2024届4月云南省二统英语读后续写助人类-志愿者献爱心帮助罗纳德先生 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。LauraMulvihillfelttheridewasprobablyveryunusualwhenshepickedup89-year-oldRonaldDembnerfromtheVeteran'sHospitalinHenryCounty,Georgia.Itwasobviousthathewasstrugglingandinbadshape.Butitwasn'tuntiltheyarrivedathishomethatherworstdoubtswereconfirmed,Expectingtobegreetedbyfamilymembers,shewasgreetedbysomethingoutofanightmare(酷梦)episodeofHoardersinstead.LauraMulvihill在乔治亚州亨利县退伍军人医院接走89岁的RonaldDembner时，觉得这次骑行可能非常不寻常。很明显，他在挣扎，状态很糟糕。但直到他们到达他的家，她最严重的怀疑才得到证实。她本以为会受到家人的欢迎，却受到了噩梦般的欢迎(酷梦)取而代之的是《囤积者》一集。Mr,Ronald'shomewascoveredwithrubbish,Thecounters.carpets,andwallslookeddirty.Theroomsmeltabsolutelyterrible.BecauseallofRonald'sfamilymembershadpassedaway,hehadnoonetoassisthim,Eventhehomecarenurseshadstoppedcomingtovisitasaresultoftheextremelyawfullivingconditions.Hewascompletelyalone,exceptforhisdog,Homer,whohadtakentopoopinginthehouse.UnabletocleanupafterhimselforHomerbutterrifiedoflosinghishomeandhisdog,Mr.Ronaldwastooafraidtoreachoutforhelp.罗纳德先生的家里堆满了垃圾，柜台。地毯和墙壁看起来很脏。这个房间闻起来非常难闻。由于罗纳德的所有家人都去世了，他没有人帮助他，甚至家庭护理护士也因为极其恶劣的生活条件而不再来探望他。除了他的狗霍默，他完全是一个人，霍默已经开始在家里拉屎了。罗纳德先生不能在自己或霍默之后打扫卫生，但害怕失去家和狗，他太害怕了，不敢寻求帮助。Mulvihill,however,wasnot,Horrifiedbywhatshewitnessed,shedecidedtotakemattersintoherownhands.Shespenthoursonthephone,contactingthefiredepartment,adultservicestheChamberofCommerceandHabitatforHumanity,Noonecouldofferanyhelp.“Everyonesaid,mentallyhe'sfine,he'sjustolder.Sonobodywillhelp,"shesaid.然而，Mulvihill并没有，她被所目睹的一切吓坏了，她决定亲自处理此事。她花了几个小时打电话，联系消防部门、成人服务商会和人类家园，没有人能提供任何帮助。“每个人都说，他精神上很好，只是年纪大了。所以没有人会帮忙，”她说。Finally,withallotherresourcesrunningout,shepostedacalltoarmsonsocialmediacreatingthegroup,HelpingMr,Ronald,Sheexplainedthesituation.Shewroteinpart,“'[drovehimhomeandheaskedmetohelphiminside.Helivesaloneandcannotkeepupwithhispet.Thehouseisterrible."Shewentontoexplainthat“themainissuesaredogpoop(1dog)andgeneraldisrepair(norailingonthestairs,soiledcarpetandfurniture,etc)".Sheknewitwouldtakeanarmytomakethingsright.Luckily,shehadfoundone,2000strong.Thearmywasformed.最后，在所有其他资源都用完的情况下，她在社交媒体上发布了一条号召，创建了“帮助罗纳德先生”组织。她解释了当时的情况。她写道，“（开车送他回家，他让我帮他进去。他一个人住，跟不上他的宠物。房子太糟糕了。”她接着解释说，“主要问题是狗的粪便（1只狗）和年久失修（楼梯上没有栏杆，地毯和家具脏了，等等）”。她知道需要一支军队才能把事情做好。幸运的是，她找到了一支2000人的军队。军队已经组建。注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dozensofvolunteerscameforwardtohelp,withadesiretomakeadifference.————————————————————————————————————————————Mr.RonaldwasdeeplymovedbywhatMulvihillandthevolunteershaddone.————————————————————————————————————————————————————解析：主题：献爱心！续之分解：第一段：

Dozens

ofvolunteerscameforwardto

help,withadesiretomakeadifference.志愿者来了，那么来做什么了？（说个123）1：清理垃圾，打扫狗粪；刷墙漆，铺地板.......2：修缮楼梯扶手，（原文中：房子年久失修）3：物质的解决了，精神关怀，送温暖，化孤独设计思路：回扣原文，层层递进续之分解：第二段：

Mr.RonaldwasdeeplymovedbywhatMulvihillandthevolunteershaddone.感动，表达，升华1：（老人）无缝连接的感动：止不住的眼泪，停不下的感谢，握紧不放的手2：（志愿者和Mulvihill）：赠人玫瑰，手有余香！改变别人，也重拾自己3：升华：伸出手，献出爱！（人间自有真情在）下水：

Dozensofvolunteerscameforwardtohelp,withadesiretomakeadifference.IttookthemdaystocleanouttherubbishandthewasteofHomer,paintthewallsandinstallthenewflooring.Theyalso

builtarailingforthestairs

toensureMrRonaldo'ssafety.Thevolunteersevenorganizeda

scheduletotaketurns

to

visitMrRonaldo,makingsurehewasnotaloneagainandoffering

himwhatheneededinthishardtime.

Mr.RonaldwasdeeplymovedbywhatMulvihillandthevolunteershaddone.

Hewasoverwhelmedwithgratitude,tearsrollingdownwithoutcontrol.Hekeptthankingalltheguysfortheirkindness,squeezingtheirhandstightlyonebyone.While

Mulvihill

andherarmyofvolunteersmayhavemadealife-changingdifferencein

MrRonaldo

world,

itmadeadifferenceintheinherworldaswell.Whenweextendourhandtoliftothersup,weareraisingourselvesuptoo!参考范文：Dozensofvolunteerscameforwardarmedwithcleaningsupplies,tools,andanoverwhelmingdesiretomakeadifference.Withinaweek,Mr.Ronald'shomewasstrippedapartanddeep-cleanedfromtoptobottom.Volunteersremovedallofthegarbage,theoldfurniture,andtheold,moldycarpet.Itwasjustthebeginning.Helpcontinuedtopourin.Onehusband/wifeteamprovidedfreefencing,aveterinariansawtoHomer'srabiesshotsandfleatreatment,andalocalcatererofferedupfreemeals.Additionally,numeroustradespeoplespenttheiroff-hoursworkingforfree;installingnewflooring,paintingthewalls,andrebuildingthedeck,allwithdonatedsuppliesfromcommunitymembersandareabusinesses.Inadditiontothestructuralimprovements,Mulvihillalsosetupappointmentsfornursesandhealthcaresupporttostartcomingtothehomeagain.Mr.RonaldwasdeeplymovedbywhatMulvihillandthevolunteershaddone.“Heissothankful,hecracksmeup.Hekeepssaying,‘Idon’tknowwhatIdidtodeserveallofthisfromallyouguys,’”saidMulvihill.“It’sgivinghimhopethathewillbetakencareof.”WhenWeTransformTheLivesOfOthers,WeAlsoTransformOurOwn.WhileMulvihillandherarmyofvolunteersmayhavemadealife-changingdifferenceinMr.Ronald'sworld,shesaysitmadeadifferenceinherworldaswell."Iwillneverforgettheirhelp,theirlove,fortherestofmylife.Iwillneverforgetit,"shesaid."Wewillneverforgetyoueith