高三下学期太原三模英语读后续写助人类+A+special+harvest+fair+讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。人与社会——人与人之间（人际关系）——分享自己的机会给别人同样会获得相同的回报Onasunny

afternoon,

myfriend

Ollie

and

I

were

enjoyingskateboarding

atourlocalpark.

OurmoodwaslightuntilOlliespotteda

poster

fortheupcoming

HarvestFair.

Theideaof

attendingitwas

thrilling,

but

the

ticket

price

of$50quickly

iced

our

enthusiasm.在一个阳光明媚的下午，我和朋友奥利在当地的公园玩滑板。我们的心情很轻松，直到奥利看到了即将到来的收获博览会的海报。参加的想法让人很激动，但50美元的票价很快就打消了我们的热情。Whilewewerethinkingoverthecost,

ourattentionwasdrawntothelistofattractions.

Among

thevariousactivities,

wenoticedthat

ourfavoriteband—Eagles

wasgoingtoperform.

We

couldn't

helpbutbreak

intosingingour

favoritesong

bythem.

What

addedtoourexcitement

wasthe

piecontest

intheposter,

adelightfulreminderof

oursharedmemory.

It

usedtobethe

mostpopulareventinourcommunity.

Butthinkingoftheexpensive

tickets,

whichseemedto

bea

shadowoverour

excitement,

weallsighed.

ThenIsuggestedgoingtomyparents'

storeto

seeif

theycould

help.当我们考虑成本时，我们的注意力被吸引到了景点列表上。在各种各样的活动中，我们注意到我们最喜欢的乐队——老鹰乐队要表演了。我们忍不住唱起了他们最喜欢的歌。更让我们兴奋的是海报上的馅饼比赛，这令人愉快地提醒我们共同的记忆。它曾经是我们社区最受欢迎的活动。但一想到昂贵的门票，我们都叹了一口气，这似乎给我们的兴奋蒙上了阴影。然后我建议去我父母的商店看看他们是否能帮忙。Uponarriving,

mydadtoldushehadsomegoodnews,

showingsometicketstous.

They

weretheveryoneswehadseenin

the

poster!

Mydadexplainedthat

hisoldpartnerhadmadea

request

tohanga

poster

herefor

theHarvestFair,

andinreturn,

heofferedusfreepasses.

Muchto

my

delight,

thereweresixticketsfor

fivepeopleinourfamily

andan

extraoneformyfriend!

The

news

waslike

abreathof

freshair,

bringingunexpectedjoy

into

ourday.

We

couldallsetout

toexperiencethefair

together,

noonemissingout.到达后，我爸爸告诉我们他有一些好消息，给我们看了一些票。正是我们在海报上看到的！我爸爸解释说，他的老搭档要求在这里挂一张丰收集市的海报，作为回报，他给了我们免费通行证。令我非常高兴的是，我们家五口共有六张票，还有一张给我朋友的！这个消息就像一股新鲜空气，给我们的一天带来了意想不到的欢乐。我们可以一起去体验博览会，没有人会错过。Justthen,

Mrs.

Smith,

ourawesome80-year-oldneighbor,

walkedunsteadilytowardsus.

"I

justsawtheposter

inyourwindow.

HowIused

tolovegoing

tofairs!"

She

paused,

with

hereyes

droppingbeforeshecontinued.

"But

it'shardformetoget

aroundnow,

andticketscostsomuch

thesedays..."就在那时，夫人。我们80岁的邻居Smith摇摇晃晃地向我们走来。“我刚刚看到你橱窗里的海报。我以前多么喜欢去集市！”她停顿了一下，眼睛往下掉，然后继续说道。“但我现在很难四处走动，而且这些天门票太贵了……”注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph1Ollieapproachedme,

seemingly

tosaysomething.

_____________________________________________文本分析：问题1---年迈Mr.Smith的想去丰收季集市，但昂贵的门票加上行动不便，让这次行程非常困难。解决途径---Ollie把自己的票让给年迈的Mr.Smith问题解决--Mr.Smith成功去了集市并非常开心问题2----Ollie没能去成收获节集市解决途径---我们为他举办简易的家庭版丰收节集市问题解决----Ollie弥补了遗憾，大家收获了喜悦，感悟到小“善举”成就大“快乐”。主题：ItwasOllie’sactofkindnessthatsparkedarippleoflastingjoyforusall.续写情节发展：第一段续写：奥利走向我，看起来有话要说。——本段续写的关键在于把“要说的话”具体化，同时结合二段提示，可知，奥利把票让给了史密斯夫人。同时收尾要回到参加本次的丰收节为下文的“弥补”做铺垫。——参考词汇有：Ollie；I；ticket；Mrs.Smith；HarvestFair；family；Eagle；enthusiasm；excitement；delight示范与行文：Paragraph1Ollieapproachedme,

seemingly

tosaysomething.

Onhearing

that

Ollie

wouldliketogivehis

ticket

to

Mrs.Smith,

atfirst

Icouldn’t

believemyears,

but

withmyeyes

spotting

how

delightful

andexcited

Mrs.Smithappeared/seemed

whensheacceptedthe

precious/prizeticket

fromOllie,I

immediately

acknowledged/perceived

thetruemeaningofOllie’saction.

Undoubtedly,

thelater

HarvestFair

did

shockour

family

andtheoldladybothvisuallyandemotionally,

especially

my

enthusiasm

and

excitement

totally

rekindled

by

Eagles’

performance,

but

the

absence

ofOlliealways

remindedmeof

something

thatIshoulddoforhim.(2句)Paragraph2Afterthefair,

Icameupwithaplan

tomakeup

for

Ollie's

absence.

________________________________第二段续写：丰收节之后，我想出了一个为奥利缺席的弥补计划。——本段续写的关键在于计划的全面展示，同时文章很多两人共有的元素变可以加以充分利用，比如Eagle的音乐和piecontest的回忆，只是这些的内容需要进行主体的调整。——参考词汇有：family；Ollie；HarvestFair；thrilling；piecontest；Eagle；favoritesong；sharedmemory示范与行文：Paragraph2Afterthefair,

Icameupwithaplan

tomakeup

for

Ollie's

absence.

Beyondmyexpectation,my

family

agreedonmy

ideathat

Ollie

deserved

aprivate

HarvestFair.

Then

wetogether

devotedourselvesto

thebigevent.

When

Olliewasinvitedtomyfamily,hewas

thrilled

bywhatwehadprepared.Laughter,

delicate

foodandwarmatmospherefilledthehouse.

Withthefamiliar

piecontest

appearing,ourmood

reachedtothesummit.

Atthemoment,Iplayedavideo

recordedduring

Eagle’s

performance

asagiftforhim.

Immersedin

our

favoritesongs,weall

recollected

our

sharedmemory

again,

allofwhich

originatedfrom

Ollie’skin