读后续写课件-2023届高考英语作文备考

读后续写TheContinuationWriting1李华今天出门，————————————————，最后得到了路人的称赞。Brainstorming(makeupastory)2选评注选材特点评分参考需要注意Explanation3①选材特点：（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350左右；（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。4②评分参考：（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；（2）内容的丰富性；（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性；（5）字迹工整。5③需要注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右（词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分）；（2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。6Writingsteps7Step5做到首尾呼应，结构完整合理Step1Step2Step3Step4浏览所给信息，确定大意主题梳理已知段落，确定主要情节借助段落开头，确定续写内容刻画细节冲突，优美连贯表达5w+h开端、发展、高潮、结局conflict,solution8阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp.”andwalkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.9

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para1： But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

dark.

Para2:It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.10Step1浏览所给信息，确定大意主题whowhatwherewhenwhyMainideaThemeJane,TomJanewaslostInaforestOneweekendinJulyAquarrelwithTom,herhusbandJanewaslostintheforestforthreedaysandsurvivedintheendJanelearnedhowtocontrolemotionsanddealwithconflicts11PersonalStep2梳理已知段落，确定主要情节How(feeling)

Mainplotsbeginning

developmentclimaxending…startedtoquarrel…waslost…keptmoving…hadtostopforthenight…Roseatthebreakofday…Begantowalkalongthestreamandhope…heardahelicopter待定angry,frightenedregretful,confused,hopeful,joyfulhopeful12思考：故事发展顺序？时间顺序Group阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp.”andwalkedaway.angry13

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”frightened14

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.regretful,confused15

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.joyful,hopeful16Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.17注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Para1： But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

dark.

Para2:It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.18Step3借助段落开头，确定续写内容研读续写段落的开头语Para.1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.(切入点）Jane是如何熬过这个夜晚的？具体写什么？1.HowdidJanefeelthen?2.HowdidJanestrugglethroughthenight?3.Didshefallas