2024年高考英语（书面表达）模拟真题 (上海专用)含答案解析

2024年高考英语（书面表达）模拟真题(上海专用)1．（2024·上海长宁·二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是李华，准备参加《英文报》举办的主题为“Changesinmycommunity”的征文活动,要求用英文介绍身边发生的变化。你的征文必须包括：1.描述发生的变化；2.客观分析变化发生的原因。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ChangesinmycommunityIt’scommonphenomenoninmycommunitythatelectriccarstakeupthemostparkinglotinthegarageinsteadofgasvehicles.Also,whenwecommutebetweenhomeandcompany,electricscootersplayacriticalroleintimeefficiency,convenienceandexpensespentontransportation.Peopletraveleverywherewithfastermeansoftransports,andmakefulluseofdigitalpaymentsystemsuchasWeChat,Alipay.Thereareafewreasonscontributingtothis.Firstly,withtherapiddevelopmentoftechnology,peopletendtocatertomainstreamlifestyleastechnologyaimstocreateabetterandmodernlifeandhasachievedwhatitpromises,whichisbeneficialtothepubliceventually.Secondly,oursocietyhasturnedintoahighlyefficientonethatpeoplehavetospeeduptoadaptto.Soitcomesasatrendthatthefaster,themoreefficient,thebetter.Idohopetechnologywilldousgoodmoreeconomicallyandbringmorecomforttoourcommunity.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求学生用英文介绍社区发生的变化，并客观分析变化发生的原因。【详解】1.词汇积累重要的：critical→crucial利用：makeuseof→takeadvantageof倾向于：tendto→belikelyto加速：speedup→accelerate2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Secondly,oursocietyhasturnedintoahighlyefficientonethatpeoplehavetospeeduptoadaptto.拓展句：Secondly,oursocietyhasturnedintosuchahighlyefficientonethatpeoplehavetospeeduptoadapttoit.【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly,withtherapiddevelopmentoftechnology,peopletendtocatertomainstreamlifestyleastechnologyaimstocreateabetterandmodernlifeandhasachievedwhatitpromises,whichisbeneficialtothepubliceventually.（运用了what引导的宾语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句和as引导的状语从句）【高分句型2】It’scommonphenomenoninmycommunitythatelectriccarstakeupthemostparkinglotinthegarageinsteadofgasvehicles.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句）2．（23-24高三下·上海浦东新·期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.随着人工智能的快速发展，ChatGPT已进入我们的生活，正逐渐影响我们的学习方式和体验，有人认为它会带来诸多便利，也有人心存顾虑。假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，学校贴吧就此话题正在热议，你对此很感兴趣，决定回帖响应。回帖内容应包括：1.你是否支持使用ChatGPT；2.你的理由。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Asastudent,IamintriguedbytheongoingdiscussionsurroundingChatGPTs.RegardingtheuseofChatGPT,Iamcautiouslysupportive,recognizingbothitspotentialbenefitsandconcerns.Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseofitsconvenienceandaccessibility.WithChatGPT,wehaveinstantaccesstoinformationandassistance,whichcangreatlyenhanceourlearningexperiences.Additionally,ChatGPTcanfostercreativityandexploration.ByinteractingwithChatGPT,studentshavetheopportunitytoengageinstimulatingconversations,explorenewideas.Thisinteractivelearningexperiencecaninspireinnovation,andencourageindependentthinking.However,IalsoacknowledgetheneedforcautionwhenusingChatGPT.Aswithanytechnology,thereareconcernsaboutprivacy,accuracy,andoverreliance.It’sessentialtouseChatGPTresponsiblyandmaintainabalancebetweentechnologicalassistanceandindependentlearning.Inconclusion,whileIsupporttheuseofChatGPTasavaluabletoolineducation,it’simportanttoapproachitsintegrationthoughtfullyandmindfullytomaximizeitsbenefitswhileaddressingpotentialchallenges.【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生就学校贴吧热议的ChatGPT话题回帖，发表自己的观点并陈述理由。【详解】1.词汇积累感兴趣的：intrigued→interested因为：becauseof→owingto帮助：assistance→help机会：opportunity→chance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseofitsconvenienceandaccessibility.拓展句：Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseitisconvenientandaccessible【点睛】【高分句型1】WithChatGPT,wehaveinstantaccesstoinformationandassistance,whichcangreatlyenhanceourlearningexperiences.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】However,IalsoacknowledgetheneedforcautionwhenusingChatGPT.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略）3．（2024·上海浦东新·二模）随着人工智能的快速发展，ChatGPT已进入我们的生活，正逐渐影响我们的学习方式和体验，有人认为它会带来诸多便利，也有人心存顾虑。假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，学校贴吧就此话题正在热议，你对此很感兴趣，决定回帖响应。回帖内容应包括：1.你是否支持使用ChatGPT;2.你的理由。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AsastudentatMingqiHighSchool,IamintriguedbytheongoingdiscussionsurroundingtheintegrationofChatGPTintoourlivesamidsttherapiddevelopmentofartificialintelligence.RegardingtheuseofChatGPT,Iamcautiouslysupportive,recognizingbothitspotentialbenefitsandconcerns.Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseofitsconvenienceandaccessibility.WithChatGPT,wehaveinstantaccesstoinformationandassistance,whichcangreatlyenhanceourlearningexperiences.Whetherit’sclarifyingconcepts,practicinglanguageskills,orreceivingpersonalizedfeedback,ChatGPToffersvaluablesupportthatcomplementstraditionallearningmethods.Additionally,ChatGPTcanfostercreativityandexploration.ByinteractingwithChatGPT,studentshavetheopportunitytoengageinstimulatingconversations,explorenewideas,andexpandtheirknowledgeindiversesubjects.Thisinteractivelearningexperiencecansparkcuriosity,inspireinnovation,andencourageindependentthinkingamongstudents.However,IalsoacknowledgetheneedforcautionwhenusingChatGPT.Aswithanytechnology,thereareconcernsaboutprivacy,accuracy,andoverreliance.It’sessentialtouseChatGPTresponsibly,criticallyevaluatetheinformationitprovides,andmaintainabalancebetweentechnologicalassistanceandindependentlearning.Inconclusion,whileIsupporttheuseofChatGPTasavaluabletoolineducation,it’simportanttoapproachitsintegrationthoughtfullyandmindfullytomaximizeitsbenefitswhileaddressingpotentialchallenges.(word:217)【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。随着人工智能的快速发展，ChatGPT已进入我们的生活，正逐渐影响我们的学习方式和体验，有人认为它会带来诸多便利，也有人心存顾虑。假设你是明启中学的学生王磊，学校贴吧就此话题正在热议，你对此很感兴趣，决定回帖响应。【详解】1.词汇积累提高，促进：enhance→prompt/facilitate鼓励：inspire→motivate重要的：essential→vital总之：inconclusion→toconclude2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseofitsconvenienceandaccessibility.拓展句：Firstly,IsupporttheuseofChatGPTbecauseitisconvenientandaccessible.【点睛】【高分句型1】Whetherit’sclarifyingconcepts,practicinglanguageskills,orreceivingpersonalizedfeedback,ChatGPToffersvaluablesupportthatcomplementstraditionallearningmethods.（运用了whether...or引导的让步状语从句）【高分句型2】WithChatGPT,wehaveinstantaccesstoinformationandassistance,whichcangreatlyenhanceourlearningexperiences.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）4．（2024·上海静安·二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学李华，你校艺术节即将举办主题为“最美瞬间”的摄影展，捕捉“热爱生活、积极向上、全面发展”等正能量的精彩瞬间。现邀请每位同学提供自己生活中的一张照片参展，并撰写摄影作品的介绍供参观者阅读。你打算提供什么样的照片？请写一篇短文作为参展摄影作品的介绍，内容包括：1)对该照片的简要描述；2)你选择该照片参展的理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Thisisaphotodepictingasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.Intheimage,thesunisjustpeekingoverthehorizon,castingawarmgoldenglowacrosstheskyandilluminatingtherollingcloudsthatclingtothemountainslopes.Ichosethisphotofortheexhibitionbecauseitcapturesabreathtakingmomentofnaturalbeautyandserenity.Thevibrantcolorsofthesunrisesymbolizehopeandnewbeginnings,reflectingthethemethattheartfestivalseekstopromote.Additionally,thetranquilatmosphereofthesceneencouragesviewerstopauseandappreciatethewondersofnature,fosteringasenseofmindfulnessandgratitude.Thephotoinvitesviewerstoconnectwiththeirsurroundingsandfindinspirationinthesimplejoysofeverydaylife.Itservesasaremindertoembraceeachmomentwithenthusiasmandapositiveoutlook.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，参与学校艺术节即将举办的“最美瞬间”摄影展，为参展摄影作品写一篇介绍，需涵盖简要描述和选择的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累描绘：depict→portrary捕捉：capture→catch,seize象征：symbolize→represent,signify激励某人做某事：encouragesb.todo→motivatesb.todo,inspiresb.todo培养：foster→cultivate,develop2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thisisaphotodepictingasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.拓展句：Thisisaphotothatdepictsasunriseoveramistymountainpeak.【点睛】[高分句型1]Intheimage,thesunisjustpeekingoverthehorizon,castingawarmgoldenglowacrosstheskyandilluminatingtherollingcloudsthatclingtothemountainslopes(运用了现在分词短语作状语、that引导限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Ichosethisphotofortheexhibitionbecauseitcapturesabreathtakingmomentofnaturalbeautyandserenity.(运用了because引导原因状语从句)5．（23-24高三下·上海·阶段练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.简单描述图片内容，分析造成此现象的原因，并谈谈你的看法。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:ThosedaysChineseparentstendtospendalotofmoneysendingtheirchildrentostudyabroadinthehopeoftheirchildrenstudyinghardandbeingsuccessful,whilethechildrenthinkofstudyingabroadasawaytogetridofthepressureofstudy.There’retwomainreasonsforthisphenomenon.Ontheonehand,becauseofsocietalattitudes,parentsoftenholdthebeliefthatoverseaseducationleadstobetteropportunities.Therefore,theywouldliketosendtheirchildrenabroad.Ontheotherhand,Chinesestudentsareunderthegreatpressureofentranceexaminations.Goingabroadmeansthattheycanliveaneasierlife.Inmyopinion,someeffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentosolvethisproblem.First,parentsshouldcorrecttheiroutdatedideas.Second,thegovernmentshouldactivelycarryouteducationalreformtoreducethepressureonstudents.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，要求考生根据图画表达的内容，分析产生该现象的原因，并谈谈自己的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累倾向于：tendtodo…→haveatendencytodo…希望：inthehopeof→intheexpectationof把……看作……：thinkof…as…→regard…as…/see…as…压力：pressure→stress2.句式拓展合并句子原句：Ontheotherhand,Chinesestudentsareunderthegreatpressureofentranceexaminations.Goingabroadmeansthattheycanliveaneasierlife.拓展句：Ontheotherhand,Chinesestudentsareunderthegreatpressureofentranceexaminations.whilegoingabroadmeansthattheycanliveaneasierlife.【点睛】【高分句型1】ThosedaysChineseparentstendtospendalotofmoneysendingtheirchildrentostudyabroadinthehopeoftheirchildrenstudyinghardandbeingsuccessful,whilethechildrenthinkofstudyingabroadasawaytogetridofthepressureofstudy.(使用了第一个不定式作tend的宾语、第二个不定式在sendsb.todo…结构中作宾补、第三个不定式在way后边作后置定语，还使用了动名词作宾语，并且使用了while连接并列的句子)【高分句型2】Ontheonehand,becauseofsocietalattitudes,parentsoftenholdthebeliefthatoverseaseducationleadstobetteropportunities.(使用了that引导同位语从句)6．（2024高三下·上海·专题练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明启中学的高三学生吴磊，你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览，邀请每位同学提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读。你会提供什么物品?写一篇介绍，内容须包括：1)对该物品的简要描述；2)你选择该物品参展的原因。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】下水版：I’mdelightedtobeinvitedtotheEnglishFestivalatourschool,whichisorganizinganexhibitionentitled‘HappyChildhood’.Formycontributiontotheexhibits,Ihaveelectedtoprovideaphotographfrommychildhood.TheimagedepictsasceneinwhichIamplayingwithmyfamilyinapark.Thesunisshiningbrightly,andweareallvisiblyenjoyingourselves.Iselectedthisphotographforinclusionintheexhibitionbecauseitrepresentsajoyfulmomentfrommychildhood.ItservesasareminderofthedelightfultimesIspentwithmyfamily,engaginginplayfulactivitiesandsharinglaughter.Onthatparticularsunnyafternoon,wepartookinapicniconthegrassandplayedgames,resultinginanenjoyableweekendspenttogether.Additionally,thisphotographevokesfeelingsofwarmthandhappinesswithinme,anditismyhopethatbysharingitwithvisitorstotheexhibition,theytoomayexperienceaglimpseintomyhappychildhood.Itservesasareminderoflife’ssimplepleasuresandthesignificanceofspendingtimewiththoseweholddear.Inbrief,mycontributiontothe‘HappyChildhood’exhibitionisaphotographthatcapturesajoyousmomentfrommypast.Itrepresentsthehappinessandlovethatcharacterizedmychildhoodexperiences,anditismyhopethatitwillelicitsimilarfeelingsofjoyinthosewhoviewit.Bysharingthisphotograph,Iaimtoconveythemessagethatchildhoodisatimeofhappinessandwonder,andthatsuchmemoriesaretobecherished.(257)学霸版：I’mSeniorThreestudentWuLei,andwhatIbringtothis“HappyChildhood”exhibitionis“Henry”,mygiantfluffyteddybear,whohasbeenaccompanyingmeforoveradecade.Hehasbrownskin,darkeyes,arednose,andsoftpadsthataremostcomfortabletorub.Ichoose“Henry”simplybecauseheservesasaconstantreminderofhowIhavecomeintowhoIamtoday.Igot“Henry”whenIturnedsevenyearsold.Beingrathernaughtybackthen,Iwantedalmosteverythingthatcameintomysight,andusuallyditchedthemonceIgottired.ButHenry”wassomehowdifferent.DuringourtimetogetherIgraduallydevelopedadeepaffectionforhim,alongsidewhichasenseofresponsibilitycamenaturally.Insteadofjustleavinghimaroundmyhome,Iwouldplacehimproperlyeitheronmybedorbythewindow.EverytimeourfamilywentforanoutingIwouldtakehimalong,andnomatterhowlatewegothomeIalwaysmadesureHenry”wascarefullycleaned.ThoughIdon’thaveasmuchtimethesedaystokeephimcompany,youcantellwhatexcellentconditionheisinevenafteralltheseyears.Aboveisthestoryofmeandmydear“Henry”.Ihopeyouhaveagoodtimeandenjoythefestival!(224)附：OnePossibleVersion①MynameisWuLei,aseniorhighschoolstudentfromMingqiMiddleSchool,andIwillbeparticipatinginourschool’sEnglishexhibitionthemedon“HappyChildhood”.Frommychildhoodcollection,Ihavechosenapreciousitem—mymuchbelovedteddybear.Thissoftandcuddlybearhasbeenmyconstantcompanionformorethanadecade.ItwasgiftedtomebymydearauntwhenIwasjustfiveyearsold.Thebear’sendearingfeatures—itsglossyblackeyes,rednoseandsoftbrownfur—haveremainedunaltereddespitethewearandtearofyears.ThereasonIhavechosenthisstuffedtoyasmyexhibitisthatitevokesprofoundmemoriesofmyhappychildhoodandbringsbackafloodofdelightfulnostalgia.Thischerishedteddyhasstoodbymethroughalltheupsanddownsofgrowingupandhasneverletmedown—alwaysprovidingunconditionalcomfortandsolacewheneverIneededit.Itwasnotonlymyplaymateandcomforterbutaconfidantwhoheardallofmychildhoodconfessionsandsecrets.Inconclusion,thisseeminglysimpleplushbearisatreasuretroveofemotionsandmemoriesforme.ItrepresentsaninnocentandhappytimeinmylifethatIwillcherishforever.附：OnePossibleVersion②Theexhibitionshowcasesvariousitemsrepresentingahappychildhood,andIhavechosenmychildhooddiaryasmyexhibit.Thisdiaryholdscherishedmemoriesandisawindowintomypast.Itisasmall,weatheredbookwithyellowedpages,filledwithmyhandwrittenthoughts,dreams,andexperiencesfrommyearlyyears.Ichosethisdiaryasmyexhibitbecauseitisatangiblerepresentationofmyjoyfulandinnocentchildhood.Withinitspagesliethestoriesofmyadventures,dreams,andthedailymomentsthatshapedmeintowhoIamtoday.EachentrycapturestheessenceofmyemotionsandthesimplepleasuresIexperiencedduringthosecarefreeyears.Throughmychildhooddiary,Ihopetoevokenostalgiaandencouragevisitorstoreflectontheirowncherishedmemories.Itservesasareminderoftheimportanceofembracingtheinnocenceandjoythatchildhoodbrings.Furthermore,ithighlightsthesignificanceofpreservingourpersonalhistoriesandthepowerofreflectioninshapingourpresentselves.Asvisitorsreadtheexhibit,Ihopetheyareinspiredtocherishtheirownchildhoodmemoriesandrecognizethevalueofembracinghappinessintheirlives.Maythisexhibitserveasajoyfulreminderofthepreciousmomentsthathaveshapedouridentitiesandbringasmiletothefacesofallwhovisit.【导语】这是一篇应用文。假如考生是明启中学的高三学生吴磊，你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览，邀请每位同学提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读。写一篇你提供的物品的介绍和你选择它的原因。解析以第一篇为例。【详解】1.词汇积累提供：provide→offer选择：select→choose代表：represent→standfor导致：resultin→leadto2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Onthatparticularsunnyafternoon,wepartookinapicniconthegrassandplayedgames,resultinginanenjoyableweekendspenttogether.拓展句：Onthatparticularsunnyafternoon,wepartookinapicniconthegrassandplayedgames,whichresultedinanenjoyableweekendspenttogether.【点睛】【高分句型1】Iselectedthisphotographforinclusionintheexhibitionbecauseitrepresentsajoyfulmomentfrommychildhood.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)【高分句型2】TheimagedepictsasceneinwhichIamplayingwithmyfamilyinapark.(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的限制性定语从句)7．（23-24高三上·上海浦东新·期末）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.近期，“消失的课间十分钟”问题引发社会持续热议。有些学校规定，学生在课间除了上厕所、喝水之外，不允许离开教室。请对此现象发表你的看法。你的作文须包括：1.

简要分析该现象背后的原因；2.

结合自身经历，谈谈如何“唤醒”课间十分钟。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

The“disappearingtenminutesbetweenclasses”hassparkedwidespreaddebateinsociety.Someschoolshaveimplementedrulesthatprohibitstudentsfromleavingtheclassroomexceptusingtherestroomordrinkingwater.Behindthistrendliesafocusonacademicperformanceandadesiretokeepstudentssafe.However,thesemeasurescandoharmtostudents’physicalandmentalwell-being.Inmyexperience,thebreakswereacherishedtimeforsocializing,freshair,andexercise.To“wakeup”these“disappearingtenminutesbetweenclasses”,schoolsshouldpromoteacultureofwellness,provideopportunitiesforphysicalactivity,andencouragestudentstotakefulladvantageoftheirbreaks.Bygivingbackthesepreciousminutes,westudentscanenjoyamorebalancedlearningenvironmentwherewecanthrivebothacademicallyandpersonally.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文，要求考生就“消失的课间十分钟”问题发表看法，简要分析该现象背后的原因，并结合自身经历谈谈如何“唤醒”课间十分钟。【详解】1.词汇积累引发：spark→trigger/cause实施：implement→conduct对……有害：doharmto→beharmfulto推动：promote→encourage2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Someschoolshaveimplementedrulesthatprohibitstudentsfromleavingtheclassroomexceptusingtherestroomordrinkingwater.拓展句：Someschoolshaveimplementedrulesprohibitingstudentsfromleavingtheclassroomexceptusingtherestroomordrinkingwater.【点睛】【高分句型1】Behindthistrendliesafocusonacademicperformanceandadesiretokeepstudentssafe.(使用了全部倒装结构、不定式作后置定语、“keep+宾语+宾补”结构)【高分句型2】To“wakeup”these“disappearingtenminutesbetweenclasses”,schoolsshouldpromoteacultureofwellness,provideopportunitiesforphysicalactivity,andencouragestudentstotakefulladvantageoftheirbreaks.(使用了不定式作目的状语和宾补，还使用了and连接三个并列的谓语)【高分句型3】Bygivingbackthesepreciousminutes,westudentscanenjoyamorebalancedlearningenvironmentwherewecanthrivebothacademicallyandpersonally.(使用了动名词作宾语、where引导定语从句)8．（2024·上海徐汇·一模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.随着中国传统文化越来越受到国人的重视，例如中国的各种传统节日，它们充满了中国的历史、理念、哲学思考和善良的中国人对人性的深刻认知和理解。假如你是中华中学的学生李敏，关于这个话题在知乎上写一篇文章，谈谈你的看法，题目自拟。你的文章必须包括：1.选择一项中国传统节日和一项西方节日进行对比；2.谈谈你对中国传统文化的理解。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:AsastudentatZhonghuaHighSchool,I’vewitnessedthegrowingappreciationoftraditionalChinesecultureamongmyfellowcountrymen.TraditionalChinesefestivals,suchastheSpringFestivalandMid-AutumnFestival,embodynotonlyChina’shistorybutalsoitsphilosophicalreflectionsandtheprofoundunderstandingandcompassionoftheChinesepeopletowardshumannature.Onthistopic,IrecentlysharedmythoughtsonZhihu,sheddinglightonmyperspective.Firstly,let’scompareaChinesetraditionalfestivalwithaWesternone.TakingtheSpringFestivalandChristmasasexamples,theSpringFestivalisChina’sparamounttraditionalcelebration,symbolizingnewbeginnings,familyreunions,andaprofoundemphasisonfamilyvalues.Incontrast,ChristmasintheWestplacesagreateremphasisongiftexchangesandacommercialatmosphere,highlightingpersonalenjoymentandfestivities.Inmyview,traditionalChinesecultureisavastandprofoundtreasuretrove.Itencompassesnotonlyritualsandcustomsbutalsoprofoundcontemplationsonlife,nature,andinterpersonalrelationships.TraditionalChinesevalues,centeredaroundfamily,filialpiety,andharmony,haveinstilledinmeamoralcompass.Throughtraditionalfestivals,I’velearnedtheimportanceofrespectingeldersandcherishingfamily.Intoday’ssociety,thecomparisonbetweenChineseandWesterncultureshasdeepenedmyunderstandingoftheuniquenessoftraditionalChineseculture.It’scrucialtocontinuepromotingthevaluesembeddedinourtraditions,fosteringamoreharmoniousandcivilizedsociety.【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇开放性作文。要求考生选择一项中国传统节日和一项西方节日进行对比；谈谈自己对中国传统文化的理解。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：firstly→tobeginwith重要：importance→significance相比之下：incontrast→incomparison在我看来：inmyview→asfarasI’mconcerned2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Onthistopic,IrecentlysharedmythoughtsonZhihu,sheddinglightonmyperspective.拓展句：Onthistopic,IrecentlysharedmythoughtsonZhihu,whichshedslightonmyperspective.【点睛】[高分句型1]Incontrast,ChristmasintheWestplacesagreateremphasisongiftexchangesandacommercialatmosphere,highlightingpersonalenjoymentandfestivities.(运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]It’scrucialtocontinuepromotingthevaluesembeddedinourtraditions,fosteringamoreharmoniousandcivilizedsociety.(运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式作主语，动名词作宾语)9．（23-24高三上·上海宝山·期末）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你们英语老师每周都会让同学们轮流用英语做值日生报告，大家在给全班同学展示的时候，有些同学喜欢写好稿子朗读，有些同学偏向背诵，还有些同学倾向于直接口头表达。请给英语老师写一封邮件，告诉老师你喜欢哪种呈现方式，以及相关的理由。你的文章必须包括：1.简单描述你喜欢的呈现方式(不仅限于上面三种方式)；2.陈述你选择这种方式的理由或你所选择方式的优势。(文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称)_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMr.Li,

Iamwritingtoexpressmypreferenceforthepresentationstyleofusingshortnoteswhiledoingtheweeklyclassroomdutyreport.Thereasonforthisisthreefold.

Firstly,thismethodallowsmetoconveytheimportantpointsclearlyandsuccinctly.Ithelpsmetofocusontheessentialinformationanddeliverittotheclasseffectively.Secondly,itreducesthepossibilityofmakingmistakesorforgettingimportantdetailswhilepresenting.Thirdly,shortnotesmakememoreconfidentandlessnervous,asIcanrefertothemandmaintaineyecontactwiththeaudience.

Incontrast,Ifeelthatreadingfromapreparedmanuscriptormemorizingthewholereportcanbestressfulandmayleadtostumblesorerrors.Moreover,itmaybedifficulttomaintainanaturalflowoflanguage.

Inconclusion,Ibelievethatusingshortnotesisaneffectiveandefficientwaytopresentmyweeklydutyreport.Ihopeyouwillconsidermypreferencefortheupcomingweeks.Sincerely,Li