陕西省2024八年级英语下册Unit10I'vehadthisbikeforthreeyears写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

UNIT10I’vehadthisbikeforthreeyearsUNIT10写作能力提升练

童年是令人难忘的。你一定还保存着你小时候最喜欢的东西吧。请根据下面的要点提示用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，向大家介绍一下它。要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，可适当发挥；要点提示：1.它是什么；2.你是如何得到它的，拥有它多久了；3.它对你有什么特别之处。2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

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［谋篇布局］厘清文章要素，构建文章结构。

我最喜爱的物品［遣词造句］就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。1.

我最喜爱的来自童年的物品是一只泰迪熊，我已经拥有它12年了。Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisateddybear.

Ihavehaditfor12

years

⁠.Ihavehaditfor12

years2.

我非常喜欢我的泰迪熊，因为它很漂亮，而且它穿着我最喜爱的颜色的衣服。Ilikemyteddybearverymuchbecauseit’sbeautifuland

dressedinmyfavoritecolor

⁠.dressedinmyfavoritecolor

3.

我喜欢它也是因为它是我的奶奶亲手制作的。Ilikeitalsobecausemygrandma

madeitbyherself

⁠.madeitbyherself4.

我想对我的泰迪熊表示感谢，我会永远保存它以使自己想起奶奶。Iwantto

saythankstomyteddybear

⁠.Iwillkeepitforeverto

remindmyselfofmygrandma

⁠.saythankstomyteddybearremindmyselfofmygrandma

文中说明喜欢的原因时，用到了Ilike...because...，使得行文流畅、紧凑。［巧妙衔接］［连句成篇］Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisateddybear.Ihavehaditfor12years.Mygrandmagaveittomeonmythirdbirthdayasabirthdaygift.Ilikemyteddybearverymuchbecauseit’sbeautifulanddressedinmyfavoritecolor.Ilikeitalsobecausemygrandmamadeitbyherself.Theteddybearhasgivenmemanysweetmemories.IrememberwhenIwasyoung，Iwasscaredatnight.SoIsleptwiththeteddybeareverynight.Itcouldmakemefeelsafe.IfIhadtospendanightawayfrommyhome，Ialwaysbroughtitalongwithme.Iwanttosaythankstomyteddybear.Iwillkeepitforevertoremindmyselfofmygrandma.

我校准备以“AGiftfromtheHeart”为题举办征文比赛，要求参赛者分享在一些特别的日子(生日、节日……)用心准备的礼物。写作要求：

词数不少于70。3.表述礼物的意义。

AGiftfromtheHeart

Itwasthelastdayofthatterm.Myclassmateswereveryexcitedatthecomingholiday.Butmyfriend，Mike，lookedunhappybecausehefailedtheEnglishtest.

AGiftfromtheHeart

Itwasthelastdayofthatterm.Myclassmateswereveryexcitedatthecomingholiday.Butmyfriend，Mike，lookedunhappybecausehefailedtheEnglishtest.

要点提示：1.介绍特别的日子；2.分享赠送的礼物；

Whilethinkingabouthowtocheerhimup，IsawmyEnglishnotebook.Althoughitwasveryimportanttome，Idecidedtogiveittohim.Helookedatmeinsurprise.HeknewhowcarefullyItookthenotes.ItoldhimthatIcouldalsohelphimlearnEnglish.

Mikehasmadeprogresswiththehelpofmygift，thenotebook.It’snotexpensivebutit’sfrommyheart.

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Whilethinkingabouthowtocheerhimup，IsawmyEnglishnotebook.Althoughitwasveryimportanttome，Idecidedtogiveittohim.Helookedatmeinsurprise.HeknewhowcarefullyItookthenotes.ItoldhimthatIco