专题四感谢信人与动物类读后续写讲义-高三英语二轮复习

题型四：感谢信&人与动物类读后续写感谢信感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的个人或集体表示感谢的书信。感谢信要行文得体、语气礼貌恭敬、用词规范，感情真挚尤为重要。感谢信写作步骤：点明写信目的；描述事件经过和自己的感受；再次致谢，表示回报。【案例分析】（浙江卷）假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。注意:写作词数应为80左右。DearAlex,It'sreallyhardtosaygoodbyetoyou!Butmeanwhile,I'meagerlywritingtoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourhelp.IstillrememberwhatyouhavedevotedtoimprovingmyoralEnglishandwrittenEnglish.Additionally,youalsofranklysharedyourlearningexperiencewithme.Mostimportantly,withoutyouradviceandassistance,IwouldnothavemadesuchunbelievableprogressinEnglishandwouldnothaveevenrankedfirstintherecentEnglishspeechcontest.Allinall,wordsfailtoconveyhowgratefulIam.Thanksagainandwishyouapleasantjourneyhome.Yours,LiHua假定你是李华,你不慎丢失的被来中国旅游的美国青年Jim捡到并归还，现Jim已经回国。请你根据下面的要点提示,写封邮件表示感谢。1.写信目的;2.感谢的理由;3.你的愿望。DearJim,IamLiHua._________________________________________________________________________________________________________(我想诚挚地感谢你拾到我的并归还给我)Actually,wheneverIlookatmycellphone,Iwillthinkofyou,akindandhonestyoungAmerican.IbecamenearlymadthemomentIfoundmynewcellphonemissing,sinceIboughtitwithmyownhardearnedmoneyafterworkingparttimeformonthsatweekends.__________________,________________________________________________________(我无法用语言表达我的感激)Hopefully,youwillesomedayandthen④_____________________________________________________________________________.(为回报你的好意,我会带你游玩北京)Yours,LiHua二、“感谢”相关的素材积累：1）夺人眼球开头句(表明写信目的)1.I'dliketoexpress/conveymygreatappreciationforyourtimelyhelpandsupport.2.I'mwritingtoconveymyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyourhelpandcarewhenlstayedatyourhome,withoutwhichIcouldn'thaveenjoyedmyselfsomuch.3.Withthedeepestgratitude,I'mwritingtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourkindnesswhenIwastravelinginLondon.2）亮点出彩篇中句（描述事情经过和感受）4.Undoubtedly,itwasyourencouragementandsupportthatcheeredmeupwhenIencountereddifficultiesinEnglishlearning.5.Thankyousomuchforthegiftyousentme.It'soneofthemostwonderfulgiftsIhaveevergot.6.Duringtheweek,thefortableacmodation,deliciousmealsandyourfriendlyfamilymembersallmademewarm,leavingmeeverlastingmemories.7.YourintroductiontoEnglishfestivalsandcustomshelpedmeadapttothenewsurroundingsbetter.8.Haditnotbeenforyourassistanceandkindness,Icouldn'thavemadesuchgreatprogress.3）韵味无穷结尾句（再次致谢表示回报）9.Wordsfailtoexpressmythanks/gratitude/appreciationtoyou.10.ThanksagainforyourhelpandI'msincerelylookingforwardtoshowingyouaroundinordertorepayyourkindness.三、人与动物类读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。(2020·浙江卷改编)Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal;tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld"thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous,Polarbearslikeallwildanimalsshouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear,1likeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence."Hepulledandbitthewire."Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,Elliandltriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthoughhejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear'spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn'thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;P1：Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________P2：Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________主题链接主题特点:人与动物类可涉及熊口、狼口或虎口脱险等,在续写过程中常描写人物的恐惧和焦虑,并可借助环境描写烘托人物的恐惧。三步法:第一步:遭遇猛兽的危险处境十恐惧情绪:第二步:摆脱猛兽或获教(如释重负+动作链和场景描写);第三步:感谢救助+感受(可升华人与自然和谐相处的主题)。续写步骤：步骤1读原文理基本要素和2线Character：____________________________________When：____________________________________Where：____________________________________What：作者和妻子待在营地准备冒险拍摄北极熊,结果北极熊闯入,一场人熊大战即将展开。2情线：情节线:在营地等待拍摄北极熊头北极熊被美味吸引,意图闯入制造噪音无法吓退北极熊向营地经理求助喷胡根粉喷雾剂暂时赶走北极熊(续写)熊返回营地:直升机到了……情感线:____________________________________步骤2：思续写情节“以旧带新”2原则(421原则4街接、2情线、】主題;ARE原则action,Response,emotion)两段首句定一框:衔接①:开头句衔接首句中的“熊又回来了”续写可描写______________________________________________________________________________________________________________衔接②:尾句衔接第二段首句中的verymoment,可续写第一段的情景是：________________________________________________________________________________________________二框二首1主题:衔接③:开头句衔接首句中的“thehelicopterarrived”,续写可描________________________________________________________________________________________________________衔接④:尾句衔接原文首段中的“tophotographpolarbears”可写__________________________1主题:______________________________________情感线:______________________________________________步骤3思伏笔添细节原续更融治捕捉原文所设伏笔，充盈过渡句细节并合理衔接，以使续写段落在逻辑和内容上更符合原文基调。原文伏笔点Para2:Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous,;thatiseasiersaidthandone过渡句中可与伏笔衔接的细节续写第一段可利用细节描写熊和作者夫妇之间的“进攻防御一进攻一防御"的过程,突出情节的危险、急迫。在染北极熊攻击围栏的危险场景时，可描写周围的环境(风声、草等)烘托人物处境的危险和人物内心的恐惧。Para4:Thehungrybear;pulledandbitthewire:stoodonhisbacklegsandpushed...Para.5:withhismassivepawsPara.7:Withanangryroar.一熊的肢体动作、怒吼续写第一段可写眼睛被胡椒喷雾伤害的北极熊用巨大解熊掌对围栏发动猛击,可伴随着怒吼等的肢体动作描写续写第二段可描写饥肠辘辘的熊吃面包时狼吞虎咽的动作Para.5：Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff续写第二段可写直升机发出的噪音(deafeningnoise)吓走了北极熊。必备物品:garlicbread，mycamera续写第一段中可描写朝熊扔面包,应对熊的攻击;续写第二段可描写熊冲进营地享用作者夫妇丢落的面包。步骤4沿原文特点写3好表达(准确、丰富、地道)原文利用双连或三连动作链描写人物或熊的动作,生动形象,画面感很强;描写情感时,利用形容词作状语;在陈述事实时,灵活利用时间状语从句、定语从句、并列句和宾语从句等，续写的语言也应抓住熊的特征,与原文语言特点一致,使一个体格粗壮,饥肠辘辘的北极熊跃然纸上。确定续写部分的基本情节后,应添加合理的细节,用人物动作、心理活动、表情,语言和环境等描写丰富内容,增强叙述的画面感。①添加的细节要符合续写部分的叙述情境且应与原文已有的、与该细节相关的信息(情感线和细节线或伏笔)一致;②添加的细节中所描述的事件应紧扣原文中描写外貌(外观)、表情、动作和语言等反映人或物特点的词句。【参考例文】Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Roaringevenmoreangrilythistime,hesmashedhispawscrazilyagainstthewirefence,tryingtotearuswithhissharpclaws.Panickedaswewere,ElliandIscreamedatthetopofourlungs,andwavedourfistsathiminanattempttoscarehimaway.Toourdisappointment,alltheseeffortswereinvain.Thebearviolentlydashedagainstthewoodenpostswhichwereevidentlyonthepointofcollapsing!Chillywindswhippingourfaces.Wecouldhearnothingbutthesoundofourheartspoundingviolentlyinourchests.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.Thedeafeningnoisefromthehoveringvehiclesweptawayourfear.Outofthehelicopterdescendedaropetopullusup.Thrilledyetrelieved,wegrabbedtheropeandeventuallylandedonthehelicoptersafeandsound.Whilelookingatthebearfromhighabove,Iwasamazedtospothimcrashthroughthefence,rushfortheinvitinggarlicbreadandwolfitdown.Atthisonceinalifetimemoment.Ireachedintomybackpackandpulledoutthecamera,photographingthatimpressivescene.【练习】I.翻译下列词块1.后腿站立__________________________________2.与……面对面__________________________________3.不速之客__________________________________4.吓跑__________________________________5.说着容易做着难__________________________________6怒吼一声__________________________________Ⅱ.翻译原句并仿效写句我和埃利吓坏了,尝试了我们所知道的所有防熊措施。(形容词作状语)____________________________________________________________________[仿写]我们面面相觑,惊呆了。____________________________________________________________________2.这只饥饿的熊凭嗅觉指引来到我们的营地,营地由高高的铁丝栅栏围着。(非限制性定语从句)____________________________________________________________________[仿写]饿狼嗅啊嗅,凭嗅觉指引来到一对夫妻搭建的帐篷旁边。____________________________________________________________________3.我们对着熊大喊大叫,使劲敲打锅具,还向空中开空枪。____________________________________________________________________[仿写]我向前迈了一步,深吸一口气,然后用力踢门,门哗啦一声开了。____________________________________________________________________【拓展】有关“情绪”的表达高兴：v.dance,whistle,jump/leapwithjoy,feelasurgeofhappiness/delight/joy,beoverewithhappiness/delight/joy,(one'seyes)twinkle,(one'sheart)beatpoundwildly,beinhighspirits情绪高涨，beincheerfulspirits情愉快adj.happy,delighted,overjoyed，wildwithjoy狂喜1.他满面笑容。____________________________________________________________________2.他眉开眼笑;笑容照亮房间。____________________________________________________________________3.听到这个令人鼓舞的消息,我们十分高兴。____________________________________________________________________4.他面露喜色。____________________________________________________________________5.平静的湖面激起了浪花,我的心情也像浪花一样欢腾。________________________________________