Unit12InnovationWritingWorkshop课件高中英语选择性

Howtowriteanopentopiccomposition-----howtowriteaboutaperson

Teachingaims

1.Masterthestructure

ofthiskindofwriting

2.Writeanopentopiccomposition你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：

1.人物简介；

2.尊敬和爱戴的原因

注意:1)词数100左右;2)题目和首句已为你写好...

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ThepersonIrespect

Therearemanyrespectablepeoplearoundus.Asforme,myfatheristheperson

Irespectmost.Borninasmallcity,myfatheris

adoctorwholoves

hisworkandpatients.

Hisdevotion

tohiswork

appeals

to(attracts)

me.whenthecorvid-19spreadinourcountry,heconceled

hisholidayandreturned(wentback)tohisworkinhospital.Fromdaytonight,heworkedveryhard,achievedalotinhiswork,andrespectedbyallhiscolleages(workmates)andthepatients.Afterwork,hewouldalsosparesometimeto

sharesomepositiveeventsabouthisworkwithmyfamily.whatismore,hisencouragementmeansalottome.when

I

comeacrossproblemsinmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravelyandwisely.

Inmymind,myfatheristhepersonwhodeservesmyrespect.

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书面表达评分标准1—完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。(要点齐全)

2—,正确使用时态人称,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。(

准确

多样)

3—尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇；具备较强的语言运用能力(高级)

4—有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。(顺畅)

5—完全达到预期的写作目的。(结构完整)Think1.人称（person）:Mainlythethirdperson2.时态

（tense）:presenttense/thepasttense3.标题(title)Smallboxbigdifference4.结构（structure）Para.1:describethebasicinformationoftheperson.Para.2:hisorherexperiencesandachievementsPara.3:commentsandinfluencesLet’sthinkabouthowtowriteacompositionaboutthedescriptionofaperson.Think

Ifyouintroduceaperson,whichaspectswillyoutalkabout?Ifyouintroduceaperson’sbirthandeducation,youcanusesuchphrases:Ifyouwanttodescribesomebody’squalityorcharacter,youcanusethefollowingwords:Ifyoudescribeaperson’sinfluence,youcanusesuchphrases:

identityagelookeducationexperiencequalityachievement

strongpatientpersistentoutgoingtalentedhelpfulhard-workingt

beknownassetagoodexampletoencouragesbtodosthdevote..to..makecontributionsto…

beborningraduatefrom

请你根据下面的提示，用英语对钟南山作简单介绍。

1.钟南山，1936年10月出生于江苏南京.他是21世纪最出名的医学家之一。(medicalscientist)

2.1960年，他毕业于北京医学院。(BeijingMedicalCollege)

3.2019年冬，COVID-19在中国爆发.钟南山不仅带领而且积极参加了抗击新冠的战役。(breakout)

4.钟南山和他的同事经过几个月的努力,取得了非凡的结果.这一结果阻止了新冠在中国的传播。(remarkableresult)

5.2020年，钟南山被授予共和国勋章，并被所有国人所尊重。(theMedaloftheRepublic)

6.他为年轻一代树立了良好的榜样。(setagoodexample)

注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。let’spractise(pairwork)

Dr.ZhongNanshan

wasborninOctober1936inNanjing,JiangsuProvince.

He

is

oneofthemostfamousmedicalscientistsinthe21stcentury.He

graduated

fromBeijingMedicalCollegein1960.Inthewinterof2019,theCOVID-19brokeoutinChina.ZhongNanshannotonly

ledbutalsotookanactivepartinthebattleagainstCOVID-19.Throughtheirhardworkforseveralmonths,ZhongNanshanandhisworkmatesachieved

remarkableresult.ThisresultstoppedthespreadofCOVID-19inChina.ZhongNanshanwasawardedtheMedaloftheRepublicin2020andrespectedbyallthepeopleinChina.Healsosets

agoodexampletotheyounggeneration.CheckAmedicalpioneerDr.ZhongNanshanwasborninOctober1936inNanjing,JiangsuProvince.

Heisoneofthefamousmedicalscientistsinthe21stcentury.HegraduatedfromBeijingMedicalCollegein1960.Inthewinterof2020,theCOVID-19brokeoutinChina.ZhongNanshannotonlyledbutalsotookanactivepartinthebattleagainstCOVID-19.Throughtheirhardworkforseveralmonths,ZhongNanshanandhisworkmatesachievedremarkableresult.ThisresultstoppedthespreadofCOVID-19inChina.

ZhongNanshanwasawardedtheMedaloftheRepublicin2020andrespectedbyallthepeopleinChina.Healsosetsagoodexampletotheyounggeneration.Dr.ZhongNanshan,oneofthemostfamousmedicalscientistsinthe21stcentury,wasborninOctober1936inNanjing,JiangsuProvince.Throughtheirhardworkforseveralmonths,ZhongNanshanandhisworkmatesachievedremarkableresult,whichstoppedthespreadoftheCOVID-19inChina.ZhongNanshanwasawardedtheMedaloftheRepublicin2020andrespectedbyallthepeopleinChina,settingagoodexampletotheyounggeneration.Jointwosentensestogethertobeautifythewriting

let’sedit

TheMedicalPioneer

Dr.ZhongNanshan,oneofthemostfamousmedicalscientistsinthe21stcentury,wasbornin

October1936inNanjing,JiangsuProvince.Hegraduatedfrom

BeijingMedicalCollegein1960.Inthewinterof2019,theCOVID-19broke

outinChina.ZhongNanshannotonlyledbutalsotookanactivepartinthebattleagainstCOVID-19.Throughtheirhardworkforseveralmonths,ZhongNanshanandhisworkmatesachievedremarkableresult,whichstoppedthespreadoftheCOVID-19inChina.

ZhongNanshanwasawardedtheMedaloftheRepublicin2020andrespectedbyallthepeopleinChina,setting

agoodexampletothe

young

generation.

要点makeasummary时态

人称

结构

语言

书面Howtowriteaboutaperson语言运用12字标准:要点齐全，准确多样，高级顺畅Homework

writeashortpassageaccordingtotheinformation.writing假定你是某中学学生李华，你校正在举行英语作文比赛，要求写一位你最钦佩的运动员。内容包括:介绍自己钦佩的运动员;钦佩的理由。参考词汇:东京奥运会TokyoOlympics注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Myfavoritesportsstar

Whenitcomestosports,yourfirstreactionissomefamiliarathletes,suchasSuBingtian,