读后续写：忘年交+学案-2024届高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写：忘年交（教师版）

题目：

JustafterNewYear's,beforeschoolvacationended.!wentoutforawalk.ltwasawalkI'

dbeenmeaningtotakeeversincewemovedtothehouse.

Itookmycamera-thefirsttimeI'dtakenmycameraoutsincewecametothecountry

andwent,dressedinmydownjacketandwearingheavyboots.Iwalkedtowardtheseemingly

abandonedhousethatIcouldseeacrossthefieldsfromtheupstairswindow.

Atruckwasparkedattheendoftheroad,besideatiny.weather-beatenhouse.Therewas

smokecomingoutofthechimney,andcurtainsinthetwolittlewindowsoneithersideofthe

door.Adogwasintheyard,whobarkedwhenhesawmecoming.Andbesidethe

truck-no,actuallyinthetruck,oratleastwithhisheadinsideit,wasaman.

“Hi,"Icalled.ltwouldhavebeensillytoturnaroundandstartwalkinghomewithout

sayinganything,eventhoughI'vepromisedmyparentsallmylifethatIwouldnevertalkto

strangemen.

Heliftedouthishead,agrayhead,smiled-anicesmile-andsaid,"MissChalmers.I'mglad

you'vecometovisit."

“Meg,"Isaid.Iwaspuzzled.HowdidheknowwhoIwas?

“ForMargaret?"heasked,comingoverandshakingmyhand."Forgiveme.Myhandsare

verydirty.Mybatterydiesinthiscoldweather."

“HowdidyouknowmynamewasChalmers?"

Hewipedhishandsonatowelthatwashangingfromthedoorhandleofthetruck."My

dear,Iapologize.!havenotevenintroducedmyself.MynameisWillBanks.Andit'smuchtoo

coldtostandouthere.Yourfeetmustbefrozen,eveninthoseboots.Comeinside,andIIImake

useachacupoftea.AndIlltellyouhowIknowyourname.”

Istoodunmoved.Hesawmehesitate,andsmiled."MegJhesaid,“Pmseventyyearsold.

Completelyharmless,eventoabeautifulyounggirllikeyou.Comeoninandkeepme

companyforabit,andgetwarm."

Ilaughed,becauseheknewwhatIwasthinking,andveryfewpeopleeverknowwhatI'm

thinking.ThenIwentinhishouse.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Hetookmyjacketandhungitupwithhis,andpouredteainto加。thickpotterymugs.

It'snicetohaveanewfriendJikeWill.

分析材料

Pl:sincewemovedtothehouse-»说明搬来新房子不久

P2:sincewecametothecountry7说了来到这个国家不久

P3:对一栋旧房子的描写,以及房前卡车里的一个男人

P4:strangemanf说明我不认识这个人

P5：MissChalmers一对方却叫出了"我"的名字

P6-8:作者提出疑惑

P9:willBanksr对方自报家门

P10:seventyyearsold,younggirl7确定两位主角的身份

Comeoninandkeepmecompanyandgetwarm7老人性格：很亲切，很热情

Istoodunmoved—“我”的心态：对陌生人心存戒心

Pll：laughed..fewpeople...―我的心态:一见如故.铺垫忘年之交

theniwentinhishouse一弓|起下文

第一段：场景为“我”进了win家里，两人喝茶，聊天，在交谈中解决掉“为什么他

认识我，我却对他没印象”的疑问，并打消我疑虑，建立了信任。

需要展开合理想象（他见过小时候的我，我那时候太小没印象；他多年前认识我们一家,

后来我们搬走了所以成长过程中我没有见过他）

第二段：It'snicetohaveanewfriend,likeWill.研读首句的时态，你有何发

现？该句为一般现在时。意为：交到像Will这样的新朋友，真是太好了。

所以第二段主要描写作者（一家）和will交上朋友之后的情况。合理增添细节如：直

打我们认识之后，他天天开着卡车，带我认识这个地方的各种风土人情。

我的改变：我慢慢地学会了当地的语言，了解了当地的风俗，适应了新生活。

本文的主题：人与人之间的关爱。

写作：

Hetookmyjacketandhungitupwithhis,andpouredteaintotwothickpotterymugs.

•他回忆起16年前的一个雨夜，当时我的父母带着当时两岁的我去了一次乡村旅行。

不幸的是，倾盆大雨把我们逼到了同一间小屋里，几乎令人难以置信地来到了我和

威尔现在分享的同一张桌子上。Herecalledarainynight16yearsago,whenmy

parentstookme,twoyearsoldthen,toacountrysideexcursion.Unfortunately,the

pouringraincorneredustothesamesmallcottageandalmostunbelievablytothesame

tableWillandIwerenowsharing.

・“不过，你的蓝眼睛和前额的美丽没有太大变化。”威尔笑了。我对他的幽默咯咯

地笑着，我们继续了解到我的家人在过去16年里的表现。“Yourblueeyesand

foreheadbeautyspothaven'tchangedmuch,though."Willsmiled.Igiggledathishumor

andwecontinuedtocatchuponhowmyfamilywasdoinginthepast16years.

It'snicetohaveanewfriend,likeWill.

・事实证明，他不仅无害，但还幽默、善良、精力充沛。我们经常在他那辆生锈但很

结实的大卡车里闲逛（不过，在我父母的允许下，甚至是他的陪伴下）。他向我认

识了其他村民，其中一些人甚至邀请我参加他们家人的周年纪念日和仪式。He

provesmorethanharmless,buthumorous,kind-heartedandvigorous.Weoftenhangout

(undermyparents'permissionandevencompany,though)inhislarge,rustybut

otherwiserobusttruck.Heacquaintedmewithothervillagers,someofwhomeven

invitedmetotheirfamilies'anniversariesandceremonies.

•我学会了当地的语言、习俗和仪式，完全适合这个新国家的生活，现在，对我来说，

它已经成为一个远离家的新家。Ipickedupthelocallanguage,customsandrituals,

perfectlyfittingintolifeinthisnewcountry,which,now,forme,hasbecomeanew

homeawayfromhome.

读后续写：忘年交（学生版）

题目：

JustafterNewYear's,beforeschoolvacationended.!wentoutforawalk.ltwasawalkV

dbeenmeaningtotakeeversincewemovedtothehouse.

Itookmycamera-thefirsttimeI'dtakenmycameraoutsincewecametothecountry

andwent,dressedinmydownjacketandwearingheavyboots.Iwalkedtowardtheseemingly

abandonedhousethatIcouldseeacrossthefieldsfromtheupstairswindow.

Atruckwasparkedattheendoftheroad,besideatiny.weather-beatenhouse.Therewas

smokecomingoutofthechimney,andcurtainsinthetwolittlewindowsoneithersideofthe

door.Adogwasintheyard,whobarkedwhenhesawmecoming.Andbesidethe

truck-no,actuallyinthetruck,oratleastwithhisheadinsideit,wasaman.

“Hi,"Icalled.ltwouldhavebeensillytoturnaroundandstartwalkinghomewithout

sayinganything,eventhoughI'vepromisedmyparentsallmylifethatIwouldnevertalkto

strangemen.

Heliftedouthishead,agrayhead,smiled-anicesmile-andsaid,"MissChalmers.I'mglad

you'vecometovisit."

“Meg,"Isaid.Iwaspuzzled.HowdidheknowwhoIwas?

”ForMargaret?"heasked,comingoverandshakingmyhand."Forgiveme.Myhandsare

verydirty.Mybatterydiesinthiscoldweather."

“HowdidyouknowmynamewasChalmers?"

Hewipedhishandsonatowelthatwashangingfromthedoorhandleofthetruck."My

dear,Iapologize.!havenotevenintroducedmyself.MynameisWillBanks.Andit'smuchtoo

coldtostandouthere.Yourfeetmustbefrozen,eveninthoseboots.Comeinside,andIIImake

useachacupoftea.AndIlltellyouhowIknowyourname.”

Istoodunmoved.Hesawmehesitate,andsmiled."MegJhesaid,“Tmseventyyearsold.

Completelyharmless,eventoabeautifulyounggirllikeyou.Comeoninandkeepme

companyforabit,andgetwarm."

Ilaughed,becauseheknewwhatIwasthinking,andveryfewpeopleeverknowwhatI'm

thinking.ThenIwentinhishouse.

注意：L续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Hetookmyjacketandhungitupwithhis,andpouredteainto加othickpotterymugs.

It'snicetohaveanewfriendJike监〃..

分析材料

Pl:sincewemovedtothehouse—说明

P2:sincewecametothecountry7说明

P3:对一栋的描写，以及房前_______里的一个

P4:strangeman—说明__________________________

P5：MissChalmers—对方却I

P6-8:作者提出_________

P9:willBanks—对方

P10:seventyyearsold,younggirl—确定两位主角的

Comeoninandkeepmecompanyandgetwarm7老人性格：

Istoodunmoved—“我"的心态：

Pll：laughed.fewpeople...―我的心态:,铺垫下文：我们

theniwentinhishouse一弓|起下文

第一段:场景为"我"进了Will家里,两人喝茶,聊天,在交谈中解决____________________

________________________________的疑问，并____________________________________o

需要展开合理想象（）

第二段：It'snicetohaveanewfriend,likeWilL研读首句的时态，你有何发现？

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