2025版高考英语一轮总复习第一部分应用文写作第一章书信第三讲求助信咨询

文体(四)慰问信慰问信是向失败者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到灾难的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此类书信感情要真挚、尽量以乐观的口吻来减轻对方的烦恼和痛苦，并鼓励对方对日后的生活和学习充满信心。具体写作结构为：1．吸引眼球开头句①I'msorrythatyouarehavingsuchahard/toughtimeatthemoment.Nearlyeveryonemayhaveoneoftheseperiodswheneverythingseemstobegoingwrong.得知你目前身处困境，我很难过。几乎每个人都可能有这样一个时期，一切似乎都出了问题。②IjustcannottellyouhowsorryIwastolearnofyourunhappy...得知了你不幸的……你不知道我有多难过。③IfeltverysorryindeedwhenIwasinformedof...当我得知……我真的感到很难过。④Iwasshockedtolearnofthenewsthat...听到……的消息，我很震惊。⑤Ijustcan'texpresshowsorryIwastoknowyouraccident.当我得知你发生事故时，我无法表达我是多么难过。2．亮点出彩篇中句①Idohopeyouaregettingsomerelieffromthepain.我真心希望能减轻你的痛苦。②Iwasdeeplyconcerned/worriedwhenIlearnedthat...当我听说……时，我非常担心。③Suchproblemisnotuncommonamong...在……中这样的问题并非罕见。④Keepingadiaryisalsoagoodchoice.记日记也是一个不错的选择。⑤Exercisingregularlyisoneofthemostimportantwaystohelpyoustayawayfromcatchinganyinfections.经常锻炼是帮助你避免任何感染的最重要手段之一。3．韵味无穷结尾句①IwishthereweresomethingIcouldsayordotoeaseyour...我希望我能说些或做些什么来减轻你的……②Pleasedon'thesitatetotellmeifthereisanythingIcando.如果我能做些什么，请直接告诉我。③Rememberwewon'tbefarawaywhenyouneedanyhelp!记住，当你需要任何帮助时，我们就在你身边！④Mayyougetridofyourtroublessoon.愿你早日摆脱烦恼。Dear,Learningyouareupsetabout(说明不幸：如生病、考试不理想、比赛失利等),Ifeelverysorry.Actually,(给予安慰).Therefore,there'snoneedtobeupset/worried.Astohowto(如何处理)，I'dliketoofferyousomesuggestions.Tobeginwith，(第一个建议)，as(说明该建议的好处)．Additionally,itisagoodchoice/ideato(第二个建议).Lastbutnotleast，(第三个建议).Ihopemysuggestionswillbeofbenefittoyou.Mayyougetridofyourtroublessoon.Yours，LiHua假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Amy不幸染上传染病，正在医院接受隔离治疗。请你用英语给她写一封慰问信，内容包括：1．表示同情；2．给予安慰；3．表达祝愿。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【满分范文】DearAmy，Itisshockingtolearnyouwereinfectedwithaninfectiousdiseaseandarebeingtreatedinhospital.However,itisunnecessarytoworryaboutthedisease，whichcanbecuredinashorttime.AsfarasIknow,medicalexpertshavebeensenttoyourhospital,thusenablingmorepatientstoreceivetimelyandeffectivetreatment.Anyway,youcandonothingbutcooperatewiththedoctorsandkeepapositiveattitude.Don'thesitatetocontactmeifyouneedanyhelp.Ihopeyouwillrecoversoon.Yours，LiHua【名师点评】1．文章开门见山说明自己对Amy不幸染上传染病感到震惊；然后给予安慰；最后表达祝愿。2．范文通过使用高级词汇(wereinfectedwith,timely,donothingbutcooperatewith,hesitate,contact)、定语从句(whichcanbecuredinashorttime)、动词-ing短语(thusenablingmorepatientstoreceivetimelyandeffectivetreatment)作结果状语，丰富了句式，增强了语言的表达效果。假定你是李华，得知你班外教老师James不幸发生车祸，左腿受伤住院。请你给他写一封信表示慰问，内容包括：1．给予安慰；2．虽不能打篮球，但可以弹奏乐器或看书；由Mr.Lee代课；3．表示祝愿。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】DearMr.James，Itisshockingtolearnyouinjuredyourleftleginthecaraccidentandthatyouhadtobetreatedinhospital.Iknowyoumustbeverysadatthemoment,asyouwillhavetogiveupplayingbasketballandcan'tgiveuslessons.However,misfortunemayproveablessingindisguise.Anyway,therearemanymoreinterestingthingstododuringt