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第二节（满分25分）2024届高三第二次学业质量评价T8联考英语试题（读后

续写）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。

Whenwewerefinallydismissedfromthelastclassoftheday,thestudents

streamedoutoftheclassrooms.Itwasanotherboringdayafterschool.Idraggedmy

feethomeasIsighed.Yetanotheruneventfulday,Ithought.LittledidIknowthatthe

daywouldtakeaturnfortheworse?

Theliftlobby（电梯间）ofmyflatwasoldanddirty.Thewalls,whichwere

paintedwhite,hadbeendirtiedovermanyyears.Ireachedmyflat'slobby,and

pressedtheliftbuttonandwentin.Justthen,MrsLim,myelderlyneighbour,hobbled

（蹒跚）in.Shelookedancientwithtissuepaperwhitehair,wearingafaded

old-fashioneddress.Iheldtheliftdooropen,flashingafriendlysmile,andpolitely

greetedher.Iaskedherhowshefeltthatdayandpressedthebuttons.Shethanked

meforbeingsopolite,thenweweresilentfortherestoftheride.

Theliftfelldownincreasinglyfast.Therewereloudclankingsoundshereand

therewhiletheliftgrewslowerandslower.Myheartbeathardandfastasmyhands

turnedcoldandwetwithsweat.Unfortunately,theliftcametoanabruptstopatthe

fifthfloor.Ipressedthebuttonshardseveraltimes,butitwasofnohelp.Thelights

onthebuttonshadgoneout.Itsoondawnedonmethatweweretrapped.Anicyfear

creptupmyspine.MrsLimwashysterical（歇斯底里）.

“Wewillnevergetout!”shecriedwithherfacepale.Ithadbecomeacolourless

mask.Ihadnotimetolose.Ipressedthebellintheliftimmediately.Thesoundwas

surelydeafening,butwhatotherchoicedidIhave?MrsLimburstintotears.Itried

myverybesttocomforther,tellingherthateverythingwouldbeallrightandthatwe

neededtofindouthowtogetoutsafely.MrsLimbeganhavingtroublebreathing,and

Iimmediatelyhelpedhersitdownandloosenedhercollar.

Paragraph1:Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.

Paragraph2:Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheother

sideoftheliftdoor.______________________________________________________________________________

试题分析

1.主要人物：

（T）I:astudent

②Mrs.Lim:myelderlyneighbor

2.视角：第一人称

3.主题：人与社会（被困电梯，如何与邻居老太太一起脱险）

4.前文故事梗概：

放学回家，感觉又过了无聊的一天。哪里知道，后来的事情，让人感觉更糟糕。

在老旧电梯碰到老邻居Mrs.Lim,蹒跚走进电梯。跟她打了招呼，然后就安静地等电

梯上行。突然电梯快速地下坠，后来在五楼停了下来。接着，电梯里一片漆黑。邻居

老太太吓得歇斯底里地哭喊。虽然我也感到恐惧，但我还是不断安慰她，帮助她镇定

下来。……

5.续写安排：

第一段：Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.

①（与前一句和前文衔接）当时电梯里的场景

②（过渡）我们的表现

③（承上启下）自救无果，等待救援

第二段：Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheother

sideoftheliftdoor.

①（与前一句衔接）我们的反应

②（过渡）消防员是怎样救我们的

③（收尾）事后回想

下水作文

Severalminutespassed,butnohelpcame.Thelightsflashednowandthen.Butit

wasn'tlongbeforetheydiedoutthoroughly.Thedarknessswallowedusentirely,

whichbroughtusmorefear.Iattemptedtopressthebuttonsthatseemedtobe

availablebutinvain.Theresultbroughtmethethoughtthatwemighthavenowayto

getout.IbegantoshoutforhelpasIbangedonthedoorsandcalmeddownmy

elderlyneighbor,sayingnothingwouldbewrong.Thatwasthedarkestand

excruciatingmomentinmylife,whichseemedtobeadecade,waitingforrescue.（96

words）

Bang!MyhopeswereliftedwhenIheardthefirefightersontheothersideofthelift

door.Wesprangtoourfeet,overjoyed.Luckyenough,rescuefinallycametous!They

sparednoeffortstobreakthedooropen.Steppingoutofthelift,wecouldclearlysee

beadsofsweatslidingdowntheirheadsandsensetheirgaspingforbreath.Nothing

couldbebetterthanseeingthebeautifulworldoutside!Weofferedourheartfelt

appreciationtothem.Myelderlyneighbor,Mrs.Lim,evencameover,huggingthem

tightlyasifreunitingwithonce-lostfamilymembers.Itturnedouttobethebestclass,

whichbroughtmethewarmth,careanddedicationofpeople.（97words）

试题呈现：20240423广州二模

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短

文。

WhenIwassevenyearsold,myfamilymovedfromMexicotoAmerica.InMexico,

Iwasacheerfulgirlwholovedmakingpeoplelaughwithmyjokesandinventing

finegamestoplaywithmyfriends.However,whenIarrivedinAmerica,Ifoundit

hardtofitin,andIbecamequieter.

Welivedinasmallhousewithamodestyardwherewegrew

vegetables-myresponsibility.WhileItookprideinwatchingthemgrow,therewere

timeswhenIdreamedofhavingabeautifulgardenlikemyschoolmateLuella's,with

itsdelicatetulips（有R金香）.AlthoughLuellalivedinthesameneighborhoodasme,we

barelykneweachother.

ItwasafteratornadothatLuellaandIfinallybecameclosefriends.Thetornado

struckonaSundayafternoon.Thegentlebreezetransformedintoastrongwind,and

thickgraycloudsfilledthesky.Gradually,thetornadotookshapestartingasathin

ropeandgrowingintoalargeblackfunnel（漏斗）.Myentirefamilygatheredinthe

bathroom,seekingshelterfromthestorm.Terrified,Isatclosetomymom,kneesin

mychest.Afterthestormhadpassed,ourworriesandfearswerereplacedbyrelief

thatwewereunharmedandthatourhousehadremainedundamaged.

AsIsteppedoutside,Iwitnessedtheextentofthedamagethetornadohad

causedtoourneighborhood.Acrossthestreet,atalltreehadfallen,crushingLuella's

gardeninfrontofheryellowhouse.Wehurriedovertocheckonit.Fortunately,her

familyseemedtobeawayatthetime,andnoonewasinjured,However,her

once-beautifulgardenwasinruins,withthefallentreedestroyingthetulipsand

debris（碎片）spreadeverywhere.Icouldonlyimaginehowheartbrokentheymust

feelseeingthis.Thenmymom'susualwordsranginmyear,“Itismoreblessedtogive

thantoreceive/'andmyfamilystartedtothinkabouthowwecouldhelp.

注意：1,续写词数应为150左右；2,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Just

atthatmoment,Luella'sfamilyreturnedintheircar.

Evenafterthedebriswascleared,IcouldstillsenseLuella'ssorrowforherlost

garden.

下水作文：114+141

Justatthatmoment,Luella'sfamilyreturnedintheircar.Themomentthey

steppedoffthecar,theywerereallytakenabackbythemessthetornadohadmadeof

thegarden,obviouslyunpreparedfortheseverityofthedamage.Luelladashed

towardswhatwasherbeautifulgardenandstrokedthoseweatheredflowers,sadness

writtenalloverherface.Seeingthis,Iapproachedher,tryingtocomforther.Tocheer

Luellaup,myparentsandIjoinedinthecleaningwork,puttingthefallentreebackin

place,clearingallthedebrisoutofthegardenandrepairingallthegardeningsupplies.

Withourjointefforts,whatwasjustnowalandofruinsnowturnedintoagardenon

itswaytorecovery.

Evenafterthedebriswascleared,IcouldstillsenseLuella'ssorrowforherlost

garden.Seeinghersufferingsomuch,IknewIshoulddosomething.rrWecanplants

sometulipseedsinthegarden.Andsoonyourgardenwillbeabeautifulagainwitha

seaoftulips/'Isuggested.Seeminglyinfectedbymyidea,shebeamedandnoddedin

approval.Thenextfewdayswitnessedthetwofamiliesworkingtogether,digging

holes,plantingtheseedsandputtingthesoilbackinplace.Itseemedthatthegarden

startedtoreviveitselfandwasgettingbackonitsfeet.Dayafterday,LuellaandI

watchedthetulipsgrowingandflowering,swayingelegantlyinthebreeze.Daybyday,

weembracedthefriendshipandclosenessgrowinginourhearts.NevercouldIhave

imaginedthatitwasthesetulipsthathelpedmefitintoaforeigncountryandfind

backthesunshineversionofme.

参考范文1：90+96

Justatthatmoment,Luella'sfamilyreturnedintheircar.Empathysurgedwithin

measIsawtheirshockanddisbelief.ApproachingLuella,Itightlyheldherhandsand

said,Tmsorryforyourloss,butthankfullyyou'reallright."Sheweaklynodded,still

puzzledbythedevastatingscene.Myfamilyvolunteeredtohelpcleanupthemess,

cuttingdownthebranchesandremovingthefallentrees.ToupliftLuella'sspiritsand

bringhercomfort,Itriedmybesttocheerherupwhiletidyingthegardenwithher,

duringwhichmyownjoyfulpersonalityseemedtoreviveabit.

Evenafterthedebriswascleared,IcouldstillsenseLuella'ssorrowforherlost

garden.Myheartwentouttoher,knowingherdevotiontothosetulipsshehad

nurtured.Determinedtorestorethebeautythatoncethrived,Isuggestedthatwe

rebuildthegarden,whichLuelladelightedlyembraced.Witheachbulbcarefully

planted,thenewtulipseedlingsfilledthegardenonceagain,whichsymbolizedthe

sproutingofanewfriendshipbetweenusaswellastheturningthatIfinallygot

embracedbythisnewenvironment.Mymomwaswasright:It'smoreblessedtogive

thantoreceivebecausewhenyougive,youmayreceivesomethingunexpectedin

return.

参考范文2：106+109

Justatthatmoment,Luella'sfamilyreturnedintheircar.Empathysurgedwithin

measIsawtheshockanddisbeliefontheirfaces.Icouldn'thelpbutapproachLuella,

tightlyholdingherhandsandsaying「Tmsosorryforyourloss,butthankfullyyou're

allright."Sheweaklynoddedatme,stillappearingpuzzledbythe