读后续写语篇练习(在机场遇到麻烦,暖心老人帮助解决问题)2024届

高考英语读后续写语篇练习1——在机场遇到麻烦，暖心老人帮助解决问题题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目再现3续写原文Ihadneverbeenmoreanxiousinmylife.IhadjustspentthelastthreeendlesshourstryingtogettotheairportsothatIcouldtravelhome.Now,asIwatchedthebusdriversetmyluggageontheairportsidewalk,Irealizedthatmyanxietyhadonlyjustbegun.Thiswasmyfirstvisitalonetotheinternationalterminaloftheairport,andnothingwasfamiliar.Icouldn’tmakesenseofanyofthesigns.Wherewasthecheck-incounter?WhereshouldItakemyluggage?Ihadnoideawheretogo,feelingasifIweredeafandblindandstupid.Ibegantopanic.Whattimewasit?Wherewasmyplane?IhadtofindhelpbecauseIcouldn’tbelate.Itriedtoaskapassingbusinessmanforhelp,butmywordsallcameoutwrong.Hejustfrownedandwalkedaway.Whathadhappened?Ihadbeeninthiscountryforawholesemester,andIcouldn’tevenrememberhowtoaskfordirections.Thiswasawful!Anotherbusarrivedattheterminal,andthepassengerscameoutcarryingallsortsofluggage.Herewasmychance!Icouldfollowthemtotherightplace,andIwouldnothavetosayaword.4续写原文Idraggedmyenormoussuitcasebehindmeandfollowedthegroup.Wefinallyreachedtheelevators.Oh,no!Theyallfitinit,buttherewasnotenoughroomforme.Iwatchedindespairastheelevatordoorsclosed.Iwasabandonedagain!Ihadnoideawhattodonext.Igotontheelevatorwhenitreturnedandstaredatallthebuttons.Whichonecoulditbe?Ipressedbutton3,becauseIthoughtIsawthosepassengerspressed3,thoughitwasnomorethanaquickglance.Theelevatorslowlyclimbeduptothethirdfloorandcametoastop.Therewerenocheck-incounters!Ilookedaroundshyly,onlytofindanelderlymanstandingatthecorner.Hewasanairportemployee.5段首句Paragraph1：TearsformedinmyeyesasIsawtheemptyhallandrealizedthatIwouldmissmyplane.Paragraph2：WhenIturnedtothankhimforallhishelp,hewasgone.6Part2题目分析7已知短文内容短文叙述了作者要赶飞机，一生中从未如此焦虑过，这是作者第一次独自来到机场的国际航站楼，一切都不熟悉，为了能够找到办理登机手续的柜台，作者跟谁着一群人上了三楼，电梯慢慢地爬上三楼，停了下来。没有登记柜台!作者害羞地环顾四周，却发现一个老人站在角落里。他是一名机场工作人员。8点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写建议第一段：第一段给出的首句是TearsformedinmyeyesasIsawtheemptyhallandrealizedthatIwouldmissmyplane.这一句是故事发展的转折点。可以从“就在这时，机场的一位老员工从拐角处向我走来。”入手扩展开去。接下来：他看到我迷路了，就问我是否需要他帮忙并拍我的肩膀来缓解我的焦虑，然后带我走过一条长长的走廊。我们上了几级楼梯，拐了个弯，终于到了办理登机手续的柜台。他领着我穿过了所有排队的人群，把我的行李推到了验票柜台。该段最后一句与第二段首句“当我转身感谢他的帮助时，他已经走了。”相吻合。——无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。10续写建议第二段：第二段所给首句WhenIturnedtothankhimforallhishelp,hewasgone.这一句呼应前文，紧接着可以从“我从来没有机会知道那个好心的人的名字，但我会永远记住他出乎意料的好意。”入手续写。作者想感谢这位老员工时他却已经走了，作者觉得在最需要的时候帮助了作者。如果没有他及时的帮助，作者肯定会错过我的飞机。作者只希望有一天，能够为另一个正在经历可怕旅程的旅行者做同样的事情。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现TearsformedinmyeyesasIsawtheemptyhallandrealizedthatIwouldmissmyplane.Justthentheelderlyairportemployeewalkedtowardsmefromthecorner.HesawthatIwaslostandaskedifhecouldhelpinanyway.Hegavemehishandkerchieftodrymytears.Hesmiledkindly.Hepattedmyshouldertoeasemyanxietybeforeleadingmedownalonghallway.Wewalkedupsomestairs,turnedacorner,andatlast,therewasthecheck-incounter！Heledmepastallthelinesofpeopleandpushedmyluggagetotheinspectioncounter.13范文呈现WhenIturnedtothankhimforallhishelp,hewasgone.Inevergotanopportunitytoknowthatkindman’sname,butIwouldalwaysrememberhisunexpectedkindness.HehelpedmewhenIneededitmost.Withouthistimelyhelp,Iwouldhavecertainlymissedmyplane.IcanonlyhopethatonedayIwillbeabletodothe