聚焦人教版2024年中考英语写作-话题写作三安全健康与防护

聚焦人教版2024中考英语写作话题写作三安全健康与防护一、教材话题链接急救措施心理健康安全防护二、话题词句拓展◎必备短语和句型1.askfor请求2.breakout(战争、火灾等)突然发生，爆发3.byaccident/chance偶然地4.catch/haveacold感冒5.falldown突然倒下；跌倒6.getintotrouble陷入困境7.givesb.ahand帮助某人8.help…out帮助……解决难题、分担工作9.intime及时；来得及10.keep…awayfrom避免接近；远离11.knockintosb.撞上某人12.lookout留神，当心13.putonweight发胖；增加(体重)14.putout扑灭，熄灭15.saveone'slife挽救某人的生命16.sendfor派人去叫；请(某人)来17.stay/keepfit保持健康18.takeone'stemperature量体温19.thanksto由于……,多亏……20.It'sbadfor…对……有害。21.It'sgoodfor…对……有好处。22.Thereissomethingwrongwith………出问题了。23.see/watch/hearsb.dosth.看到/听到某人做某事24.see/watch/hearsb.doingsth.看到/听到某人正在做某事25.warnsb.nottodosth.警告某人不要做某事◎基础句型写作1.人生的成功不是偶然发生的，而是需要努力和实践。(byaccident)2.如果有人遇到麻烦，你应该主动提供帮助。(getintotrouble)3.他的右肩膀出了点儿问题。(Thereissomethingwrongwith…)4.良好的饮食习惯帮助你保持健康。(keepfit)5.警察经常警告我们在交通信号灯变绿之前不要过马路。(warnsb.nottodosth.)6.多亏你的有用的建议，我们制定了一个完美的计划。(thanksto)三、满分作文五步法典/例/分/析为了增强同学们的安全意识，学校发出了“做自己的首席安全官——平安校园行”的倡议。你校的EnglishNewsletter正以“KeepSafetyinMind”为题举行征文活动。请根据以下图示，从食物、运动和网络等方面着手写一篇征文。1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。KeepSafetyinMindSafetyisveryimportantinourlife,_____________________________.Ihopeallthestudentsshouldpayattentiontotheirsafetyandkeepsafetyinmind.Step1审——审清题意人称时态：功能：要点：1.2.(1)(2)(3)3.适当发挥……Step2搭——列提纲，搭好框架Step3连——连词成句1.引入主题：①Safetyisvery__________________________inourlife.Weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.②Howcanwekeepsafe?Hereare__________________________.2.具体做法：①Weshouldeat__________________________insteadofjunkfood.②Wecan__________________________andmakesurewearesafewhenwearedoingsports.③Weshould__________________________whenwesurftheInternet.3.提出倡议：Ihopeallthestudentshavea__________________________lifealltheway.Step4组——组句成篇KeepSafetyinMindSafetyisveryimportantinourlife.①Weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Buthowcanwekeepsafe?Herearesomesuggestions.First,weshouldeathealthyfoodinsteadofjunkfood.Forexample,weshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruit.Second,wecandomoreexerciseandmakesurewearesafewhenwearedoingsports.②Finally,weshouldbecarefulwhenwesurftheInternet.Don'ttellyourrealnameandaddresstothepersonyoudon'tknowontheInternet.③Inaword,weshoulddevelopgoodhabitsinourdailylife.④Ihopeallthestudentshaveasafeandhealthylifealltheway.Step5修——修饰美化①扩写本句，建议人们尽量远离各种危险：Ithinkweshould_______________tokeepourselvesawayfrom__________________________andkeepsafetyinmind.②变换句型，采用高级表达的短语：__________________________,we__________________________becarefulwhensurfingtheInternet.③用sothat扩写本句，说明养成好习惯的益处：Inaword,we'dbetterdevelopgoodhabitsinourdailylife__________________________wecankeepsafeandhealthy.④添加if从句，再次强调安全健康生活的优点：Ifeachofusiscarefulenoughandhasahealthylifestyle,Ithinkwe'llbe____________________.◎小小加油站[开头句]1.Asstudents,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.2.It'sveryimportant/necessaryforustokeepsafeduringthevacations.3.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldlearntoprotectourselvesfromeverypossibledanger.4.Selfprotectionisoneofthemostimportantskills,especiallyforteenagers.5.Ifyouareillandhaveafever,youmustgotothedoctoratonce.[发展句]1.Weshouldalwaysobeythetrafficrulesonthewaytoschool.2.We'renotallowedtogoswimmingalone,especiallyindeepriversorlakes.3.Wemustrememberit'sdangerousforustohangoutatnight.4.First,weshouldkeepcalmandfindtheexitquickly.5.Ifweareindanger,wecanaskourparentsorteachersforhelp,eventhepolice.[结尾句]1.Inaword,followingthesesafetyrulesabovecanmakeusliveinpeace.2.Learntoprotectourselvessothatwecangrowupsafelyandenjoyourwonderfullife.3.Ihopemoreandmorepeoplecangiveahandtomakestudentsgrowhealthily.4.Inmyopinion,studentsshouldpayattentiontotheirownsafety.5.Weshouldkeepawayfromsmartphonesandworkhard.话题佳篇创作 健康对每个人都很重要，我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以“Howtokeephealthy”为题，写一篇英语短文，向学校校刊投稿。要求：1.文章必须包含表格中的至少4个要点信息，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的地名，校名和人名等信息；3.词数80左右；文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。正稿：HowtokeephealthyNowadays,peoplepaymuchmoreattentiontohealth.Itisnecessaryforeveryonetolearnsomewaystokeephealthy.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allinall,ifwefollowtheseways,eachofuswillhaveahealthybody.自评(亮点与困难)：___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________