheyoungboy?Whatwouldhedo?Howwouldhedoit?

What’shisfeeling?(5)“Justthen,therichmansteppedoutfrombehindthetree.”Q：Whydidtherichmanstepoutfrombehindthetree?Wouldhetalkwiththeboy?Whatwouldtherichmanandtheyoungboysayordo?（3）Readforemotionalchange1.Forthis,therichmanwasveryworriedandoftenthought,“Nothinggoodcancometoavillagewhosepeopleonlycomplainandexpectotherstosolvetheirproblems.”2.Thenhehidhimselfbehindabigtreeandwaitedtoseewhatwouldhappen.

3.Onthatmoment,herealizedthathowunwillingpeopleweretodohardthings.Hewasindespair.“Istherenooneinthisvillagewhofeelsanyresponsibilitytokeeptheirneighborsformharm?”

worried

indespair(disappointed)

expectant/hopefulParagraph1:

Atlastjustatnightfall,therichmansawayoungboycomingalong.____________________________

?Paragraph2:

Justthen,therichmansteppedoutfrombehindthetree._________________________________________________

?(4)ReadforConflictandTheme-Conflict：

冲突

-Theme:

主题

村里人贫穷却不愿吃苦，只知道抱怨，为此这位富人很担心，于是想出了一个主意测试一下村民的责任意识。

个人面对社会等其它问题都应承担责任3Principalsaction-responseconflict-solutionnegative-positive

测试有了结果，面对问题承担责任

村里人贫穷却不愿吃苦，只知道抱怨，为此这位富人很担心，于是想出了一个主意测试一下村民的责任感。“Istherenooneinthisvillagewhofeelsanyresponsibilitytokeeptheirneighborsformharm?””一位小男孩走了过来。--他承担责任了吗？人们不愿承担责任去解决问题，富人很绝望。天黑，路过的年轻男孩搬走了大石头，富人很开心和欣慰。原则2Givensentences(衔接意识)

Atlastjustatnightfall,therichmansawayoungboycomingalong.

根据第一段首句得知，夜幕降临的时候，富人看见一位年轻男孩走了过来。接下来应写他看见石头的时候所作出的行动，再根据第二段的首句，就在这个时候，富人从树后走了出来。可以知道男孩的行动跟前面的路过的人是不一样的----他搬走了石头，发现了金币，小男孩感到很惊讶。

Justthen,therichmansteppedoutfrombehindthetree.

根据第二段首句可知：就在这个时候，富人从树后走了出来。富人应该是高度表扬小男孩的行为，告诉他这是一个测试，只有年轻男孩勇于承担责任，所以这一袋金子作为对他的奖励。1Goodending(主题意识)

面对问题要勇于承担责任去解决问题。第一段首句后的衔接句：____________________________________________________________________________________写好三个衔接句第一段尾句(须与第二段首句衔接)：____________________________________________Hewasthesonofalocalfarmer.Hehadbeenworkingalldayandwasverytired.Finallyhesucceededinmovingthestonetothesideoftheroad,buttohissurprise,therewasabagfullofgoldcoinsunderthestone!Hewaswondering,“Whosebagcanitbe?”第二段首句后的衔接句：________________________________________________________________________________________“oh,sir”theboysaideagerly,“doesthisgoldbelongtoyou?Ifnot,wesurelymustfindtheowner,forhewillcertainlymissit.”检查优化，整洁誊写Paragraph1：

Atlastjustatnightfall,therichmansawayoungboycomingalong.

Hewasthesonofalocalfarmer.Hehadbeenworkingallday