2021年6月英语高考真题浙江卷 读后续写

2021年6月英语高考真题浙江卷读后续写

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事，

Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn'tunderstand

myworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymy

dadearnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.

Ididn'treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker;andIthoughtthatI

wouldsurpass（超过）anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimeIwalkedacrossthestageat

highschoolgraduation.

Summersinthemid-70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,or

throwingafootball.,preparingformyfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoor

weather;Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone（长号）.

ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmer

hiredtoworkinhisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,riding

downthefieldlookingforweedstospraywithchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstopped

andpointedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,

butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb's-quarters,foxtails,and

thekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,

eventhoughIwasn'tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.

Athome,mydadsaid,"Ajob'sabigsteptogrowingup.I'mgladyouwillbecontributingto

thehousehold.*'Mydad'swordsmademerealizethatmyearningsmightnotbeminetodowith

asIwished.

Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butI

wasn*tinterested.IdecideditwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

版本一：

Paragraphl：Thepaydayarrivedatlast.

Paragraph?：Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworryingabout.

版本二：

Paragraphl：WhenIbroughtmypaycheckhome-itwas$119-mydadwantedtotalkto

me.________________________________

Paragraph2：IwassurprisedthatmydadallowedmetousethemoneyasI

wished.________________________________

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主题

人与社会一家庭生活

原文解读

1

语篇大意

本文为记叙文。文章讲述作者8岁暑假的时候，和一群孩子给邻居家的田地除草，打

工挣钱的故事。

2

关键词

dad,worked,family,future,farmer,learned,tiring,growingup,realize,fair

3

题型解读

这是一篇记叙文的读后续写，要求考生在所给短文的基础上续写，并且结合划线词，

构成一篇合理的完整故事。读后续写对学生学习语言知识的综合运用能力有着较高的要求。

同时也考查学生们的发散思维能力和创造性思维能力。续写故事时:要求考生读懂文章，

然后明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上，考生必须沿着文

章的思路，根据提供的线索，恰当进行发挥，并且要使用给出的至少5个词语等。故事的

结尾也必须符合原文的主题意义。

4

写作分析

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者高中毕业后，参加农场工作，辛辛苦苦挣到的钱，

不情愿贡献给家庭，后来在看到父亲的辛劳之后，理解了父母担心的是自己太过自私而不

知奉献，终于想通，并自豪地将自己劳动所得交给父亲的故事。

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详解

版本一

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“工资终于到了。”可知，第一段可描写作者的工资到手后，高

兴地计划自己用这笔钱，不愿意交给父亲，然后看到父亲的辛劳。

②由第二段首句内容“我立刻明白了父母的担心。”可知，第二段可描写作者明白了

父母担心自己不懂得奉献，想通了，然后自豪地把钱交给了父亲。

2.续写线索

高兴一一计戈IJ——不情愿——发现一一理解

3.词汇

行为类

①计划：idea/plan

②奉献：contribute/handover

③发现：find/understand

情绪类

①不情愿的：unwilling/reluctant(unfair)

②自豪地：understanding

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【原创范文】

Thepaydayarrivedatlast.HoldingthemoneyIearnedthroughtwo-week'shard

work,Icouldn'tcontainmyjoyandkeptponderingoverthequestion:howshouldIspendsucha

largesumofmoney?Well,anewfootballoutfitwouldgetmeonestepclosertomydreamof

beingaquarterback.Suddenly,Dad'swordsechoedinmymind,'Tmgladyouwillbe

contributingtothefamily/"Butit'sunfair!”anothervoicereasoned.Tornbetweenthetwo

voices,Ifinallydecidedtogohalfandhalf.AsInearedhome,IheardMom'svoice,〃Weneedto

buyone.But“Butwearecurrentlyshortofmoney/Dad'svoiceemerged,fullofanxiety.

Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworryingabout.Theyweretalkingabout

thetruckengine.Itneededtobechangedbecauseitsfrequentfailuretoworkhalfwayalmost

droveDadmad.Hesitatedforseveralminutes,Iwalkedtowardsthemandhandedoverallthe

money.Z/Dad,thisiswhatIearned.Hereyouare!”SeeingwhatIwasdoing,Dadfrozetherefora

momentbutsoonhegatheredmeintohisarms,"You'vereallygrownup.〃Meanwhile,Isaw

tearswellingupinMom'seyes.ItwasonthatdaythatIrealizedwhatDadhadaccomplishedat

myagewasmuchgreaterthanIdid.

版本二：

1.段落续写

①由第一段首句内容“拿到119美元的工资了，父亲却有话说。”可知，第一段可描

写作者的工资到手后，父亲想用这笔钱，得知消息后，作者的情绪变化。经过和爸爸意味

深长的谈话后，虽然作者仍有想要的东西，“迫于压力”，却还是把钱交给了父亲.

②由第二段首句内容“父亲竟然让我自己决定如何支配这份工资。”可知，第二段主

要描述作者内心活动以及最终的决定，突出孩子长大后，对父亲和家人多了一份理解。

2.续写线索

高兴一不情愿一一惊讶一一开心-发现-主动贡献

3.词汇

行为类

①发现：talk/find

②奉献：offertocontribute

情绪类

①不情愿的：unwilling/surprised/happy/willing

②自豪地：understandingandthankful

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【原创范文】

WhenIbroughtmypaycheckhome—itwas$119-mydadwantedtotalktome.Knowing

thathewouldtalkaboutmyearnings,Ipulledalongfaceandintendedtosimplywalkpasthim

andslipbacktomybedroom.Xomehere,son."Dadexclaimed,wearinganaccessible

expression.Myheartsank.WhatIhadbeenlookingforwardto—adreamynewfootballoutfit

wouldfinallygivewaytofamilyexpenses.Reluctantly,Iinchedforwardandsubmittedthe

paycheck.However;Dadslidthepaycheckbackintomyhand,sayinginatendervoice/'You've

grownup.Youhaveeveryrighttodecidewhattodowiththemoney."

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