高考英语写作读后续写人与自我讲义

2024年新高考英语写作读后续写人与自我范文人与自我：成长过程中的心事和故事战胜困难、自我成长类（勇气、坚持、自信、独立、自律、耐心、谦虚、合作、乐观、热心、帮助、感恩、追求梦想、珍视此刻、责任心、劳动可贵等）

（2）自我认知、自我突破类（身体、心智、思维等，如：从消极变积极；从掩饰逃避到勇于面对现实；从自我否认到接纳自我，坦诚面对优缺点；从胆小从众到勇敢为正义发声；从微小中看到伟大，从平凡中看到不平凡等）

主题结尾句：1.追求梦想（条件句）It’snevertoo________to__________(追求）yourdream.Aslongasyougraspeveryopportunityand__________________(充分利用它）,youwillstandachancetorealizeyourdream.

2.追求梦想（比喻句）Lifewithoutdreamsislikeabird____________________.

3.克服困难（使用意象词汇）Whenlifegivesyoulemons,makea______________.

4.亲情友情（比喻、类比）Familyandfriendsare____________.(隐藏的宝藏）Friendshipistous_______wateristofish.

Familyistous________harboristoships.

5.战胜自卑（对比）IsmiledasIeventuallyrealizedthereal________(来源）ofconfidence.NowIam____________(更加舒适、轻松）aboutwhatIlooklikeandmuchhappierbecauseIknowitismyqualitythatdecideswhoItrulyam.

6.助人为乐(名言）Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeoneinneedofhelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hoping___________(传递）theloveandkindnesstoothers.Justasasayinggoes,

“______________”(赠人玫瑰，手有余香）

Sometimesasmallactofloveandkindnesscanbepowerfulenoughto________________(产生巨大影响）.Sonever____________(低估）thevalueofouractions.

答案：1.late;gofor;takefulladvantageofit2.without

wings;withbrokenwings

3.lemonade4.hiddentreasures;what;what

5.source;more

fortable

6.topasson;Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.makeabigdifference;

underestimate

人与自我续写范文欣赏1：TheGirlwithFrecklesonHerFaceWhenIwasakidabouttwelveyearsold,Ihadalotoffreckles.IhadreachedtheagewhenIhadbeguntoreallylookatmyselfinthemirror,andIwasunderwhelmed.Apparentlymymotherwastoo,becausesometimesshe'dlookatmeandshakeherhead.

IhadacousinwhosenamewasJanetteElizabeth.Shelookedexactlylikehernamesounds.Shehadaflawlesspeachesandcreamplexion.Icouldn'thelpparingmyselfwithherandthinkingthatmylifewouldbealotdifferentifIhadbeautifulskintoo.

Andthen,inthebackpagesofJanetteElizabeth'smagazine,Ifoundtheanswer:anadvertisementforfreckleremovercream.IknewthatIcouldafforditifIsavedmymoney,andIdid.Theadassuredmethattheproductwouldworkwell.ForthreeweeksIwenttothemailboxeverydaypreciselyatthetimethemailwasdelivered.Iknewthatifsomeoneelseinmyfamilygotthemail,Iwouldneverheartheendofit.Therewasnowaythattheywouldletmeopentheboxinprivate.

Threeweekslater,mypackagefinallycame.Iwenttomyroomwithit,satontheedgeofmybed,andopenedit.IwassurethatIwaslookingatamiracle.WhenIgotupthenextmorning,Iappliedthecreamallovermybody.ThenItookmyhoeandwentwithmybrotherandcousinstohoethefield,whereIgotridofsometigerlilies,seeminglyuglywithblackandsmallspots.

Thesunwassostrongthatevenmyfacesstartedtoburn.Bytheendoftheday,whenIcamebacktothehouse,myfamily,knowingnothingaboutthefreckleremovercream,begantosaythingslike,

“I'veneverseenyouwiththatmanyfrecklesbefore."WhenIsawmyselfinthemirror,Idissolvedintotearsandhidinthebathroom.

Para1:Mymothercalledmetodinnertable,butIignoredher.________________________________Para2:Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom’sdoor._____________________________

答案：WhenshecametothebathroomdooranddemandedthatIeoutandhaveameal,Iburstoutofthedoor,tearsstreamingdownmycheeks.Beforeshestoppedme,Istormedintomyroomandslammedthedoorshutbehindme.Lookingintothemirror,Isawagirlwithmoreanddarkerfrecklesonthefaceinsteadofpeachesandcreamplexion(白里透红的肤色）.OnlythendidIrealizethatthecreamhadareverseeffectwhenwearingitinthesun.Ithrewmyselfdownonthebedandsobbed.

Hesitatingforamoment,withpuffy（肿胀的）

eyesandstillwetcheeks,Ishuffled（穿梭）

acrosstheroomtoopenthedoor.AtthedoorstoodmymotherandJanettewithabigbunchoftigerlilies,whichwerecoveredwithblackspotsbutamazinglybeautiful.Istaredattheminstunnedsurprise,notknowingwhattosay.Mymotherheldmeinherwarmembrace.

“Thereareallkindsofflowers,andtheyarealluniqueinbeautyandfragrance,”saidshe.Hearingthisandsmellingtheenchantingodor（迷人的气味）ofthetigerlilies,thefrecklesonmyfaceseemedtohavemagicallyfaded.

人与自我续写范文欣赏2：OutsidetheBox

TheHarvestfestcontestwasfallingonFridayandeveryoneinschoolwastalkingaboutit.Allthestudentswouldshowupintheirselfmadecostumes

andawinnerwouldbechosenbytheprincipal.

“DoyouhaveyourcostumefortheHarvestfestcontest?"Aliceasked."I'mgoingasachocolatebar.MymomandIhavebeenworkingonitallweek.”

“Yeah,Ihaveacostume,”saidJordanEastman,poppingupthetwofrontwheelsofhiswheelchairashewaitedforhisdadtopickhimup.“Butit'sboring.”

“Why?Whatisit?”Aliceasked.

“MaxMagthesuperhero,butDanny,TomandIzzyareallgoingasMaxMagtoo.”Jordanshookhishead.“That'stoomanytostandachanceatwinningthecontest.”Hewavedtohisdad,whohadjustpulledupinfrontoftheschool.

Jordanrolledhiswheelchairtowardhisdad,andAlicewalkedwithhimtotheminivan(小货车).

“Maybeyoushouldgoassomethingelse.”

“ThecontestisFridaynight.”Jordansighed.“It'stoolatetochangecostumes.”

“Jordan,youhavetothinkoutsidethebox.Lookaroundyourhouseandseewhatyouhave.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems."Shetookasipofherdrink,andtoldJordanthatherchocolatebarcostumewasmadefromoldfabrichermomhadlyingaroundandrecycledplastics.

Onhiswayhome,Jordanwasquiet.HekeptthinkingaboutAlice'swords:Thinkoutsidethebox.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.Whenhegothome,hefoundhismumhandlingwithsomewoodenpieces.Shewasputtinganewdesktogether.Ontopofthedeskwasthehugeemptycardboardboxthepieceshadein.MomsmiledatJordan,pointingatthedesk,

“Whatdoyouthink?”

Para1:Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,

"It'sperfect…withmywheelchair.”________________________________________Para2:SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn'twaittoshowhiscostume.__________________________________________________

答案：Jordan’seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It’sperfect…withmywheelchair.”

Hearingwhathesaid,momaskedwithapuzzledlook,

“Whatdoyoumean?”Jordanexplainedthewholethingtomom.Mom

clappedherhands

inexcitement

andreplied,

“Let’sdoitnow!”Theycutaholeonthetopofthebox,fixeditonthewheelchairanddecorateditwiththeMaxMagcostume.（动作描写）Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,they

were

tooe