Module1Unit2Writing课件牛津深圳版英语九年级上册

U2Writing（2）课前准备：1号本,notebook,

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pens,groupcard,作文积累本1.Editthepassagebyyourselfandyourgroupmembers.2.Learnhowtoreplacethewordanduseclausescorrectly.3.Learnthestructureofintroductionofaperson.LearninggoalsFillintheblankswiththecorrectforms.LuXun,_________asoneofthegreatestmodernwritersinChina,wasborninShaoxing,ZhejiangProvincein1881.In1904,hewenttoJapanandbecameamedicalstudent,withthe____ofimprovingpeople’shealthandsavinglives.Hequitmedicalschool.WhenhereturnedtoChinain1908,he____ateachingjob.In1917,afriend______thathehelpwriteforamagazinecalledNewYouth.Hisstorymadegreat________onpeople’smind.

Heplayeda______roleinraisingChinesepeople’sspirit.Whata_____manheis!goalgetconsidercrucialgreatsuggestinfluence consideredgoalgotsuggestedinfluencecrucialgreat1号本荧光笔标画可学习短语假如明天英语课的主题是“Famouspeople”,你想在课堂上介绍你最喜爱的演员—CharlieChaplin。请你写一篇介绍查理·卓别林的英语短文。基本信息1889年4月出生于英国伦敦。1977年12月逝世。被认为是世界上最伟大的演员之一。成就及作品特点童年时期家境贫穷，但很有天赋。14岁起在英国各地剧院参加演出。1913年到美国开始从事电影表演事业。一生共拍摄80多部影片，其作品总是同情穷人而嘲弄富人。评价？参考词汇：有天赋的(talented),同情某人(sympathizewithsb.)剧院(theater)Peer-editingDoesthewriterdescribetheperson’sinformation?Doesthewritermakeaclearstructureofthepassage?Doesthewritersaywhythepersonisgreat?Doesthewritersumuphowhe/shefeelsaboutthisperson?Correctthegrammarmistakeincludingspellingmistakes.3minsGroupsharing1.Shareyourgoodsentencepatternsandphraseswithyourgroupmembers.2.Writedownonablanksheet3minsGroupwork4mins改正错误及画出好句好短语，进行句子提升G1&G5Ex.1G2&G6Ex.2G3&G7Ex.3G4&G8Ex.4Grouppresentation3人任务，1人负责指出错误，1人阐述改正方法或进行好词好句分析，1人写出提升方法。展示时间：2minsExample1

CharlieChaplinbornin1889,Apr.inLondun,England.Hediein1977,Dec.Hewasthemostgreatactor.

Atanearlyago,hewaspoor,buthewastalented.Attheageof14yearsold.HetookinmanytheaterseverywhereinEngland.In1913,hewenttoAmericaandstartedworkasfilmshow.Hewasin80films.Hesympathizewiththepoorpeopleandhemakejokeontherichpeople.Hewasagreatman.提升方法：Hewasagreatman.可升级为_________________!/_________________!（感叹句）WhatagreatmanHowgreat

CharlieChaplinaBritishactorwasborninApril1889inEngland,London.HediedinDecember,1977.Hewasconsideredoneofthegreatestactorintheworld.Whenhewasyoungage,hisfamilywaspoor.Buthehadagreattalented.Attheageof14,hetookpartinmanyshowsintheatersinEngland.HewenttoAmericatoworkasafilmactor.Inhislife,hemade80films.Hisworkssympathizedtheoldandlaughedattherich.Heisagreatandhard-workingmanandwealllovehimsomuch.Howagreatman!Peopleinmemoryofhim.Example2

提升方法：1.Hisfamilywaspoor.Buthehadagreattalented.可升级为Although_________________,____________________.(用although从句引导)2.Heisagreatandhard-workingmanandwealllovehimsomuch.可升级为Heisgreat____________hard-workingandhe__________bypeople.（用短语代替单词,主动变被动）hisfamilywaspoorhehadagreattalentaswellasislovedExample3

CharlieChaplinwhowasborninLondon,England,inApril1889andpassedawayinDecember,1977.Hewasconsideredtobeoneofthegreatestactorsintheworld.Whenhewasayoungchild,hisfamilywaspoorbuthetalented.Attheageof14,hestartedtoperformintheaterseverywhereinEngland.Hebegantoworkasafilmactorin1913whenhearrivedatAmerica.Inhislife,heactedout80films.Hisworksalwayssympathizedtheoldandlaughedattherich.

CharlieChaplinisagreatman,isn’the?Heishard-workingandkindness.Wewillloveandrememberhimforever.提升方法：1.Wewillloveandrememberhimforever.可升级为Hewill_________________(用he作主语，使用被动语态)

2.hisfamilywaspoorbuthetalented.Attheageof14,hestartedtoperformintheaterseverywhereinEngland.可升级为Hewas_______talented____hestartedtoperformintheaterseverywhereinEngland.（用从句连接两个句子）belovedandrememberedforever.sothatCharlieChaplin,aBritishactor,borninApril1889andpassedawayinDecember1977.Hewasconsideredasoneofthegreatestactorsintheworld.Inhischildhood,hisfamilywaspoor,however,hewasverytalentedinacting.Whenhewasa14-year-oldboy,hestartedtogivegreatperformancesindifferenttheatersinBritain.In1913,hebeganhiscareertoactinfilmsinAmerica.Duringhislifetime,heactedinover80filmsintotal,whichsympathizedwiththepoorandplayedjokesontherich,werelovedbyalotofpeople.Hedevotedhimselftohiscareerandshowedagreatloveforit.Thoughhehasalreadybeenaway,helivesinmemoryofpeopleforhisworks.Howgreatheis!Example4

SummaryPart1:Introduction:介绍人物出生时间地点需要先____后_____人物有称号的，可用被动语态及短语，如____________*3.介绍人物出生、职业放在一个句子，可以考虑使用______从句，注意who要紧跟在名词后。

Part2:Experience/Achievement人物在xxx岁做了xxx事，可用表达包括（1）_____________(时间状语从句)（2）______________(短语)2.描述人物所做过的事情，注意时态需要使用_______地时beknown/consideredas定语Whensb.wasxxxAttheageofxxx一过Part3:Influence/Comment描述我们在看到该人物故事例子的感受He/She_____________________(树立了很好的例子)His/She________(被喜爱)bypeoplearoundtheworld.2.描述人物或人物事迹所产生的影响。His/Herworks_______________(产生影响)infilm/science/writing.He/She________________________(作出巨大贡献)film/science/writing.He/She_________________________(扮演重要/至关重要的角色)infilm/science/writing.He/She_________________________(在人们记忆中).3.作出评价可使用_________或______句setagoodexampleforusislovedmadeaninfluenceonmadeagreatcontributiontoplaysanimportantroleinlivesinmemoryofpeople感叹反意疑问CharlieChaplin,aBritishactor,borninApril1889andpassedawayinDecember1977.Hewasconsideredasoneofthegreatestactorsintheworld.Hewasborninapoorfamily.Thankstohistalent,hestartedtogivegreatperformancesindifferenttheatersinBritainattheageof14.In1913,hebeganhiscareertoactinfilmsinAmerica.Duringhislifetime,hetookpartinover80filmsintotal,whichsympathizedwiththepoorandplayedjokeson/laughedattherich,werelovedbyalotofpeople.Hisfilmsnotonlybringusfun,butalsoencourageustofacethedifficultiesbravelyinourdailylife.Hedevotedhimselftohiscareerandshowedagreatloveforit.Heisstillwidelyrememberedforhishumorthatheshowedinthefilm.1组CharlieChaplin,aBritishactor,wasborninApril1889.HediedinDecember1977.Hewasknownasoneofthegreatestactorsintheworld.

Whenhewasyoung,hisfamilywaspoor.HewassotalentedthathestartedtogivegreatperformancesindifferenttheatersinBritainattheageof14.In1913,hewent