专题07 读后续写（解析版）

专题07读后续写1.【2024届广西柳州高中、南宁三中高三联考试题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语段续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150左右。Asanindependent,self-reliantpersonwhoalwayshandledeverythingbymyself,Ididn’texpectparentingtobehard.Oh,sure,it’sdifficultforotherpeople.Iheardparentscomplainingallthetime—kidsarechallenging;nothingiseverclean;there’snotenoughtimeinthedaytodoeverything.Butthatwas“otherpeople”andIknewIcouldhandleit.Howcomplicatedcoulditbe?I’dalwaysdreamedofadoptingachild,andfinallymydreamcametrueonesummerafternoon.Eventhoughwehadrequestedonlyonechild,theworkerasked,“Couldyoutakeanotherbabyandhiseleven-year-oldbrother?”Ofcourse,wecould.Wehadroomtohaveallthreeboystogether.Thefirstweekaftertheymovedin,Ispentmydaysrushingfromtasktotask,cleaningandmakingsuretheyhadalltheyneeded.Iconstantlyorganizedourlivingroom,whichwassuddenlyfulloftoys,andpickedupthepathofdestructionleftintheboys’wake.Cookingandcleaningaftermealsandsnacksseemedtotakehalfofmyday.Ihardlyeversat;somethingalwaysneededtobedone.“Ithinkweneedabreak,”myhusbandtoldmeoneeveningasIwasfallingasleeponthecouchasusual.“No,”Irefused.Theideaofsendingthemtoastrangersickenedme.However,witheachpassingday,Iwasgrowingmoreandmoreexhausted.Besidesmeetingthephysicalneedsoftheboys,thereweremedicalandemotionalneeds.Boththelittleonesconstantlyclung(黏住)tome.Itwasneverquietinourhouse;Ifeltoverwhelmed.Onenight,myhusbandsaidfirmlythatheneededabreak.WhetherI“needed”oneornot,weweregoingtotakeone.Withtearsrollingdownmycheeks,Inodded,knowingitwastrue,althoughIdidn’twanttoadmitmyweakness.Icalledmyparents._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AskingforhelpissomethingImustkeepre-learningastimegoeson,butit’sgettingeasier._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Icalledmyparents.Hearingwhathappened,theyagreedtocomeimmediately.Whenseeingmyparentswithtoys,bothlittleboysletgoofmyhandsandreachtotouchthem.Withinafewmoments,ourkidswerethrilledtoplaywiththeirgrandparents.Watchingthemplaywithsmilesontheirfaces,Ifeltasuddenwaveofreliefwashoverme.MyhusbandIandspenttheeveningrelaxingandspendingtimetogether.IsleptlatethenextmorningandspentthedayenjoyingthesunshineasIworkedinmygarden.AskingforhelpissomethingImustkeepre-learningastimegoeson,butit’sgettingeasier.Nowweregularlyaskourparentstotakecareofthekidssowecantakedatenightsorevenquicktripsasacouple.I’velearnedtoembracerest.Idon’tneedtoworkeverysecondoftheday;thingsdon’thavetobeperfect.MyhouseisnotalwaysascleanasIwouldlike,andsometimesweeatfrozenpizzafordinner.Butembracingself-careandaskingforhelpalloweachdaytobefilledwithloveandlaughterinsteadofanxietyandfrustration.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者作为一个独立、自立、凡事都亲力亲为的人，没想到养育孩子会如此艰难。在领养了三个男孩之后，作者和丈夫倍感疲惫，把孩子们送给陌生人又让作者十分不忍。在这种情况下作者不知所措。后来作者承认了自己软弱的地方，给父母打了电话，诉说了状况，同时得到了父母的帮助。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“我给我父母打了电话。”可知，第一段可描写作者向父母诉说当前的状况以及自己的疲惫，同时作者的父母愿意来看望孩子们以帮助作者，还要描述父母与孩子们的互动及被帮助后作者和丈夫的感受。②由第二段首句内容“随着时间的推移，我必须不断地重新学习，但这越来越容易了。”可知，第二段可描写作者承认自己的弱点，需要寻求帮助，不断学习，学会包容一些不完美才能快乐度过每一天。2.续写线索：收养三个孩子——忙于照顾他们——倍感疲惫不知所措——向父母寻求帮助——父母前来帮忙——作者感到轻松——经常要求父母照顾孩子——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①放开：letgoof/release②涌向我：washoverme/surgetowardsme③照顾：takecareof/lookafter情绪类①突然松了一口气：asuddenwaveofrelief/asighofrelief②沮丧：frustration/dismay【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearingwhathappened,theyagreedtocomeimmediately.(使用了现在分词作状语和what引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】IsleptlatethenextmorningandspentthedayenjoyingthesunshineasIworkedinmygarden.(使用了as引导的时间状语从句)2.【2024届江西省九江十校高三二联试题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Barryisamiddle-agedmanwhoisgoingthroughaverydifficulttimeinhislife.Hiswiferecentlypassedaway.SheandBarryhadmanyhappyyearstogether,sharingtheirfreetimeandevenstartingabusinesstogether.Withouthiswife,Barryisfullofsorrowandfeelsthatlifeispointless.Heevendecidestoclosetheirbusinessbecauseworkingtheremakeshimmisshertoomuch.Evenmonthslater,Barrysitsaroundinhishousealldayfeelinggloomy.Hisfriendsandfamilytrytogethimoutofthehouseandencouragehimtostartdoingnewthingsandenjoylife,buttheyarenotsuccessful.Barry’sneighbor,averyoldwomannamedGertrude,seeshimfromheryardonedayashestepsoutontohisporch.Shehasnotseenhimoutsideindays!Sheaskshimtocomecloser.Irritated,hewalkstothefencethatprotectsthefrontofherhouse.“Hello,Barry!Justlookatthisfence.Ionlyhaditputintwoyearsago,butitisfallingapart.Youareastrongman,andyouhavesomefreetime.Iwantyoutofixthisfenceforme,”Gertrudesays.Barryisangry.Sheknowsthesituationheisin.Heistheonewhoneedshelpandsupport.Hethinkstheoldladyisbeingveryselfish.Still,heknowssheistoooldtofixthefenceherself,andtheyhavebeenneighborsforyears.Sheisanicewoman,andherespectsher.Heagreestofixherfencebecauseitisreallynotsafeforhertohaveitbrokenlikethat.Barryworksonthefencefordays.Gertrudebringshimlemonadewhileheworks.Whenhefinishes,sheisverygrateful.Barrysmilesforthefirsttimeinmonths.“Nowthatyoudidsuchawonderfuljobfixingmyfence,doyouthinkyoucouldpaintitforme?”Gertrudesmilesathim.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Barrycannotbelievesheisaskingformorehelp._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Barrynolongerfeelsthatlifeispointless._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Barrycannotbelievesheisaskingformorehelp.Doesn’tsheknowhowsadheis?Butbecauseherespectshersomuch,Barryagrees.Heworkshardpaintingthefenceinthehotsun,butGertrude’slemonadeandencouragementarewonderful.Hefeelsproudofthebeautifulfenceheismaking.Overthenextfewweeks,GertrudekeepsgivingBarryjobs.Herepairsherdoorandevenbuildsabeautifulpatiowithwoodenfurnitureforher.Astheysitthereanddrinklemonade,alltheneighborspassbyandtellBerrywhatabeautifuljobhehasdone.HeandGertrudecannotstopsmiling.Barrynolongerfeelsthatlifeispointless.HefeelsproudofhisworkandusefultoGertrude.Andheisstillyoung,hethinks.Barrydecideshewillbecomeacarpenter!HethanksGertrude.Hefinallyrealizesthatshewasneverbeingrude,andthatactuallysheisreallyverywise.Sheknewthatsorrowcanbeeasedbysimplygettingbusyatsomething.Hehelpedher,butshetrulysavedhim.【导语】本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开，描述了一个名叫Barry的中年男子经历了妻子去世后的悲伤和迷茫，邻居Gertrude请求他帮忙，他渐渐从悲伤中走出来，得到了赞许后的Barry决定改变自己的职业方向成为一名木匠，整个故事展示了互相帮助和关心能够改变一个人的生活态度。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“Barry不敢相信她在寻求更多的帮助。”可知，第一段可描写Barry内心的矛盾，自己已经很伤心了但Gertrude还是让他帮忙，出于尊重Gertrude他同意了，漂亮地完成所有工作后他得到了很多人的赞美，Barry感到了开心的经过及相关细节。②由第二段首句内容“Barry不再觉得生活毫无意义。”可知，第二段可描写Barry为自己的工作感到自豪，他不再沉沦和堕落，决定成为一名木匠，通过邻居请求他的帮助，Barry在内心中感谢Gertrude真正救了自己的过程及相关细节。2.续写线索：Barry不想帮忙——改变主意——得到赞美——Barry感到开心——觉得生活有意义——决心做木匠——感谢Gertrude的拯救3.词汇激活行为类①修理：repair/fix/mend②经过：passby/gooff③缓解：ease/relieve情绪类①因……感到自豪：beproudof/takepridein②悲伤：sorrow/sadness【点睛】[高分句型1]Astheysitthereanddrinklemonade,alltheneighborspassbyandtellBerrywhatabeautifuljobhehasdone.(使用了as引导的时间状语从句)[高分句型2]Hefinallyrealizesthatshewasneverbeingrude,andthatactuallysheisreallyverywise.(使用了that引导的并列的宾语从句）3.【2024届河南省开封市高三二测试题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。MydaughterandIwerefansofMisterRogers’Neighborhood,aneducationalchildren’stelevisionseriesthatwascreatedandhostedbyFredRogers,morecommonlyknownasMisterRogers.Aroundmydaughter’ssecondbirthday,IhadaMisterRogers-inspiredidea.Whynotinviteonekeypersoninmydaughter’sworldtodinnereachmonth?Thelocalchildren’slibrariancouldvisitoneevening,andperhapstheboroughmayor(区长)coulddropbyafewweekslater.ButIwantedtostartatthetop.“Let’sinviteMisterRogershimself,”Isaidtomywife.“Afterall,helivesjustafewneighborhoodsaway.Ibethe’dcome.”ShelookedatmeasifIwantedtoinvitethePresident.“YoureallythinkMisterRogerswouldcometoourhousefordinner?Fatchance.”Undeterred(不气馁的),IsentalettertoMisterRogersthatfall,tellinghimofmynewfounddelightinhisshowandmyideaforinvitingneighborhoodpeopleovertotalkabouttheirlives,andaskinghimandMrs.Rogerstobeourguests.Itoldmydaughterabouttheletter.Hereyesglistened(发光).“MisterRogerscoming?Really,Daddy?”Onemonthlater,noreply.Mydaughterhadn’tforgottenandperiodicallyaskedwhenMisterRogerswouldbevisiting.Ialwaystoldherthathehadn’tcalledyetandthatitwasagoodopportunitytolearnaboutpatience.Twomonthslater,noresponse.Atthethree-monthmark,mywifesimplyrolledhereyeswhenIraisedthetopic.Iwasbeginningtoloseoptimism.MisterRogershadletmedown.Sadly,MisterRogerspassedawayinlateFebruaryofthefollowingyear.Iwasunawareofhisillnessandnowunderstoodwhyourinvitationhadgoneunanswered.MisterRogerswouldnotbecomingtodinnerafterall.Yet,evenafterhispassing,MisterRogersgaveusafargreatergiftthanIevercouldhaveimagined.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Aweeklater,IwassurprisedtofindaletterinourmailboxfromMisterRogers._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theletterisatreasuredgiftandhiskindwordstouchedmylifeandmydaughter._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Aweeklater,IwassurprisedtofindaletterinourmailboxfromMisterRogers.Withmytremblinghands,Ifingeredtheletterandreaditwordforword.Heappreciatedmydaughter’senjoymentofhisprogramandthankedusforourinvitation,addingthathewasmuchhonoredtobeour“guest”.Butheapologizedfornotrespondingsoonerandnotbeingabletomakeittoourdinnerpartythenduetohisstomachcancertreatment.Inadelightfultoneheexpressedhiswishtomeetsomeday.Theonetypedletterwaslikesomethingfromanoldfriend:personalandcaring.Theletterisatreasuredgiftandhiskindwordstouchedmylifeandmydaughter.Wecouldneverimagineitwaswrittenwhenhewasthensufferinggreatpains.MisterRogersisgone,buthisremarkabletalentsareleftbehind.Rogersnevercamefordinner,buthisbeliefintheimportanceofbeinggoodneighborsispassedon.Hisspiritswillneverdie:caringforpeopleincludingtheunknown,hopingforthefuture,andmostimportantly,posingapositiveattitudetolifewhateverhappens.Whenleastexpected,sometimesthebestpresentsinlifecomefromaspecialneighbor.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者为了庆祝女儿的两岁生日，临时想到了一个主意：邀请著名的儿童节目主持人罗杰斯先生参加女儿的生日晚宴。经过了漫长的等待，还是未能等到罗杰斯先生的到来，最后作者和家人们才得知，原来是罗杰斯先生去世了。但是让他们意想不到的是，虽然他终究不会来吃晚饭，但是罗杰斯先生还是给了他们一份比作者所能想象的更大的礼物——原来是他亲自写了一封信解释了未能到来的原因，以及用愉快的语气表示希望有一天能见面。亲切的话语感动了作者和家人。通过此事，作者明白了：罗杰斯的精神永不会消亡，他关心包括未知的人，对未来充满希望，最重要的是，无论发生什么，都要向罗杰斯先生一样，对生活都保持积极的态度。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“一周后，我惊奇地在信箱里发现了一封罗杰斯先生的信。”可知，第一段可描写作者收到罗杰斯先生手写信件的激动和惊讶。同时也需要讲述到罗杰斯在信中交代为什么不能来参加作者女儿的生日晚宴的原因，以及表达对作者女儿的祝福。②由第二段首句内容“这封信是一份珍贵的礼物，他亲切的话语感动了我和我的女儿。”可知，第二段可描写作者读到罗杰斯先生的信后深深的感动，并且表达了对罗杰斯先生的崇拜和尊敬，以及感悟。2.续写线索：打开信箱——惊讶——信件内容——感动——赞美——学习——感悟3.词汇激活行为类①.感谢：thank/appreciate/gratitude②.道歉：saysorry/apologize③.期待：expect/hope/wish情绪类①.感谢：showinghisappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful②.关心他人的：caring/considerate[高分句型1].Withmytremblinghands,Ifingeredtheletterandreaditwordforword.（使用复合结构）[高分句型2].Whenleastexpected,sometimesthebestpresentsinlifecomefromaspecialneighbor.（由when引导的时间状语从句，同时使用的非谓语动词过去分词expected做伴随状语）4.【2024届安徽省安庆市高三下学期二模试题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的文章。Iwaselevenyearsold.Thiswasmyfirstsoccergame.Withlittleknowledgeoftherulesofthegame,Iwasnervousanduneasy,butstillexcited.Withkidsrunningatmefromalldirections,Iobservedtheskillsthatmanyofmyteammatespossessed.Theirmotionsappearedsosuggesthandeffortless,whiletheirfacesrevealedtheirattachmenttothegame.I,however,lackedthespiritofplayingaggressivelythatmanyoftheotherkidshad.Tomyknowledge,thisgameturnedouttobeanintenseone.Myteamwasfallingbehindtheentiregame,buttowardtheend,wetieditup.Iwatchedasparentsyelledandscreamed,findtoexcitementandemotion.Manyoftheparents,withtheirwavingarmsandcheerfuleyes,seemedmoreinvolvedinthegamethantheirchildren.Suddenly,itwasmyturntokicktheball.ThiswasmychancetorevealthatJwasasgoodaseveryoneelse.Ibroughtmylegbackandwasreadytokickwithallmystrength.Igaveagood,hardkick-oneofmybetter—butunfortunately,Ihadkickedtheballinthewrongdirection.Seeingthedisappointedfacesofthemembersofmyteam,Ifeltmyfacegofrompalewhitetobrightred;Iwantedtorunhome,fasterthanIeverraninasoccerpractice.Overthenextfewyears,Icontinuedtoparticipateinavarietyofsports,tryingtofindtheonewhereIwouldbethecenterofattentionfortherightreasons.Thatneverhappened.Veryoftenmyfathercouldn’twaittopractiseplayingsocceraroundthebackyardwithme.EachtimeIsomehowmanagedtotriponashoelace(鞋带)ortripoverarock.Myfathercontinuedtopushme,andduringmyelementary-schoolyearsitseemedthatImightbecomequitetheathlete.Atthesametime,mylittlebrotherwassuddenlynotsolittleandbegantocontrolthefamilyathleticfield.HisabilityandpassionforsportsmademewonderwhyIwassodifferent.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Eventually,Iunderstoodsomethingallofasudden.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ItsuddenlyoccurredtomewhatIshoulddowithitnext.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Eventually,Iunderstoodsomethingallofasudden.Ibegantointegratetheopponents’playandteamworkintomysoccerpracticeandgames.Ifeltthatitwasagreatmomentformetolearnfromotherbetterskilledsoccerplayers.Asanoldsayinggoes,experienceisthebestteacher.Ispentmytimeinworkingouthard.IwasawarethatIhadtofigurethelessonsoutonmyown.Obviously,Ineededtoimprovemyselfinasense.Therefore,Igavealotofthoughttoit.ItsuddenlyoccurredtomewhatIshoulddowithitnext.Iknewthatmylackofabilityforsportswassomethingthatseparatedmefrommanypeople.Inthatcase,Iwouldnevergiveup.IparticipatedtothebestofmyabilityinwhateverIwasdoing.Myfatheroncetoldme,“Beyourselfandyouwillnotbelookeddownon.”Keepingitinmind,Ibecameatopsoccerplayerwithmystrongdeterminationandhardwork.IholdthebeliefthatnothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者年少时第一次参加足球比赛，就发现自己缺乏队友们的那种对比赛的热情和积极进取的精神，多年来，作者参加各种各样的体育活动，却始终没能找到一个让他成为人们关注焦点的运动。但是在爸爸不断的鼓励和推动下，作者始终没有放弃，终于开窍了，他向优秀队员和对手学习技术，不断提升自我，终于成长成为一个顶级的足球队员，作者坚信“世上无难事，只怕有心人”。【详解】1.段落续写。①由第一段首句内容“最后，我突然开窍了。”可知，第一段可描写作者开始认真思考，总结经验，寻求措施以提升自我。②由第二段首句内容“我突然想到下一步该怎么应对了。”可知，第二段可描写作者接下来无论做什么都全力以赴，决不放弃，最终成长成为一名顶级的足球队员。2.续写线索：开窍——向优秀队员和对手学习——思考并寻求提升自我的方法——突然明白——全力以赴、不放弃——成为顶级球员——信仰3.词汇激活：行为类：①锻炼：workout/exercise②意识到：realize/beaware③放弃：giveup/abandon④记住：keep...inmind/remember情绪类：①坚定的：strong/firm②困难的：difficult/hard【点睛】【高分句型1】Ifeltthatitwasagreatmomentformetolearnfromotherbetterskilledsoccerplayers.（运用了以连接词that引导的表语从句，以及it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语的句式。）【高分句型2】IholdthebeliefthatnothingisdifficultifIputmyheartintoit.（运用了以连接词that引导的同位语从句和连词if引导的条件状语从句。）5.【2024届黑龙江省部分学校高三二模试题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasaSaturdayinMay.ItwasmythirdMother’sDay.Theairwaswarm,thesunwasbright,andIspentthemorningleisurelydrinkingcoffeeandgettingreadywithmydaughter.Myhusbandreturnedhomefromhisshoppingtrip,givingmeaMother’sDaygift.Afterward,Ineededtoheadoutandgotothegrocerystore.ButIdecidedtotakemydaughtertoplayattheparkfirst.Sheranandplayeduntilshegrewstickywithsweatandexhaustion(筋疲力尽).Atthatmoment,IrealizedIhadforgottentopackanysnacks.SoIpromisedherIwouldbuyhersnacksatthestore.Thirtyminuteslater,weparkedandheadedin.Ikeptthinkingaboutthegiftmyhusbandhadgivenme,adressformycousin’sweddingthefollowingmonth.Mydaughterwasgoingtobetheflowergirl,andwestilldidn’thaveadresspickedoutforher.SoIdecidedtocheckoutthechildren’sclothesnextdoorbeforebuyinggroceries.Inmyexcitement,I’dforgottenaboutthepromisedsnacks.However,mydaughterhadn’t.Wejustspenttwominuteslookingatthegirl’ssectionbeforemydaughterbegantoscream.Itfeltasifherlungscouldbreakglassandpuncture(刺穿)theeardrumsofeveryoneinside.Itriedtohelphercalmdownandallowustolookalittlelonger,butherscreamdeepenedinvolume.Wequicklymadeourwayoutofthestore,witheyesfollowingusasmydaughterprovedhervocalstrength.Westoppedjustoutsideofthedoorsbecausemydaughterbegantolieonthefloorandscreamherheartoutastherestoftheworldlookedon.Really,itwasembarrassingandfrustrating(令人沮丧的).Justthen,agrandmaapproachedus.Shewantedtopickupmysaddaughterandcomforther.Ihaddonethatbefore,butatthispoint,mydaughterwastoofargone.Shedidn’twantanyonewhenshewasangry.Thegrandmaofferedtohugher,butsherefusedandcriedharder.注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。That’swhenanotheryoungmotherapproached.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Mydaughterfinallygottiredofcryingafterawhile.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】That’swhenanotheryoungmotherapproached.Hersonsatquietlyinhercart,andsheheldacupofcoffeeinonehand.Ilookedupasshesaid,“Wouldyoulikemetobuyyouacoffee?”AlthoughIpolitelydeclinedheroffer,shestillwenttobuymeacupofcoffee.Wehadcoffeetogetherandasnewmothers,wetalkedalotaboutourchildren.ShesuggestedthatIletmydaughtercryforawhileuntilshestoppedcrying,anditturnedouttobeeffective.Mydaughterfinallygottiredofcryingafterawhile.Iplacedherintothecartandpromisedtogethersnacksfirst.Sayinggoodbyetotheyoungmother,Iwenttothegrocerystorewithmydaughter.Iboughtthesnacksforher.Itwasasifmydaughterforgotwhathadhappenedwhenshesawthesnacks.Thenwewenttochooseadressforher.Anyway,ourshoppingoutingcametoasuccessfulend,andIwasalsoverygratefultotheyoungmotherforherhelp.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者带女儿去买零食时想起了要给女儿买当花童的礼服，结果忘记了自己承诺的零食，女儿开始哭喊，作者把女儿带出商店后依然无法让女儿安静下来。这时一位年轻妈妈过来给作者买了咖啡，和作者聊天并建议让孩子哭一会，最终女儿哭累了冷静下来，作者带着女儿一起去买了零食并挑选了衣服。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“这时另一位年轻的母亲走过来了。”以及第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，我女儿终于哭烦了。”可知，第一段可描写年轻妈妈过来提供帮助，和作者聊天并建议让女儿自己哭一会。②由第二段首句内容“过了一会儿，我女儿终于哭烦了。”可知，第二段可描写和年轻妈妈告别并带女儿买零食，挑选衣服。2.续写线索：一位年轻妈妈走近——为作者买咖啡——喝咖啡聊天让女儿哭一会——女儿停止哭泣——和年轻妈妈告别——买零食挑选衣服——感激年轻妈妈的帮助3.词汇激活：行为类：①拒绝：decline/refuse②购买：buy/purchase③建议：suggest/advise情绪类：①安静的坐着：sitquietlyinhercart/sitinhercart,asquiteasamouse②感谢：grateful/thankful【点睛】【高分句型1】ShesuggestedthatIletmydaughtercryforawhileuntilshestoppedcrying,anditturnedouttobeeffective.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及until引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】Sayinggoodbyetotheyoungmother,Iwenttothegrocerystorewithmydaughter.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)6.【2024届甘肃省白银市名校高三二模试题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Actsofkindnesshavethepowertonotonlybrightenourdaybutalsorestoreourfaithinhumanity.Whileyoungchildrenareoftenremindedtobekind,real-lifeexamplesofyoungpeopleshowingcharityprovethatkindnessknowsnoagelimit.InthebusycityofDetroit,14-year-oldtwinsisters,MakhiaandMakylaVincent,wereontheirusualroutetoschoolwhensomethingcaughttheirattention.Onthesnow-coveredgroundlayawallet,seeminglyoutofplace.“Whatdoyouthinkweshoulddo?”Makylawhispered,hervoicelow．Makhiabitherlip,hereyeslockedonthewallet.“Idon’tknow,butwecan’tjustleaveithere.Whatiftheownerneedsitdesperately?”Finally,worryandcuriositygotthebetterofthem,andtheydecidedtotakealookinside.Slowly,Makhiareachedoutandpickeditup.Assheopenedit,thesistersgaspedatthesametime.Totheirsurprise,theydiscoveredalargeamountofcash,bankcards,andamilitaryID．Itwasclearthatwhoeverownedthiswalletheldgreatvalueforthesepossessions.Instantly,thegirlsknewexactlywhattheyhadtodo.Comingfromafamilywithaveteran(退伍军人)grandfather,thesistersfeltadeepsenseofempathyforthepersonwhohadlostthewallet.ThegirlslookedclosertoinspectthemilitaryID．ItbelongedtoaMarcWalsh,amiddle-agedmanwholookedserious.“WehavetofindthisMarcWalsh,”Makhiadeclared,hervoicefilledwithdetermination.“Buthow?”Makylaasked.Makhiathoughtforamoment,“Maybethere’sanaddressononeofthesecards.Let’sseeifwecanfindanyclues.”Theycarefullyexaminedthebankcardsanddiscoveredthatoneofthemhadanaddressonit.Itwaslocatednotfarfromwheretheystood.Withasenseofpurpose,thetwinsdecidedtomaketheirwaytotheaddress,walletinhand.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Theaddressledthemtoanoldapartmentbuilding.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Uponreturninghome,Marc’sroommateinformedhimofthediscovery.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theaddressledthemtoanoldapartmentbuilding.Uponarriving,Makhiaknockedonthedoor.However,afewmomentslater,therewasstillnoresponse.Obviously,theownerofthehousewasnotthereatthetime.Unwillingtoleaveinvain,theydecidedtofindawayoutandcameupwithagoodidea.Makylaheldupthewallettothehomesecuritysystem,placingitonhisfrontporchbeforedeparting.Uponreturninghome,Marc’sroommateinformedhimofthediscovery.Hefounditontheirporch—anunexpectedreturnofMarc’swallet.Curious,Marcquicklyreviewedthesecurityvideore