高三英语二轮复习读续扩写讲义

读续扩写练习长沙雅礼中学（高三）二模读后续写虽然读后续写只要求150词，官方给的参考，大多也是这些字数但（以新高考1区为例）读后续写考场上往往要求考生写满（可能要飙到180200词）因此，我认为日常要做扩写训练，从而学习【如何在不跑题、次要内容不多写的情况下，丰富主要】那么一般在哪些位置扩写呢？当然是主要情节部分，主要包括【矛盾出现、加剧、解决的环节】，可以从这三个方面入手练习扩写我们来看【长沙雅礼中学高三二模】的读后续写原材料“Haveyoudecidedonyourmajor?”myparentsinquired.“Bioengineering,ofcourse.”Irespondedwithouttheslightesthesitation.IenteredthisworldwithPolandsyndrome,adiseasethatpreventedtheformationofmyrightarmandpectoralmuscles(胸肌).Myparents,believingthatplayingwithLegocouldenhancemydexterity(灵巧),giftedmemyfirstkitwhenIwasfive.Strugglingtopiecetheponentstogether,IcraftedmyfirstLegowork–acar.AsIgotolder,IgrewobsessedwithLegoTechnic,amoreadvancedrange,andhowtouseittobuildmoredelicatestructures.Bytheageofnine,Ihadfashionedmyfirstprostheticarm(义肢)usingLegoTechnic–asimpleboxthatperfectlyacmodatedmyrightarm.Thisearlycreationsparkedmydriveforfurtherexploration.Yearslater,IdevelopedanotherprostheticarmthatIcalledtheMK1,whichhadfingers,amotor,apressuresensor,amovableelbowjoint,andagrabbercapableofpickingthingsup.Beforeconstructingit,Ihadalreadydecidedagainsttraditionalprosthetics.Notbecausetheywereineffective,butbecauseplayingwithLegodidsignificantlyimprovemydexterity,helpingmeadapttomycondition.However,amorefrustratingreasonwasthatprostheticsweretooexpensive.MyparentsandIhadlookedintogettingoneafewyearsearlier,onlytobediscouragedbytheprohibitiveprice.So,IconcludedthatImightnotneedonebecauseIwasmanagingwellwithout.Nevertheless,thejoyofcreatingprostheticswithLegoremained,andIcontinuedmakingthempurelyforthefunofit.Astheyearspassed,mycreationsevolvedfromMK1tothemoreadvancedandfortableMKV.Itfeaturedacontrolunitthatcouldsendandreceiveordersfromsensorsonthearmtothemotors,withcablesthatcontractlikemuscles.Oneday,acouplewiththeireightyearoldson,wholostbotharmsinanaccident,reachedouttomeafterlearningaboutmycreations.Shortofmoney,theycouldn’taffordwellfunctioningprosthetics.“Daniel,”thefatherearnestlyasked,“wewerewonderingifyoucouldpossiblyhelpbuildasetofprostheticsforourson.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Iknewitwouldbeachallenginganddemandingtask,butIrespondedwitha“yes”.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Irushedtotheboy’shomeandsecuredtheprostheticsontohim!______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________下面是官方给的参考Iknewitwouldbeachallenginganddemandingtask,butIrespondedwitha“yes”.Theboyliftedhisheadwithhisoncelifelesseyesnowglitteringwithasparkofhope.Ibeamedathimwitharadiantsmileandwithoutanydelay,embarkedonthetask,①ThesubsequentdayswitnessedhowIcarefullyselectedtheLegopiecesthatcateredtotheboy'sinterestsandintricatelyintegratedpracticalponentstoenhanceitsflexibility.Daysturnedintoweeks,andtheboycustomizedprostheticsfinallytookshape.It'stimeforthemtofulfilltheirintendedpurpose.【74字】Irushedtotheboy'shomeandsecuredtheprostheticsontohim.②Holdingbreath,weanxiouslyawaitedtheresulttheyworked!Theroomeruptedwithcheers!Theboyexpressedhisgratitudeandsprintedtohisparentstoenveloptheminthebiggesthughehadn'tbeenabletogiveforyears.Thescenewastrulyinspiring.NeverhadIimaginedthatmycreations,bornoutofmerefun,wouldsomedaymakesuchaprofounddifference.ItisonthatdaythatImadeupmymindtomitmyselftomakingalastingimpactintherealmofprostheticinnovation.【83字】下面我们可以去思考下在哪里扩写读后续写的原则是：不能在非主要情节上用太多文字，主要情节就是【矛盾出现、加剧、解决的环节】，可以从这三个方面入手在官方范文第一段找到【解决矛盾过程】定位在【我组装义肢这部分】在官方范文第二段找到【问题解决后】定位在【男孩试用义肢这部分】可以在这两个地方进行扩写扩写（阳老师原创）第一段：把第一段①【制作义肢的部分】扩写为【设计、制作、调整改进】三部分内容ThefollowingdaywitnessedhowIcarefullydesignedseveralprototypesandselectedoutthatmatchedtheboy’srequirements.Fromthesecondon,IhaveselectedtheLegopieces,assembledthemtogether,adjustedthemtoensureflexibility.Throughouttheprocess,Imetmanydifficulties,butfinallyImadeitwhentheboycustomizedprostheticsfinallytookshapeweeklater.（这部分原文36词，扩写之后变成60词）第二天，我精心设计了几款原型，并选择了一个符合男孩需求的方案。从第二天开始，我挑选乐高积木，组装它们，调整它们的位置以确保灵活性。在整个过程中，我遇到了许多困难，但最终在一周后，男孩定制的假肢终于完工。第二段：在第二段②增加【安装、试用的过程】Ifitteditonandlethimtrytopicksomething