2025届高考英语读后续写语篇练习《爱之链》The+Chain+of+Love

高考英语读后续写语篇练习《爱之链》TheChainofLove1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Amanwasdrivinghomeoneeveningonatwo-lanecountryroad.Jobs,inthissmall,mid-westerncommunity,wereverydifficulttosearch.Butheneverquitlooking.Eversincethefactoryclosed,he'dbenunemployed.Withwintercoming,thecoldhadfinallyhithome.Itwasalonelyroad.Notverymanypeoplehadareasontobeonit,unlesstheywereleaving.Mostofhisfriendshadalreadyleft.Theyhadfamiliestofeedanddreamstofulfill.Buthestayedon.Afterall,thiswaswhereheburiedhismotherandfather.Hewasbornhereandknewthecountry.Hecouldgodownthisroadblind,andtellyouwhatwasoneitherside,andwithhisheadlightsnotworking,thatcameinhandy.4续写原文Itwasstartingtogetdarkandlightsnowwascomingdown.He'dbettergetamoveon.Youknow,healmostdidn'tseetheoldlady,wanderingonthesideoftheroad.Buteveninthedimlightofday,hecouldsesheneededhelp.Sohepulledupinfrontofherandgotout.Evenwiththesmileonhisface,shewasworried.Noonehadstoppedtohelpforthelasthourorso.Washegoingtohurther?Hedidn'tlooksafe,andhelookedpoorandhungry.Hecouldseethatshewasfrightened,standingoutthereinthecold.Heknewhowshefelt.Itwasthatcoldthatonlyfearcanputinyou.Hesaid,"I'mheretohelpyouma’am.Whydon'tyouwaitinyourcarwhereit'swarm?Bytheway,mynameisJoe!"5段首句Paragraph1：Theoldladywassurprisedathiswordsandnoddedslightly.Paragraph2：Sheaskedhimabouthowmuchsheowedhim.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，语篇讲述的是在一个风雪之夜，一位老妇人的汽车出现了故障。尽管路上车辆来来往往，但始终没有人愿意下车来帮助老妇人。正绝望之时，一个落魄但善良的人Joe停下车走到老妇人身边，并表达了他愿意帮助老妇人的意愿。本次写作任务旨在帮助学生养成助人为乐、传递善意的价值观念，体现了高考所提出的立德树人要求。9续写思路分析Para1：Theoldladywassurprisedathiswordsandnoddedslightly.由第一段首句内容可知，第一段可描写老妇人遇到了什么困难？老妇人是否向Joe说明了遇到的困难？Joe帮助老妇人解决困难了吗？10续写思路分析Para2：Sheaskedhimabouthowmuchsheowedhim.由第二段首句内容可知，第二段可描写善良的Joe会有什么样的反应呢？Joe不收钱，老妇人会有什么样的反应？文章的结尾处应该怎样升华？11续写思路分析12语料积累——感动1.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved(他们被深深地感动了),especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.（2020.7高考山东卷）2.HewastouchedthatI,acompletestranger,caredsomuchabouthim(如此关心他)andsaidhewaswillingtowork.（2021广州2月联考）3.Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords(感动得说不出话来).Ifeltsowarmasiftherewereninesunsinmychest.（2021年1月八省联考）4.Inoddedingratitude,eyesglisteningwithheld-backtears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀).（2021年1月八省联考）5.Stunnedandmoved(惊讶又感动),Istaredatthenote,feelingapangofguiltaboutmypreviousthoughtthatallpeoplewereindifferent.（2021年1月八省联考）13语料积累——“善举”名言1.“Smallactsofkindnesscanmakeabigdifferenceintheworld.”小善举可以在世界上产生巨大的影响。2.“Kindnessisalanguagethatthedeafcanhearandtheblindcansee.”-MarkTwain善良是一种聋人能听到、盲人能看到的语言。-马克·吐温3.“Thesmallestactofkindnessisworthmorethanthegrandestintention.”-OscarWilde最小的善举比最宏伟的意向更有价值。-奥斯卡·王尔德4.“Kindnessbeginswithonepersonandspreadstomany.”善良始于一人，并传播给许多人。5.“Asingleactofkindnessthrowsoutrootsinalldirections,andtherootsspringupandmakenewtrees.”-AmeliaEarhart一个善举向四面八方抛出根，根会发芽并长成新的树。-阿米莉亚·埃尔哈特14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现116范文呈现2Theoldladywassurprisedathiswordsandnoddedslightly.Allshehadwasaflattire,butforanoldlady,thatwasbadenough.Joecrawledunderthecarlookingforaplacetoputthejack,skinninghisfingersatimeortwo.Soonhewasabletochangethetire.Buthehadtogetdirtyandhishandshurt.Shecouldn’tthankhimenoughforcomingtoheraid.Joejustsmiledasheclosedhertrunk.Sheaskedhimhowmuchsheowedhim.Joeneverthoughtaboutthemoney.Thiswasnotajobtohim.Thiswashelpingsomeoneinneed,andthereweremanypeoplewhohadgivenhimahandinthepast.Hehadlivedhiswholelifethatway,anditneveroccurredtohimtoactanyotherway.Hetoldherthatifshereallywantedtopayhimback,thenexttimeshesawsomeonewhoneededhelp,shecouldgivethemtheassistancethattheyneeded.Theoldladynoddedwithtearsrollingdownfromhereyes.17范文呈现2Sheaskedhimhowmuchsheowedhim.Joeneverthoughtaboutthemoney.Thiswasnotajobtohim.Thiswashelpingsomeoneinneed,andthereweremanypeoplewhohadgivenhimahandinthepast.Hehadlivedhiswholelifethatway,anditneveroccurredtohimtoactanyotherway.Hetoldherthatifshereallywantedtopayhimback,thenexttimeshesawsomeonewhoneededhelp,shecouldgivethemtheassistancethattheyneeded.Theoldladynoddedwithtearsrollingdownfromhereyes.18范文呈现2Theoldladywassurprisedathiswordsandnoddedslightly.Allshehadwasaflattire,butforanoldlady,thatwasbadenough.Joecrawledunderthecarlookingforaplacetoputthejack,skinninghisfingersatimeortwo.Soonhewasabletochangethetire.Buthehadtogetdirtyandhishandshurt.Shecouldn’tthankhimenoughforcomingtoheraid.Joejustsmiledasheclosedhertrunk19范文译文老太太对他的话感到惊讶，微微点了点头。她车爆胎了，但对于一个老太太来说，这已经够糟糕的了。乔爬到车底，找个地方放千斤顶，有一两次把手指剥光了。很快他就可以换轮胎了。但他不得不