2024年新高考英语读后续写培优：如何续写八类话题素材

2024年新高考英语读后续写培优：如何续写八类话题一、助人篇一、助人篇故事构造三部曲故事构造三部曲【第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）】【消极情绪】感到：1.aflushof(表情绪的名词)=awaveof...=afeeling/senseof...一阵...joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/disappointment/guilt/shame...)3.(表情绪的名词)floodedoversb=sweptoversb因...颤抖：tremble//shiver/shake(withfear,panicexcitement,rage...)【进一步细节描写】流泪：1.Tearsblurredone'seyes.2.One'seyesgotmisty.3.One'seyesmisted/dimmedwithtears.泪眼模糊4....beclosetotears几乎要哭了5.tears(rolldownone'seyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下【第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）】【突然有了一个想法】某人想到/明白...：1.Itsuddenlyoccurredtosbthat从句=Ithitsbthat从句=Itstruckmethat从句=Itdawnedonsbthat从句2.(idea,thought...)occurred/cametosb.=...came/flashedintoone'smind=...crowdedinone'smind3.One'smindbegantorace【动作链】主语+动作A+动作Band动作C（三个并列谓语，动作依次发生）句子+ing/ed,或者ing/ed+句子（使用条件：同一逻辑主语，主动或被动，表示动作伴随，原因或结果）【第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）】【突然有了一个想法】过了一段时间：1.notlongafterthat,...=shortlyafterwards,...=beforelong,...=Itdidn'ttakelongbefore从句=Ittooksometimebefore从句不久,...2.foraninstant/moment一瞬间有了结果：1.Toone'ssurprise(delight)/Strangelyenough,itturnedoutthat从句2.Butonsecondthoughts,...但是转而一想，...3.Butwhathappenednextwaspuremagic.接下来发生的非常奇妙【感谢】1.Now,Iwasdefinitelygratefultoherforextendingahelpinghand(伸出援手).2.MollyandShawnmetonTuesday,andshesaysshecouldn’tthankhimenough(非常感谢他)andeveryoneinvolvedinforwhattheydidforher.【感动】1.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved(他们被深深地感动了),especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.2.HewastouchedthatI,acompletestranger,caredsomuchabouthim(如此关心他)andsaidhewaswillingtowork.3.Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords(感动得说不出话来).Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.4.Inoddedingratitude,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears(眼睛因强忍的泪水而闪耀).5.Stunnedandmoved(惊讶又感动),Istaredatthenote,feelingapangofguiltaboutmypreviousthoughtthatallpeoplewereindifferent.【升华】1.Itislovethatmakestheworldgoround（是爱让世界运转）andBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.2.Everyonewashappyandsweet,exposingtheirsetsofwhiteteeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.3.Imadeupmymindtopasson“love”toothers（传递爱给其他人）.Justasasayinggoes:“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）.”4.Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeonewhoneedshelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hopingtopassonthekindness（希望传递善意）thatMexicanfamilyofferedme.5.Sometimes,asmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference（会有很大不同）.2023年新高考I&II卷2023年新高考I&II卷【作文比赛】作者上中学的时候，社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。作者不喜欢写作，于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下，作者同意试一试。作者在写作过程中虽然很累，但是没有放弃，坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时，作者感到写作让他很快乐，他已经不在乎输赢了。【第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）】【感谢】IwassohappytohearthenewsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythankstomyteacher.Isaid,“It’syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyourrecognitionandguidance,Icouldn’thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”【感动】“Iknewyou’dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaidexcitedly.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmyhands,hesaid“Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.”【升华】Sincethen,IhavewrittenmanygoodworksandnowIamafamouswriter.Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.二、成长篇二、成长篇故事构造三部曲故事构造三部曲【第一步：成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）】【孤独】Inevermadefriendseasily,andforatimeIdidlittlemorethangetonspeakingtermswithsomeboys.我从不轻易交朋友，有一段时间，我只是和一些男孩子说说话而已。【伤心】Ifoundnothinginmypocket,afactthatseemedlikeaspearpiercingintomyheart，whichstartedtobleedimmediately.我口袋里什么也没找到，这事实就像一支长矛刺进了我的心脏，我的心脏立刻开始流血。Lookingaroundanxiously,Ialmostburstintocrying.(我焦急地环顾四周，差点哭出来)【惭愧】Shewasoverwhelmed/overcome/consumedwithguiltandshame.(她被内疚和羞愧淹没)AwaveofguiltsweptovermeandIhadtoadmitthefactthatIhadgonetothemoviesandthatwastherealreasonwhyIwaslate.一阵内疚席卷了我，我不得不承认我去看电影了，这才是我迟到的真正原因。【嘲笑】TheylaughedloudlywithCrawleyscreamingwordslike“Whatafinestbrokenwatch!”他们大声笑着，卡劳利尖叫着说:“多好的一块坏表啊!”【绝望】“Mymotherwouldn'tletmebringit,”Ilied,desperationboilinginsideme.“我妈妈不让我带，”我撒了个谎，绝望在我心里沸腾。【紧张】Meanwhile,Kariesatrestlesslyinherseatwithherfingerscrossed.与此同时，凯莉不安地坐在座位上，双手交叉着。Shetoldtheteacherthetruth,withherheartthumping/pounding/pumpinglikeadrum.她把实情告诉了老师，心怦怦直跳。Havingpacedupanddownrestlesslyinfrontofthetheteacher'soffice,shefinallygatheredcourageandploddedin.（她在老师的办公室前不安地踱来踱去，终于鼓起勇气，慢吞吞地走了进去。【害怕】Iunknowingly(不知不觉地)avoidedinteracting(interact)withanyonebecauseIwasafraidthey’dlaughinmyface.(我在不知不觉中避免与任何人互动，因为我害怕他们会当面嘲笑我)【犯错】Consideringtherewasnowaytopersuademymothertoletmetakethewatch,Idecidedtowaitforhertostepoutsideandslipthewatchintomypocket.SoIdid.考虑到没有办法说服母亲让我带手表，我决定等她走出去，把手表塞进我的口袋里,我这样做了。Kariestuffedthetestpaperintobackpackandexplainedthatshewasjusttooexcited.凯莉把试卷塞进背包里，解释说她只是太兴奋了。【第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）】【惊讶】Raisinghereyebrowsinsurprise,MrsRossifroze,asifrootedontheground.罗西夫人惊讶地扬起眉毛，僵住了，仿佛在地上生了根。【希望】Jaycelookeduptohim,hiseyessparklingwithhopeanddetermination.杰斯抬头看着他，他的眼睛里闪烁着希望和决心。【教育与成长】“That’snottherightway.Patience,Will.Patience,”avoiceechoedinmyearsaftertheboysleft.这不是正确的方法。耐心，意志。当孩子们离开后，一个声音在我的耳边回响。“Whatwasdonewasdone,”thoughtItomyself.“Whatisimportantnowistodocorrectthingsnext.”“所做的已经做了，”我自己想。“现在重要的是下一步要纠正一些事情。”Thoughanger,embarrassmentandsadnesshungheavilyintheair,thevoicedrewmetotheawarenessofthemistakesIhadmadewhenIattemptedtoimpresstheboys.尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。Ishouldn’thavetriedtointegrateinsuchahastyway,norshouldIhavestolenthewatchbehindmymother.我不该如此匆忙的方式试图融入，也不该把母亲身后的手表偷走。Afterschool,IwouldtellmymotherhonestlythatIhadstolenthewatchouttoimpressfriendswhoturnedoutnottobemytruefriends.放学后，我会诚实地告诉妈妈，我偷了手表是为了给那些不是我真正朋友的朋友留下好印象。Aftersayingthatwithherfaceflushedred,shehandedthepaperandtheprizetotheteacher.说完这话，脸红了，她把纸和奖品交给了老师。Tomysurprise,shesmiledatmeandexpressedherapologyforignoringmylonelinessaswellasmydifficultywithEnglishcommunication.令我吃惊的是，她对我笑了笑，并为忽视我的孤独和英语交流的困难表示道歉。Tornbetweenthehonorandconscience,shehadarestlessnight,tossingandturningonbed.她在荣誉和良心之间挣扎，一夜不安，在床上辗转反侧。Ipluckedupmycourageandtookmyfirststepontothesuspensionbridge.我鼓起勇气，向吊索桥走了第一步。HesawTrashaunasatoughrolemodelwhohadaseeminglysimilarborndisabilitybutledabrilliantlife.他认为特拉申是一个坚强的榜样，似乎有类似的先天残疾，但过着辉煌的生活。Weoftentakeforgrantedtheverythingsthatmostdeserveourgratitude(那些值得我们感恩的事情我们经常当作理所当然).Butwhenthetimecame,Igotuponstageandfacedoneofmygreatestfears-anddiscoveredIcoulddomorethanIevergavemyselfcreditfor.(但当时机到来的时候，我站上舞台，面对我最大的恐惧之一——我发现我可以做的比我自己认为的更多。【第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）】【喜悦】Dadlookedatthepaper,withhislipscurvingintoasmile.（爸爸看着报纸,他的嘴唇弯成了微笑）Hearingthat,Kariegrinnedfromeartoear,awaveofhappinessfloodingoverher.（听到这话，卡里咧嘴一笑,幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头)（2020.11月潍坊高三英语期中考试）【感激】Ilookedather,tearsofloveandgratitudewellingupinmyeyes.我看着她，爱和感激的泪水在我的眼睛里涌出。【结尾句】IknewforsurethateverytimeIlostpatienceinthefutureIwouldremembermygrandfather’swords.(我确信，将来每次我失去耐心，我就会想起我祖父的话。)ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadtrulyrealizedthemeaningofthegift---patience.(我第一次真正体会到这份礼物——耐心的意义)Aramsaid,“Thanks,MrsRossi,forteachingmehowtomakeacaketorealizemydream.”MrsRossiheldhishands,saying,“Itisyouwhoteachmehowtosticktomydream.”亚兰说：“谢谢罗西夫人，你教我如何做蛋糕来实现我的梦想。”罗西太太握着他的手说：“是你教我如何坚持我的梦想。ItdawnedonAramthat“Oneshouldsticktohis/herdreamnomatterwhathappens.”(亚兰明白了一个人应该坚持她的梦想，无论发生什么)SothankfulwasheforCathy’shonestythatheactuallyendedupdonatingagenerousamounttoVNSAtoshowhisgratitude.他非常感谢凯茜的诚实，他向VNSA捐赠了一大笔钱来表达他的感激之情。BraverywasthemostsignificantqualitythatIwantedhertopossess.勇敢是我希望她拥有的最重要的品质Afterwards,itwasmyturntogiveasmalllecture,inwhichIexpressedmysinceregratitudetomymomandfriends,bowingtothemseveraltimes.之后，轮到我做了一个小型讲座，在会上我向妈妈和朋友们表达了诚挚的感谢，并向他们多次鞠躬。ThenhepattedJayce’shead,“ButIthinkthisistheperfectwayGodmademe.Withfivefingers,wealsomadeitinlotsofthingsjustnow.Themissingarmislikeawingfoldedbyanangel.Onlywhenyou'retoughwillyouseethewing.他拍了拍杰斯的头，“但我认为这是上帝创造我的完美方式。”用五个手指，我们现在还做了很多东西。这个缺失的手臂就像一只被天使折叠起来的翅膀。只有当你很坚强的时候，你才会看到翅膀。成长类场景描写成长类场景描写【学习知识而成长】It'snevertoolatetolearn.Eachindividualhastherighttoacceptmorechallengesandmakemoreattempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多尝试。【分析】individual这里表示“个人，个体”。makemoreattempts做更多尝试。【发挥天赋促成长】Actually,everyindividualpossessestalent.Bebravewhenyoufinditandalsomakeefforts.Youcancreatemiraclesintheend.事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。【分析】possess拥有。createmiracles表示创造奇迹。【追逐梦想而成长】It'snevertoolatetogoforyourdream.Aslongasyougraspeveryopportunityandtakefulladvantageofit,youwillstandachancetorealizeyourdreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。Aslongaswedaretodreamanddon'tletdifficultiesgetinourway,anythingispossible.只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。【分析】takefulladvantageof充分利用，realizeyourdreams表示“实现梦想”【克服困难促而成长】Thejourneytosuccessisnotsmooth.Itisfullofchallengesanddifficulties.Weshouldbebravetofacethem.Aslongaswedon’tgiveuphopeandmakeeveryefforttoovercomeallthedifficulties,wewillsurelyachieveourgoal(success)finally.通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标（成功）。【分析】smooth表示“平坦的”overcomeallthedifficulties表示“克服困难”；makeeveryeffort表示“做出努力”；aslongas，表示“只要”，引导条件状语从句。2024年1月浙江省高考首考2024年1月浙江省高考首考【路痴Eva】Eva在高中的第一周很努力去适当新环境。对Eva来讲，最大的挑战就是在偌大的校园里找方向。因为方向感差，她决定只记住上课的地方。在体育课上，教练Pitt要求同学们跑一英里。这对Eva来说，又是一个极大的挑战。通过对自己的心理暗示，Eva决定不再关注一英里的距离，而是专注于力争跑到跑道上的下一个具体的点，比如那棵橡树的影子或跑道的拐弯处。最终，她成功地完成了跑步。【第二步：成长中（蜕变塑造）】【惊讶】WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!”toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.Whathadseemedtobeachallengingtasktoherminutesbeforewasnowaccomplished.Amilewasneverwhatshehadthoughtalongway!【希望】CoachPitt’sencouragingaffirmationimprovedherself-identity.Fearanduneasinessbegantofadeawayandasenseofconfidencecametoher.【教育与成长】Itmarkedaturningpointwhereshelearnedthetrickthatitwasherpersistenceandappropriatestrategythatmattered.Furthermore,sherealizedthatshecouldovercometroublesinlifeaslongasshiftingthewayofthinking.【第三步：成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）】【喜悦】ToEva,suchexperiencesbroughtheragiantstepofgrowth.【感激】ThankingCoachPitt,shehadagreatthoughtrunninginhermind.【结尾句】Thoughsometimesitseemedanimpossiblemission,iteventuallyturnedapreciousopportunityforgrowth.Itwasamagictrick!三、趣事篇三、趣事篇故事构造“两大核心技巧”故事构造“两大核心技巧”【核心技巧1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张）】Sonervouswashethat(他太紧张了)hedroppedtheelectriccarvingknife.他太紧张了，他太紧张了，他掉下了电动雕刻刀。Igotintoapanic(陷入惊慌之中)asIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.当我紧紧地压在桌子上，我的头移动试图找到正确的角度时，我陷入了恐慌(陷入惊慌之中)，但这是没有用的。Sweatingandnearlytearing(汗流浃背，眼泪差点流下来),IcouldimaginehowsillyandstrangeIwasatthatmomentbasedonthecontinuinglaughterfrommyparentsandJason.汗流浃背，眼泪差点流下来，根据我父母和杰森持续的笑声，我可以想象出我当时是多么的愚蠢和奇怪。Blushingscarletinstantly,shefeltembarrassmentalmostwreathedherentirely.她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。【核心技巧2：快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）】Dad'scalmsmilereflectedhismotto"All'swellwithus,neverfear."爸爸平静的微笑反映了他的座右铭"一切都好，永远不要害怕。"ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadtrulyrealizedthemeaningofpatience.这是我第一次真正意识到耐心的意义。Weusuallytakelifeforgranted,butthestoryshowsusthatthereisalwaysbeautyinourheart.我们通常认为生活是理所当然的，但这个故事告诉我们，在我们的心中永远有美丽。Thewordsbroughtwarmthtomyheartandtearstomyeyes.Ifeltluckytobeapartofthismischievousyetlovingfamily.这些话让我心中满是温暖，也让我热泪盈眶。我很幸运能成为这个淘气而又充满爱的家庭的一员。2024年1月浙江省高考首考2024年1月浙江省高考首考【南瓜卡头】一个家庭在万圣节南瓜雕刻的传统。作者与弟弟们在寻找最大的南瓜，并在厨房桌子上进行雕刻。作者试图将头塞进南瓜里证明自己的南瓜是最大的，但却发现自己的头被困在了南瓜里。【核心技巧1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张）】PanicturnedintodesperationasIstruggled,theweightofthepumpkinpressingdownonme,mybreathechoingintheconfinedspace.Myfamily'sinitiallaughterturnedintoconcern,andtheygatheredaround,offeringadviceandencouragement.Mymom'svoicewassoothingasshetoldmetostaycalm,whilemysiblings'worriedfacespeeredatme.【核心技巧2：快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）】Theroomeruptedincheers,andIwasmetwithhugsandrelievedsmiles.Myfacewasred,andmyprideslightlybruised,butthewarmthofmyfamily'ssupportmadeitallworthwhile.Theimageofmewithapumpkinstuckonmyheadbecameasymbolofourfamily'sjoy,creativity,andabilitytoturneventhemostawkwardsituationsintosomethingpositive.Thatyear,thepumpkincarvingwasn'tjustaboutcompetition;itwasareminderofthelove,laughter,andtogethernessthatdefinedourfamily.四、亲情篇四、亲情篇故事构造“三板斧”故事构造“三板斧”【第一板斧：冲突构造（误会、犯错等）】只有冲突才能体会亲情的弥足珍贵。冲突原因大致有：疏于陪伴、理念不合（代沟）、误会等。这一部分可以给出的情感是：生气，难过，后悔，内疚，烦恼，伤心。【生气】我妈妈瞪着我，这是在我有一个重组家庭之前她从未做过的事。“你可以捡起来的。”她说。“那才对。”Mymotherglancedatme.SomethingsheneverdidbeforeIhadastepfamily.“Youcouldhavepickeditup."shesaid.“Thatwouldhavebeenthekindthingtodo.”他生气地握紧拳头，但是弟弟却激动地挥着手。Hefoldedhisfistangrily,buthisyoungerbrotherwavedhishandsexcitedly.Jackson试着说什么，但Carter太生气了，他一个字也听不进去。Jacksonkeptsayingsomething,butsoangrywasCarterthathecouldn'tevenhearaword.【后悔】我意识到我裙子上的蝴蝶结打得很不好。我本应该请妈妈帮忙的。IrealizedhowpoorlyItiedthestringonmyskirtwhichwasoverleggings.Ishouldhaveaskedmomforhelp.【内疚】一想到我对他所做的一切，遗憾和内疚就像没休止的潮水一样向我袭来。ThinkingaboutwhatIhaddonetohim,regretandguiltoverwhelmedmelikeendlesstides.每当我想到亨利湿了的书，我的脸都会变红了。WheneverIthoughtofHenry'swetbook,myfaceturnedred.【烦恼】WatchingShirley’ssmilefadingaway,Peterfrowned.看着雪莉的微笑渐渐消失，彼得皱起了眉头。【伤心】当她望过她三岁妹妹的桌子时，Amanda感觉她的心情像天空一样灰暗。Amandafeltasgrayastheskyoutsidewhenshelookedacrossthetableatherthree-year-oldsister.【犯错】Tocoverhisterribleaction(为了掩盖他糟糕的行为，不定式作状语)，theterrifiedboygluedthepiecestogetherhastilyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.Fearingpunishment(害怕惩罚，现在分词作状语),thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbor'scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn'tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.Glancingatthechocolateswithhesitation,(犹豫地看着着巧克力,非谓语),theboytimidlyraisedhisheadbeforehismother.【第二板斧:冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等)】【道歉】“对不起，”他说到，轻轻的摸摸Jackson的头。“I'msosorry."hesaid,gentlypettingJackson'shead.他放下手，小心翼翼的看了Carter一眼，然后低下了头。Heputdownhishand,glancedcautiouslyatCarterandloweredhishead.Tohersurprise,shesmiledatmeandexpressedherapologyforignoringmyloneliness(为她忽略我的孤独道歉)aswellasmydifficultywithEnglishcommunication.【原谅】他妈妈把手指放在他嘴唇让他停止说话，在他额头上吻了一下，然后走出了书房。Hismothersilencedhimbygentlyputtingherfingeronhislips,gaveasoftkissonhisforeheadandwalkedoutofthestudy.【开心】“我想给你一个惊喜!”他指向一个包装精美的盒子，眼里闪烁着光芒。“Iwantedtosurpriseyou!”hepointedataneatlywrappedboxwithhiseyesgleaming.看到他的家人围坐着，和谐地待在一起，卡特感觉到一种幸福感。Seeinghisfamiliessittingtogetherandstayingtogetherharmoniously,Caterfeltasurgeofhappiness.欢快的歌唱飘荡在房间里，两姐妹沉浸在音乐的美中。Cheerfulsingingfloatingintheroom,thetwosistersimmersedthemselvesinthebeautyofthemusic.【感激】如果没有亨利的帮助,我就不会顺利地完成我的演出了。ButforHenry'shelp,Iwouldn'thavefinishedmyperformancesmoothly.Ilookedather,tearsofloveandgratitudewelling(well)upinmyeyes.Afterwards,itwasmyturntogiveasmalllecture,inwhichIexpressedmysinceregratitudetomymomandfriends,bowing(bow)tothemseveraltimes.【回忆】在这时，毫无预料地，Carter突然想起Billy躺在地上哭的回忆，一直在他脑海回旋，提醒着他一些事情。Atthatmoment,unexpectedly,thememoryofthesightofBillycryingonthegroundoccurredtoCarter,hoveringinhismindandremindinghimsomething.看着Jackson，Carter忍不住想象他的弟弟花整天小心涂好那辆车的情景。LookingatJackson,Cartercouldn'thelpimagininghislittlebrotherspendingthewholedaycarefullypaintingthecar.“IjustwishIknewhowtohelpher,"Amandasaidtoherself,thinkingofLi'sfrightenedeyes(想到Li害怕的双眼)，【第三板斧:亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)】1.Fromthenon,thethreechocolatesrangthealarminhishearteverytimeheintendedtolie,remindinghimtobehonest提醒他要诚实(非谓语).2.Inoddedfirmly,knowingaflowerofkindnessandfriendshipbegantoblossom(善良和友谊之花开放)inbothofourhearts.3.ThisexperiencetransformedmyattitudetowardsHenryandourrelationshiphasalsobeenharmonious(我们的关系变得和谐)sincethen.4.正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。ItwasHenry'skindnessthatmademefeelthewarmthfromourfamily.Iwilltreasureitwithallmyheart.mischievousyetlovingfamily.这些话让我心中满是温暖，也让我热泪盈眶。我很幸运能成为这个淘气而又充满爱的家庭的一员。2024年1月浙江省高考首考2024年1月浙江省高考首考【母亲节的惊喜】双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。【第二板斧:冲突化解(解释、道歉、弥补、回忆等)】【原谅】Knowingwhattheywerepreparingfor,hewasgreatlysurprised.Soimmediately,heofferedtogetinvolvedinthekids’job.【开心】Inaflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.Totheirdelight,thebreakfastwasasuccessintheend."HappyMother'sDay,darlingMummy!"thrilledvoiceyellingfromtheirthroat,thetwinshuggedtheirmomtightly.【感激】Movedandexcited,motherheldthetwinswithherwarmarmsaswell.Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfasttray.【回忆】Behindthechildrenstoodtheirfather.Toshedlightonthegameofthegift,hetoldthemotherthewholestory.【第三板斧:亲情升华(诚实、珍惜等)】Afterlearningaboutwhathappened,sherosequicklytogazeattheboy’shandwithmovedtearsrollingdownhercheeks.“Thankyou,myhoney!”saidthemother.五、人与动物篇五、人与动物篇故事构造“三套路”故事构造“三套路”【套路一：可爱型动物故事情节】可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。TheyweregladtoseePoppycomingbacktoherusualself（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）,guidingthelittledogondailywalksandevenintroducingtoitherfavoritetoys.2.Smilingeversobright（笑得更加灿烂。）,hecalledouttohisparents,whotuggedhiminforalonghug.3.Herparentswatchedthemplayingaroundandsmiledwithrelief（轻松地笑了）–Poppywasbacktoheroldcheerfulself!【套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节】凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。【害怕】1.Terrified（非常害怕）,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.2.Seeingtheapproachofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.3.MywifeElligraspedmyclothesandtrembled,swallowinghard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）.4.Anumbingchillgrippedme（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.5.Thinkingofthewolf’sbloodymouth,Macwasnearlydeadwithfright（几乎给吓死）6.Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）,mypalmssweating.【求助与获救】1.Atthesightofit,Elliwavedherhandswildly（疯狂地挥手）,screaming,“Help!”2.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospot（惊奇地发现）thatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.3.Havingpulledthemassivebodyoutofthestump,Briancleanedthewounds（清洁伤口）andthengavehimcarefultreatment.Beckykneltdownandtendedtothewolf（蹲下来照顾狼）togetherwithBrian.4.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppy（擦干小狗）tillhehadbecomedry.5.Usingarockasthesupportingpoint,Iunlockedthechainandsetthewolffree（放走这只狼）.【套路三：主题升华设计】可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。1.ElliandIlearnedourlesson（学到一个教训）:Beawareofabearwithatoothache.2.Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthofloveandreunion（充满爱和团聚的温暖）.3.Therainthatcamethatdaywasamiracle（那天下的雨是一场奇迹）,savingourfarm,justlikemyboysavedalife.4.Appearingtobefeelingbetter,thewolfslowlyraisedhisheadandgaveagentlekisstoBecky’shandasiftoexpressthanks（好像在表达感谢）.Whatawarmscene!2023年浙江1月卷2023年浙江1月卷【救助蜂鸟】作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，作者把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当作者准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。【套路一：可爱型动物故事情节】可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude..【套路三：主题升华设计】可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.六、友情篇六、友情篇故事构造“三步法”故事构造“三步法”【第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突）】【内疚】1.Overwhelmedbyguilt（充满内疚）,AsadquicklypickedupthewalletandstrodetoFahad,“Ifounditoverthere,andIthinkitisyours.”2.Murmuringinalowvoice（小声地低语）,hedodgedAsad’sshiningeyes,somehowevennotdaringtolookintothem.3.Shenowcoulddonothingbutfeeltheregretburninginherheart（感觉内疚在她心里燃烧）.4.Ariananodded,beginningtofeelguilty（开始感到内疚）.【困难与帮助】1.Notknowingwhattodo（不知道该做什么),hewalkedoutoftheclassroomandsatonabenchinfrontofthecanteen.2.“ThebestthingyoucandoforAshleyistotreatherwithkindnessandsympathy（用善意和同情对待她).”3.WhenArianagavethelunchtoAshley,shesawtearswellupinAshley’seyes（眼泪都流出来了).【破裂】1.BecausethesewerethepeopleIconsideredmyfriends.Ibrokedowninfrontofher.Sheapologized.ButIfeltcheatedon.Itoldheraboutmydecisionofnotwantingtocontinuethisfriendshipfurther（我不再继续这份友谊的决定).Webothmissedeachother.Butneitherofuswantedtogivethelasttry.2.Duringthetrip,weintentionallyavoidedeachother（有意避开彼此).However,Icouldn’thelpglancingatherwhensheturnedbackandIsensedthesame.【第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补）】【原谅/和好】1.Blushed,shebrokethesilence(打破沉默),“Iamsorryagain.Ididn'tmeantohurtyou."Tearsstreamingdown,shecontinued,“Ishouldhavetalkedtoyouearlier."Istoodupandreachedouttohugher(伸出手拥抱她),“Iamsorry,too.Ishouldhavebeenmoregenerous.”2.Butdeepdown,webothknowalltheargumentisjustabouthelpingustogrowintoabetterindividual(帮助我们成长为更好的个体)insteadofenemies.3.Therefore,webothlearnedtobetolerantandbraveenoughtoalwaysforgive(足够忍耐和勇敢去原谅).【开心描写】1.得知我们将有一个晚餐，我非常激动。I'mthrilledtoknowthatwe'llhavedinnertogether.2.他非常激动，露齿而笑。Excitementcreptoverhisheartandmadehimgrinfromeartoear.3.这顿饭使我激动不已。想象一下我们将在机场畅饮。I'mbuzzingforthedinner.Imagine,we'regoingtodrinkfreelyattheairport.【第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜）】1.ItwasonthatverydaythatTommadehisfirstfriendinthenewschool,andhetrulyreckonedthevalueofsincerityandhonesty(明白真诚和诚实的价值)inarelationship.2.SoassoonastheplanelandedIcalledhimandsaid,“Luke,thatwassuchawonderfulthingyoudidforme(那是你为我做的最美妙的事情).Thankyou.”3.一个忠诚的朋友抵得上成千上万的亲戚。Itdawnedonmethatoneloyalfriendisworthtenthousandrelatives.4.Ifwereallyvalueourfriendsandfriendship,alwayscherishtheirpresenceandshowwillingnesstomaintainandnurturetherelationship(愿意保持和培养这段关系).4.Appearingtobefeelingbetter,thewolfslowlyraisedhisheadandgaveagentlekisstoBecky’shandasiftoexpressthanks（好像在表达感谢）.Whatawarmscene!2022年浙江1月卷2022年浙江1月卷【队友合作】“我”在完成心理学课程项目的过程中，克服与队友性格不合、队友生病住院等种种困难，最终完成项目的故事。【第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补）】【原谅/和好】Tokeepupwithhispace,Icompletelygaveupmyidlewaysandimmersedmyselfintheproject.Gradually,hechangedhisaloofattitudeandevenofferedmehelp.Itseemedthatwehadgonefromstrangerstocomradesinarms.【第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜）】Tomycomfort,asIexpressedmyconcernbyhisbed,myteammatetoldmethathetrustedme.Tearsofexcitementandgratitudeblurredmyvision.Butformypartner,nothinglikethiscouldhavehappened.Sowhenhethumbedupwithararebiggrin,itsuddenlydawnonmethatweweretobecomekindoflifelongfriends.七、历险篇七、历险篇故事构造“三套路”故事构造“三套路”【套路一：恶劣环境要烘托】1.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats，gotonourhorses，andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains（慢慢地向山走去）.2.NeverhadIseensuchalovelycreatureinmylife,soIfolloweditstrackwithoutthinkingtwice（不假思索地追随它的足迹）.3.Intheprocessofseekingforit,Iwastotallyimmersedinthecharmofnature（完全沉浸在大自然的魅力中）.4.What'sworse,hedidn'thaveanyfoodorwaterwithhim,letalonehiscellphoneorothersupplies（更不要说他的手机和其他日用品）.5.Wewereinthemiddleofnowhere,wearingonlyunderwear,withoursuppliesburntintoashes（把我们的物品烧成灰烬）,includingourcellphones.【套路二：转折思维技巧好】【我们迷路了，正在想办法如何脱离困境】Suddenlyitoccurredtousthatwecouldkeeptothetracktoguideusback.Butitwasgettingdarkeranddarker,thusmakingitincreasinglydifficultforustomakeouttheroad.（突然我们想到我们可以坚持小路引导我们回去。但天色越来越暗，使我们走路越来越困难。）解析：这个例子属于“正”变“负”的模式。迷路后，想到了办法，属于“正向”，但是外在环境不允许：天色太晚。属于“负向”。1.Ultimately,wewereback,safeandsound（安然无恙）.2.Wejumpedintothewarmvehicleandtheforesterdroveustotherangerstation（开车送我们去巡逻站）,whereweweregivenclothesandwereabletocallourparents.【套路三：万能升华要牢记】【万能句1】Thatdaywassounforgettablethatitwouldstayinmymemoryforever.那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆。遇到危险并且最终成功脱险的经历，想必对我们每个人来说一定是一生中难忘的经历。所以这个句子使用的场合还是挺多的。句子中使用了so...that的句式结构：如此......以至于。unforgettable是一个形容词，表示“无法忘记的”。【万能句2】OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasbraverythatcanconquerwhateverdifficultycameintheway.直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。遇到危险后，勇敢面对，才能解决问题。这个句子突出了“勇敢”这个核心，这在“脱险型”的故事里，是非常恰当的。这句话使用了倒装的结构和强调结构结合的方式，也属于高分亮点句。1.Sittingintheguestroom,Ifounditreallyblissfultobeaccompaniedbyourbelovedones.（有我们所爱的人陪伴真的很幸福）.2.Despitefeelingweak,Nicholaswasgenerallyinagoodcondition,andhewasreallyhappyashewascarriedbacktotheskiresorttoreunitewithhisfamily（和他的家人团聚）.3.Asourvanchugged((发动机缓慢运转时)发出突突声)downthefreeway,Ithoughtthistripmightnotbesobadafterall.Good-bye,regularoldsummervacation.Hello…TripofaLifetime（一生一次的旅程）4.Appearingtobefeelingbetter,thewolfslowlyraisedhisheadandgaveagentlekisstoBecky’shandasiftoexpressthanks（好像在表达感谢）.Whatawarmscene!2020年浙江6月卷2020年浙江6月卷【人熊对抗】夫妇在拍摄过程中遇到一只年轻的雄性北极熊被他们烹饪的食物吸引而来，尝试闯入被围栏围起来的营地。夫妇俩必须采取措施保护自己，同时等待救援的到来。【套路一：恶劣环境要烘托】【北极熊袭击护栏】1Thepolarbear'smassivepawsclawedatthewirefence,eachswipeleav