读后续写 惊魂一刻：家有灵鹉救危急 讲义 高二下学期第二次质量监测英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。MeaganandherclosefriendSamantha,bothschoolteachers,livedtogetherinan

apartmentinDenver.OnmorningswhenSamanthahadclass,Meaganwouldhelpto

watchher2-year-olddaughter,Hannah.AlsopartofthehouseholdwasMeagan’spet,

Willie,aparticularlyintelligentandchattyparrot.Williewasindeedfunnyandagoodtalker.Inadditiontosomevocabularylearned

fromMeagan,hebecameagreatmimic(会模仿的动物)ofcats,dogs,andchickens.

Plus,hecouldsingalongtotheradio.Thebirdwasaniceplaymateforthelittlegirl,

andhealwaysknewhowtoliftherspirits.Thebirdwasmorethanjustapet;hewasa

memberofthefamily.Oneday,withSamanthaatschool,HannahhadcomfortablypositionedherselfinfrontofmorningcartoonswhileMeaganwasbusycookinginthekitchen,preparingthe

littlegirlherfavoritebreakfasttreat,anapplepie.WhenMeaganwasdonebakingtheapplepie,sheplaceditatthecenterofthekitchentabletocool.ShelookedatHannahand,confidentthechildwasfullyengagedwiththeTV,walkedoutofthekitchen

quicklytousethebathroom.Meaganwasgonemaybe30seconds.Andsuddenly,sheheardthebirdgoingcrazy,

screamingloudly.Sheheardtwoverydistinctwordsfromtheparrot’smouth.“Mama!

Baby!”Repeatedoverandoveragain.“Mama!Baby!Mama!Baby!”MeaganranoutofthebathroomtofindHannahinthekitchen,holdingthepartlyeatenapplepie,fightingforbreath,herfaceandlipsaterrifyingshadeofblue.And

Williewasstillscreamingloudly.Hannahhadclimbeduponachair,gottentheapple

piefromthekitchentableandwasclearlychokingonit.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Withapoundingheart,MeagangrabbedHannahimmediately.

Aroundlunchtime,Samanthacamebackfromschool.

文章大意：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了梅根和她的好朋友萨曼莎都是学校老师，他们一起住在丹佛的一间公寓里。早上萨曼莎上课的时候，梅根会帮忙照看她两岁的女儿汉娜。家里还有梅根的宠物威利，一只特别聪明、健谈的鹦鹉。这天威利在家突然大叫，梅根发现女儿被苹果派噎住了，多亏了威利的及时呼救，梅根救回了小女孩。伏笔和续写中的回应主要体现在以下几个方面：伏笔一：Willietheparrotisdescribedasaparticularlyintelligentandchattypetwhocanmimicvariousanimalsandsingalongtotheradio,andisaniceplaymateforHannah.回应：WhenHannahischoking,WilliealertsMeaganbyscreaming"Mama!Baby!"repeatedly,showinghisroleasalifesaver.伏笔二：MeaganleavesHannahwatchingcartoons,assumingsheisfullyengagedandsafewhileshequicklyusesthebathroom.回应：ThisassumptionleadstoadangeroussituationwhereHannahchokesontheapplepie,highlightingtheimportanceofconstantsupervision.伏笔三：TheapplepieisdescribedasHannah'sfavoritebreakfasttreat,andMeaganplacesitonthekitchentabletocool.回应：TheplacementofthepiewithinreachleadstoHannahclimbingupandtakingapiece,resultinginthechokingincident.伏笔四：Meagan'squickexittousethebathroomwhenshebelievesHannahissafelyoccupied.回应：HerquickreturnuponhearingWillie'scriesallowshertosaveHannahjustintime,showingthecriticalroleoftimelyintervention.伏笔五：Theinitialdescriptionoftheharmonioushouseholdsettingupasenseofsecurityandnormalcy.回应：Thesuddenemergencydisruptsthissenseofsecurity,emphasizingtheunpredictabilityoflifeandtheimportanceofpreparedness.主题：The续写部分回应了原文中的伏笔，展示了Meagan'squickthinkingandtheparrot'salertnessthattogetheravertedatragedy,reinforcingthethemeofthestoryabouttheimportanceofvigilanceandtheunexpectedheroismwithinafamilysetting.【详解】段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“梅根的心怦怦直跳，她立刻抓住了汉娜。”可知，第一段可描写梅根给女儿施救的经过以及鹦鹉终于安静下来。②由第二段首句内容“午餐时间左右，萨曼莎从学校回来了。”可知，第二段可描写梅根向萨曼莎讲述了汉娜的遭遇，以及威利是如何提醒汉娜遇到危险，从而救了她的命。2.续写线索:抓住汉娜实施急救女儿恢复正常鹦鹉平静下来对萨曼莎讲述经过对鹦鹉感激。OnePossibleVersionWithapoundingheart,MeagangrabbedHannahimmediately.Shebeganperformingfirst

aidtohelpthechokinggirl.AfterafewpushestoHannah’schest,asmallpieceofapplepieflew

outofhermouth,andshestartedbreathingnormallyagain.Herfaceandlipsreturnedtotheir

normalcolorfromtheterribleblue.AsHannahwasbroughtbacktosafety,Willie,theparrot,

finallyquieteddown.Overcomewithrelief,Meaganburstintotears.AftermakingsurethatHannahwasokay,Meagansatdownwithherandgaveherabighug.SheexplainedtoHannah

howimportantitwastochewherfoodproperly.Hannahlistenedattentively,stillalittleshaken

upfromtheincident.Aroundlunchtime,Samanthacamebackfromschool.

MeagantoldSamanthaaboutwhathad

happenedwithHannahandhowWilliehadsavedthegirl’slifebyalertinghertothedanger.

Samanthawasinshockbutgratefulthateverythingturnedoutokay.ShehuggedHannahand

strokedherback,murmuring,“It’salrightnow,sweetie.”Theyknewthattheyowedadebtof

gratitudetothechattybirdwhohadbecomesuchanimportantmemberoftheirhousehold.From

thatdayon,theywereevenmoreappreciativeofWillie’spresence.Theparrotnotonlybecamea

playmateforHannah,butalsoahero.下水文：Withapoundingheart,MeagangrabbedHannahimmediately.Timeseemedtoslowdownaspanicsetin.SherememberedthefirstaidcourseshehadtakenandbegantoperformtheHeimlichmaneuverwithallherstrength.Thefirstthrustwasforceful,andtoherimmenserelief,apieceofapplepieshotoutofHannah'smouth.Thelittlegirlgaspedforair,herfacegraduallyreturningtoitshealthypinkhue.MeaganfeltarushofgratitudetowardsWillie,theparrot,whosescreamshadalertedhertotheemergency.ShehuggedHannahtightly,tearsstreamingdownherface,feelingboththeweightofthescareandtheoverwhelmingreliefthatherquickactionshadsavedthechild.Aroundlunchtime,