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专八作文范文赏析第一篇专八作文范文赏析第一篇NuclearTechnology:BenecialorDisastrous?

Onequestionthathascausedagreatdealofcontroversyovertheyearsisnucleartechnology.Althoughitoffersanumberofadvantagesinworldpeaceandgreenpower,itisalsoadangeroustechnology.Nuclearweaponsposethegreatestthreattolife.Eventheuseofnucleartechnologyforpeacefulpurposesalsocarriessomeseriousrisks.Inthisessay,however,Iintendtoshowhowthebenetsofsuchtechnologycounterbalanceitsdisadvantages.

Theopponentsofnuclearpowergenerallybasetheirargumentsonthedangeritpresentstotheworld.Therearetwomaindangers:theriskofnuclearwarfareandthenucleardisasters.ThedangerofnuclearwarisobviousandifonethinksaboutChernobyl,itiseasytounderstandwhypeopleareworriedaboutnuclearpower,asitcancausemajorsuffering.

Thereare,however,goodreasonsforbelievingthatnucleartechnologyisgenerallyadvantageous.Thefirstoftheseisthattherehasnotbeenamajorworldconflictsincetheinventionofnuclearweapons.Althoughnuclearweaponshaveenlargedthemechanismofwarbythreateningtokillmorepeoplemoresecretlyandmorehorriblythanthoseofthepast,itisgenerallyagreedthatsuchweaponsshouldbethelastthingtobethoughtofasameanstowinawarbecausetherewouldbenowinnerinanynuclearconflict.Ifanythinggoeswrong,thescaleofdestructiononhumanlivesandcivilizationisbeyondimagination.ThenightmareofHiroshimaisavividmemory,sonuclearweaponshiddeninstocksomewhereservetomaintainworldpeacebytheoryofcounter-attack.

Theothermostsignificantbenefitrelatestotheenvironment.Perhapsthegreatestdangerfacingourworldtodayisacombinationofglobalwarmingandthegreenhouseeffect.Thisdangeriscausedpartlybyburningfossilfuel,whichleadstoourpollutedatmosphere.Nuclearpower,however,isamuchgreeneralternativewhichdoesnothavesuchnegativeeffects.

Alreadypowerplantshavebeeninoperationinanumberofcountries.Thesearesuccessfulexamplestobefollowed.Allinall,althoughitistruethatnuclearweaponsposethegreatestthreattolife,theuseofnucleartechnologyforpeacefulpurposesisreallybenecial.Inallappearances,thefearofwarisovercomebytheneedforeconomicdevelopment.

专八作文范文赏析第二篇Sometimeago,China’sMinistryofEducationbanneduniversitystudentsfromrentingprivateaccommodationduringtheirstudies.Tothispeople’sattitudesdiffersharply.Whatdoyouthink?Writeanessayofabout400words.

Inthefirstpartofyouressayyoushouldstateclearlyyourmainargument,andinthesecondpartyoushouldsupportyourargumentwithappropriatedetails.Inthelastpartyoushouldbringwhatyouhavewrittentoanaturalconclusionormakeasummary.

Youshouldsupplyanappropriatetitleforyouressay.

Markswillbeawardedforcontent,organization,grammarandappropriateness.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

Sample

TREATSTUDENTSASADULTS,NOTCHILDREN

Sometimeago,China’sMinistryofEducationbanneduniversitystudentsfromrentingprivateaccommodationduringtheirstudies.Thishasgivenrisetoaheateddiscussion.Somepeople,especiallyschoolmanagementandmostparents,embracesuchaban,whileotherscriticizeitfiercely.Personally,Iamagainsttheban.

First,mostcollegestudentsareadultsandshouldenjoytherighttochoosewheretolive.Inbanningoff-campushousing,theeducationauthoritiesseemtobelievethatcollegestudents,mostaged18-22,shouldbetreatedaschildren,ratherthanadults.Someadministratorsclaimthatstudentslackself-controlandcannotmakeproperdecisionsforthemselves.Thisissurelynotfairtreatmentforsuchabrightyounggeneration.Ifthesestudentsdidn’tattendcolleges,butworkedincompaniesorjoinedthearmy,theywouldbetreatedasadults.

Secondly,privateaccommodationisindeedpreferabletolivingoncampusformanystudents.Itistruethatlivingoncampuspromotesasenseofbelongingbybeingcloselyconnectedwithotherstudents.Thiscouldtrulybeavaluablepartofthefour-yearcollegeeducation.Studentslivingoncampusalsohaveeasieraccesstovastschoolresources,suchaslibraries,computerroomsandvariouseveningseminars.Butcrowdeddormitories,highnoiselevels,earlyelectricitycurfewsandotherstrictcodesalsomakedormslessattractive.Atleastdormsarenottherighthomeforeveryone.Off-campushousing,meanwhile,offersagreaterdegreeoffreedom.Thatisespeciallytrueforself-motivatedstudents,studentsstudyinglateforimportanttestsorworkinglateonacademicprojects.Manystudentslivingoff-campusalsosharerooms.Theyhavetonegotiatecontracts,payutilitiesandprobablycookforthemselves.Allhelppreparestudentstobettermanagetheirstudyandlife.Infactthisalsoconformstomostschools’creedthatstudentsshouldbeintouchwiththerealworldasmuchaspossible.

Oneofthemotivesforthehousingbanisthateducationauthoritieshopethiswillhelppreventstudentsfromcohabitationandhavingsexduringschoolyears.Butsincestudentscannowlegallymarryinschools,whyshouldtheybebannedfromhavingsex?Realitytellsusthatthisiswishfulthinking.Banningsexamongstudentshasbeenandwillbeamissionimpossible.Thisisprobablywhysomeschoolshaveinstalledcondomvendingmachinesoncampusorprovidefreecondomsinschoolclinics,whichtellsstudentstohavesafesex,ratherthannosex.

Tosumup,weshouldtreatstudentsasadultsinsteadofchildren.Thoughtheremightbeproblemsinallowingstudentstoleaveoffcampus,weshouldnotgiveupeatingforfearofchoking,astheChineseidiomsays.Intoday’sdiversifiedworld,schoolsshouldshowrespecttostudentsinmakingtheirownchoices.Afterall,schoolsarenotmilitarybarracksandstudentsarenotsoldiers.

专八作文范文赏析第三篇Facedwiththequestionwhetheritisworthwhiletospendayearortwovoluntee??ringinwesternChina,manycollegestudentswouldprobablyshaketheirheads,seeingitasawasteofvaluablelearningtime.However,Iwillgiveanaffirmativeanswerwithouthesitation,becausethisexperiencecanapparentlybenefitusinmanyways.

First,itisagreatopportunityforustoapplytheknowledgewehaveacquiredatcollege.Differentfromtemporarypart-timejobs,alongervolunteerworkexperienceistrulyfulfillingandrewarding.AsEnglishmajors,wecanlearntouseandteachthelanguageeffectivelyinrealclasses;aseducationmajors,wecanexperimentwiththosetextbooktheoriesinhelpingmanageaschoolorinstructtheyounger;thosewhostudyengineeringcantakethischancetoturntheirideasandskillsintorunningmachines,newbridgesandbroadroads.Fromthisexperience,wewillbetterunderstandourschoolworkandevenbuildupconsiderableexpertiseinourchosenfields.

Second,wecangainagreatsenseofsatisfactionbymakingcontributionsinanunderdevelopedregion.Rightnow,thewesternChinaissufferingfromboththeshort??ageofresourcesandthatoftalentsinitscourseofdevelopment.Ifwecanstepintotheneededrolesbysimplysacrificingayearortwo,wewillbeabletomakesomediffer??encetothesituationasawhole.Imaginehowproudyouwillbewhentellingyourfami??lyandfriendshowyouhavetaughttheilliteratetoread,andhowyouhavehelpedtochangethelookofabackwardtown.Comparedwiththegreatsenseofprideyoufeel,ayear‘stimeisjustasmallpricetopay.

Third,wecanestablishadeepfriendshipwithlocalpeople.Ontheonehand,ifyoutrulyloveandhelpthepeopleyouworkwith,theynaturallyloveandhelpyouback.TakeaseniorIknowforexample,whoservedtwomonthsasateacherinadrynorthwesterntown.Duringtheperiodofwatershortage,bothhisstudentsandtheirparentsvoluntarilykeptwaterforhim,sometimesdespitetheirownneed.Recallinghisdaysthere,hesaidtheywerenoteasybuthecouldnothelpmissingthem.Probablymanyvolunteerswouldfeelthesameashim.Whilewearegivingcare,supportandhelp,weoftengetbackmoreincludingalastingfriendship.

Therefore,IwillreadilysignuptovolunteerinthewesternChinadespitevariouschallengesImaymeet.Thinkofthedifferenceswecanmakethereandthechangesthisexperiencecanmaketous,whynotwalkoutoftheivorytowerandstepontothepromisinglandofourcountry?

专八作文范文赏析第四篇AlthoughthegrandceremonyofOscarwasoverthisyear,theattentionanddiscussionlingerintheChinesemoviecommunityandout.SomeinsidersholdthatfollowingglobaltrendsistheonlywaytodevelopChina’sfilmindustry.Othersinsist,however,thattheOscarsaresimplyonethemanyawardsthatAmericansliketocrownthemselves.Domesticfilmsshouldmaintaintheirdistinctflavors.Asamoviefanmyself,Ithinkweshouldstriveforittogaininternationalrecognition.

Firstly,theOscarsAwardisaninternationalrecognitionintermsofbothartisticperformanceandboxofficerevenue.Withlivebroadcastin50languages,itplaysahugeroleinshapingtheglobalfilmindustry.Itisnowonderthatsomanypeoplearoundtheworldpaymuchattentiontoit.TherealityisthatHollywoodmoviesaccountformorethan90percentofglobalmarketshares-thishasinevitableworldwideimpact.Obviously,theOscarsAwardhasbecomesomethingthatwecannotaffordtoignoreit.

Moreover,weliveinaglobal,multiculturalworldwheredifferentculturesinteract.China’smovieindustryneedstorealizeitandsharpenitscompetitiveedge.IfChinesefilmsaretomakeaglobalimpact,thenmovieproduction,distributionandmarketingorganizationneedimproving.Chinesefilmsshouldadjusttosatisfythevarietyofsocialdemands.TheintroductionofforeignsuccessfulformulasandtechnologyisamustforChinesefilmindustry.ItisparochialtothinkthatChinacanonlyuseitsnationalcharacteristicstodefinedomesticmovies.Conservatismwillhindertheprogressoffilmindustry.IfChinadoesnotdevelopitsfilmindustrythroughembracinginnovativemulticulturalism,Chinesemovieswillhavelittleopportunitytogainashareintheinternationalmarket.

Lastbutnotleast,theHollywoodfilmsalsoconformtospecificculturaldemands.Takethisyear’sAcademyAwardsasanexample,nominatedmoviesincludebothhigh-costproductionslikeTheLordoftheRingsandsubtle,moremoderatebudgetedprojectslikeLostinTranslation,thesefilmssuggestthatHollywoodmoviesmaintainabasicbalanceinkeepingthestyleofitsownandabsorbingdiversecultures.Hence,theChinesefilmmakersshouldsparenoeffortstopresentoriginaldomesticfilmstoforeignviewers.Wewillbeleftbehindifwesticktotheso-calledorthodox.Forinstance,CouchingTigerHiddenDragonwasactedbyChineseactorsandthroughculturalicons,butactuallyitsstyleandstructureofthemovieallconformtoaHollywoodformula.Thispartlyexplainswhyitappealstoawiderrangeofaudiencesfromdifferentculturalbackground.

Inaword,theOscarsareveryimportanttoChinesefilmmakers.Nominationsareakindofapprovalbyinternationalpeersoftheirachievements.AsChina’smarketimproves,itsmovieindustrywillgetstrongerandwilleventuallycashinontheOscars.

专八作文范文赏析第五篇下面将结合最新专八写作样题来讲解一下高分攻略:

1.仔细审题、分析材料(2-3分钟)

考生读题时,首先需要找出题目的主题词或句(topicwordsorsentence),即题目所给出的关键信息。分清楚什么是重要信息,什么是次要信息。以专八样题为例,题目中的collegestudywillneverbethesameforbothprofessorsandstudents是主要信息和关键信息,其他内容是次要信息。所以文章应该论证onlinelearningorMOOCS会给高等教育带来哪些不同。然后,考生必须完成题目中所提出的两项任务要求:1.summarizebrieflytheopinionsfrombothsides;2.giveyourcomment。也就是说,既要概括双方观点,又要给出自己的评论,缺一不可。就此题目来说,概括学校一方对线上授课或慕课平台的评价:“TheUniversityofWashington(UW)intheUSisn'tshyaboutthebenefitsanddrawbacksofonlineeducation.”(在线教育既有不可替代的优点,也有局限性。)也要提炼出学生一方对这一方式的认识:“Butformetheseconcernsfallflatinthefaceoftheconvenience,flexibilityandindependenceonlinelearningoffers.”(学习者充分享受这一学习方式的便捷性、灵活性和独立性。)当然也有学生认为,在某些方面,课堂教学更有优势:“AlthoughMOOCsareimprovingmylearningexperiences,thisnewformofteachingcannotcompetewithtraditionalwaysoflearningintermsofteacher-studentinteraction.”

2.列出提纲、确定布局(3-4分钟)

在审完题后,就要提炼出中心思想(centralidea)。就本文而言,在概括双方观点的基础上,提炼出自己的观点:Consideringbothsides,itisclearthatonlineteachingsystemorplatformscanhelpstudentsachievehigherlearningeffectivenessdespiteitsdrawbacks.综合来看,这种方式尽管也有缺点,但是能够极大地提高学习者的学习效果。这个观点紧扣题目中的主题句collegestudywillneverbethesameforbothprofessorsandstudents。

明确了中心思想以后,接下来要构思文章的结构,写出大体的框架或简明的提纲。专八作文可以按两种模式来写,但一般都是四段式。

第一种模式是分为导语、概述、评论和结尾四部分。导语部分给出观点,概述部分对材料进行评述,评论部分对观点进行论证,结尾部分总结论点。

第二种模式是导语部分(一两句话)和概述部分作为第一段,而评论部分可以从两个方面来论述,作为第二段和第三段,最后是结尾段。

毋庸置疑,一个清晰的提纲对正式写作起着十分重要的作用,可以保证写作思路清晰,避免偏离主题。

3.正式写作(30-35分钟)

下面以第二种模式为例并结合写作样题范文对各部分的写法进行一一介绍。

(1)导语+概述部分的写法

首先用一句话引出写作背景。例如,写作样题范文第一句:Moderntechnologyhasinnovatedthewayteachingandlearningcanbeinpeople’slife.(现代科技创新了人们生活中的教学方式。)然后引出题目并概括出针对题目双方有不同的关注或者持有不同的观点:Onlineteachingsystemorplatformsisarecentphenomenonandconsequentlyitiscontroversial.Inspiteofthefactthatbothuniversitiesandstudentshaveembracedthisnewstyleofteachingandlearning,therearestillworriesandconcerns.(线上教学方式受到学校和学生的欢迎,同时作为一种新的教学方式,人们对它也有不同的声音。)最后给出自己的观点:Consideringbothsides,itisclearthatonlineteachingsystemorplatformscanhelpstudentsachievehigherlearningeffectivenessdespiteitsdrawbacks.(综合来看,这种方式尽管也有缺点,但是能够极大地提高学习者的学习效果。)

(2)评论部分的写法

评论部分可以从两个方面来论述。以写作样题为例,第二段阐述一方的观点或问题的一面:先给出中心句(Collegestudentsnowenjoygreaterbenefits.)然后阐述第一个原因(Firstly,thankstomoderntechnology,learningonlinegivesstudentsaccesstoawiderrangeofcourses.)之后展开陈述。接着阐述第二个原因(Secondly,theflexibilityandmobilitygivenbytheonlineteachingsystemmakesstudentslearnatanytimeanywhereintheirconvenience.)之后展开陈述。

第三段指出问题的另一面或者另一方的观点(Ontheotherhand,onlineteachingandlearningismuchdemandingandrequiresstudents’fullcommitmentandindependence)接着分别用admittedly和meanwhile引出onlinelearning的局限性。如果有反方观点的话,可以先陈述反方观点的合理性,然后驳斥反方观点的不合理性。

(3)结尾段的写法

首先重申观点(Inconclusion,withthegreatesttechnologicalboomineducation,onlinelearningorMOOCS,isanirreversibletrend.)然后提出不能忽视问题的另一面(So,thequestionreallyisnot“Whichone?”butrather,“Howcanwecombineboth?”Theansweristhateachperformsitsownfunctions.)最后对观点进行提升(Undoubtedly,thisrevolutionarypracticeineducationwillcontinuouslyhavemorefar-reachingconsequencesandwilldramaticallyreshapethenatureofhighereducation.)

值得注意的是,概述部分不应该太长(以不超过文章总长度的三分之一为宜),也不要大量引用材料中的句子,否则很容易失分。评论段是文章的主体部分,写作时应条理清晰,论述有据,占文章长度的三分之二左右。导语和结尾都不宜太长,简要阐明即可。

4.检查修改(2-3分钟)

对文章中的语法、用词、拼写、标点和大小写都要一一检查,甚至还要对文章内容或字数的不足进行补救。这一步骤不但在正式考试中不能忽略,而且在平时的写作训练中也要引起重视,养成习惯。

专八作文范文赏析第六篇Asisrevealedinthecartoon,aboyiscontemplating(认为)thetruemeaningofhappiness.Itisindeedatoughquestionforhim:whatishappiness?Makingahugesumofmoney,orwinningtruelove,orkeepinggoodhealth,orwhat?Thepictureisfairlythought-provoking,whichintendstoconveytousthismessage:Dueattentionshouldbepaidtotheconstanttopicofhuman—happiness.

Wecaneasilyrecognizethesignificanceofattitudeintermsofhappiness.Ontheonehand,somehavesufferedagreatdealbutgenerallyremainhappy.TakethevictimsofWenChuanearthquakeasanexample,theylosttheirfamiliesandevensomethingmoreprecious,buttheyeventuallysteppedoutofthepaintorebuildtheirhome.Ontheotherhand,peoplewhohavearelativelyeasyandcomfortablelife,andyetareessentiallyunhappy.Withoutapositiveattitudeorthedeterminationtofindthelittlehappinessoflife,youaredestinedtobegrievous,nomatterwhatkindofsituationyouarein.

Consideringallthepointsdiscussedabove,itisadvisablethatwehighlyvalueoptimismandapplyitinourstudiesandwork.Weare,therefore,supposedtotakearationalattitude.Happinessisanattitude,notacondition,whichliesintheunswervingeffortstocompleteone’slife.

专八作文范文赏析第七篇AFactoryneartheNeighborhood

Havingafactorynearwhereonelivesbringswithitbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Anobviousadvantageisanincreaseinthenumberofavailablejobs,andmanypeopleinthecommunitymightfindemploymentinthenewfactory.Thefactorywouldbringmoneyintothecommunityinotherwaysaswell.Itwouldhavetopaysometaxestothelocalgovernment,andworkersmightgoshoppingoreatatarestaurantintheareabeforeoraftertheirshifts.

However,thefactorywouldbringsomedisadvantages,too.Dependingonwhatkindoffactoryitis,itmightpollutetheenvironmentandbringdownpropertyvalues.Itwouldbesuretoincreasetrafficinthearea,causingcongestionandmakingitunsafeforchildrentoplayoutside.Finally,theneighborhoodwouldbecomeanoisy,busyplace.Forallofthesereasons,Iwouldbeopposedtotheconstructionofanewfactorynearmycommunity.Whiletheemploymentopportunitieswouldhelpthecommunity,Ibelieveitwouldbebetterforresidentstocommutetoworkandpreservethepeaceofourneighborhood.

专八作文范文赏析第八篇Somepeoplearecommittedtotheirdreamsandworkhardtoachievetheirgoals.Whatisguidingthemisakindofillusion.Somepeoplethinkthatillusionisgoodforsuccesswhileothersarguethatitisnotsogoodbecauseitmaygetpeopleunrealistic.AsfarasIamconcerned,illusionisnecessaryinourlifeonlyifitisencouragingandrealistic.

Thereareseveralreasons.Firstofall,thereispowerinillusion.Theillusioncanleadpeopletothepaththeywanttogoonanditgivesuspassion.Weneedtoliveeachmomentwholeheartedly,withalloursensessothatwecanfindpleasureinthefragranceofbackyardgarden,thecrayonedpictureofasix-year-old,andtheenchantingbeautyofarainbow.Theillusioncanbeenthusiasticloveoflifethatputssparkleinoureyes,aliltinourstepsandsmoothesthewrinklesfromoursouls.

Secondly,wearebornwithwide-eyed,enthusiasticwonderasanyoneknowswhohaseverseenaninfant’sdelightatthejingleofkeysorthescurryingofabeetle.Itisthischildlikewonderandillusionthatgivesenthusiasticpeoplesuchayouthfulair,nomatterhowoldtheyare.Forexample,thefamouscellistPabloCasalswouldstarthisdaybyplayingBach.Music,forhim,wasanelixirthatmadelifeanever-endingadventure.AsauthorandpoetSamueloncewrote,“Yearswrinkletheskin,buttogiveupenthusiasmwrinklesthesoul.”

Lastly,peoplewithillusionsalsolovewhattheydo,regardlessofmoneyorpowerortitle.Ifwecannotdowhatweloveasafull-timecareer,wecanasdoapart-timevocation,liketheheadofstatewhopaints,thenunwhorunsmarathonsandtheexecutivewhohandcraftsfurniture.Wecannotaffordtowastetearsandenergyandtimeon“might-have-beens”.Weneedtoturnthetearsintosweataswegoafter“what-can-be”.

Tosumup,Godgiveseachbirditsfood,buthedoesnotthrowitintoitsnest.Whereveryouwanttogo,justcherishyourpreciousillusionandletyourdreamberealized.

专八作文范文赏析第九篇SafetyComesFirst

ThemindsetofsacrificeisseenasanimportantpartoftheChinesenation’straditionalvirtues.Chineseoftenregardthoseasheroeswhovolunteertoofferassistanceintimesofcrisis.Evenchildrenandyoungstersinprimaryandmiddleschoolsaretaughttolearnfromthiskindofheroesanddosomethingalikewhenconfrontingasimilarcircumstance.However,Iholdanoppositeviewonthisissue.

Firstly,thenewconceptsofself-protectionwillnotchallengeorweakenthetraditionalChinesevirtueofjusticeandcourage.Onthecontrary,itwillbecarriedtowardInascientificandrationalway.Forinstance,ifprimarystudentsseearobberyontheirwaytoschool,theyareadvisedtorememberthetraitsofsuspectsandreportthecasetoschoolandpublicsecurityauthorities.Forhighschoolstudents,theyshouldreportitfirst,andatthesametimetakesomeadequateactionstofightagainstcriminalsonthepremiseoffullyguaranteeingtheirownsafety.Thatisapositiveandflexiblemeasuretostrengthentheself-protectionawarenessofstudentsundertheageof18forwhomsafetyshouldbethefirstconsideration.Giventheirphysicalstrengthandrelevanttraining,itisnotwiseforthemtostandupforjusticeattheriskofendangeringtheirownlives.

Furthermore,fullrespectforone’slivesrepresentssocialprogress.Inthepast,thegovernmentstressedthatalleffortsshouldbemadetoprotectpublicinterestsregardlessofthecost,buttodaypriorityisgiventoindividual’spersonalsafety.Andthenewconceptsactuallyrequireadultsandteacherstoenhancestudents’awarenessofsafetyandteachthemthevalueoflife.Whentheyknowtheycannotbringthesuspectintocontrol,theyareadvisedtoseekhelpinsteadofactingboldlyandbluntly.Certainlywedonotwantouryoungsterstobecomecowards,butwedowantthemtobewise.

Anoldsayinggoesthatawisemancutsthecoataccordingtotheclothhehas.Weshouldemphasizethatactsaretobetakeninconformitywithone’sspecificcircumstance.Andyoungstersarenotadvisedtotakethechallengeandriskbeyondtheirlimitation,fortheyrepresentthefutureofournation.

专八作文范文赏析第十篇PARTVWRITING(45MIN)

Withthecontinuedgrowthofonlineteachingsystemsandintegrationofmassiveopenonlinecourses(MOOCS)intohighereducation,collegestudywillneverbethesameforbothprofessorsandstudents.Thefollowingareopinionsfrombothsides.Readtheexcerptscarefullyandwriteyourresponseinabout300words,inwhichyoushould:

1.summarizebrieflytheopinionsfrombothsides;

2.giveyourcomment.

Markswillbeawardedforcontentrelevance,contentsufficiency,organizationandlanguagequality.Failuretofollowtheaboveinstructionsmayresultinalossofmarks.

专八作文范文赏析第十一篇Ambitionisthedecisiononemakesandtheresolutionwithwhichhecarriesoutthatdecision.Itprovidesuswiththerequireddrivingforcetoaccomplishanyundertakingsinourlife.JustasJosephEpstein,afamousAmericanwriterputit,“Andaswedecideandchoose,soareourlivesformed.”Indeed,oncewemakeupourmindstochoosetodosomething,thenourlifebecomesmeaningfulandspecificallyorientated.Thisnotionoflife,asfarasIobserve,isclosesttotruthanddoesapplytoalmostallaspectsoflife.Firstthingsfirst,ambitionrendersusasenseofmission.

Nomatterwhatdecisionyoumakeyouhavetoberesponsibleforyourchoice.Yourchoiceprocuresyouasenseoforientation,ormorespeciallyasenseofmission.Andonlyastrongmissionmayenableonetoaccomplishgreatness.CaesaroftheancientRomanEmpirewasurgedbyhisambition“Icame,Isaw,Iconquered.”AndbecameanunrivaledempirebuilderinthehistoryofRome.JohnMilton,stimulatedalwaysbyhisambitionthataimedatwritingsome“mightylines”whichEnglandwouldunwillinglyforget,hadinduetimesecuredhispositionasthesecondShakespeareinthehistoryofEnglishliterature.Inthesecondplace,ambitioncanbringone’spotentialstothefull.Ambitionmaywellserveasacatalystactivatingone’sdormantpotentials.Withoutambitionone’spotentialswillremainslumberinglikeadormantvolcano.AcaseinpointisMsZhangHaidi,aChineseHelenKeller.ItwasherambitiontobeausefulpersonhasturnedthealmostparalyzedZhangHaidiintoawell-accomplishedfigurewhoseachievementswoulddwarfthoseofsomenormalpeopleaimatthesun,though,atworst,theymayprobablylandonthemoon.Influentialasitisuponus,however,ambitionmustbechanneledintherightdirection.Ifwronglydirected,one’sambitionmaybringhavoconhimandothers.Hitler,whoseambitionwastoconquerEuropebywhateverevilmeans,finallyturnedhimintoademon.ItwasthisdemonthatalmostcastEuropeintoanunfathomableabyssofanguishandsuffering.AnothercaseisMacbethwhoseambitionwastobecomethekingofScotland.However,hisambitionwasmaterializedbythemurderofKingDuncan.Consequently,unbearableguiltandpsychologicalagonydrovehimtohistragicdoom.Tosumup,ambitioncanbenefitustremendouslyifwiselyandcorrectlychanneled,otherwiseitmayruinothersandourselves.Apoetsays:lifecanbebad;lifecanbegood;lifecanbedirty;lifecanbesad,;lifecanevenbepainful.Inmymind’seye,apersoncanmakehislifebeautiful,meaningfulandrewardingandstandoutasarespectablepersonageifheismotivatedbyawell-orientatedambition.

专八作文范文赏析第十二篇Isasoundsocialenvironmentnecessaryforpeopletobegoodtoothers

HelpingothershasalwaysbeenavirtueintraditionalChineseculture,butnowadaysmanypeopledarenotofferhelptothoseinneed,forfearofgettingintotrouble.Theissuehasarousedpublicdebateovertheclimateofmoralityandcredibility,andmanypeoplesighoverthemoraldegeneration.Inmyopinion,whilesocialenvironmentisnecessaryforpeopletobegoodtoothers,eachindividualshouldtryhisorherbesttodogooddeedsandbesympatheticwithothers,insteadofwaitingfortheenvironmenttoimprove.

Thereisnodenyingthatsometragiceventsturnouttobetrapsbypeoplewithevilintentions,sopeoplearebecomingmorerisk-consciousandaremorewaryoftrapsanddeceits.somepeopleevenwonder,‘Isoursocietyhostiletogoodpeople?’Thequestionmaysoundridiculousbutmanypeopleapparentlythinkso.Theybelievethatourcurrentsocietyprovidesabadenvironmentforgoodpeopledoinggoodthings,andgoodpeoplepayahighpriceforbeingcompassionate.Infact,suchkindofthingsonlyaccountsforaprettysmallpercentage,butmassivemediacoveragemakesthesituationseemserious.Actually,mostpeoplearoundmearekind,warm-heartedandhelpful,andIamquitedelightedintheircompany.SoIbelievemediashouldpaymoreattentiontopublicizinggoodpeopleandexemplarydeedstoenhanceourconfidence,ratherthanexposingdisgustingbehaviors.

Atthesametime,asJohnDonneputsit,“Nomanisanisland,entireofitself.Everymanisapieceofthecontinent,apartofthemain.”Sinceeveryoneofusisacomponentofthesociety,itiseachindividual’sconductsthatformsocialmorality.Justimagineitisyouwhoneedhelp,whatwouldyoufeelifeveryonewatchesindiffere

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