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Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationship.Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationship.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?1分yes,thetruthisthemostimportantinarelationshipbecauseeachpersonhopethatthepeoplethatlovetalkwiththetrue.Thesentimentalrelationshipneedbuildingontruthyetthatwithouthisdead.Thetruthforbadorhardisbetterthatthousandofliedthatifeelbetter.3分Itdepensonthecase,formetherearecerteanlevelsoftruth,thetotalandpartial.Formethetotaltruthisallwaysthebestwaytosolveaproblem,ifthereisasolution.Byhavingalltheelementsapersoncanhaveallideaofwhattodo.Forexample,ifsomeoneisonatrialyouhavetotellyoulayeralltheinformationinordertowinoratlistthefightwell,ifnotthepersoncanwillcomewithdiferentstoresbyexcludinginformation.Nowtellingapartialtruthyouaretriyngtohelpthepeoplewithouthurtingthem,forexample,whenafriendaskusifsheisfat,andsheactiallyweigths90kilos,youwontanswer,yesyouareasfatasacow,bewcauseyouwillbreakherfillings,soyoujustneedtobesutilandfriendle,andresponderherthat,itisntsomethingthatitcannotbefixed,andyoucanprobablieofferherhelp.Bypresentingmyargumentsthebestwaytokeeparelationshipbetweenpersonsistothinkwhatkindoftruthareyougoingtochooseandafterthatyouhavetothingtherightwordstoexpressthatinformationthatyouaregongtosay5分Whenwewerechildren,weweretaughttotelltruth.Tellingtruthandbeinghonestalsobecomethecriteriaofjudgingaperson.Idothinkthatmostpeopleprefertoliveinaworldofpuretruthanditisalsothebestwishofallkindheartedpeople.However,whatwehavetofaceisnotthedreamland.Tellingtruthallthetimecouldonlyexistinourdreams.Inanotherword,liescouldnotbeavoided.Iwillillustratemyopinionwiththefollowingfacts.Inthebusinessworld,alwaystellingtruthequalstocommitsuicide.Forexample,whencompetitorcompanyisaskingthecontentofatenderorthecostofamajorproduct,tellingtruthisnonsense.Furthermore,wecouldlearnfromoldcolleguethattokeepthebusinesssecreteistokeeptheposition.Forthosepeoplewhoseprofessionispolitics,liesistheirfavoritelanguage.Inordertostablizethemoodofanxciouspeople,sometimespresidenthastotellliestocomfortthepeolplesothatnomoreseriousresultwillhapen.Amongfriends,allwaystellingtruthwillalsocauselotsofavoidableconfllicts.Forexample,whena49yearsoldladyaskherfroendwhethersheisbeautifulornot.IftheanswerisNo(truthforsure).Wecouldimaginetheaccompaniedresults.Thisiswhyweareusingthetermwhitelietofindthesuitablereasontouseminorlies.However,despiteallthesedifficulties,weshouldalwaystrytobehonestandtelltruthasmuchaswecould.Inlotsofsituation,totelltruthcanstrengthentherelationshipanddeepenthecommunicationandunderstandingamongpeople.Especiallyamongfamilymemers,tellingtruthisquitenecessaryforeveryone.Afamilyfullofliewillbankruptimmediately.Inaword,indifferentsituation,weshouldtelldifferentwords.7分Idisagreewiththestatementabove.AlthoughIadmitthathonestyshouldbeoneofthemostimportantconsiderationinhumanrelationship,sometimeswhite-liesareneccessarynottodamagetherelationship.First,itisnotgoodtotellsomeonehisorherfaultsordefectsdirectly.Bydoingso,youmightfeelgoodabouttellingthetruth,butitcouldhurtthepeoplewhowilllisten.Itisnaturlthatpeoplemakemistakesandnoteveryoneisperfect.Despitethoseshortcomings,welivetogetherbyunderstandingeachotherandtoleratethoseerrorsaswecouldbetheonewhomakesthesamemistakesnexttime.Bybeingpointedoutourmistakesorthingsotherpeoplethinkabominable,suchasthewaywelook,theclotheswewear,thewaywetalkandsoon,wemighthatethepersonwhocriticizeusratherthanbeingthankfulorcorrectingthose.Second,itisbetternottotellsomeoneseriousfactsthatcanpossiblydiscouragehimorher.Ispeakthisfrommyexperience.Aboutoneyearago,mynephewgotintoaterriblecaraccidentandthedoctorsaidhewon’tbeabletowalkagain.Wewereallshockedandfeltdesprate.However,myothernephewsdecidednottotellthefacttotheirmotherasshecouldpassofforbeshockedtogenerateotherproblemsofherown.Ifeltguiltyaboutnottellingthetruthtoher,whowasrelievedandbecamehopefulbythewhite-liesthathersonwouldbeokay.Oneyearsince,mynephewisgettingbetterandhismotherhasbeenagoodsupporter.Ifwehadtoldherthetruth,shewouldhavebeensodesparatethatshecouldn’thavetakengoodcareofhersonandherownhealthwouldhavebeenindanger.Allinall,eventhoughhonestyisobviouslygreatvirtue,“alwaystellingthetruth”isnotthekeytomaintaininggoodhumanrelationship.Byrefrainingfromtellingthetruthincertainoccasions,wepreventotherpeoplefrombeinghurtbytheremarks.8分Thetraditionalvirtueoftellingthetruthinallsituationsisincreasinglydoubtedbymanyintoday’sworld.Manybelievethattellingthetruthisnotalwaysthebestpolicywhendealingwithpeople.Moreover,thelineofa“truth”isbecomingvaguer.Thisessaywillexploretheimportanceoftellingthetruthinrelationshipsbetweenpeople.Weallunderstandthatoftenthetruthisoffendingandmaynotbeaverynicethingtobothhearorsay.Liesorwhiteliesoftenhavetheiradvantages.Themanipulationofwhiteliesisthemostobviousthebusinessworld.Howmanytimeshaveweheardthatsomeproductis“thefinest”or“thecheapest”?Howmanytimeshaveweheardthatproductshavesuchandsuch“magicalfunctions”?Advertisingisaboutpersuasion,andmanywouldagreethatifacompanyistotelltheabsolutetruthaboutitsproducts,noonewouldbeinterestedinevenhavingalookattheproducts.Thesamelogicappliestohumanrelationships.Ifyourfriendhadwornanewlypurchaseddressonherbirthdayandenergeticallyaskedyouifitwasaworthybuy,wouldyoufreelyexpressyouropinionthatyouhadneverseenadressastheoneshe’scurrentlywearing?Andspoilherbirthday?Unarguably,hiding(entirelyorparticially)thetruthinsomesituationscanbequitehandyindeed.Confrontationsanddisputescanseeminglybeavoided.However,thereisalwaystheriskfactorofthetruthemergingsoonerorlaterwhentellinganuntruth.thebasictrustinanyrelationships(businessman/customer,friends,parents/children)willbeblotched,andwouldhaveanimpactonthefuturerelationshipbetweenbothparties.Thestoryofthe“theboywhocriedwolf”fullyillustratestheconsequencesoftellinguntruths.Noonewillbelieveyouwhenyou’retellingthetruth.Yourwordwillhavenoweighting.Inaddition,another“badfactor”oftellinguntruthsisthatyouhaveabsolutelynocontroloverwhenthetruth(ofpreviousuntruths)willemerge.Untruthsbreedpaininbothparties:tearswhenthetruthisuncoveredafteraperiodoftime;fearandtheburdenofsharinga“secret”.inthelongrun,itseemsthathidingthetruthisnotbeneficialtoeitherparty.Everyonehatesbetrayal.evenifitisthetrendtooccasionallyhidethetruthinrelationships,itisstronglyrecommendedthatnottofollowthattrendastheriskandtheconsequencesofthetruthunfoldedoverwhelmstheminimaladvantagesonecanderivefromnottellingthetruth.Afterall,itisunderstoodthatrelationshipsarefoundedon“trust”whichgoeshandinhandwith“truth”.Indeedtellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.Always.Advertisinginfluencespeople’sbehaviorinanegativeway.Advertisinginfluencespeople’sbehaviorinanegativeway.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?ResponseA

Peopleseealotofadvertisinginnewspapersandmagazines,onsigns,andontelevision.Todaypeopleevenseeadsinthemovietheater!Allofthisadvertisinginfluencespeople’sbehaviorinanegativeway.Itinfluenceshowpeoplespendtheirmoney,howtheylookatthemselves,andhowtheycommunicatewithotherpeople.

Advertisinginfluenceshowpeoplespendtheirmoney.Peoplesometimesbuythingstheycan’taffordordon’tneed.Ireadastoryofafamilythatboughtacomputerfortheirchildren,buttheywerelivinginatent.Theydidn’tevenhaveelectricityforthecomputer.Peoplespendtoomuchbecausetheyhavetobebetterthaneveryoneelse.Inmycountry,weddingsareabigindustry,andfamiliesspendtoomuchmoneybecauseofadvertising.Thisisanegativeinfluenceofadvertising.

Advertisingaffectshowpeopleviewthemselves.Sometimesitmakespeoplefeelbadiftheycan’tbuysomething.Forexample,alotofsportsandmoviestarsadvertiseshoes,clothes,andsoon.Childrenseethisontelevisionandpressuretheirparentstobuyit.Therearealotofcrimesbecauseteenagerskilltogetdesignerjackets.Advertisingmakesthemfeelliketheyarenobodywithoutdesignerclothes.Also,teenagersstarttosmokebecausetheythinkthislookscool.Moreover,somegirlswanttobethinlikegirlsintheads.

Finally,advertisingchangespeople’scommunication.Ihearalotoflittlechildrensayingthephrasestheyhearontelevision.Theyalsosingthesongsfromthecommercials.Also,advertisinginfluencesspelling.Ihaveseen“night”spelledlike“nite.”Therefore,advertisinghasanegativeeffectsonthewaysthatpeoplespeakandwriteEnglish.

Advertisinghasalotofgoodpoints.Itisawaytosellthingsinacapitalistcountry.However,therearealsoalotofbadinfluencesonpeople’sbehaviorbecauseofadvertising.

ResponseB

Advertisingisalargepartofourculture,soofcourseadvertisinginfluencespeople’sbehavior.ButIdisagreewiththestatement,advertisinginfluencesbehaviorinanegativeway.Onthecontrary,Ithinktheeffectofadvertisingispositiveforsociety.

Oneeffectofadvertisingisawayforpeopletolearnaboutnewproductstobuy.Welearnaboutnewtypesofproductsandservicebyseeingitontelevision.Forexample,IlearnedaboutaspecialpriceforatraveltoFloridafromadvertisingontelevision.ThishadapositiveeffectonmybehaviorbecauseIcouldenjoyedabeautifulweekinFlorida.OtherthingsIlearnedareanewrestaurantofhealthfood,amovie,andplacesforautomobileservice.Alltheseadvertisinghadapositiveeffectofhelpingmehaveabetterlife.

Anothereffectofadvertisingisawaytocomparethepricesandthequalityofservice.Thisisapositivebecausewecanthinkcarefullybeforewebuysomething.Also,wecansavemoney.Wecanfindabetterquality.Soadvertisinghasapositiveeffectofcriticalthinkingandmakingsmartershoppers.

Also,anotherpositiveeffectofadvertisingisawaytogetideasforlivingmoreinterestinglife.Welearnmanyinterestingideasfromtelevisionadvertisingandalsoinmagazines.Forexample,Ireadmagazinesandseeinterestingideastodecoratemyapartmentinadvertising.Also,Ilearnaboutnewkindsoffoodandplacestovisit.Soadvertisinghasapositiveeffectofhelpingme,notanegativeinfluenceonmybehavior.

Ofcourse,someadvertisinginfluencebehaviorinanegativeway,suchassmoking.ButIthinkthegeneralinfluenceonpeople’sbehaviorispositive.Advertisinghelpspeoplelearnaboutproducts,comparethepricesandtogetinterestingideasforbetterlife.

ResponseC

Wecanseeadvertisinginmanyplacesforexample,onTValsoonbuildings,magazinesandjunkmail.Thepurposeofadvertisingisshowingpeopletobuythings.Wecan’tavoidanegativewayforadvertisingevenweareeducated.Manyadvertisingisaliesowedon’talwaysknowit’strue.It’sanegativebehaviorforpeopletellalieinadvertising.Butit’stoobadbecausepeopledon’tknowandbuythingsevenit’salie.Thisisillegalinmanycountries.Wehadbettertofindtheanswertotheproblem.

IusedtowatchTVandsawmanyadvertisingonTV.Isawlotofnegativebehavior.ManyTVshowsareverystupidadvertising.Sometimesisalie,animalsdon’ttalk.Advertising-it’sgoodbutsomeisalieandnotreal.Butstillpeople’sbelief,andsoit’saproblem.

ResponseD

Advertisinginfluencespeople’sbehaviorinanegativeway,Idisagreewiththestatement.Thestatementisnottrue.

SometimesadvertisingisveryinterestingIaminterestingbytheadsonthebusandtrain.Someadvertisingisbeautifulartandit’snotnegativeinfluence,it’sverycreativity.Theadvertisingindustrygivesjobstoartistsandwriters.Mytwocousinsandhisfriendtheyhaveajobinadvertisingcompanywheredrawpicturesanddesignposters.Somepostersonthebusandtrainwheremanypeoplecanseetheposters.Mycousinhestudiedatartcollegeandhisdegreeincommercialart.Hegotajobwheremakeadvertisingposters.Ontheotherhand,someadvertisingontelevisiongivesjobstoactorsandmusicians.Sometimesfamousactorstheymakeadfortelevisionadvertising,thenlatergetajobinmoviesandsoon.Someactorhedoesn’tact,heusesvoicenarrationonthetelevisionads.Icanhearthevoiceofsomefamousactorsintheadvertising,it’snotnegativeinfluence.Theadvertisingindustryhasjobsformanypeople,it’sthereasonIdisagreewiththestatement.Also,Iaminterestingbytheadsonclothing,suchasT-shirtsandcaps.Thesepicturestheyareverybeautifulbyartists.Someadsintheprintmedia,newspaperandmagazinealso,theyareverygood.Mysecondcousinsometimeshedesignsadsfortheprintmedia.

ResponseE

Peopleinfluencedbytheworldaroundthem.Advertisinghasmanywaysinfluencingpeople’sbehavior.Iagreewiththestatement.Mosttheinfluencesofadvertisingarenegative.IwilldiscussadvertisingontelevisionandInternet.

Advertisingisforcars,lifestyle,cloths,liquor,diamonds,andmanyotherthings.Peopledon’tneedallthesethings.Thesethingsareexpensive,soinfluenceisnegative.Peoplewanttoomanythings.Theyseethecommercialontelevision.Theywantrichlifestyle.Sotheyspendtoomuchmoneycan’tafford.

Someadvertisingisformedicineanddrugssuchasaspirin.Peopleneedsomemedicine.However,theytaketoomanydrugsdon’tneedthem.Someadvertisingisfrofood,suchaspizza,cookies,candy,coke,andbeer.Peopleneedfoodtolive.However,manypeoplegetveryfat.Theyeattoomuchjunkfood.Therefore,advertisingismainlyanegativeinfluence.Advertisingcausepeoplespendtoomuchmoney.Moreover,peopleeattoomuchjunkfood.It’sbadforhealth.

Also,peopleinfluencedbytheInternetadvertising.It’stoomuch!Everykindofpictureandspamonemail-it’stoomuchcommercialonInternet.Inthepast,Internetwasforstudyadlearning.ButnowInternetismainlywayforsellthings.Peopleseeadvertising.Theywanttoomanythings.It’sapity.It’smainlyinfluencespeople’sbehaviorinanegativeway.Moreover,someInternetadvertisingisfalse.电视机是20世纪最重要的创造,他改变了人们的生活,所有的改变都是好的吗?许多人认为广告只是给孩子们看的,但是公司认为广告同时会讲述很多有用的信息,结合两种观点给出你的看法。流行消费品的大量销售表达了广告的价值,而不是社会的真实需求,你同意这个观点吗?广告的目的有时并没有实际用途,如果广告被禁止,社会可以获益,你同意吗?一些人主张广告对我们的生活产生了积极的影响,但另一些人那么认为这些影响也有消极的,请讨论。随着市场经济的开展,广告成了电视产业的主要特色,尽管电视给我们提供丰富的信息,但电视广告仍受到强烈批评,你的意见是什么?由于公司的竞争,消费者面临着越来越多的广告,你认为广告对消费者的影响有多大?怎样保护消费者自己的利益?一些影视图书和网络上的信息会影响到年轻人乃至社会,有人认为这些信息应该被加以控制,结合两种观点给出你的看法。1.男女分校该不该?2.有人认为应把不同的孩子放在一起教育!有的认为应该把聪明的孩子放在一块教育,你怎么看?3.有人说学校应该根据学生的学术成绩选择他们,有人认为把不同能力的学生放在一起教育,你怎么看?4.如今人们认为城市不再适合孩子成长,他们认为农村更适宜小孩,多大程度你同意?5.电脑已经广泛应用,所以老师已经不再那么重要,你同意吗?6.现在,学校教育对学生已经不那么重要,因为我们可以从互连网得到信息,可以在家学习,你同意吗?7.有人在家学习,有人认为这不能取代学校教育,你认为?8.很多认为电脑已经可以翻译东西,所以我们的孩子已经可以不需要学习外语,你的意见?9.计算机使得学生的学习能力下降,科技进步带来的影响究竟是好的还是坏的?10.现在孩子上学越来越早,有些孩子4岁就上学了,人们认为这太早了。你认为?公立学校和私立学校,哪一个更好?12.上大学前要不要先旅行或者工作一段时间?一些人认为孩子应该住寄宿学校,其他人认为应该上一般学校呆在他们父母身边,你说呢?是应该只上几门专业课,还是什么都上?教育对个人开展和社会形成非常重要,该如何保证教育实现这两种功能?一些老师认为应该让学生组成学习小组,其他人认为学生应该独立学习,请讨论。一个人想成功必须接受正规大学的教育,你同意吗?18.许多父母把孩子送到国外读书,讨论一下什么年龄是时候把孩子送出去?1.互连网的优点和缺点2.人们可以通过电脑购物,消费,工作,但是危险的是电脑带给人们孤立和丧失社会技能,你同意吗?3.现代科技使人们生活更方便?还是技术简单时候生活更好?4.过度的使用机器来取代人类工作,将变的危险,你的看法?是好还是坏?许多不好的信息来自电影,书和网络,影响着我们的年轻人,一些人认为应当控制这些信息!你认为呢?越来越多的人用和电脑来沟通,没有人在互相写信了。有人觉得写信的技巧很快就会消失了。你同意吗?有人认为早期的技术比最近的技术对我们生活的影响更大些,你同意吗?8.选择一种创造。或电脑,他如何改变了我们的生活,这样的改变是积极的还是消极的?科学和技术改善着我们的日常生活,但是还是有很多领域,存在着很多科学家也解决不了的问题,你同意吗?新一代的年轻人每天都接触高科技,所以他们在做重要决定的时候总是要比他们的父辈强,你同意吗?如今许多问题都与有关,请讨论的利弊。如今许多人用现代化的技术在家里办公,一些人认为只有员工会从中获得好处,而老板不会,请讨论。有人认为大城市的住房短缺只有靠政府来解决,你同意吗?有人相信国家体育队伍应该由政府出资,也有人认为应该由个人或组织成立积极,请讨论。健康是人类的根本需求,所以医疗保健不应该交给私立组织来经营。你同意吗?科学研究应该被政府支持和控制而不是私人企业?尽管教育在许多开展中国家不是强制性的,但是应该努力确保5-15岁的孩子进入学校学习,你同意吗?有人认为政府应该为医疗和教育买单,也有人认为这不是政府的责任,讨论并给出你的意见。有人认为我们不该给国家交税,你同意吗?有人认为艺术不会提高人的生活质量,所以政府不该在这些领域内投资,你同意吗?现在我们看到越来越多的展览和雕塑出现在公共场所,政府应该把纳税人的钱花在更重要的事情上而不是资助艺术工程,你同意吗?有人认为政府不该把钱花在建设剧院和体院场馆上,而应该更多的用在医疗和教育的投入,你同意吗?有人认为遵循传统可以教化一个国家,所以政 府应该对音乐艺术表演等公司给予补助,你同意这个观点吗?政府应该如何做?许多国家把大量的金钱用于防卫武器的投入,有人认为这些钱应该花在穷人和其他弱势工程上,你同意吗?开展中国家应该只注重提高工业和高科技,还是首先提倡教育。给出你的观点。Inamodernsociety,peoplealwaysfacethedilemmatochoosewhetherAAAorBBB.

Thisproblemisthemuchdebatedoneinthatitaffectseverybodyintheirdailylives.

Peoplemaypreferonetoanotheralthoughsomemayhavenoopinionsaboutitatall.

Beforerenderingmyopinion,Ithinkitisnecessarytotakeaglanceattheargumentsofbothsides.

ItisquiteeasyforaveragepeopletochooseBBBbecauseoftheobviousreasonthat.

Itcanbegivenbyawellknownexamplethat.0f-t+b6{0G!j2\/|,H!{1B;sButatthemeantime,althoughBBBhassomeadvantages,italsohasmanydrawbackssuchas.

ThereforewehavenocompleteevidencetosuggestthatBBBisalwaysbetterthanAAA.

Whatismore,theinnatequalityofAAA,unfortunately,isoftenunderestimated;inotherwords,ifyounoticetheinvisiblebenefitsofchoosingAAA,youcanunderstandAAAmoredeeply.;Inaddition,someexpertsmaintainthat.

Thissignificantpoint,however,isoftennotnoticedbymostpeopleandaccordingly,isunconsciouslyoverlooked./F%w&R"b1d4_,a:M+@4z2y1Nu0R

Finally,

asaproverbsays,“Everythinghastwosides”.

AlthoughIadmitthatthereareacoupleofadvantagesof,Istillthinkthatthedisadvantagesofitaremoreobvious.

Suchas,,and.

ThisdemonstratesthatwehavenocompleteevidencetosuggestthatBBBisalwaysbetterthanAAA.5H

N"Ifallthefactorsaboveareconsidered,wewillfindoutthattheadvantagesofAAAoutweighthoseofBBB.

Thereforefromwhatwehavediscussed,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthatchoosingAAAisaratherwisedecision.

ButIhavenotdeniedtheopinionthatchoosingBBB.

ImustadmitthatpeoplecandowellwithoutAAA,butnoonecanignoretheaddedconvenienceandsatisfactionofferedbyAAA.Suchexperiencewilldefinitelybehelpfulinone’slaterlife.Uponthequestionthatwhichisbetter,_____or______,differentpeoplehavedifferentcomprehensiontowardtheissue.____hasitsadvantages,butatthemeantime,ithasmanydisadvantages,too.Althoughatfirstglancetheseargumentssoundreasonableandappealing,theyarenotborneoutbyacarefulconsideration.Withthesteadygrowthinthecountrieseconomyaswellasthepeople'slivingstandards,therhythmofpeople'slivingisspeedingupandalotofchangeshavetakenplaceintheirdailylives.5.Forwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayfinallydrawtheconclusionthat_____.开头引子1事例引出Itisnotraretoseemanystudentsdozingoffordoingotherthingswhiletheprofessoristryinghisbestexplainingatheory.Moreoftenthannot,thisphenomenonresultsfromthesevereschoolattendanceruleandthelackofrighttodecidewhichclasstoattendaccordingtostudents'owninterestandtheirjudgmentofthevalueoftheclass.Thus,strictschoolattendance,asfarasIamconcerned,severelydamagesthestudentsinnotonlyacquiringknowledgebutalsotheirphysicalhealth.2数据说明Accordingtoarecentstatisticontheinternet,thenumberofsingle-childfamilyoccupies75percentofChinesefamilies,andundoubtedlyhasthetendencyofincreasing.Undersuchcircumstances,somepeopleinsistonmakingdecisionsfortheirchildren,consideringthattheyaretooyoungtojudge.However,othersbelievethatthereishardlyanynecessitytohelpsothatchildrenwillcultivatethecapabilityofanalyzingimportantproblems.Frommyperspective,Icompletelyagreewiththelatteridea.3CanUimagine?Imagine,aworldinwhichplantlifeisreducedtoafewhardyspecimens,droughtiscommonplace,andtheworld'scoastalregionsareunderwater--aworldafflictedwithseriousillness.Noonecansayexactlywhatitlookslikewhenaplanettakesill,butitprobablywillnotlookmuchbetterthanafilthysoccerball.Thus,Iamquiteconvincedthatwhatmoderntechnologybringsusarenotmerelyfasterpublictransportationsoreasiermeansofcommunication,butalsodangersanddestructions.4艺术人生式连问Whotaughtushowtospeak?Whoinstructedushowtowalk?And,whoshowedusthebasicnormaboutthisrealworld?Theamountoftimeweinteractwithparentsmakesthemthemostinfluentialforceinourlives.Whatwelearnedfromthemintheearlyyearswillbeencodedinourmindandbereflectedinnearlyeveryaspectofourbehaviors.Inshort,parentsare,inmostcases,ourbestteachersthroughoutlives.Obviously句该不该打麻将?中国国足应不应该存在于世上?世间到底有没有鬼?芙蓉姐姐能不能嫁出去?观点立场Admittedly,Iamawarethat_____,atleasttosomeextent,mayindeed______;otherwise,inmyobservation______can______and,noexaggerationhere,________.例:Admittedly,Iamawarethatlearningviasmallorwidescreen〔电视机的同义变换Ⅰ〕,atleasttosomeextent,couldindeededucatetheyoungaboutlivesandtheworldaroundthem〔-1理由〕;otherwise,inmyobservationmostmoviesandTVprograms〔电视机的同义变换Ⅱ〕mayinterferewithstudents'studies〔+1理由〕and,noexaggerationhere,severelydamagethechildrenpsychologically〔+2理由〕.Admittedly,Iamawarethatoilpricepushing,atleasttosomeextent,mayindeedtakeeffectintheshortterm;otherwise,inmyobservationfindingnewalternativeenergyresourcesandintensifyingthepublicityofenergysavingisthetrulyeffectiveand,noexaggerationhere,permanentsolutiontothisproblem.开头模板1事例引出①LastweekIchattedonthephonewithahighschoolfriendofmine,whoiscurrentlylivinginU.S,about_____.Hementionedthat,ashememorizedquiteclearly,____,②Foryearswehavebeenaccustomedtoseeingorhearing____doing____ordoing___/Itisnotraretosee____doing_____,and,①obviously,events/scenes/storiesalikearetakingplacealmosteverysecondtheworldover.②obviously,_____areexertingpowerfulandpositiveinfluences/alarmingandnegativeeffects,directlyorindirectly,orsometimesimperceptibly,oncontemporarypeople'slives/society/modernworld.Admittedly,Iamawarethat_____,atleasttosomeextent,mayindeed______;otherwise,inmyobservation______can______and,noexaggerationhere,________.例:LastweekIchattedonthephonewithahighschoolfriendofmine,whoiscurrentlylivinginU.S,abouttheinfluencesofmassmedia.Hementionedthattwomonthsago,ashememorizedquiteclearly,anineteen-year-oldboyinhiscampuscommittedabloodymurderbyimitatingtheplotsfrom"BattleRoyale".Obviously,eventsalikearetakingplacealmosteverysecondtheworldover.2数据说明Wheneveropeningthefloppypages,turningonthetelevisionsorloggingintotheinternet,wecanseeextensivepresscoverageconcerning_______.Accordingtothereports,thenumberof_____hasreachedthepeak/fallentonewdepthsduringtherecent20years,andundoubtedlyhasthetendencyoffurtherincreasing/decreasing.Obviously,thiswasnosatisfiyingnewsatallfor____.Admittedly,Iamawarethat_____,atleasttosomeextent,mayindeed______;otherwise,inmyobservation______may______and,noexaggerationhere,________.例:Wheneveropeningthefloppypages,turningontheTVsorloggingintotheinternet,wecanseeextensivepresscoverageconcerningTVprogramsandyoungpeople.Accordingtothosereports,thenumberofyouthcrimeshasreachedthepeakduringtherecent20years,andundoubtedlyhasthetendencyofincreasing.Obviously,thiswasnosatisfiyingnewsatallfortheadvancementofsocialcivilization.3CanUimagine?Imagine,astrange/insane/simple/lifelessworldinwhich_____,whatwillbeawaited?Obviously,hardlycananyonetellexactlywhatitlookslikewhensuchcases/scenescomeintoreality,butitwillprobably【bedefinedbyjournalistsvividlywithascreamingheadlinelike"thedarkest/brightesttimeinhumanhistory"】.Admittedly,Iamawarethat_____,atleasttosomeextent,mayindeed______;otherwise,inmyobservation______may______and,noexaggerationhere,________.例:Imagine,aninsaneworldinwhichnolimitationorrestrictionwereposedwhenpeoplemaketheirchoicesanddecisions,whatwillbeawaited?Obviously,hardlycananyonetellexactlywhatitlookslikewhensuchscenescomeintoreality,butitwillprobablybedefinedbyjournalistsvividlywithascreamingheadlinelike"thedarkesttimeinhumanhistory".Attention!!假设遇AZ题,需将观点句与过渡句结合如下:Hence,itisimperativeforustopinpointthecausesofthisdisturbingphenomenonandfindsomepropersolutionsfortheproblem,whichIwouldexploreinthefollowingparagraphs.过渡(视情况添加)IwilltrytoexaminebelowthespecificreasonsforitaccordingtowhichIthinkarethemostcommonviewpointsnowadays./AndIhavespecificreasonsforagreeingwithit,whichareexplainedinthefollowingparagraphs./Amongcountlessfactorswhichinfluencemydecision,therearethreeconspicuousaspects./Thereasonsarechieflyasfollows./Therewidespreadtestimoniesforitandtheprimaryonesarelistedbelow./TherearemainlythreeconspicuousaspectsIwouldliketoexploreinthisessay.正文Firstofall,fromapersonalandpsychologicalperspective,itisgenerallyacceptedthat/thereisnodenyingthat/nootherreasoninmydecisionismorecrucialthantheonethat/itisindisputablethat/itiswidelyacknowledgedthat/theessentialreasonwhyXXcanbeseenbyaveragepeoplethat/itcanbeprobablysaidwithoutexaggerationthat/oneoftheprimaryreasonsisthat/themostimportantlosswesufferis/thefirstandforemost

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