中考英语二轮复习题型突破课件：题型八+书面表达

题型八书面表达方法技巧点拨书面表达试题属于综合运用型试题,重在考查考生运用各项语法知识来正确进行书面表达的能力以及理解情景提示内容的能力。书面表达题材涵盖了学校生活、课余生活、日常生活、人际关系、教育和社会文化等各方面。命题涉及话题型、图表型、提纲型以及开放式等。做书面表达时,应该注意以下写作技巧:1.认真审题审清文字说明、提示或图片、图表、短文等提供的资料和信息以及参考词汇、词数要求等,确定写作体裁、人称及主体时态等。2.列出提纲在草稿纸上拟订提纲,将各个要点逐一列出,形成基本的表义单位。用英语写出各个要点的关键词或句型,用地道的英语句子将已经整理好的要点扩展成明白、恰当、得体的完整句子。同时,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型,注意长短句结合,避免重复和呆板,切忌出现汉语式英语。3.连句成文适当调整句子的先后顺序,增加一些表达并列、递进、因果、转折等关系的连词,使行文连贯、通顺、流畅。同时,可以恰当地使用谚语、格言、高级词汇、高级句型等为文章添彩。4.检查修改检查文章中的单词拼写、标点符号和大小写是否正确;人称代词使用是否正确,注意人称的主格和宾格是否正确;物主代词使用是否正确,注意形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词是否正确;动词的时态是否正确;语法使用是否正确;词数是否符合要求;内容要点是否全面,删繁就简,使表达更加精炼,措辞更加恰当。5.誊入试卷经过检查,确认无误,认真誊写。要特别注意书写规范、字迹清晰、卷面整洁。题型典例剖析

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(2022·山东泰安)让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动,对其成长具有重要意义,可以帮助他们学习新技能,增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,以“MyVolunteerWorkPlan”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划,并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。VolunteerWork◎Helpinthecitylibrary◎Cleanupthecityparks◎Holdacharitybazaar(义卖)◎Dovolunteerworkinahospital◎Visittheoldpeople’shome◎...要求:1.可选择表格中的1—2个活动项目,也可自拟活动项目;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,词数80—100;3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的信息。MyVolunteerWorkPlan

写作指导:1.阅读题干要求,提取到的有效关键信息有:“帮助学习新技能”,“增强沟通能力和社会责任感”,“介绍选择的活动项目及活动计划”,“参加志愿者服务活动的意义”。2.文章主要以第一人称为主;描述计划或打算时使用一般将来时,表述参加志愿者服务活动的意义时使用一般现在时。3.谋篇布局要合理,层次清晰,语言表达丰富,使用复合句等高级句式增强文章的表达效果。参考范文:My

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holiday.专项能力检测Passage1(2022·四川南充)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Tracy的学校即将开设特色选修课程,她正在考虑是否选修汉语,来信询问你的建议。请你根据所给提示给她写封回信。提示:1.给出你的建议;2.谈谈学习汉语的重要性;3.结合自身经历,介绍至少2种学习汉语的方法。要求:1.必须包含所给要点,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名;4.词数100左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。DearTracy,I’msogladtohearfromyou.

KnowingyouhaveaninterestinChinese,IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.LearningChineseisnotonlyawaytocommunicate,butalsoachancetoadmireChineseculture.

KnowingyouhaveaninterestinChinese,IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.LearningChineseisnotonlyawaytocommunicate,butalsoachancetoadmireChineseculture.

AsaChinese,Ihavemuchexperiencetosharewithyou.Inmyopinion,therearemanywaystolearnChinese.It’susefultoreadChinesebooksandlistentoChinesesongs.What’smore,youaresupposedtojoinaChineseclubtopracticeyourspokenChinese.Learningisalifelongjourney.Keeppracticingeveryday,thenitwillbringsomethingnew.

⁠Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua

AsaChinese,Ihavemuchexperiencetosharewithyou.Inmyopinion,therearemanywaystolearnChinese.It’susefultoreadChinesebooksandlistentoChinesesongs.What’smore,youaresupposedtojoinaChineseclubtopracticeyourspokenChinese.Learningisalifelongjourney.Keeppracticingeveryday,thenitwillbringsomethingnew.

⁠Passage2(2022·四川遂宁)向世界传递中国文化,让世界倾听中国声音。近期,我市将面向全体中小学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华,你想参加此次活动,请根据下面的提示信息,向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr.Yang写一封80词左右的自荐信。要点提示:1.个人信息:姓名、年龄、班级、性格等;2.个人优势:(1)读了很多关于中国历史的书,了解中国历史;(2)知道很多历史故事,并且擅长用英语讲述它们;(3)……3.个人感想:(1)可以培养英语学习兴趣,提高口语表达能力;(2)让更多的人了解中国历史和文化,并为之感到自豪。注意:1.文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.文章必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯;3.不可逐词翻译,可适当发挥;4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。DearMr.Yang,I’mexcitedtohearthatourschoolwillholdtheactivity“TellingChinesestoriesinEnglish”.Ireallywanttotakepartinit.

It’smygreathonortointroducemyself.I’maboyfromClassOne,GradeEight.MynameisLiHuaandI’m14yearsold.I’manoutgoingboy.Ihavemanyhobbies,especiallyreading.IhavereadlotsofclassicsonChinesehistorysoI’mfamiliarwithChinesehistoryandculture.AndIknowplentyoftraditionalfolkstories,likeHou

Yi

Shoots

the

Suns,Yu

Gong

Moves

a

Mountainandsoon.IcaneventelltheminEnglish.AndIcangetastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenIseethelookofjoyontheirfaceswhilemyclassmatesarelisteningtome.

It’smygreathonortointroducemyself.I’maboyfromClassOne,GradeEight.MynameisLiHuaandI’m14yearsold.I’manoutgoingboy.Ihavemanyhobbies,especiallyreading.IhavereadlotsofclassicsonChinesehistorysoI’mfamiliarwithChinesehistoryandculture.AndIknowplentyoftraditionalfolkstories,likeHou

Yi

Shoots

the

Suns,Yu

Gong

Moves

a

Mountainandsoon.IcaneventelltheminEnglish.AndIcangetastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenIseethelookofjoyontheirfaceswhilemyclassmatesarelisteningtome.

Inaword,thisactivityismeaningful.WecannotonlycreateaninterestoflearningEnglishbutalsoimproveourspokenEnglishthroughtheactivity.AsaChinesestudent,it’sourdutytomakemorepeopleknowaboutourhistoryandculture!I’mproudofit!OnlyinthiswaycanImakeit.

⁠IexpectthatyoucangivemethischancetoshowmyselfandI’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua

Inaword,thisactivityismeaningful.WecannotonlycreateaninterestoflearningEnglishbutalsoimproveourspokenEnglishthroughtheactivity.AsaChinesestudent,it’sourdutytomakemorepeopleknowaboutourhistoryandculture!I’mproudofit!OnlyinthiswaycanImakeit.

⁠Passage3(2022·四川自贡)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike来信说他在人际交往方面感到迷茫,希望得到你的帮助。请写封回信,内容包括:1.表示理解和安慰;2.建议:正确认识自己的不足;处理好和父母的关系;处理好与同学、朋友之间的关系;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearMike,How’severythinggoing?

I’msorrytohearthatyouarenotfeelingwellthesedays.Youdon’tknowhowtogetonwellwithothers.It’snormaltohavesuchfeelings.Don’tworrytoomuchaboutthat.Ithinkyoushouldthinkaboutifthereissomethingyoucandobetter.First,youaresupposedtocommunicatemorewithyourparents.Second,you’dbettergetonwellwithyourclassmatesandfriends.Third,youcantakepartinsomeactivitieswithyourclassmates.Itwillhelpyoufindmoreaboutyourclassmatesandtheycanlearnmoreaboutyou,too.ThenyoucanbecomefriendsI’msorrytohearthatyouarenotfeelingwellthesedays.Youdon’tknowhowtogetonwellwithothers.It’snormaltohavesuchfeelings.Don’tworrytoomuchaboutthat.Ithinkyoushouldthinkaboutifthereissomethingyoucandobetter.First,youaresupposedtocommunicatemorewithyourparents.Second,you’dbettergetonwellwithyourclassmatesandfriends.Third,youcantakepartinsomeactivitieswithyourclassmates.Itwillhelpyoufindmoreaboutyourclassmatesandtheycanlearnmoreaboutyou,too.Thenyoucanbecomefriends.

Ihopeyouwillfeelbettersoon.

⁠Yours,LiHuaIhopeyouwillfeelbettersoon.

Passage4(2022·云南改编)提示:人生是一个不断学习、进步的过程。通过学习,你掌握了某种技能,明白了某些道理……请以“ILearnedHowto...”为题,用英语写一篇短文,叙述你的一次学习经历,并谈谈你的感受。要求:1.请先将题目补全后,再作答;2.语言流畅,书写规范,卷面整洁;3.词数不少于60;4.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。ILearnedHowto

LearnEnglishWell

Atthebeginningofmiddleschool,IalwaysgotbadgradesinEnglish.Iwasveryupsetanddidn’tknowhowtolearnitwell.

Oneday,myEnglishteachertalkedtomeandunderstoodmyproblem.Shegavemesomeadvicelikespeakingmore.Fromthatday,ImadeanEnglishstudyplan.First,IlistenedtoEnglishsongsorwatchedEnglishmovies.Second,Ilistenedtoteacherinclasscarefullyandtooknotes.Third,ItookpartintheEnglishcorner.IcommunicatedwithothersasmuchaspossibleinEnglish.Finally,IhavegreatprogressinEnglish.

LearnEnglishWell

Atthebeginningofmiddleschool,IalwaysgotbadgradesinEnglish.Iwasveryupsetanddidn’tknowhowtolearnitwell.

Oneday,myEnglishteachertalkedtomeandunderstoodmyproblem.Shegavemesomeadvicelikespeakingmore.Fromthatday,ImadeanEnglishstudyplan.First,IlistenedtoEnglishsongsorwatchedEnglishmovies.Second,Ilistenedtoteacherinclasscarefullyandtooknotes.Third,ItookpartintheEnglishcorner.IcommunicatedwithothersasmuchaspossibleinEnglish.Finally,IhavegreatprogressinEnglish.

Fromthisexperience,Iknowthatwhenyoufacesomedifficulties,don’tgiveupeasily.Youshouldfindsomewaystodealwiththem.Youwillsucceedoneday.

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Fromthisexperience,Iknowthatwhenyoufacesomedifficulties,don’tgiveupeasily.Youshouldfindsomewaystodealwiththem.Youwillsucceedoneday.

⁠Passage5(2022·浙江湖州)假如你是李雷,上周参观了以“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”为主题的环保作品展。请你根据以下信息,写一篇短文,在英语课上介绍相关展品并分享自己的想法与感受。What

were

onshowWhat

they

are

madeof/fromWhatyouthink·clothes·chairs·modelplanes·...·wastepaper·plasticbottles·usedwoodandglass·...·creative·save...·...注意:1.短文须介绍至少两项展品,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;3.词数80—100,短文开头仅供参考,不计入总词数。Hello,everyone!I’dliketotellyousomethingabouttheshow“WorkingtheWasteintoMagic”.

Anumberofcreativeworkswereonshow,includingclothesmadefromwastepaperandmodelplanesmadeofusedwoodandglass.Anotherfascinatingworkisachairthatismadeofplasticbottles.Theyaregluedtogetherandpaintedindifferentcolors.

Iwasmostinterestedinabackpackforcomputers.Itismadeoutofapairofoldjeans!Withthezipperofjeansonthetop,twopocketsontwosides,thebackpacklooksbothusefulandfashionable.Itevenhasalogo!

Anumberofcreativeworkswereonshow,includingclothesmadefromwastepaperandmodelplanesmadeofusedwoodandglass.Anotherfascinatingworkisachairthatismadeofplasticbottles.Theyaregluedtogetherandpaintedindifferentcolors.

Iwasmostinterestedinabackpackforcomputers.Itismadeoutofapairofoldjeans!Withthezipperofjeansonthetop,twopocketsontwosides,thebackpacklooksbothusefulandfashionable.Itevenhasalogo!

Ifeltamazedathowwastecouldbeputtosuchgooduse.Itreallyhelpstosaveenergyandbuildagreenerfuture.

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Ifeltamazedathowwastecouldbeputtosuchgooduse.Itreallyhelpstosaveenergyandbuildagreenerfuture.

⁠Passage6(2022·浙江宁波)为弘扬中华民族“劳动最光荣”的传统美德,这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动(aseriesoflaboractivities)。假如你是李华,请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历,写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。注意:1.短文必须包括表格中的所有要点,并适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;3.词数80—100(标题已给出,不计入总词数)。TimeThings

I

learnedMy

feelingsMarchgrowvegetablesandplanttrees...Aprilrepairthingslikeelectricfans...May...Let’sEnjoyWorking!

Thisterm,Itookpartinaseriesoflaboractivitiesinourschool.IwashappythatIlearnedalot.

Thisterm,Itookpartinaseriesoflaboractivitiesinourschool.IwashappythatIlearnedalot.

InMarch,Ilearnedtogrowvegetablesandplanttreesonourschoolfarm.InApril,Ilearnedtorepairthingslikeelectricfansandbicycleswiththehelpofourteachers.InMay,Ilearnedtodomuchhousework,suchasmakingthebed,sweepingthefloorandfoldingtheclothes.

Ithinkthelaboractivitiesarenotonlyeducationalbutalsouseful.I’msurethemorelifeskillsIhave,themoreindependentIwillbe.

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InMarch,Ilearnedtogrowvegetablesandplanttreesonourschoolfarm.InApril,Ilearnedtorepairthingslikeelectricfansandbicycleswiththehelpofourteachers.InMay,Ilearnedtodomuchhousework,suchasmakingthebed,sweepingthefloorandfoldingtheclothes.

Ithinkthelaboractivitiesarenotonlyeducationalbutalsouseful.I’msurethemorelifeskillsIhave,themoreindependentIwillbe.

⁠Passage7(2021·山东泰安)暑假将近,很多人已经开始计划外出旅游了。假定你是李华,请根据以如图示,以“ToBeaGoodTraveler”为题,给校报专栏写一篇英语短文,倡导“绿色旅游”和“公益旅游”,呼吁同学们做有环保意识和社会责任感的旅行者。要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,可根据提示适当发挥;词数80—100;文中不得出现姓名、校名、地名等与考生本人相关的真实信息。ToBeaGoodTraveler

Thesummerholidayiscoming.Tomakeeveryonehaveagoodtrip,Iwanttotalkabouthowtobeagoodtraveler.First,youshouldrideyourbiketotravelasmuchaspossible.It’sgoodfortheenvironment.Second,it’simpolitetospitorthrowlitterinpublicplaces.Andyoushouldn’tpickuptheflowersorwalkonthegrass.Third,weshouldconsumeappropriately.Weshouldtryourbesttobuylocalproductsandsupportthedevelopmentoflocaltourism.Fourth,youshouldtakepartinvolunteeractivities.

Ifyoufollowthetipsabove,youcanbecomeagoodtraveler.

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Thesummerholidayiscoming.Tomakeeveryonehaveagoodtrip,Iwanttotalkabouthowtobeagoodtraveler.First,youshouldrideyourbiketotravelasmuchaspossible.It’sgoodfortheenvironment.Second,it’simpolitetospitorthrowlitterinpublicplaces.Andyoushouldn’tpickuptheflowersorwalkonthegrass.Third,weshouldconsumeappropriately.Weshouldtryourbesttobuylocalproductsandsupportthedevelopmentoflocaltourism.Fourth,youshouldtakepartinvolunteeractivities.

Ifyoufollowthetipsabove,youcanbecomeagoodtraveler.

Passage8(2021·湖南郴州)勤俭节约是中华民族的传统美德。为了弘扬这种传统美德,杜绝浪费,学校开展以“勤俭节约从我做起”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是李华,请你根据以下内容要点,写一篇英文演讲稿参赛。内容要点:1.生活中常见的浪费现象(至少3条);2.你的建议(至少3条);3.发出号召。参考词汇:thriftn.节约;virtuen.美德;wasten.&

v.浪费;savev.节省;tapn.水龙头要求:1.短文须包含内容要点中的所有信息,可适当发挥;2.词数80左右(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。Ladiesandgentlemen,

TodayI’dliketotalkaboutthrift.

ThriftisoneofthetraditionalvirtuesinChina.However,thereexistsmuchwasteinourdailylife.Forexample,somepeoplekeepthetapsonaftercleaninghands.Somepeopleoftenforgettoturnoffthelightsbeforeleavingtherooms.Andmanyofusthrowawaylotsoffoodandotherthings.

Ithinkweshoulddevelopahabitofsavingthingsaroundus.Firstly,remembertoturnoffthetapsandlightsintime.Secondly,weshouldspendlessmoneyonthingsthatwedon’tneed.Lastly,don’tordermorefoodandclearourplates.

ThriftisoneofthetraditionalvirtuesinChina.However,thereexistsmuchwasteinourdailylife.Forexample,somepeoplekeepthetapsonaftercleaninghands.Somepeopleoftenforgettoturnoffthelightsbeforeleavingtherooms.Andmanyofusthrowawaylotsoffoodandotherthings.

Ithinkweshoulddevelopahabitofsavingthingsaroundus.Firstly,remembertoturnoffthetapsandlightsintime.Secondly,weshouldspendlessmoneyonthingsthatwedon’tneed.Lastly,don’tordermorefoodandclearourplates.

Allsuchsmallthingscanhelpusbecomeapersonwithgoodvirtues.Let’sfightagainstwastefromnowon.

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That’sall.Thankyou!

Allsuchsmallthingscanhelpusbecomeapersonwithgoodvirtues.Let’sfightagainstwastefromnowon.

⁠Passage9(2021·辽宁营口)同学们的健康成长是每个家庭最大的愿望和期盼,也关乎国家和民族的未来。健康的生活是成长、成才的前提和保障。请根据内容提示,以“HealthyLiving”为题写一篇英语作文,谈谈你的看法。内容提示:1.加强锻炼;2.健康饮食;3.保证睡眠;4.保持乐观心态。要求:1.词数80左右;2.文中应包含所给提示内容,可适当发挥;3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。HealthyLiving

Thehealthygrowthofstudentsisnotonlythegreatestwishandexpectationofeveryfamily,butalsorelatedtothefutureofthecountryandthenation.Healthylivingisthepremiseandguaranteeofgrowthandtalent.

Thehealthygrowthofstudentsisnotonlythegreatestwishandexpectationofeveryfamily,butalsorelatedtothefutureofthecountryandthenation.Healthylivingisthepremiseandguaranteeofgrowthandtalent.

Therearemanywayswecandotokeephealthy.First,wemustdomuchexercise.Doingsportsasoftenaspossibleisgoodforourbody.Second,wemusteathealthyfood,suchasgreenfruitandvegetables.Eatinghealthilyisgoodforourhealth.Third,haveagoodsleep.Sleepingwellcanhelpustostudywell.Afteragoodsleepwewillfindwe’refullofenergy.Finally,wemuststayoptimisticandkeephappyeveryday.Whenweareinthefaceofdifficulties,wecanworkthemouteasily.

Ifwekeeptheseactivities,wecanliveahappyandhealthylife.

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Therearemanywayswecandotokeephealthy.First,wemustdomuchexercise.Doingsportsasoftenaspossibleisgoodforourbody.Second,wemusteathealthyfood,suchasgreenfruitandvegetables.Eatinghealthilyisgoodforourhealth.Third,haveagoodsleep.Sleepingwellcanhelpustostudywell.Afteragoodsleepwewillfindwe’refullofenergy.Finally,wemuststayoptimisticandkeephappyeveryday.Whenweareinthefaceofdifficulties,wecanworkthemouteasily.

Ifwekeeptheseactivities,wecanliveahappyandhealthylife.

Passage10(2021·广西梧州)假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Jenny因视力减退感到不安,向你倾诉。请根据以下提示,用英语写一封电子邮件给她,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法,并提出建议。要点提示:1.近视原因:阅读坏习惯、使用手机时间过长……2.提出建议:户外活动、做眼保健操……3.……要求:1.文中必须包括以上内容,可适当发挥,增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息;3.词数不少于80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。参考词汇:eyesight视力mobilephone手机DearJenny,I’msorrytoknowthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.

Maybethat’sbecauseyoudon’tgetintothegoodhabitofreading.Youmightreadinthesunorinthedark.Andmaybeyouspendtoomuchtimeoncomputersormobilephones.They’reallharmfultoyoureyes.Asweallknow,eyesarethewindowstothesoul.Weshouldtryourbesttoprotectthem.Herearesomesuggestionsforgoodeyehealth.

Maybethat’sbecauseyoudon’tgetintothegoodhabitofreading.Youmightreadinthesunorinthedark.Andmaybeyouspendtoomuchtimeoncomputersormobilephones.They’reallharmfultoyoureyes.Asweallknow,eyesarethewindowstothesoul.Weshouldtryourbesttoprotectthem.Herearesomesuggestionsforgoodeyehealth.

First,domoreoutdooractivities.Youcangooutoftheclassroomtoplaywithyourclassmatesordophysicalexerciseduringthebreaks.Second,domoreeyeexercisestomakethemrelax.Also,it’shelpfultolookfarawayfromtimetotimeafterstudyinglong.Finally,makesuretohaveagoodeyehabit.Don’treadbooksoruseamobilephoneinbed.

Inaword,eyesaresoimportantthatallofusshoulddowhatwecantokeepthemhealthy.

⁠Yours,LiHua

First,domoreoutdooractivities.Youcangooutoftheclassroomtoplaywithyourclassmatesordophysicalexerciseduringthebreaks.Second,domoreeyeexercisestomakethemrelax.Also,it’shelpfultolookfarawayfromtimetotimeafterstudyinglong.Finally,makesuretohaveagoodeyehabit.Don’treadbooksoruseamobilephoneinbed.

Inaword,eyesaresoimportantthatallofusshoulddowhatweca