2024年新高考英语I和II卷小作文总结经历感受类写作新模式课件

借助2024年新高考英语I&II卷小作文总结经历感受类写作新模式第三部分

写作（共两节，满分40分）新课标I&II卷假定你是李华，你们班上周五在公园上了一节美术课，请给英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享你的经历，内容包括：1.你的作品内容；2.你的感想。注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearChris,

I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua1.慎审题，开好局审文体：应用文审格式：经历感受类审话题：学校生活审要点：分享作品内容与感想审人称：第一人称为主审时态：以一般过去时和一般现在为主；主题语境：人与自我之学校生活2.巧谋篇，拟提纲

根据提示，考生写作时可分三段进行第一段(导入段)：写信目的第二段(主体段):

时间、地点、人物、事件和且的；事件的发生和发展；感受第三段(结尾段):表达期待3.提笔写，不留白

组词成句：根据汉语提示，将括号中的英语短语组成对应的句子。(1)为了丰富我们的生活，我们被告知要通过我们的艺术作品捕捉那里自然的迷人之处。(enrichone'slife,informof,captureattractive,feature,nature,through,artwork)Toenrichourlife,wewereinformedofcapturingtheattractivefeatureofnaturetherethroughourartworks.(2)当我们到了公园时，壮丽的景观立刻吸引了我们所有人。(arriveat,splendid,landscape,attract,immediately)Whenwearrivedatthepark,splendidlandscapesattractedusimmediately.(3)印象深刻的场景巨大吸引我的注意力。我决定用附近的湖，周围的山还有典型的正在绽放的花来设计一幅作品。(decide,design,production,anearbylake,thesurroundingmountains,andthetypicalflowersinfullbloom)Impressivescenesdrewmyattentionalot.Idecidedtodesignaproductionwithanearbylake,thesurroundingmountains,andthetypicalflowersinfullbloom.(4)将广阔的景色和灵感结合起来是一个挑战，但我经历了很多困难成功了，这让我很高兴。(challenge,combinewith,vastness,view,inspiration,gothrough,difficulty,makeit,cheerup)Itwasachallengetocombinethevastnessoftheviewwithmyinspiration,butIwentthroughmanydifficultiestomakeit.Itcheeredmeupalot.(5)我获得了一次宝贵而独特的体验。我在传统工作室通常得不到这种体验。(gained,a英valuableexperience.)Ihavegainedavaluableanduniqueexperience.don'tusuallygettheexperienceinatraditionalstudio(6)这次经历让我有机会去欣赏大自然，并且对我的艺术表达产生了巨大的影响，还培养了很多生活中所需的技能和灵感。(allow,appreciate,haveagreatinfluenceon,artistic,expression,cultivate,inspiration,inlife.)Itallowedmetoappreciatethenaturewhichcanhaveagreatinfluenceonmyartisticexpressionandcultivatesmanyskillsandinspirationsneededinlife.(7)我知道你对绘画充满热情。(know,beenthusiasticabout)Iknowthatyouareenthusiasticaboutpainting.(8)我热切期待着听闻你的类似探险(eagerly,lookforwardto,hearabout,similar,adventure)I'meagerlylookingforwardtohearingaboutyourownsimilaradventures!4.合并句，巧升级

句子改写：根据所给英语原句改写句子，注意保持句意不变。①巧用高级词汇appealto和allatonce升级句(3)。Whenwearrivedatthepark,splendidlandscapesappealedtousallatonce.②巧用原因状语从句和伴随状语deepinthought(3)。Becauseimpressivescenesdrewmyattentionalot,Idecidedtodesignaproductionwithanearbylake,thesurroundingmountains,andthetypicalflowersinfullbloom,deepinthought.③巧用非限制定语从句升级句(4)。Itwasachallengetocombinethevastnessoftheviewwithmyinspiration,butIwentthroughmanydifficultiestomakeit,whcheeredmeupalot.④巧用定语从句升级句(5)。IhavegainedavaluableanduniqueexperiencethatIdon'tusuallygetinatraditionalstudio.⑤用notonly...but...also升级句(6)。Itnotonlyallowedmetoappreciatethefantasticnaturewhichcanhaveagreatinfluenceonmyartisticexpressionbutalsocultivatesmanyskillsandinspirationsneededinlife.⑥巧用非谓语结构knowingthat...拓展合并升级句(7)和句(8)。Knowingthatyouareenthusiasticaboutpainting,I'meagerlylookingforwardtohearingaboutyourownsimilaradventures!5.连成文、细检查

请根据上述组句和改写句，添加恰当的过渡语句，修订表达成文。DearChris,I'mwritingtoshareyouwithanartclassIhadintheparklastFriday.[时间、地点、人物、事件和目的]Toenrichourlife,wewereinformedofcapturingtheattractive

featureofnaturetherethroughourartworks.[事件的发生和发展]Whenwearrivedatthepark,splendidlandscapes,appealedtousallatonce.Becauseimpressivescenesdrewmyattentionalot,Idecidedtodesignaproductionwithanearbylake,thesurroundingmountains,andthetypicalflowersinfullbloom,deepinthought.Itwasachallengetocombinethevastnessoftheviewwithmyinspiration,butIwentthroughmanydifficultiestomakeit,whichcheeredmeupalot.[感受]IhavegainedavaluableanduniqueexperiencethatIdon'tusuallygetinatraditionalstudio.Itnotonlyallowedmetoappreciatethefantasticnaturewhichcanhaveagreatinfluenceonmyartisticexpressionbutalsocultivatesmanyskillsandinspirationsneededinlife.Knowingthatyouareenthusiasticaboutpainting,I'meagerlylookingforwardtohearingaboutyourownsimilaradventures!Yours,LiHua【高分范文英泽中】亲爱的克里斯，

我写这封信是想和你分享上周五我在公园上的一堂美术课。

为了丰富我们的生活，我们被告知要通过我们的艺术作品捕捉那里自然的迷人之处。当我们到达公园时，壮丽的景色立刻吸引了我们。因为印象深刻的场景巨大吸引我的注意力，所以我决定用附近的湖泊，周围的山脉，以及典型的盛开的花朵来设计-一个作品，陷入了沉思。将广阔的景色和灵感结合起来是一个挑战，但我经历了很多困难成功了，这让我很高兴。我获得了宝贵而独特的经验，这是我在传统工作室通常得不到的。它不仅让我欣赏到奇妙的大自然，这对我的艺术表现有很大的影响，而且培养了许多生活