03 提纲作文之咨询建议类（解析版）-【高分·技能】2024年中考英语写作常考题型全面突破

专题03提纲作文之咨询建议类近三年考情分析近三年考情分析年份地区话题命题形式2023年湖北恩施以“HowtoLiveaHealthyLife”为题的征文比赛提纲作文四川雅安以“Howtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?”为主题，用英语写一篇演讲稿提纲作文山东滨州你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。提纲作文江苏苏州主题是“HowtomakeSuzhoumorebeautiful”,以“Startingfrommeandnow”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法提纲作文2022年吉林以“LearningtoManageOurOwnLives”为题写一篇短文提纲作文黑龙江齐齐哈尔以“HowtoMakeMyselfBetter”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。提纲作文四川南充的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。提纲作文2021年辽宁简单描述一下我们的考试压力主要体现在哪些方面，并针对此种情况给出合理的建议。提纲作文重庆以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”为主题的征文活动，提出合理建议提纲作文写作方法指导写作方法指导咨询建议类书面表达四步法：1.首先要知道给出建议的格式：常用书信格式；2.然后写出提建议的原因；3.最后根据具体的情况给出明确的建议；4.写出希望。写作模板写作模板Inrecentdays,wehavetofacetheproblem____________A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,____________（说明A的现状）.Second,

____________（举例进一步说明现状）.

FacedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestodealwiththesituation.Foronething,____________（建议一）.Foranother____________（建议二）.Finally,____________（建议三）.

常用表达常用表达首段：I’msorrytohearthatyouhavedifficultyindoing....Don’tworryaboutit!HerearesomeusefulsuggestionsI’dliketosharewithyou.主体段：1.主题句：Actually,ifyouarecareful,you’llfindvarioussimplewaystohelpyousolvetheproblem.（其实，如果你细心，你会找到各种简单的方法来帮助你解决问题。）2.要点：Firstandforemost,It’s+adj/n.+for/ofsb.todo....Sothat...（首先也是最重要的，是......）Inaddition,youaresupposedtodo...,whichcannotonly...butalso...(此外，你应该做...，这不仅可以...而且...)What’smore,youhadbetter(not)do...,because...(更重要的是，你最好（不）做……，因为……)Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestyou(should)do...,fromwhich,you’reabletodo...(最后但并非最不重要的一点是，我建议您（应该）做......，从中，您可以做到......)尾段：Withthesesuggestionscarriedout,Ifirmlybelieveyouwillimprove...alot.(有了这些建议，我坚信你会进步很多。)Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionscanbeofgreathelp.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.(衷心希望我的建议能对您有所帮助。期待您的早日回复。)中考真题精讲中考真题精讲（2023·湖北恩施·中考真题）自教育部等十七部门联合印发《全面加强和改进新时代学生心理健康工作专项行动计划（2023—2025）》以来，越来越多的人开始关注青少年的健康。某英语网站拟举办一次以“HowtoLiveaHealthyLife”为题的征文比赛。作为青少年，我们该如何健康生活？请根据下表要点提示，从如何保持身体健康和心理健康两方面写一篇英语短文投稿。身体健康心理健康坚持锻炼拥有自信保证睡眠保持好心情…………写作要求：（1）文中必须包含表格中所给的要点，另对任意一方面补充一条你自己的观点；（2）条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；（3）文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。参考词汇：physicalhealth身体健康

psychologicalhealth心理健康HowtoLiveaHealthyLifeNowadays,moreandmorepeoplehavecometofocusonteenagers’health.Thefollowingsaremyopinionsabouthowweteenagersliveahealthylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoLiveaHealthyLifeNowadays,moreandmorepeoplehavecometofocusonteenagers’health.Thefollowingaremyopinionsabouthowweteenagersliveahealthylife.Firstly,wemustkeephealthy.Weshouldhaveabalanceddiet.Thismeanseatingdifferentkindsoffoodandlotsoffreshfruitandvegetables.We’dbetterplaysportsatleastonehoureveryday.Exercisemakesusstrongerandhelpsusrelax.Weshouldgetatleasteighthours’sleepatnight,sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytostudy.Secondly,wehavetobementallyhealthy.Wemustbeconfidentandhavegoodmoodseveryday.Finally,behappy.Happinessisimportantforourhealth.Ifyouareworriedaboutsomething,trytosolveitassoonaspossible.Tosumup,healthiswealth.Keepinghealthyisveryimportantforus.Ihopeeverybodycanliveahealthylife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求以“HowtoLiveaHealthyLife”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出自己对青少年如何过健康生活的看法；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从身体健康和心理健康两个方面重点介绍；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①keephealthy保持健康②differentkindsof不同种类的③beworriedabout担心④sumup总结[高分句型]①Weshouldgetatleasteighthours’sleepatnight,sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytostudy.（sothat引导的目的状语从句）②Ifyouareworriedaboutsomething,trytosolveitassoonaspossible.（if引导的条件状语从句）（2023·四川雅安·统考中考真题）自从国家推行“双减”政策（“DoubleReduction”policy）以来，学生有了更多的课余时间开展课外活动。你校英语社团将举办“怎样让我们的课余生活更有意义？”的演讲比赛，请你以“Howtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?”为主题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，分享你的课外活动和感受。内容要点：1.参加志愿者活动，如：看望老人，……；2.参加俱乐部，如：音乐俱乐部，……；3.……（至少补充两项活动）；4.你的感受。注意：1.词数80-100，已经给出的部分不计入总词数；2.演讲稿必须包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。Dearfriends,Sincethe“DoubleReduction”policywascarriedout,wehavehadmoresparetimetoenjoyafter-schoolactivities.NowletmetellyouhowImakemysparetimemoremeaningful.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.【答案】例文Dearfriends,Sincethe“DoubleReduction”policywascarriedout,wehavehadmoresparetimetoenjoyafter-schoolactivities.NowletmetellyouhowImakemysparetimemoremeaningful.First,wecantakepartinmorevoluntarywork,suchasvisitingtheoldandchattingwiththem.Second,wecanjoindifferentclubsbecausedifferentkindsofactivitiescanenrichoursparetime.Third,it’sgoodtohelpourparentsdosomehouseworktoshowourloveforthem.Fourth,itisagoodchanceforustogetclosetonatureandrelaxourselves.Inmyopinion,wecandosomesportstomakeusstrongerandhealthier.Inaword,let’smakefulluseofoursparetimeandpromoteourliteracy.That’sall.Thankyou.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求以“Howtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?”为主题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出对下文业余时间的介绍；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“参加志愿者活动、参加俱乐部、帮助父母、亲近自然”几个方面重点介绍；第三步，介绍自己的观点和感受。[亮点词汇]①takepartin参加②suchas例如③differentkindsof不同种类的④makefulluseof充分利用[高分句型]①Second,wecanjoindifferentclubsbecausedifferentkindsofactivitiescanenrichoursparetime.（because引导的原因状语从句）②Inaword,let’smakefulluseofoursparetimeandpromoteourliteracy.（let’sdosth句型）（2023·山东滨州·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说她最近的困扰；自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。参考词汇:diet(v.节食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(内在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；3.卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3分；4.80词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

LiHua【答案】例文DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.Asyoumentionedintheletter,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.Firstly,thereisnoneedtocareaboutwhatothersthinkofyou.Themostimportantthingistobeconfidentandpositive,asitwillhelpyouhavecouragetofaceandovercomeyourtrouble.Innerbeautyismoreimportantthanappearance.Secondly,keepahealthydiet.Stayawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.Abalanceddietisveryimportantforlosingweight.Thirdly,doingproperexerciseisnecessary.You’dbettergetupearlyinthemorninganddosomesportsregularly.Themoreyouexercise,thehealthieryou’llbe.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Yours,

LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据邮件内容提出建议，并适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，提出要给Amy的建议；第二步，具体阐述给Amy同学的三个建议；第三步，总结全文，表达期望。[亮点词汇]①thereisnoneedtodosth没必要做某事②stayawayfrom…与……保持距离③havecouragetodosth有勇气做某事[高分句型]①Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.（宾语从句）②Stayawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.（祈使句）（2023·江苏苏州·统考中考真题）HappyHomeClub本期的主题是“HowtomakeSuzhoumorebeautiful”，你打算以“Startingfrommeandnow”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：1.触动你的一件事情；2.这件事给你的启示；3.你的倡议。注意：1.词数：100左右。2.内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。Startingfrommeandnow________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文StartingfrommeandnowLastweekend,Iwenttothecityparkwithmyclassmates.Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.Wefeltverysadaboutthat.Thecityisourhome,soweshouldtryourbesttokeepthecityclean.Firstofall,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Don’tthrowrubbisharoundorspitanywhere.We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.Second,wearesupposedtobefriendlyandhelpfultoothers.Third,weoughttoobeythetrafficrules.Don’tridetoofastorplayonthestreet.Lastbutnotleast,remembertosaveenergy.Turnoffthelightsandtapsintime.Aslongaswetryourbestandstartingfrommeandnow,IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示；第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议；第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①differentkindsof各种各样的②besupposedtodosth.应该做某事③remembertodosth.记得做某事④intime及时[高分句型]①Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.（when引导时间状语从句）②We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.（“sb.hadbetterdosth.”表建议的句型）③IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.（宾语从句）（2022·吉林·中考真题）随着年龄的增长，青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力，以便在衣、食、住、行等方面更好地管理自己。请以“LearningtoManageOurOwnLives”为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容包括：1.结合实际，谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性。2.列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象(至少两个)，并提出合理化建议。3.发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。写作要求：1.语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥。2.词数80-100，开头与结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。3.书写规范，卷面整洁。4.文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。LearningtoManageOurOwnLivesThesedays,weChineseteenagersoftendependonourparentsinourdailylives.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,theearlierwemanageourownlives,thebetteritisforourfuture.【答案】例文LearningtoManageOurOwnLivesThesedays,weChineseteenagersoftendependonourparentsinourdailylives.wecan’tdealwithdifficultiesbyourselves.Soit’simportantforustolearntomanageourownlives.Ithinkourparentsshouldbelieveinusandneverdoeverythingforus.Sometimesit’sOKtogiveusproperadviceandtheyshouldallowustomakeourowndecisions.Also,Ithinkparentsshouldencourageustofacetheproblemsbravelyandtrytosolvethem.Forme,Iseldomdidhouseworkinthepast,becauseIthoughtitisourparents’work.Thisisawrongopinion.Weshouldlearntodohouseworklikesweepingthefloorandtakingouttherubbish.Ihardlycookedeither.Whenmymotherwasonbusiness,IrealizedImustlearntocookbymyself.Afterthat,Ifindthatcookingisnotasdifficultasitseems.Inshort,theearlierwemanageourownlives,thebetteritisforourfuture.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“学习管理我们自己的生活”为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。本文分为四段式：第一段引出主题；第二段谈谈在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性；第三段列举在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的现象；第四段发出在生活中提高自我管理能力的号召。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。（2022·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·中考真题）中国共产主义青年团已经走过了百年历程。作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。请以“HowtoMakeMyselfBetter”为题，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。要求：1.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；2.思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；3.词数：80-100词。HowtoMakeMyselfBetter________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoMakeMyselfBetterAsateenager,IthinkIshouldworkhardertomakemyselfbetter.Firstofall,itisimportanttolivehealthily.Iwilleatmorefruitandvegetables.Iwillalsotakeexerciseeverydayandgetenoughsleep.What’smore,Ishouldworkhardatallmysubjects.I’llnotbeafraidtofacechallengesanymoreandtrymybesttosolvetheproblems.Besides,itisnecessarytohaveagoodrelationshipwithfamilyandfriends.Lastbutnotleast,it’sourresponsibilitytotakecareofourparents.I’llalsodowhatIcantohelpotherpeople.Bydoingthese,Iwillmakemyselfbetterandbetter.【解析】1.题干解读：本文以“HowtoMakeMyselfBetter”并结合思维导图中的提示词写一篇文章，介绍如何成为更好的自己。2.写作指导：本文以一般将来时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段从不同的方面介绍如何成为更好的自己；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。（2022·四川南充·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她正在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。要点：（1）给出你的建议；（2）谈谈学习汉语的重要性；（3）结合自身经历，介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法。要求：1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；4.词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。DearTracy,I’msogladtohearfromyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearTracy,I’msogladtohearfromyou.KnowingyouhaveaninterestinChinese,IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.LearningChineseisnotonlyawaytocommunicate,butalsoachancetoadmireChineseculture.AsaChinese,IhavebeenlearningChineseformanyyears.Ihavemuchexperiencetosharewithyou.Inmyopinion,therearemanywaystolearnChinese.It’susefultoreadChinesebooksandlistentoChinesesongs.What’smore,youaresupposedtojoinaChineseclubtopracticeyourspokenChinese.Learningisalifelongjourney.Keeppracticingeveryday,thenitwillbringsomethingnew.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。针对Tracy是否选修汉语给出建议，谈谈学习汉语的重要性并给出学习汉语的方法。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段给出建议，是否应该选修汉语以及学习汉语的重要性；第二段结合自身经历，介绍学习汉语的方法；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（2021·辽宁中考真题）作为中学生，我们现在的学习压力很大，经常面对各种考试，因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容提示，简单描述一下我们的考试压力主要体现在哪些方面，并针对此种情况给出合理的建议。提示：1、表现：担心考试；考前很难入睡；考试时发挥失常……2、建议：请从考前学习准备、作息时间和放松方式这三方面，给出至少四条缓解考试压力的具体建议。要求：1、观点鲜明，结构合理，内容连贯，要用到所有提示内容，并适当发挥；2、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；3、词数：80词左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。HowtoDealwiththeExamStressWestudentsareverybusywithschoolworkandinthefaceofmanyexamseveryschoolday.Someofus____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowtoDealwiththeExamStressWestudentsareverybusywithschoolworkandinthefaceofmanyexamseveryschoolday.Someofusaresoworriedaboutexamsthatit’shardtofallasleepbeforethem.Whenwepaymuchattentiontotheexam,thetestresultswon’tbegood.Parentsandteacherswillblamethem,theywillalsoloseconfidence.Ifwehaveproperstress,wecanworkharder,butifwehavetoomuchpressure,itmayhaveabadeffectonourstudy.Weshouldlearntoreleasepressure.Firstofall,weshouldreviewcarefullyandmakefullpreparationbeforetheexam.Second,weshouldn’tstayuplatetoreviewfortheexam.Third,afterreviewingforaperiodoftime,weshouldalsorelaxourselvesappropriately.Inaddition,ifwedowellintheexam,wewillgiveourselvesappropriaterewards.SoIhopeeveryonecandealwiththeexamstressproperlyandgetgoodgrades.【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容，写出考试压力的表现，提出自己的建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2.

写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，多用情态动词should提出建议，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。（2021·重庆中考真题）教育部近日印发通知，要求控制中小学生的书面作业总量，合理布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文，讲述自身经历，提出合理建议。要求：1.80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.做过的最有创意的英语作业（内容、收获……）；2.更多有创意的英语作业建议（形式、理由……）；3.……MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.DoingcreativehomeworkmakesusmoreinterestedinEnglish.Onceourteacheraskedustowritealettertoaforeigner.WeweretoldtointroducetheSpringFestivalintheletter.ItnotonlyhelpedmeimprovemywrittenskillsbutalsoprovidedagoodchancetospreadChinesetraditionalculture.Inmyopinion,it’salsoagoodchoicetodrawmindmaps.Ithelpsustohaveabetterunderstandingofthelessons.Besides,wecanlearntosingEnglishsongs,sincemostofuslovesinging.Inthisway,ourEnglishaswellashobbiesdevelop.Ihopewe’llhavemorecreativeEnglishhomeworkinthefuture.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文，要求根据所给的参考信息以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”为题写一篇征文，从自身经历来谈谈自己的有创意的英语作业，并提出合理的建议。注意要点齐全。2.写作指导：审题可知，本文写自身经历时用一般过去时，提建议时可采用一般现在时，人称主要以第一、三人称交替使用。文章开头已给出，第一段点题；第二段写自身经历，第三段提出建议；第四段总结。写作中可使用亮点词汇和句型为文章增添色彩，如：notonly...butalso...，It固定句型等。注意保证上下文语句通顺，条理清晰，文中无单词和语法上的错误。名校模拟题提升练名校模拟题提升练（2023·河北唐山·期中）假如你是李亮，你的朋友Mike发来一封邮件向你询问一些有关健康的建议。下面是邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，给Mike回复一封邮件。Ioftengetsickthesedays.MydoctortoldmethatIatetoomuchmeatandchocolate.Andheadvisedmetotakesomeexerciseinmyfreetime.ButIdon’tknowhowtoeatproperlyandexerciseeveryday.Canyougivemesomesuggestions?注意：（1）请认真阅读邮件并回答邮件中的所有问题，可适当发挥。（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。HiMike,I’msorrytohearthatyoudon’tfeelwellthesedays.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyouwillgetbettersoon.LiLiang【答案】例文HiMike,

I’msorrytohearthatyoudon’tfeelwellthesedays.I’dliketosharesomegoodwaystokeephealthywithyou.

First,eatmorefruitandvegetables.Saynotofastfoodsuchashamburgersandchips.Eatingtoomuchofthemmaybeharmfultoyourhealth.

Second,domoreexerciseeveryday.Findoutyourfavoritesportandkeepdoingit.Butremembernottodotoomuchatonetime.

Third,getenoughsleep.Asateenager,youshouldsleepatleast8hourseveryday.Neverstayuptoolate.

Finally,trytodothingsthatmakeyouhappysuchastalkingwithyourfriendsandenjoyingarelaxingmovie.

Ihopeyouwillgetbettersoon.LiLiang【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏回答邮件中所提出的问题，适当添加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，根据开头提示，表示很愿意提供帮助；第二步，给出具体的建议；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]saynoto对……说不beharmfulto对……有害keepdoingsth.继续做某事stayuptoolate熬夜[高分句型]①Saynotofastfoodsuchashamburgersandchips.（祈使句）②Finally,trytodothingsthatmakeyouhappysuchastalkingwithyourfriendsandenjoyingarelaxingmovie.（定语从句）（2023·河北秦皇岛·期中）每个人的生命只有一次，所以我们一定要珍爱自己的生命。那么在遇到危险时，我们该怎样保护自己呢？请根据以下提示，以HowtoProtectOurselves为标题写一篇英文发言稿。安全对每个人都很重要交通：外出时遵守交通规则；食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品。自我保护是重要技能之一遇到危险要保持冷静；要及时报警或向老师、家长求助；尽可能避免受伤，保证自己的安全。要求：1．短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥；2．词数80左右，要适当运用连接词语，使句子通顺、连贯。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。提示词：self-preservation（自我保护），keepcalmHowtoProtectOurselvesDearfriends,Everyonehasonlyonelife.Weshouldtreasureourlives.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?Herearesomesuggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】参考范文HowtoProt