高考英语 概要写作话题训练8 生活方式课件

【概要写作话题训练8】

生活方式人与环境主题语境:生活方式关键词:overweight语篇类型:现象说明短文词数:266语篇难度:★★★建议时间:22mins阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要Manypeopleareconcernedaboutthehealthofchildren.Onebigproblemisthatchildrenarebecomingmoreoverweight.Beingoverweightisaproblemthatcostsmoney.Peoplearelessproductivewhentheyweightoomuch.Theyalsohavemorehealthissueswhentheyareoverweight.Onethingthatmakespeopleoverweightiseatingtoomuchjunkfood.Chips,candyandsugarysnacksarecalledjunkfood.Junkfoodisnothealthyforpeople.Itcanmakethemoverweight.Mostjunkfoodcontainstoomuchfatandsugarwhenchildrenhavetoomuchfatandsugarintheirdiets,theycanbecomeoverweightorevenobese.Teenagersandchildreneatalotofjunkfood.Somestudiessaythatteenagersdrinksodaeverydayandeattoomuchfastfood.ThegovernorofCaliforniawantschildrentobehealthier.Heheldaspecialsummitmeetingtotalkabouttheproblem.Heinvitedseveralotherhealthgroups,aswellaschildren.Hetalkedtothechildrenaboutstayinghealthy.Heaskedthemtoexercisemoreandtostayawayfromjunkfoodthegovernoralsotookawalkwiththechildren.Hewantedtoshowthemthatexercisecanbefun.Heaskedthestudentsforacommitmenttostayhealth.Thegovernoralsosignedanewlaw.ItlimitsthesaleofjunkfoodandsodainschoolcafeteriasLawmakershopethatthisnewlawwillstopchildrenfromeatingsomuchjunkfood.Theyhopethiswillhelpmakechildrenhealthierinthestate.语言点津junkfood的说法来自葡萄牙语。大约500年前,在葡萄牙语里有一个词junk,意思是“oldpiecesofrope(旧日缆绳)”。时间一长,这个词的意思逐渐演变为任何可利用的废弃材料。最后,junk用来指价值不高或根本没有任何价值的东西。于是,人们就称没有多少营养的食物为junkfood文章来源本文选自英文网站,原文题目为“GovernorWantsKidstoEatHealthily”《州长想让孩子吃得健康》,作者不详。语篇解读本文是一篇说明文,主要说明了孩子的肥胖问题是吃过多垃圾食品而导致的。解决问题的唯一途径就是远离垃圾食品并且多运动。难句解读原文：Whenchildrenhavetoomuchfatandsugarintheirdiets,theycanbecomeoverweightorevenobese译文:当孩子们的饮食中含有太多的脂肪和糖时,他们就会变得超重甚至肥胖。分析:When引导时间状语从句。笔前点睛★审题分析从写作素材来看,本篇概要必须涉及以下几个要点1.孩子们超重成为许多人担心的问题。2超重的原因是孩子们吃太多垃圾食品。3.加利福尼亚州州长开峰会专门讨论孩子的健康问题;他本人以身作则,亲自带孩子进行锻炼4州长签订新法律来限制垃圾食品。思路点拨本文是一篇说明文。本概要应用一般现在时先介绍孩子们的健康问题,然后以一般过去时介绍加利福尼亚州州长为解决孩子们的健康问题而釆取的措施高分范文Thatkidsarebecomingoverweightisabigproblemwhichconcernsmanypeople.(要点1)It‘sknownthateatingtoomuchjunkfoodmakeskidsoverweight.(要点2)Tosolvetheproblem,thegovernorofCaliforniaheldaspecialsummitmeeting,whichheinvitedhealthgroupsandchildrentoattend.Notonlydidheaskkidstostayawayfromjunkfood,buthehadawalkwiththemtoshowthatexercisecanbefun.(要点3)Furthermore，

hesignedanewlawtolimitthesaleofjunkfoodandsodainschools.(要点4)(74words)★高级语块重要短语invitesb.todosth.邀请某人做某事stayawayfrom远离concerns(vt.)使….担心notonly….butalso….不但..而且..高级语块★高级句型Thatkidsarebecomingoverwiehtisabigproblemwhichconcernsmanypeople(That引导主语从句;which引导定语从句)

It'sknownthateatingtoomuchjunkfoodmakeskidoverweight(it是形式主语,that引导的从句作真正的主语)Notonlydidheaskkidstostayawayfromjunkfood,buthehadawalkwiththemtoshowthatexercisecanbefun(notonly位于句首,其后的句子要用倒装;that引导宾语从精彩点评全文要点齐全,叙述有条理,思路清晰,主题突出。使用了不同的句式和短语,以及衔接上下句的过渡词,语言运用灵活,功底扎实。。语境演练Thesedaysoursocietydevelopsrapidlyandforcespeopletorush.Itappearsthatpeoplehavegotusedtobeinginahurry.However,itisbetterforpeopletotaketheirtimeandlivetheirlifeataslowerpacethantohurrytogetthingsdone.阅读短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要Themainreasonthatconvincesustoopposedoingworkinahurryisthepossibilityofdoingwrongsinarush.Whenpeopledotheirjobsortakeactionsinahurry,theycannotmakeasounddecisionandprobablyregretlater.Asthesayinggoes,"Hastemakeswaste.Weshouldthinkcarefullybeforemakingadecisionanddoourworklessquickly.Weshouldnotmakemistakesbydoingworkhurriedly.Slowingdownthepaceoflifehelpspeopleenjoytheirlifebetter.Forexample,takingatraintosomeplacecertainlywilltakemoretimethantakingaplane.However,takingatrainmakespeoplehaveenoughtimetogettoknowalotofnewfriends.Besides,itallowspeopletofullyenjoythebeautifulsceneryalongtheway.Onthecontrary,beinginahurrywillmakeuslosechancesinenjoyingourlife.Finally,slowerlifepaceprovidesbetterhealthyconditionsforus.Asisknowntoall,takingactionsinahurrybotherspeopleandraisestheirstress.Peoplethinkiftheyarenotinahurry,theywillbecomealoserandthatannoysthem.Beinginahurrycanhurtpeoplebothphysicallyandmentally.Accordingtosomestudies,peoplewhohaveaslowerpacesufferfewerdiseases,tendtobehappierandlivemuchlongerthanthosewhoselifeistense,eveniftheformerfinishjobsmoreslowlythanthelatter.Inshort,workingquicklywillbringaboutmorematerialbenefitstomakeoursocietymoreadvanced.Howevermuchstresscan'tbringenjoyment,friendsandhealth,whicharemuchmoreimportantthanmoneyandothermaterialadvantages.Therefore,takeyourtimeandliveyourlifeataslowerpace__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________高分范文Tolivelifeataslowerpaceisbetterthantolivelifeinahurry.Thereare