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你的美国朋友Chris目前在北京学习汉语，他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣。本周五下午你校将要举办一个文化讲座，请你根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加。1.农业大学张教授讲解中国茶文化的历史和传播；2.讲座后有交流和品茶活动；3.你将陪同Chris并帮其翻译讲解。注意：1.词数不少于50。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。HiChris，_______________________________________________________________________________Yours，Joe你的美国朋友Chris目前在北京学习汉语，他对中国传统文化非常感兴趣。本周五下午你校将要举办一个文化讲座，请你根据以下提示给他写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加。1.农业大学张教授讲解中国茶文化的历史和传播；2.讲座后有交流和品茶活动；3.你将陪同Chris并帮其翻译讲解。注意：1.词数不少于50。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。HiChris，____________________________________________Yours，Joe出现错误：

1.缺少要点，请把要点画出来，尤其注意，1,2,3项上面出现的要点和细节。2.thisthatlastnext前面不加介词3.陪伴accompany动词accompanysb

company名词withyourcompany,Iwillbejoyful4.Transalte…into…..interpreter5.不能..的都加’s

mymother’sbook

thehistoryandspreadofChineseteaHiChris,How’severythinggoing?ConsideringthatyouareeagertolearnChinesetraditionalculture,I’dliketoinviteyoutoourcomingculturelecture.Letmetellyousomedetailedinformation.

ThelectureisscheduledtostartthisFridayafternooninourschool,inwhichProfessorZhangfromUniversityofAgriculturewilltellusaboutthehistoryandspreadofChinesetea.Thiswillbefollowedbyateapartyandyoucantastedifferentkindsoftea

whilechattingwithteachersandstudentsofourschool.Don’tworryaboutthelanguage.Iwillbewithyoutotranslateandexplainwhatyoudon’tunderstand.

Ifyoudon’thaveanypriorappointmentthen,Iamlookingforwardtoyourcoming.文章中心：帮助别人雷锋记叙文时态一般过去，感想一般现在人称：第一，第三段落：总分总开头结尾照应开头交代时间地点人物事件起因中间2,3幅图详写，每幅图有感情，心理描写〔双方〕第一幅图：要点：发现游客找不到路必要细节：我走在路上两个游客手里拿着地图，背着包添加细节：游客：看起来很迷惑，着急。第二幅图：要点：主动上前帮助必要细节：我走上前，询问，听到问题后，思考，解答，在地图上指出，游客告知目的地，添加细节：我：用英语详细讲解游客：听到解释后放松第三幅图：要点：告知乘车线路必要细节：带游客去车站，指着站牌讲解线路游客终于明白了可添加细节：我：怕乘客找不到车站，等车时介绍北京名胜古迹，小吃游客：感谢，快乐第四幅图：要点：游客上车，挥手辞别必要细节：车来了，我看着游客上车，互相挥手辞别可添加细节：我：帮助了别人满足，快乐，祝他们旅途愉快游客：再次感谢，赞许

错误：少细节手里拿着地图20路公共汽车2.AfteraskingthemwhatIcoulddoforthem,theytoldmetheirdestinationwas…3.Whilelistenedattentively,theyexpressedtheirgratitudeformykindness4.ItoldthemtheycangototheTempleofHeavendirectlybythisbus.5.IwalkedclosetohimandaskingifthereissomethingIcoulddoforthem6.Iwalkedtothemandaskedthemifneededhelp7.IthoughtIcouldhelpthem,Iwalkedtothem.8.YouwillalsogainedWeshouldhelpedeachother9.Seeingtheconfusingexpression10.Withconfusedlooksformedontheirfaces有用的词组：Sbwas/isdoing….When当..正在做….突然…2.ItseemedthattheygotlostTheyseemedtogetlost3.Loseone’swaygetlost4.Apparentlyobviously5.Lookingpuzzledconfusedexpression/lookswithamapintheirhands第二幅图：Withouthesitation2.walkuptosb3.offertohelp4.Pointoutthelocationshowthemthedirection5.Failtolocate(位于，确定..的位置〕〔belocatedin〕6.Smileinrelief有用的词组：第三幅图：Forfearthat(incase)LeadsbtosplwalksbtosplThebusstopboardNo.20BustheNo.20bustakethebusgetoffatthe…stopBeamatsbwithappreciationsmilebroadly/brightlyAsenseofprideandachievementrosefromthebottomofone’sheart第四幅图：wavegoodbyetoeachotherGetonthebusSeesb(宾格〕doingWishthemawonderfultrip有用的词组：感想：HelpingothersmakesourlifebeautifulThisremindmeofthegreatexampleofLeiFeng.Ithinkweshouldpassonthisspiritforever.GivingisthesourceofhappinessLeifengneverfailedtohelpothers,soIhaveastrongfaiththatIcoulddoitlikehimWithprideandjoyfilledinmyheart,Icametorealizethatgivingothersahandisdefinitelyworthwhilebecauseitbringsmuchmorethanhappiness.Thismorning,IwasjoggingalongtheroadinmyneighborhoodwhenIcameacrossaforeigncouplewithamapintheirhands.Confusionwasclearontheirfacesandimmediatelyitdawnedonmethat/Irealizedthattheymustgetlost.

Withouthesitation,Iwalkedtothemandofferedtohelp.Thankfully,myEnglishwasgoodenoughtomakemyselfunderstood.TheysmiledinreliefandsaidtheywantedtovisittheTempleofHeavenbutfailedtolocateitinthemap.Quickly,Ipointeditoutonthemapandshowedthemthedirectionaswell.

Worriedbythethoughtthat/forfearthattheymightgotlostontheway,IwalkedthemtothenearbybusstopandtoldthemtotakeBusNo.20directlyandgotoffattheTempleofHeavenstop.AfterhearingwhatIsaid,theybeamedatmewithappreciationAfterawhile,theNo.20buspulledupatthestop.Thecouplethankedmewarmlyagain,expressingtheirsinceregratitudeformykindhelp.Wewavedgoodbye