中考英语三轮冲刺挑战满分练习02 书面表达分类练：学会感恩（含解析）

02书面表达分类练---学会感恩人只有懂得感恩，才有了身边的一切，懂得感恩，才会不辜负眼前的一切，当我们回首昨天，拼搏明天的时候，我们应该学会感恩生命中遇见的每个人。所以会感恩作文，也是中考作文满分必会。近几年，感恩类作文占的比重也越来越大，作文主题有以下几大类：感恩你的老师。感恩伴你成长的人。感恩疫情中白衣天使的无私奉献。感恩祖国，感恩母校。感恩父母。本专题经典抢分必会句型：1.so...That...如此....以至于...（目的状语从句）。例：Thus，IwassoworriedaboutitthatIoftencriedsilentlyafterclass.因此，我非常担心，以至于我经常在课后默默地哭泣。2.hope+宾语从句。例：IreallyhopeonedayIwillbecomeanexcellentEnglishteacherlikehimsothatIwillhelpmorechildrenlikemefallinlovewithEnglish!我真的希望有一天我能成为像他一样优秀的英语老师，这样我就能帮助更多像我这样的孩子爱上英语！3.that宾语从句。例：Fromthisexperience，Irealizethatweshouldhelpothersinneed.从这次经历中，我意识到我们应该帮助有需要的人。4.when引导的时间状语从句例：WhenIamintrouble，shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandgivesmegoodadvice.当我遇到困难时，她总是鼓励我面对困难，给我很好的建议。5.动词不定式作为目的状语。例：IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupsetshecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.我仍然记得，有一次我在一次重要的英语考试中失败了，她很沮丧，她让我振作起来，告诉我一些提高英语的好方法。（这是一个经典高分句型，可以学习使用复合句，以得到更高的分。）6.who引导的定语从句例：Mygoodfriend，Jack，gavemeabookwrittenbyNickwhowasbornwithoutarmsorlegs.我的好朋友杰克给了我一本尼克写的书，他生来没有胳膊和腿。7.notonly...Butalso...不仅...而且...例：Thebooknotonlyshowsfriendshipbetweenus，butalsotellsmenottogiveupeasily.这本书不仅显示了我们之间的友谊，而且告诉我不要轻易放弃。8.that引导定语从句。例：ThepersonthatIwanttothankismyEnglishteacher，becausesheishelpfulandkindtome．我要感谢的人是我的英语老师，因为她乐于助人，对我很好。9.Let’s祈使句。（简单却经典！）例：Let'slivewiththankfulnessandworktogetherforabetterfuture.让我们怀着感恩的心情生活，一起为美好的未来而努力。10.if引导条件状语从句。例：Ifwemeetdifficulties，weshouldn'tgiveup.如果我们遇到困难，我们不应该放弃。11.when时间状语从句。例：WhenIfeelsad，youwillencouragemetofacethedifficultyandnottoloseheart.当我感到难过时，你会鼓励我面对困难，不要灰心。12.Itis+形容词todosth做某事是……的。(超级经典句型，高分必会。)例：Theyteachusnotonlyknowledge，butalsohowtobeagoodperson.他们不仅教我们知识，而且还教我们如何成为一个好人。13.think宾语从句。例：IthinkIamluckytohavesomuchloveandcare.我想我很幸运有这么多的爱和关心。实战训练实战训练1．（2022•湖北）在你的成长历程中，有许多值得感恩的人，如父母，老师，同学……他们或帮助过你，或影响到你，你最想感恩谁？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。要点提示：（1）他/她有什么特点（外貌，性格……）？（2）他/她对你影响最深的一件事是什么？（3）你想怎样感谢他/她？写作要求：（1）词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；（2）根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；（3）文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。参考词汇：begratefulto对……心存感激；haveaninfluenceon对……有影响；careabout关心；unforgettable难以忘怀的ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanksInmylife，manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.ThepersonIwanttoexpressmythanksmostis_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：ThePersonIWanttoExpressMyThanksInmylife，manypeoplehelpedandinfluencedmealot.ThepersonIwanttoexpressmythanksmostismyEnglishteacher，MrBob.（谁）Iamwritingtoexpressmysincerethankstohimbecausehehashelpedmealotinthepastthreeyears.IstillrememberthathedevotedhissparetimetohelpingmewithmyEnglish.Iwasn'tgoodatEnglishwhenIenteredthisschool.Thus，IwassoworriedaboutitthatIoftencriedsilentlyafterclass.Itwashewhocomfortedmealotandpromisedtohelpmeimproveit.Iwasadvisedtoreadaloudinthemorningandspeakasmuchaspossibleinclass.Becauseofhisusefuladviceandmyhardwork，IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishinthepastthreeyears.Lastyear，IcamefirstinthefinalEnglishexamandbothofuswereveryexcited!（最深的一件事）IwillneverforgethimthoughIwillleaveyousoon.IreallyhopeonedayIwillbecomeanexcellentEnglishteacherlikehimsothatIwillhelpmorechildrenlikemefallinlovewithEnglish!（如何感谢）2．（2022•长春）疫情（theCOVID﹣19pandemic）期间，总有些特别的事使你心存感恩。某英文网站正在开展以"疫情故事"为主题的征文活动，请用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿，讲述一段疫情期间的故事（人与人的互助或自身的成长等），写出你的感受与收获。要求：1.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：BecauseoftheCOVID﹣19，wehadtostayathome.DuringtheCOVID﹣19pandemic，thereweremanyhelpfulpersonsaroundus.Whenwestayedathome，wehadlittlefoodtoeat.Orderingfoodonlinewasverydificultatfirst.Atthattime，myneighborMrHuangkneweverythinghappenedtomyfamily.Hesentmanyvegetablesandfruittome.Ourfamilyweremovedbywhathehaddone.Wealsorealizedthatweshouldpassthisloveonebyone.Smallactionscanmakeabigdifference.（经历的事）Fromthisexperience，Irealizethatweshouldhelpothersinneed.Helpingothersishelpingyourself.（感受）3．（2022•无锡）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为"ThePersonIWanttoThank"的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人（父/母亲、老师、朋友……），请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。注意事项：（1）演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；（2）流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；（3）词数在100个左右，演讲稿得首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；（4）演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；（5）演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：The Person I Want to Thank In my junior school life，a lot of people have helped me.I thank them very much.But the person I want to thank most ismyEnglishteacher—MsLee.（最想感谢的人是谁）MyEnglishteacherMsLeeistallandthin，whoisverykindandeasygoing.（介绍）Shehelpsmea lot.Shetakesgoodcareofus.SheoftenhelpsmewithmyEnglish.WhenIamintrouble，shealwaysencouragesmetofacemydifficultiesandgivesmegoodadvice.IstillrememberthatonceIfailedinanimportantEnglishexamandwasupsetshecheeredmeupandtoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp，ImadegreatprogressinEnglishandbecameincreasinglyinterestedinit.（怎样帮助你的，举例说明）I'mverythankfulforallthatshehasdoneforme.Ilearnedalotfromher，suchashonesty，fraternityandcourtesy.I'lltrymybesttoliveuptoherexpectations.（感受和影响）4．（2022•贺州）假如你是李华，在过去的三年，英语老师教会了你很多英语知识和技能，开拓了你的视野。你感激英语老师的付出，决定将来继续学好并用好英语。请你结合以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。提示：你的英语老师（1）外貌（2）性格.....你学会了（1）唱英文歌，欣赏英文电影（2）用英语讲小故事（3）用英语进行简单交流……感恩和决心（1）感恩老师的教导（2）继续努力学习英语（3）用英语向世界讲述中国故事……要求：（1）文章必须包括所给提示内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；（3）80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：I'mLiHua.MyEnglishteacherisMs.Zhang.Sheisatallandoutgoingladywhoisverypatientwithallofus.（英语老师的外貌、性格）Ms.ZhanghastaughtmeEnglishfor3years.Ilikeherinterestingclasses.LearningEnglishhelpsmebecomemoreopen—Minded.NowIcantalkwithothersinEnglishfluentlyandreadsomeEnglishbooks.IcanalsotellsomestoriesinEnglish.Besides，IlikeenjoyingEnglishsongsandmovieshasbecomeoneofmyhobbies.（我学会了很多）Ms.Zhangisanexcellentteacher，towhomIwanttosaythanks.IdecidetolearnmoreEnglishinthefuture，andtrymybesttotellthestoryofChinainEnglishtotheworld.（感恩和决心）5．（2021•泰州）世界上有很多事物能够表达我们内心的感恩、敬意、关爱……例如，一个微笑、一份礼物……请你以"Awithspecialmeaning"为题写一篇英语短文，参加校刊英文专栏的征文比赛。要点如下：（1）你向谁表达，为什么？（2）你用什么表达，为什么？（3）你对他/她/它/他们说什么？要求：（1）请将标题补充完整，合理即可；（2）必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；（3）不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；（4）词数100左右。Awithspecialmeaning________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：AgiftwithspecialmeaningIhavereceivedlotsofgiftssofar.Amongthegifts，themostspecialoneI'vereceivedisabook.Fiveyearsago，Ihurtmylegsbecauseofanaccident.SoIhadtostayathomeforafewmonthsandIfellbehindothers.Ididn'tstudyanymore.Mygoodfriend，Jack，gavemeabookwrittenbyNickwhowasbornwithoutarmsorlegs.Thebookencouragedmenottobeafraidofdifficulties.Later，mystudygotbetterandbetter，butJackmovedtoanothercity.Ihavehadthisbookforfiveyears，butit'sstillspecialtome.WheneverIlookatthebook，IthinkofmyfriendJack.（向谁表达，为什么）Thebooknotonlyshowsfriendshipbetweenus，butalsotellsmenottogiveupeasily.I'llkeepitforever.（怎么表达）SoImustsaythankyou.（说什么）6．（2021•柳州）假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以"感恩父母"为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为"ALettertoMyParents"的短文，用于投稿。你的感谢父母养育你、每天为你做饭、生病时照顾你父母信任你、关心你的个人感受、遇到困难时鼓励你你的决心努力学习你的祝愿祝愿父母健康快乐注意：1.词数70左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇：感谢某人.....Thanksb.For...养育raise做饭cookfood生病besick信任trust关心careabout个人感受personalfeeling处于困难中beintrouble健康的healthyALettertoMyParentsDearMumandDad，I'mwritingtoexpressmythanksforallyourcareandlove.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love，LiHua参考范文：ALettertoMyParentsDearMumandDad，I'mwritingtoexpressmythanksforallyourcareandlove.Firstofall，Iwanttothankyouforraisingme.IthankyouforcookingformeeverydayandtakingcareofmewhenI'msick.Iwouldalsoliketothankyouforyoutrustandcareaboutmypersonalfeelings.YouencouragedmewhenIwasintrouble.（感谢）SoIhavetostudyhardtorepayyou.（决心）Atthesametime，Iwishyoukeephealthyandhappy.（祝愿）Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love，LiHua7．（2022•弥勒市校级模拟）BeThankfulto...提示：在你的成长过程中，一定有某个人陪伴你、影响你、感动你，让你健康快乐地成长，我们应该学会感恩、学会回报。请以"BeThankfulto..."为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你最想感谢的人是谁，他/她是什么样的人，为什么感谢他/她。要求：1）请先将题目补全后再作答；2）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；3）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计：4）请将短文写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：BeThankfultoMyEnglishTeacherInlife，weshouldlearntobethankful．ThepersonthatIwanttothankismyEnglishteacher，becausesheishelpfulandkindtome．（最想感谢的人以及原因）Sheisshortandhasshorthair．（外貌）WhenIwasinGradeSeven，myEnglishwaspoorandIneverdaredtospeakEnglishinpublic．AtthattimemyEnglishteacheroftenencouragedmeintheclass．Sheaskedmetobebravetosolvetheproblem．Withherhelp，Ibecameverydiligent．（老师对我的帮助）FromherIlearnednotonlyknowledgebutalsohowtobeabraveman．（我学到了什么）8．（2022•东胜区三模）（二）2022年北京冬奥会的主题口号是"一起向未来"，它告诉我们全世界人民应该携手共创美好未来。假如你是九年级的学生代表，将要参加学校举办的"心怀感恩，一起向未来"主题演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点提示写一篇题为"Livewiththankfulness，worktogetherforabetterfuture"的演讲稿，倡议和同学们在成长路上心怀感恩，共创美好未来。要点：（1）感恩祖国的强大，强国有我；（2）感恩母校、老师，荣校有我；（3）感恩父母，行孝有我；（4）补充1﹣2点你自己的想法。要求：（1）80﹣100词左右，题目、开头已给出，不计入总词数内；（2）可以从具体做法或事例进行阐述；3.文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。LiveWithThankfulnessandWorkTogetherforaBetterFutureDearfellowstudents，Theofficialmottoofthe2022BeijingWinterOlympicsis"TogetherforaSharedFuture".Ittellsusthewholeworldshouldjoinhandsandcreateabetterfuture.Asastudent，Let'slivewiththankfulnessandworktogetherforabetterfuture.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：LiveWithThankfulnessandWorkTogetherforaBetterFutureDearfellowstudents，Theofficialmottoofthe2022BeijingWinterOlympicsis"TogetherforaSharedFuture".Ittellsusthewholeworldshouldjoinhandsandcreateabetterfuture.Asastudent，weshouldbegratefulonthewaytogrowthandcreateabetterfuturetogether.First，weshouldbegratefulforthestrengthofourmotherland.BereadytobuildapowerfulChina.（感恩祖国的强大，强国有我）Second，begratefultoourschoolandteachers.Trytoworkhardandmakeourschoolproudofusoneday.（感恩母校、老师，荣校有我）Third，weshouldbegratefulandhonorourparents.（感恩父母，行孝有我）Finally，weneedtothankthosewhohavehelpedus.（其它）Let'slivewiththankfulnessandworktogetherforabetterfuture.9．（2022•东胜区三模）（一）中国成功地举办了第24届冬奥会，再次向世界证明中国的日益强大。作为中国人，我们深感自豪。少年强则国强，作为祖国未来的建设者和接班人，你认为应该如何提升自我，才能成为对祖国有用的人？请根据所给内容写一篇题为"Howtobeausefulperson？"的短文。要点提示：（1）懂得感恩、礼貌待人；（2）锻炼身体、增强体质；（3）勤奋学习、永不言弃；（4）补充1﹣2点你自己的想法。要求：（1）题目、开头已给出，不计入总次数。（2）文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。Howtobeausefulperson？________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：Howtobeausefulperson？Weteenagersarethefutureofourmotherlandandthehopeofthenation.Therefore，itisnecessaryforustobestrongChineseteenagers.Itisourdutytoimproveourselves.Firstofall，weshouldbethankfultothosewhohelpsusandbepolitetoourteachersandparents，becausetheyhelpusimproveourselves.（懂得感恩、礼貌待人）What'smore，nothingismoreimportantthanhealth.Soweshouldpayattentiontodevelopingahealthylifestyleandkeepingexercisingtomakeourbodystrong.（锻炼身体、增强体质）Besides，weshouldstudyhard.Wearesupposedtolistencarefullyinclassandgooverwhatwehavelearnedafterclass.（勤奋学习、永不言弃）Ifwemeetdifficulties，weshouldn'tgiveup.Last，wecandosomevoluntarywork，suchasdoingsomecleaningorshoppingforoldpeople.（其它）Ihopeweteenagerscanmakeadifferenceinthefuture.10．（2022•仁寿县校级一模）某英文网站正在举办以"感恩父母"为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据下图中的内容写一篇题为"ALettertoMyParents"的短文，向该网站投稿。要求：1.包含图表中的主要信息；2.给出你对父母的祝愿，可适当发挥。注意：1.文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名；2.拓展内容时，仔细观察每张图片所表达的意思。3.词数：100左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。ALettertoMyParentsDearMomandDad，TodayI'mwritingtothankyouforeverythingyouhavedoneforme._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love，LiHua参考范文：ALettertoMyParentsDearMomandDad，TodayI'mwritingtothankyouforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Almosteveryday，youcookdeliciousfoodformeandlookaftermydailylifecarefullyandpatiently，especiallywhenI'msick.Youoftendosportswithmetohelpmekeephealthy.Bothofyoualwaystrustmeandcarealotaboutmyfeelings.WhenIfeelsad，youwillencouragemetofacethedifficultyandnottoloseheart.Inordertoexpressmythanksforallyourcareandlove，Iwilltrymybesttostudyharderanddosomehouseworkforyouinmyfreetime.Ihopebothofyouwillstayhealthyandourfamilywillbeahappyoneforever.Thanksagainforeverythingyouhavedoneforme.Love，LiHua11．（2022•合肥模拟）每年9月10日是教师节，我们在这一天向老师表达感恩与祝福。假设你是李华，你们学校英语报正在征稿，其主题为"如何在教师节向老师表达感谢"，请你根据下列要点提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。要点：1.亲手制作卡片；2.发送电子邮件；3.制作专题黑板报；4.……注意：1.词数80﹣100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.开头已给出，不计入总词数。Teachersarelikeourfriends，andsometimestheyarelikeourparents._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文：HowtoexpressourthankstoteachersTeachersarelikeourfriends，andsometimestheyarelikeourparents.Theyteachusnotonlyknowledge，butalsohowtobeagoodperson.Teachers'Dayiscoming，howtoexpressourthankstothem？Herearesomesuggestions.（点题）Firstly，wecanmakecardsbyourselves.Wecanwritethewordswewanttosaytoteachersandourbestwishesonit.Secondly，sendingane—Mailtoourteacherssoundsgood.Itisconvenienttoexpressourthanksbyane—Mail.What'smore，wecanmakeaspecialblackboardnewspapertogetherintheclassroom.Whenteacherscomeintotheclassroom，theywillseeiteasily.Ofcoursetherearesomeotherwaysofshowingourappreciationtoteachers，suchasgivingabunchofbeautifulflowers.（怎么做）Lifeneedsasenseofceremony.Whateveryouwanttodo，justdoitandmakeourteachers'dayonTeachers'Day.（总结全文）12．（2022•惠山区二模）由贾玲导演及主演的电影《你好，李焕英》是一部充满温情的电影，激发了观影者对身边人感总的共鸣。你观影之后感触颇多，发现许多感恩的人和事，要就此写一份日志。感恩父母悉心照顾、不辞辛劳……感恩老师耐心教导、善于激励……感恩同学合作分享、互相帮助、共同进步感想和打算我很幸运……（请结合自身实际，但不得提及自己的姓名相关信息）要求：1.上面的提示供参考，可适当发挥，要使语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚；2.段落开头已给出，不计入总词数；要求写100个词左右。TodayIwatchedafilmcalledHi，Mom.ItellsastoryofJiaandhermothershowingherlongingandregretatfailingtoseehermotherbeforeshedied.Iwastouchedbyitsrawemotion.Ihavebecomea15—Pear—Oldmiddleschoolstudent.Duringthepastfewyears，Ihavegainedalotand.Idon'twanttobeapersonfullofregretlikeJiainthefilm.Sofirst，Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents.参考范文：TodayIwatchedafilmcalledHi，Mom.ItellsastoryofJiaandhermothershowingherlongingandregretatfailingtoseehermotherbeforeshedied.Iwastouchedbyitsrawemotion.Ihavebecomea15—Pear—Oldmiddleschoolstudent.Duringthepastfewyears，Ihavegainedalotand.Idon'twanttobeapersonfullofregretlikeJiainthefilm.Sofirst，Ishouldsaythankstomydearparents.Theytakegoodcareofme.Theyworkhardtosupportthewholefamily.Theyalwaystrytomakemeliveabetterlife.（感恩父母）Second，Ithankallmyteachersfortheirgreathelpandsupp