读后续写-离家出走的小女孩 高一下学期英语作文复习专项

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读后续写25分，提供一段350词左右的语言材料(多为故事类文章或夹叙夹议类文章)，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写，为其补充一篇150词左右，与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节合理和结构完整的短文。高考题型概述评分标准读后续写5大步骤（3读＋2写）Step1:Readforthebasicinformation

(when,where,who,what,how,why)Step2:ReadforthemainplotandthemeStep3:ReadforthelanguageStep4:Inferthe

development(theplot,thegiventwosentences)Step5:Continue

andpolishthestory(therequirementsandcriteria)读基本信息读主要情节,找隐含主题

读文章所用语言特点、写作风格根据续写段落开头，推断故事发展走向(紧扣主题)完成续写(根据要求)＋润色(根据评分标准)写作注意coherent连贯一致logical合乎逻辑positive积极向上Who

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Jenny,hermother,thesellerOneafternoonInthehouse,inthestreetJennyranoutofthehouse.Jennyhadaquarrelwithhermother.Jennydecidedtomakeanapologytohermother.步骤1Readforinformation(读基本信息)步骤2Readfortheplot&theme(读主要情节＋主题)ThesellergaveherabowlofnoodleswhenJennywashungry.DevelopmentBeginningOneafternoon,Jennyhadaquarrelwithhermotherandranoutofthehouse.Theseller’swordsremindedJennyofwhathermotherhaddone.

Climax?EndingFinally,Jennyfeltregretfulanddecidedtomakeanapology.Laterdevelopment1._______

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angrydissatisfiedregretful4.___________

grateful步骤4Inferthedevelopment（根据续写段落开头，推断故事发展走向）细读首句，构思框架由第一段首句Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.可知，Jenny应该是鼓起勇气回家，但从第二段首句Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback来看，“轻轻碰她的头发”的应是母亲，因为人物就三个，续写中一般不要随意出现一个新的人物，除非情节发展需要。“思绪回来”说明第一段中，Jenny回家没见到母亲，在回忆跟母亲吵架的事，或在回忆母亲多年的关爱；第二段才出现母亲，第一段应是母亲不在家，那么母亲去哪里了呢？联系现实生活，女儿出走，母亲应该找她女儿去了。增加细节，开始写作第一段：鼓足勇气，推门进屋→母亲外出，不知去向→累而难过，坐在沙发上→回忆过往，自感羞愧。步骤5Continueandpolishthestory完成续写(根据要求)＋润色(根据评分标准）Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Whenshepushedthedooropenandenteredthehouse,shefoundhermotherwasnotin.Tiredandsad,shesatonthesofa.“Wherecouldmymotherbe?”shewondered,“Isshestillangrywithme?”Thesceneoftheirquarrelresurfacedinhermindoncemore.Sherecalledherrudenesstohermother.Realizingthatallthescoldingfromhermotherwasduetothefactthathermotherreallycaredalotabouther,shefeltratherashamed,andtearsbegantorolldownhercheeks.第二段的框架，由第二段首句与正能量结尾来确定。故事内容一定要传递正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。因此，本文的结尾，应是母女和好。第二段的故事框架是，母亲回来，Jenny道歉，母亲原谅，母女和好。第二段：抬头一望，看见母亲→到处找你，你在这里→母亲虽累，却松了口气→扑入怀里，道歉致谢→母亲听后，感到欣慰。Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.Sheraisedherheadandsawthefamiliarfaceofhermother.“Hereyoucome!I’vebeenlookingforyou,”hermothersaid,tiredandrelieved.Jennycouldn’thelpthrowingherselfintohermother’sarms.“Mom,I’mreallysorryandthan